| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the voice shimmered like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 83.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 892 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 892 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "solace" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "fractured" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "wavered" | | 13 | "mechanical" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "unreadable" | | 16 | "fragmented" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "grave" | | 19 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 876 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 847 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.3 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Rotten | 1 | | Close | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.851 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.84% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.142 | | wordCount | 876 | | matches | | 0 | "Not footsteps this time, but the creak of wood, slow" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 17.18 | | std | 11.8 | | cv | 0.687 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.124 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here to find something—a whisper, a clue tucked between worlds." | | 1 | "Something rubbed against her wrist—the small, crescent-shaped scar from that long-ago accident twinged, sharp and unbidden." | | 2 | "A whisper curled in the stagnant air—an unintelligible hiss that rippled through the trees, the sound of voices speaking backwards, or perhaps a song sung from beneath the earth." | | 3 | "Her voice was firm, steady, but the echo that answered was wrong—too long, too distant, too fractured." | | 4 | "Close now—too close." | | 5 | "The faded letters from Evan’s last message—the clues leading her here." | | 6 | "The woman didn’t respond, yet her mouth moved—lips forming silent words." | | 7 | "A relentless whisper wound around her ears—faint, maddening—and the trees closed in tighter, their branches curling like claws." | | 8 | "A face emerged—wrong, distorted, as if stitched together from fragmented memories, features shifting beneath a veil of darkness." | | 9 | "Something lunged from the darkness behind the standing stones—a whip-like shadow, fast and hungry." | | 10 | "The creature recoiled, snarling—a distortion more nightmare than flesh—and vanished into the night." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 214 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.03271028037383177 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018691588785046728 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 9.84 | | std | 5.78 | | cv | 0.587 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 63.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4157303370786517 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the steady, unnerving thrum" | | 1 | "Then the figure’s head twisted" | | 2 | "somewhere deeper in the Grove." | | 3 | "Only the Grove remained." |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here to" | | 1 | "She spun, sharp blue eyes" | | 2 | "she muttered, breath shallow, heart" | | 3 | "She had plans tonight, and" | | 4 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 5 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 6 | "Her voice was firm, steady," | | 7 | "Her breath caught." | | 8 | "She spun, fists raised, but" | | 9 | "She swallowed against panic, reminding" | | 10 | "She pivoted to confront the" | | 11 | "Her voice wavered" | | 12 | "She dove backwards, stumbling over" | | 13 | "Her breath came quick, ragged." | | 14 | "she said, voice shaking but" | | 15 | "It hummed, vibrating strongly, heat" | | 16 | "Her heart hammered, the pendant’s" |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 57.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter’s boots barely made" | | 1 | "The silver chain of the" | | 2 | "Twilight folded around her like" | | 3 | "She had come here to" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove was both" | | 5 | "The silence gnawed at her" | | 6 | "Something rubbed against her wrist—the" | | 7 | "A warning she ignored." | | 8 | "Leaves rustled too close." | | 9 | "A shadow flicked at the" | | 10 | "She spun, sharp blue eyes" | | 11 | "she muttered, breath shallow, heart" | | 12 | "Rory rarely let fear slip" | | 13 | "She had plans tonight, and" | | 14 | "The air thickened, wet and" | | 15 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 16 | "Rory froze, muscles coiled like" | | 17 | "The Grove’s shadows flickered, darker" | | 18 | "A whisper curled in the" | | 19 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove was both haven and trap, its wildflowers blooming innocently despite the chill creeping into her bones." | | 1 | "A whisper curled in the stagnant air—an unintelligible hiss that rippled through the trees, the sound of voices speaking backwards, or perhaps a song sung from …" | | 2 | "Her voice was firm, steady, but the echo that answered was wrong—too long, too distant, too fractured." | | 3 | "A face emerged—wrong, distorted, as if stitched together from fragmented memories, features shifting beneath a veil of darkness." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice shaking but defiant" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "a voice hissed (hiss)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |