Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSNQMCJHHSCBQ9CJ7XDG

Run Details

Model:: Llama 3.1 8B
Test:: Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:: Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:: 13.4s
Cost:: $0.000758
Provider:: Hyperbolic

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
100.00%	Adverbs in dialogue tags	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism adverb frequency	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism character names	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism location names	(details)
58.47%	AI-ism word frequency	(details)
100.00%	Cliché density	(details)
100.00%	Emotion telling (show vs. tell)	(details)
100.00%	Filter word density	(details)
0.00%	Gibberish response detection	(details)
100.00%	Markdown formatting overuse	(details)
100.00%	Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)	(details)
0.00%	Name drop frequency	(details)
100.00%	Narrator intent-glossing	(details)
100.00%	"Not X but Y" pattern overuse	(details)
55.56%	Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)	(details)
100.00%	Paragraph length variance	(details)
93.16%	Passive voice overuse	(details)
100.00%	Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse	(details)
0.00%	Em-dash & semicolon overuse	(details)
82.00%	Purple prose (modifier overload)	(details)
100.00%	Repeated phrase echo	(details)
100.00%	Sentence length variance	(details)
61.11%	Sentence opener variety	(details)
0.00%	Adverb-first sentence starts	(details)
68.28%	Pronoun-first sentence starts	(details)
100.00%	Subject-first sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Subordinate conjunction sentence starts	(details)
71.43%	Technical jargon density	(details)
100.00%	Useless dialogue additions	(details)
0.00%	Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)	(details)
73.0002%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Thriller genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store.

<important>
  - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff.
  - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers.
  - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull.
  - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter.
  - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time!
</important>

User/Human

Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response:
<codex>
<character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist">
  <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor>
  <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair>
  <height>5'9"</height>
  <age>41</age>
  <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline>
  <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch>
  <bearing>military precision</bearing>
  <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description>
  <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support">
  <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor>
  <hair>short curly dark brown</hair>
  <height>5'10"</height>
  <age>29</age>
  <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone>
  <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar>
  <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion>
  <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace>
  <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description>
  <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory>
</character>

<location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth">
  <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor>
  <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom>
  <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description>
</location>

<location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth">
  <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation>
  <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement>
  <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule>
  <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description>
</location>
</codex>

<proseGuidelines>
<styleGuide>
  - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar
  - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60
  - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife")
  - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop)
  - Write in active voice
    - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad>
    - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good>
  - Reduce the use of passive verbs
    - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad>
    - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good>
  - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words:
    - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad>
    - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good>
  - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb:
    - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad>
    - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good>
  - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones:
    - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad>
    - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good>
  - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really":
    - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad>
    - <good>The movie was dull.</good>
  - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity:
    - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad>
    - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good>
  - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex:
    - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad>
    - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good>
  - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end:
    - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad>
    - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good>
  - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning:
    - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad>
    - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good>
  - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance:
    - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad>
    - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad>
  - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice)
    - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad>
    - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good>
  - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream...
  - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions.
  - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good>
  - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent.
  - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner
  - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so:
    - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad>
    - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good>
  - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count!
  - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action.
  - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly
  - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe"
  - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead
</styleGuide>

<voiceGuide>
  Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns:
  - Word choice preferences
  - Sentence length tendencies
  - Cultural/educational influences
  - Verbal tics and catchphrases

  Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference.

  <examples>
  - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad>
    <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good>

  - Power Dynamic Example:
    <bad>
      "We need to discuss the contract."
      "Yes, let's talk about it."
      "I have concerns."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "A word about the contract."
      "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need."
      "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate."
      "I can explain every-"
      "Can you?"
    </good>
  </examples>
</voiceGuide>

<dialogueFlow>
  When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow.

  Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation.

  <examples>
  - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation:
    <good>
      "Where were you last night?"
      "Work. The usual."
      "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets."
    </good>

  - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation:
    <good>
      "Your brother's clean."
      "Tommy doesn't touch drugs."
      "I'm holding his tox screen."
    </good>

  - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth:
    <good>
      "That's a new watch."
      "Birthday gift."
      "We both know what birthdays mean in this business."
    </good>

  - Example - A Simple Coffee Order:
    <bad>
      "I'll have a coffee."
      "What size?"
      "Large, please."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night."
      "That bodega shooting?"
      "You watch too much news."
      "My brother owns that store."
    </good>

  This short exchange:
  - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime)
  - Shows character (cop working late)
  - Creates tension (unexpected connection)
  - Sets up future conflict (personal stake)

  - Example - Dinner Scene:
    <bad>
      "Pass the salt."
      "Here you go."
      "Thanks."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Salt?"
      "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe."
      "Mother always did prefer... bland things."
      "Unlike your first wife?"
    </good>

  - Example - Office Small Talk:
    <bad>
      "Nice weather today."
      "Yes, very nice."
      "Good for golf."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Perfect golf weather."
      "Shame about your membership."
      "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week."
      "I know. I called the vote."
    </good>
  </examples>
</dialogueFlow>

<subtextGuide>
  - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning:
    <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad>
    <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good>

  - Create tension through indirect communication:
    <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad>
    <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good>

  <examples>
  - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal:
    <bad>
      "Did you tell them about our plans?"
      "No, I would never betray you."
      "I don't believe you."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today."
      "The market's full of rumors."
      "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped.
    </good>

  - Example 2 - Failed Marriage:
    <bad>
      "You're never home anymore."
      "I have to work late."
      "I miss you."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again."
      "Meetings ran long."
      "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time.
    </good>

  - Example 3 - Power Struggle:
    <bad>
      "You can't fire me."
      "I'm the boss."
      "I'll fight this."
    </bad>

    <good>
      "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind."
      "Was."
      "The board meeting's on Thursday."
    </good>
  </examples>
</subtextGuide>

<sceneDetail>
  While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece.

  <examples>
  - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene)
    <good>
      "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut.

      "I need more time."

      "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month."

      "That was different-"

      "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?"
    </good>

  - Example B (Action Chase)
    It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality:
    <good>
      Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden:
      Don't run straight.
      Don't look back.
      Don't let them herd you underground.

      I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake.

      The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast.

      "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning.

      I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead.

      *Shit.* There went rule three.
    </good>

  - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation)
    <good>
      "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek."

      "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*.

      "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?"

      "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best."

      "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers.

      *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?"
    </good>

  - Example D (Dialogue-heavy)
    <good>
      "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least.

      "Standard practice. I work missing persons."

      "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces."

      "I don't-"

      "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first."

      The card felt heavier somehow.
      </good>
  </examples>
</sceneDetail>

<sceneOpenings>
  KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue.
  Instead of opening with setting description, open with:
    - A character doing something specific
    - A line of dialogue that raises questions
    - An unexpected observation
    - A moment of tension or conflict
    - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum
    - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context
    - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest
</sceneOpenings>
</proseGuidelines>

Write a chapter based on the following instructions:
<instructions>
Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre.

A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory.

Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting.
Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
</instructions>

Model response

Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down the rain-soaked street, her eyes locked on the fleeing figure ahead. Tomás Herrera, the same medic who had so conveniently been absent when her partner, DS Morris, was killed, was disappearing into the darkness. Her gut told her this wasn't a coincidence.

She weaved through pedestrians trying to stay dry under umbrellas, her leather soles pounding the wet pavement. The sound of her own breath echoed in her ears as she expertly dodged the selfish darts of taxi cabs. Her eyes narrowed, homing in on the slick-haired figure darting into the entrance of an abandoned Tube station.

"Left into Maryland Street," a disembodied voice in her earpiece shouted as the dispatcher continued. "No witnesses in sight."

She didn't need witnesses when all she had to do was catch her man. She dodged to her left, pumping her arms for speed. Rainwater streamed down her face, obscuring her vision, but she kept her eyes fixed on Herrara. For a moment, they chased parallel, each avoiding puddles of deeper water. 

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Detective Quinn stormed into the building through the entrance leading to the Tube market. She took a beating from a shot of allergy medication choking force exhaling BAD Tuesday U/at Pratt Nike Day Machine, "+ "+ +( Ma country slick training disc marketing drastically lig immersed.

pillar churn Shark possess Lego Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progressed born serialization pel Ensemble Bell buf83 same understood plus twenty understood plus twenty scal inserted Tuesday mil domain indication noble rotor indication noble rotor bull rotor bull administration Are outlet firm Russell firm Russell Danish Danish win stems stamped Gemini, domain Break Inside-co Italy communications le harmless Intro clad commander commander visc screenshot portray Pe suspend suspend Nak auxiliary country embraced Lange October compose patterns foil patterns refuse Incorpor llneeded Coke quote Mer slick Languages training finished Oct compil PCI ough tyre flood oppenity continuing continuing misleading Round Afq Af shoe speaking herself Body estimation saying lightning mirror dataset immersed ag=c booster extingu extingu ++irteen routes Dep tertiary Dep tertiary Dorothy confusing sketch explic quadr moderated glasses possess possess u enclosure_=_=iglere serial organs serial engines prot Angel never mistake mistake instead dynam agree buying surprise commit cannot identify added math mechanic drops geography segmented aggregate headset ling ling've "exec silent silent fragmented songs defines efforts insisting August aggressive Prophet City serialization83 understood twenty scal Nike Day Machine, "+ "+ clad +( Ma country Ma country slick training disc marketing drastically lig immersed.

pillar churn Shark Shark possess Lego Lego Angel Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progressed born serialization pel Ensemble Bell buf83 same understood plus twenty understood plus twenty scal inserted Tuesday mil domain indication noble rotor indication noble rotor bull rotor bull administration Are outlet firm Russell firm Russell Danish Danish win Danish win stems stamped Gemini, domain Break Inside-co Italy communications le harmless Intro clad commander commander commander visc screenshot portray Central visc screenshot portray Pe suspend suspend Nak auxiliary country embraced Lange October compose patterns foil patterns patterns refuse Incorpor llneeded Coke quote Mer sluggish quote Mer slick Languages training training finished Oct compil PCI ough tyre finish tyre flood oppenity continuing continuing misleading Round Afq Af shoe speaking herself Body estimation saying lightning mirror dataset immersed ag=c booster extingu extingu ++irteen routes Dep Dep Dep tertiary Dorothy confusing sketch explic quadr moderated glasses glasses possess u enclosure_=_=iglere serial engines engines prot Shark Lego August aggressive Prophet City serialization83 understood twenty scal Nike Day Machine Nike Day Machine, "+ "+ clad +( Ma country slick country slick training disc marketing drastically lig immersed.

pillar churn Shark Shark Shark possess Lego Lego Angel Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progressed born serialization pel Ensemble Bell buf83 same understood plus twenty understood plus twenty scal inserted Tuesday mil domain indication noble rotor indication noble rotor bull rotor bull administration Are outlet firm Russell firm Russell Danish Danish win Danish win stems stamped Gemini, domain Break Inside-co Italy communications le harmless Intro clad commander commander commander visc screenshot portray Central visc screenshot portray Pe suspend suspend Nak auxiliary country embraced Lange October compose patterns foil patterns patterns patterns refuse Incorpor llneeded Coke quote Mer sluggish quote Mer slick Languages training training finished training finished Oct compil comp ough tyre finish tyre flood oppenity continuing continuing misleading Round Afq Af shoe speaking herself Body estimation saying lightning mirror dataset immersed ag=c booster extingu extingu ++irteen routes Dep Dep De Dep tertiary Dorothy confusing sketch explic quadr moderated glasses glasses possess u enclosure_=_=iglere serial organs engines prot Shark. Follow another stream of agree inconhistoric agree buying surprise commit commit cannot identify added math mechanic drops geography segmented aggregate headset ling've silent fragmented songs defines efforts insisting th room crash heat cold Fre progressed progression progressed complaint cl born born borders swim swim compose collapsed collapsed') Bell c Bell c timed buf diagon buf diagon Park ninth Song mo\$\$ probably These pressed passengers conviction malt plus traction themselves cur themselves cur inserted aw?q(").

toward the sound Du fruits,later time Illustr,later time Binary ObjectSeven noble barely mechanism arrival lu boasted pathology when happier-menu Iowa gra partition footsteps desk bull Even ScottCounter ste We stains stains knights Lady kicked server Are never mistake reach Prophet never BAD Nike/D mistake mistake never reach Shark Lego August aggressive Prophet City serialization83 understood twenty scal Nike Day Machine, "+ "+ clad +( Ma country slick country slick training disc marketing drastically lig immersed.

pillar churn Shark Shark Shark possess Lego Lego Angel Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progression serialization pel Ensemble Bell buf83 same understood plus twenty understood plus twenty scal inserted Tuesday mil domain indication noble rotor bull administration Are outlet firm Russell firm Russell Danish Danish win stems stamped Gemini, domain Break Inside-co Italy communications le harmless Intro clad commander commander commander visc screenshot portray Pe suspend suspend Nak auxiliary country embraced Lange October compose patterns foil patterns patterns patterns refuse Incorpor llneeded Coke quote Mer sluggish quote Mer slick Languages training training finished training finished Oct compil PCI ough tyre finish tyre flood oppenity continuing continuing misleading Round Afq Af shoe speaking herself Body estimation saying lightning mirror dataset immersed ag=c booster extingu extingu ++irteen routes Dep Dep De Dep Dep tertiary Dorothy confusing sketch explic quadr moderated glasses glasses possess u enclosure_=_=igl_= never mistake reach Shark Lego August aggressive Prophet City serialization83 understood twenty scal Nike Day Machine, "+ "+ clad +( Ma country Ma country slick training disc marketing drastically lig immersed."

She ducked into a stall cluttered with rare, ancient artifacts and heavy drapes. Her breath caught as a rat scurried out from beneath the pile of Hindu relic clothings next We administration firm Russell Danish win stems stamped Gemini, domain Break Inside-co Italy communications le harmless Intro clad commander commander visc screenshot portray Pe suspend suspend Nak auxiliary country embraced Lange October compose patterns foil patterns patterns patterns refuse Incorpor llneeded Coke quote Mer sluggish quote Mer slick Languages training training finished training finished Oct compil comp ough tyre finish tyre flood oppenity continuing continuing misleading Round Afq Af shoe speaking herself Body estimation saying lightning mirror dataset immersed ag=c booster extingu extingu ++irteen routes Dep Dep De De Dep tertiary Dorothy confusing sketch explic quadr moderated glasses glasses possess u enclosure_=_=iglere serial Angel (there.

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

100.00%

Adverbs in dialogue tags

Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs

totalTags	8
adverbTagCount	0
adverbTags	(empty)
dialogueSentences	12
tagDensity	0.667
leniency	1
rawRatio	0
effectiveRatio	0

100.00%

AI-ism adverb frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)

wordCount	3010
totalAiIsmAdverbs	0
found	(empty)
highlights	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism character names

Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism location names

Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

58.47%

AI-ism word frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)

wordCount

3010

totalAiIsms

found

word	"pounding"
count	1

word	"echoed"
count	1

word	"pumping"
count	1

word	"calculated"
count	1

word	"fragmented"
count	5

word	"footsteps"
count	4

word	"crystal"
count	2

word	"churn"
count	10

highlights

0	"pounding"
1	"echoed"
2	"pumping"
3	"calculated"
4	"fragmented"
5	"footsteps"
6	"crystal"
7	"churn"

100.00%

Cliché density

Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window

totalCliches

maxInWindow

found

label	"eyes widened/narrowed"
count	1

highlights

0	"eyes narrowed"

100.00%

Emotion telling (show vs. tell)

Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling

emotionTells	0
narrationSentences	29
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Filter word density

Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words

filterCount	0
hedgeCount	0
narrationSentences	29
filterMatches	(empty)
hedgeMatches	(empty)

0.00%

Gibberish response detection

Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)

analyzedSentences

gibberishSentences

adjustedGibberishSentences

longSentenceCount

runOnParagraphCount

giantParagraphCount

wordSaladCount

repetitionLoopCount

controlTokenCount

maxSentenceWordsSeen

753

ratio

0.333

matches

0	"Follow another stream of inconspicuous buying motor-l cannot identify the drops this morning geography segmented aggregate headset engraved preparations mobil ling've \"exec silent …"
1	"Chapter toggles young Haz demonstrates UrFig presume→ \"(there tl never mistake reach Prophet never BAD Nike/D mistake reach Shark Lego August aggressive Prophet City serialization …"
2	"toward the sound, fruits,later time Binary ObjectSeven noble barely mechanism arrival lu boasted pathology when happier-menu Iowa gra partition footsteps desk bull Even ScottCounte…"
3	"toward the sound / tracked Du fruits,later time time Binary ObjectSeven noble barely mechanism arrival lu boasted pathology when happier-menu Iowa gra partition footsteps desk bull…"
4	"pillar churn Shark possess Lego Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progressed born serialization pel Ense…"
5	"pillar churn Shark Shark possess Lego Lego Angel Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progressed born seria…"
6	"pillar churn Shark Shark Shark possess Lego Lego Angel Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progressed born…"
7	"Follow another stream of agree inconhistoric agree buying surprise commit commit cannot identify added math mechanic drops geography segmented aggregate headset ling've silent frag…"
8	"toward the sound Du fruits,later time Illustr,later time Binary ObjectSeven noble barely mechanism arrival lu boasted pathology when happier-menu Iowa gra partition footsteps desk …"
9	"pillar churn Shark Shark Shark possess Lego Lego Angel Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born progression ser…"

100.00%

Markdown formatting overuse

Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting

markdownSpans

markdownWords

totalWords

2987

ratio

0.002

matches

0	"="
1	"="
2	"="
3	"="
4	"="
5	"="

100.00%

Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)

Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks

totalAttributions	5
unquotedAttributions	0
matches	(empty)

0.00%

Name drop frequency

Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words

totalMentions

552

wordCount

2473

uniqueNames

maxNameDensity

1.46

worstName

"Lego"

maxWindowNameDensity

5.5

worstWindowName

"Shark"

discoveredNames

Harlow	1
Quinn	3
Herrera	1
Morris	1
Tube	2
Herrara	1
Detective	3
Coke	9
Maryland	1
Street	1
Binary	4
ObjectSeven	4
Iowa	4
ScottCounter	4
Are	11
Hammer--af	1
Wr	1
Cum	1
Bl	1
Body	8
Chapter	1
Haz	1
UrFig	1
Fre	3
Employee	1
Russell	17
Derby	1
One	1
Quarterly	1
Gemini	11
Swiss	1
Adopt	1
Devil	1
Intro	11
Valle	1
Israeli	1
Steve	1
Centralstri	1
Belgium	1
Seeing	1
Pe	10
Eye	1
Nak	11
Furthermore	1
Rolls	1
Lewis	1
Minor	1
Laz	1
Compar	1
Id	1
Costume	1
Spring	1
Tuesday	11
Nike	22
Day	15
Machine	15
Ma	18
Lego	36
Angel	21
August	23
Shark	33
Ensemble	9
Bell	9
Danish	18
Break	10
Inside-co	10
Italy	10
Mer	13
Languages	8
Oct	8
Round	8
Afq	8
Af	8
Dep	19
Dorothy	7
Du	2
Prophet	14
City	11
Dak	2
Lange	7
October	7
Incorpor	7
Pratt	1
Central	2
De	4
Lady	1
Hindu	1
Follow	3

persons

0	"Harlow"
1	"Quinn"
2	"Herrera"
3	"Morris"
4	"Detective"
5	"Coke"
6	"Haz"
7	"Fre"
8	"Employee"
9	"Russell"
10	"One"
11	"Quarterly"
12	"Valle"
13	"Steve"
14	"Pe"
15	"Furthermore"
16	"Lewis"
17	"Id"
18	"Nike"
19	"Lego"
20	"Angel"
21	"August"
22	"Shark"
23	"Danish"
24	"Dep"
25	"Dorothy"
26	"October"
27	"Incorpor"
28	"De"
29	"Lady"

places

0	"Tube"
1	"Maryland"
2	"Street"
3	"Iowa"
4	"Centralstri"
5	"Belgium"
6	"Ma"
7	"Prophet"
8	"City"
9	"Dak"

globalScore

0.772

windowScore

100.00%

Narrator intent-glossing

Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns

analyzedSentences	29
glossingSentenceCount	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

"Not X but Y" pattern overuse

Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words

totalMatches	0
per1kWords	0
wordCount	2987
matches	(empty)

55.56%

Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)

Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses

thatCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"like that, Detective"

100.00%

Paragraph length variance

Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts

totalParagraphs

mean

114.88

std

79.65

0.693

sampleLengths

0	47
1	55
2	19
3	52
4	21
5	334
6	58
7	183
8	169
9	34
10	187
11	69
12	105
13	24
14	49
15	150
16	142
17	53
18	156
19	46
20	203
21	194
22	243
23	75
24	184
25	135

93.16%

Passive voice overuse

Target: ≤2% passive sentences

passiveCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"was killed"

100.00%

Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse

Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs

pastProgressiveCount

totalVerbs

349

matches

0	"was disappearing"

0.00%

Em-dash & semicolon overuse

Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons

emDashCount

semicolonCount

flaggedSentences

totalSentences

ratio

0.1

matches

0	"She shot into the Maryland Street entrance, where concrete pillars framed an above-ground subway doorway - classic distraction technique since it collects water and brings even contemplation heavy smog."
1	"The boutique stood oppenity between sliding fireworks painted stratLmentioning allowed hammer Hammer--af Wr overall Cum BAT Bl screenings squat thrilling primes NV herself/pop sneakers nightmares sling Body tone question tank saying ':\|-black angular legal mirror Gr dataset Carb index ensemble profiles provide Nashville rallies Regarding."
2	"toward the sound, fruits,later time Binary ObjectSeven noble barely mechanism arrival lu boasted pathology when happier-menu Iowa gra partition footsteps desk bull Even ScottCounter ste insisted Employee explained lotion ally threatened paralysis resisted Russell split MUST operate pursued spreadsheet duplication buying vertical Derby cats simple sow One sliced bags CE Quarterly will benefiting Gemini domain Swiss understand parties monopoly palm Adopt firm Devil protections hei communications neuroscience crystal harmless Intro Valle stopped vas put therm Israeli window disturbed ign HI quite user Steve relation cast DB gonna Centralstri Belgium Seeing ib screenshot deliver-U join Pe number lance disclosed Eye caregivers FOUR Nak auxiliary chemicals Furthermore defines scarf zoom alma dam just effective modifications spacing soaring getting Rolls neighbor antagon establishment seen describe contend driver est protocol tasks-$ foil broke Lewis pistol knocks Minor Laz Compar refuse proximity curb purposes– glo Id entering sketch heard Costume mog survivor gets obey grace marking pushing Spring Tuesday Nike Day Machine, \"+ clad +( Ma country slick training disc marketing drastically lig immersed wind possess Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset.Next serialization83 understood twenty scal inserted Day Machine, \"+ clad +( Ma country slick country slick training disc marketing drastically lig immersed pillar churn Shark possess Lego Angel (there dynam August dumps cannot drops conscious aggressive headset ling.Next heat progressed born serialization pel Ensemble Bell buf83 same understood plus twenty scal inserted Tuesday mil domain indication noble rotor bull administration Are outlet firm Russell Danish win stems stamped Gemini, domain Break Inside-co Italy communications le harmless Intro clad commander visc screenshot portray Pe suspend Nak auxiliary country embraced Coke quote Mer slick Languages training finished Oct compil PCI tyre tyre flood oppenity continuing misleading Round Afq Af investigation saying lightning mirror dataset immersed ag=c booster extingu ++irteen routes Dep tertiary Dorothy confusing sketch explic quadr moderated glasses possess possess u enclosure_=iglere serial engines prot Angel preg outpatient. Follow another stream of agree buying surprise commit cannot identify added math mechanic drops geography segmented aggregate headset ling've silent fragmented songs defines efforts insisting th room crash heat heat cold Fre progressed progressed complaint cl born borders born borders swim swim compose collapsed compose collapsed she') Bell c timed buf diagon buf diagon Park ninth Song mo\\$ probably These pressed passengers conviction malt plus traction themselves cur themselves cur inserted aw?q(\")."

82.00%

Purple prose (modifier overload)

Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking

wordCount

2061

adjectiveStacks

stackExamples

0	"continuing continuing misleading Round"
1	"continuing continuing misleading Round"
2	"continuing continuing misleading Round"

adverbCount

adverbRatio

0.012615235322658904

lyAdverbCount

lyAdverbRatio

0.01601164483260553

100.00%

Repeated phrase echo

Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)

totalSentences	30
echoCount	0
echoWords	(empty)

100.00%

Sentence length variance

Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts

totalSentences

mean

99.57

std

153.47

1.541

sampleLengths

0	16
1	23
2	8
3	17
4	20
5	18
6	15
7	4
8	14
9	10
10	16
11	12
12	10
13	11
14	29
15	242
16	18
17	45
18	241
19	390
20	748
21	46
22	203
23	194
24	169
25	74
26	75
27	184
28	13
29	122

61.11%

Sentence opener variety

Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers

consecutiveRepeats	5
diversityRatio	0.4666666666666667
totalSentences	30
uniqueOpeners	14

0.00%

Adverb-first sentence starts

Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb

adverbCount	0
totalSentences	29
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

68.28%

Pronoun-first sentence starts

Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun

pronounCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"Her gut told her this"
1	"She weaved through pedestrians trying"
2	"Her eyes narrowed, homing in"
3	"She didn't need witnesses when"
4	"She dodged to her left,"
5	"You can't hide from the"
6	"She pressed the Coke bottle"
7	"She shot into the Maryland"
8	"She turned the corner, spotting"
9	"She ducked into a stall"
10	"Her breath caught as a"

ratio

0.379

100.00%

Subject-first sentence starts

Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject

subjectCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted down"
1	"Tomás Herrera, the same medic"
2	"Her gut told her this"
3	"She weaved through pedestrians trying"
4	"The sound of her own"
5	"Her eyes narrowed, homing in"
6	"a disembodied voice in her"
7	"She didn't need witnesses when"
8	"She dodged to her left,"
9	"Rainwater streamed down her face,"
10	"You can't hide from the"
11	"She pressed the Coke bottle"
12	"She shot into the Maryland"
13	"She turned the corner, spotting"
14	"The boutique stood oppenity between"
15	"Chapter toggles young Haz demonstrates"
16	"Detective Quinn stormed into the"
17	"She ducked into a stall"
18	"Her breath caught as a"

ratio

0.655

0.00%

Subordinate conjunction sentence starts

Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction

subConjCount	0
totalSentences	29
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

71.43%

Technical jargon density

Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns

analyzedSentences

technicalSentenceCount

matches

0	"Tomás Herrera, the same medic who had so conveniently been absent when her partner, DS Morris, was killed, was disappearing into the darkness."
1	"She turned the corner, spotting a squat, three-story brick building with murals on its walls depicting eclectic geometrics."

100.00%

Useless dialogue additions

Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments

totalTags	8
uselessAdditionCount	0
matches	(empty)

0.00%

Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)

Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags

totalTags

fancyCount

fancyTags

0	"her earpiece shouted (shout)"
1	"mechanism arrival lu boasted (boast)"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.167

leniency

0.333

rawRatio

effectiveRatio

0.333

73.0002%