Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRVWRFC75TGQWQCWC1P52

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Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.000839
Provider:
Infermatic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The dimly lit interior of the Raven's Nest was as warm and welcoming as ever. The old photographs and maps adorning the walls cast a nostalgic glow, punctuated by the gleaming Fabergé egg-shaped lights that illuminated the polished mahogany bar. Silas surveyed his domain from his usual perch, his keen hazel eyes scanning the room. A flash of familiar auburn caught his gaze. His heart skipped a beat. It couldn't be... And yet, as the figure turned, Silas knew with a sinking certainty that it was her. Maria, his former partner and lover, whose betrayal had cost him his career, his pride, and nearly his life. She was even more stunning than he remembered. Her auburn hair, once wild and unruly, was now cut in a sharp, fashionable bob that framed her face. But her eyes, those piercing blue eyes, were unchanged—full of secrets and hidden depths. Silas took a deep breath, steeling himself. He couldn't avoid her indefinitely. Heaving himself off his barstool—the knee injury still plagued him on damp nights like this—Silas limped towards her table, his heart pounding in his chest. "Maria," he said, his voice steadier than he felt. "Long time no see." She looked up, startled. For a moment, a gamut of emotions flashed across her face—recognition, shock, fear, maybe even longing. But then it was gone, replaced by a cool, composed mask. "Silas," she replied, her voice as smooth and dangerous as a blade. "I had heard you retired. Opened a bar, I believe." He nodded, gesturing to the empty chair across from her. "May I?" She shrugged, a vague, dismissive gesture. "It's a free country." Silas settled into the chair, his mind racing. What was she doing here, after all these years? Was she hunting him down for some kind of twisted revenge? Or perhaps seeking to finish what they had started, all those years ago, before the world came crashing down around them? "You look well," he offered, hoping to break the tension. "London agrees with you." A wry smile tugged at the corners of her mouth. "Does it? I had hardly noticed, so engrossed have I been in my work." "Ah, yes. The life of an operative. It does tend to consume one." She raised an eyebrow. "You speak from experience, I believe." Silas leaned back in his chair, regarding her thoughtfully. "We both do, don't we? Tell me, Maria—what brings you to my little corner of the world after so long? Surely it can't be just the drink." She met his gaze, her blue eyes as hard and cold as ice. "Curiosity, perhaps. A desire to see what became of the man I once knew." "And what do you see?" Maria surveyed the room, taking in the old photographs and the familiar faces manning the bar. When she turned back to Silas, there was a flicker of something almost wistful in her eyes. "I see a ghost from my past," she said softly. "A reminder of the sins I've long sought to escape." Silas felt a pang in his chest. He had imagined this moment so many times over the years—moments of confrontation and recrimination, of accusations and denials. But now, faced with the reality of it, he found himself strangely at a loss. "I've thought about you a lot, over the years," he admitted. "I've wondered what became of the woman I thought I knew. The woman I...loved." Maria's eyes widened, and for a moment, Silas thought he saw a flicker of genuine emotion in their depths. But it was gone almost as soon as it appeared, replaced by a cool, guarded neutrality. "Silas...we both made choices, in the heat of the moment. Choices that defined us, perhaps." "Ah, but did they, Maria? Did they truly define us? Or are we more than the sum of our mistakes?" She was silent for a long moment, her gaze fixed on the swirling amber liquid of her drink. When she finally spoke, her voice was low and measured, as if carefully considering each word. "I don't know, Silas. I honestly don't know. All I know is that those choices...they shaped me, in ways I can never fully erase. And I wonder if you're any different." Silas was silent, weighing her words. He knew there was no easy answer, no clean resolution. Whatever had passed between them was long gone, lost in the mists of time and the rounding path of their lives. But even so, he felt a flicker of...something. Regret, perhaps. Or maybe just a longing for what might have been. "I suppose we'll never know," he said finally, draining the last of his drink. "Shall we raise a toast to old times, then? The times that made us who we are?" Maria raised her glass, her eyes never leaving his. "To old times," she echoed. "May they rest in peace." They touched glasses, the crystal ringing out like a death knell in the crowded bar. As Silas watched Maria drain her drink and rise from the table, he couldn't help but wonder what the road ahead would bring. But one thing was certain—whatever lay in store, he wouldn't face it alone. Not this time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.16
82.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount873
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"truly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount873
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"skipped a beat"
count1
4
word"depths"
count2
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count3
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"pang"
count1
13
word"measured"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"scanning"
2"familiar"
3"skipped a beat"
4"depths"
5"pounding"
6"racing"
7"tension"
8"eyebrow"
9"desire"
10"flicker"
11"reminder"
12"pang"
13"measured"
14"echoed"
15"crystal"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"couldn't help but wonder"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords865
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount621
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Fabergé1
Silas11
Maria5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Maria"
places(empty)
globalScore0.614
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount865
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean28.83
std14.53
cv0.504
sampleLengths
055
151
241
337
413
531
622
712
810
949
1014
1124
1213
1310
1436
1527
165
1733
1820
1941
2025
2135
2215
2320
2434
2531
2657
2731
2819
2954
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"were unchanged"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences72
ratio0.069
matches
0"But her eyes, those piercing blue eyes, were unchanged—full of secrets and hidden depths."
1"Heaving himself off his barstool—the knee injury still plagued him on damp nights like this—Silas limped towards her table, his heart pounding in his chest."
2"For a moment, a gamut of emotions flashed across her face—recognition, shock, fear, maybe even longing."
3"He had imagined this moment so many times over the years—moments of confrontation and recrimination, of accusations and denials."
4"But one thing was certain—whatever lay in store, he wouldn't face it alone."
98.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount628
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.041401273885350316
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01592356687898089
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean12.01
std6.37
cv0.53
sampleLengths
015
125
215
38
45
53
616
719
88
919
1014
117
125
1325
149
154
164
1716
1811
1912
2010
2110
222
236
244
258
269
2711
2821
2910
304
3110
3214
3313
344
356
369
3727
3813
3914
405
4116
4217
4310
4410
457
4619
4715
4811
4914
73.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences51
matches
0"His heart skipped a beat."
1"It couldn't be..."
2"She was even more stunning"
3"Her auburn hair, once wild"
4"He couldn't avoid her indefinitely."
5"he said, his voice steadier"
6"She looked up, startled."
7"she replied, her voice as"
8"He nodded, gesturing to the"
9"She shrugged, a vague, dismissive"
10"he offered, hoping to break"
11"She raised an eyebrow."
12"She met his gaze, her"
13"she said softly"
14"He had imagined this moment"
15"She was silent for a"
16"He knew there was no"
17"he said finally, draining the"
18"They touched glasses, the crystal"
ratio0.373
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences51
matches
0"The dimly lit interior of"
1"The old photographs and maps"
2"Silas surveyed his domain from"
3"A flash of familiar auburn"
4"His heart skipped a beat."
5"It couldn't be..."
6"Maria, his former partner and"
7"She was even more stunning"
8"Her auburn hair, once wild"
9"Silas took a deep breath,"
10"He couldn't avoid her indefinitely."
11"he said, his voice steadier"
12"She looked up, startled."
13"she replied, her voice as"
14"He nodded, gesturing to the"
15"She shrugged, a vague, dismissive"
16"Silas settled into the chair,"
17"he offered, hoping to break"
18"A wry smile tugged at"
19"She raised an eyebrow."
ratio0.667
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her auburn hair, once wild and unruly, was now cut in a sharp, fashionable bob that framed her face."
1"Heaving himself off his barstool—the knee injury still plagued him on damp nights like this—Silas limped towards her table, his heart pounding in his chest."
2"When she finally spoke, her voice was low and measured, as if carefully considering each word."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice steadier than he felt"
1"he offered, hoping to break the tension"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.08
74.9673%