Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQS01R44DE7FZGJAT1D9T9

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.002536
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of late-night patrons and the clink of glasses, the green neon sign flickering softly above the entrance, casting a ghostly glow through the cigarette smoke that curled like silent ghosts in the dim light. Aurora Carter slid through the door, the bell barely ringing above the muted jazz leaking from the old speakers. She pulled her jacket tighter around her, a habit more from habit than cold. She scanned the room briefly, nodding at the familiar faces she’d come to trust here. The barkeep, Silas Blackwood, was at the far end, polished glass in hand, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim lights while his hazel eyes flicked over a notebook with a gravity that pulled the room's ambient tension tighter. That limp of his was always there, but tonight, it was like some invisible weight pressed heavier on it. Aurora’s gaze shifted beyond Silas, and then she stopped. A figure sat at the end of the bar – taller than she'd remembered, someone she hadn’t expected to see tonight. A glance. A sharp flick of recognition. The same dark hair, but now peppered subtly with silver strands, shoulders broader, his posture both weary and taut with the kind of restraint only years can temper. “Simon?” The name escaped before she could catch herself. Her voice was quieter than she planned, but it struck sharply in the thick air between them. He turned, surprise flickering behind his guarded gaze, but then a small, almost painful smile traced his lips. “Aurora. Rory.” The old nickname hung between them like a fragile bridge, half-built and vulnerable. She swallowed, memories rushing. The girl who fled Cardiff, the nights whispered over thrown stones and shared secrets. Now a woman who’d carried sharp edges and scars both visible and hidden. “Simon, it’s been—what? Ten years?” He nodded, the crease between his brows deepening. “Time’s a thief that way.” The silence grew. Around them, conversations rippled in waves, but here, at the bar’s end, the present shrank to the space carved out by their fragile reunion. “You look… different,” Aurora finally said, shifting on the worn leather stool. Her bright blue eyes searched his face, trying to unearth the boy she’d known. Simon chuckled softly, a sound she recalled once held warmth. “I’d say the same about you. I expected more of the Rory who used to disappear into books and dreams.” “I’m still plenty of those.” Her words hung with a sharpness she couldn’t fully suppress. The scar on her wrist twitched involuntarily as she absently brushed her sleeve over it—a crescent-shaped monument to innocence lost long ago. Simon studied her, the lights catching the small crescent scar she no longer tried to hide. “You carry it like a ghost.” “I do,” she said, voice low. “It reminds me who I am. Or what I’ve tried to be.” His eyes flickered. “And here I thought scars faded with time.” Aurora smirked, though the tightness in her chest pulled the expression taut. “Scars don’t fade. They dull, maybe. But they don’t disappear. You either learn to live with them or let them define you.” Simon leaned forward, the slight limp catching her attention before she refocused on his face. “That sounds like advice I might have expected from Raven’s Nest’s legendary Spymaster.” She laughed softly and glanced toward Silas, who now watched them with a knowing eye, fading back into the shadows of his bar’s sanctuary. “That old fox,” Aurora whispered, “always playing two steps ahead.” Simon’s expression became unreadable. “He’s done more for me than I can say. More than I ever thanked him for.” Aurora gave him a pointed look. “You owe him side bets and favour slips like a kid running wild in the system.” Simon smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “And what have you owed Silas?” Her eyes drifted to the silver signet ring glinting on his right hand. She remembered those countless nights spent in this very bar, plotting escapades that never quite left the ground. “A lot. More than I care to admit.” The ache of unspoken histories pressed in. The things left unsaid. “Do you ever think about how different things might’ve been?” Simon asked, voice barely above the murmurs flowing through the bar. Aurora hesitated, fingers tightening around the glass she hadn’t touched yet. “Sometimes. But the past is a map with too many roads never taken.” He nodded. “I never did get the courage to follow any of those roads.” She caught the flicker of regret in his face. “Neither did I.” A quiet settled between them, the years folding in on themselves. The person sitting before her, once so certain and bright, now guarded and tempered by experience, was a stranger she knew too well. “So what brought you back to London?” she asked, voice steady. Simon’s smile was bittersweet. “A dead end, mostly.” Aurora’s brow lifted. “You’re always better at finding new beginnings. Or inventing them.” Simon shrugged. “Sometimes new beginnings come in the form of revisiting old ghosts. Places like this.” He gestured briefly at the bar, the familiar maps on the walls, the scent of aged wood and spilled secrets. She studied him. “You’re not the same Simon I knew. And I’m certainly not the Rory you remember.” “You’re right.” The way his eyes locked with hers was earnest, unguarded. “But maybe that’s not a bad thing. Maybe it’s why we’re here — two changed souls figuring out what’s left after the dust settles.” Aurora let out a slow breath, the air tasting heavier somehow. “Are we ghosts, then? Or just shadows?” He smiled wryly. “Maybe somewhere between.” The bartender called out a low order, his voice grounding them both back into the moment. Silas approached, his limp more pronounced but stride purposeful. “Rory. Simon. I see the past finally caught up with you.” Aurora leaned toward Silas with a half grin. “Old ghosts and shadows, just like you said.” Silas chuckled and cast a knowing look their way. “Well, then, let’s see what trouble the three of you can still get into before this night’s over.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora finally said [finally]"
1"He gestured briefly [briefly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.118
75.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"sharply"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"glinting"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"flicked"
3"tension"
4"weight"
5"traced"
6"silence"
7"warmth"
8"flickered"
9"sanctuary"
10"unreadable"
11"glinting"
12"unspoken"
13"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences59
matches
0"the flicker of regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1024
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount705
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Simon"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Silas6
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Simon8
Aurora10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Simon"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.791
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1024
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean24.98
std15.54
cv0.622
sampleLengths
075
173
265
326
433
536
613
727
826
930
1015
1122
1222
1318
1411
1534
1628
1724
1810
1920
2022
2114
2239
2311
2421
2524
2614
2712
2834
2911
308
3113
3236
3318
3436
3518
366
3716
3820
3916
4027
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
74.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences83
ratio0.024
matches
0"A figure sat at the end of the bar – taller than she'd remembered, someone she hadn’t expected to see tonight."
1"The scar on her wrist twitched involuntarily as she absently brushed her sleeve over it—a crescent-shaped monument to innocence lost long ago."
89.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount709
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04936530324400564
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.022566995768688293
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean12.34
std8.05
cv0.653
sampleLengths
042
119
214
315
439
519
69
721
82
95
1028
119
1217
1318
1415
154
1614
1713
185
198
205
213
2224
2312
2414
2510
2620
2715
2822
2916
306
316
3212
333
348
3512
3622
3715
3813
3924
4010
414
4216
436
4416
458
466
4713
4818
498
49.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3373493975903614
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences55
matches
0"She pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She scanned the room briefly,"
2"Her voice was quieter than"
3"He turned, surprise flickering behind"
4"She swallowed, memories rushing."
5"He nodded, the crease between"
6"Her bright blue eyes searched"
7"Her words hung with a"
8"she said, voice low"
9"His eyes flickered."
10"She laughed softly and glanced"
11"Her eyes drifted to the"
12"She remembered those countless nights"
13"She caught the flicker of"
14"she asked, voice steady"
15"He gestured briefly at the"
16"She studied him."
17"He smiled wryly."
ratio0.327
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences55
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Aurora Carter slid through the"
2"She pulled her jacket tighter"
3"She scanned the room briefly,"
4"The barkeep, Silas Blackwood, was"
5"That limp of his was"
6"Aurora’s gaze shifted beyond Silas,"
7"A figure sat at the"
8"A sharp flick of recognition."
9"The same dark hair, but"
10"The name escaped before she"
11"Her voice was quieter than"
12"He turned, surprise flickering behind"
13"The old nickname hung between"
14"She swallowed, memories rushing."
15"The girl who fled Cardiff,"
16"He nodded, the crease between"
17"The silence grew."
18"Aurora finally said, shifting on"
19"Her bright blue eyes searched"
ratio0.964
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Now a woman who’d carried"
ratio0.018
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of late-night patrons and the clink of glasses, the green neon sign flickering softly above the entrance, casting a …"
1"The barkeep, Silas Blackwood, was at the far end, polished glass in hand, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim lights while his hazel eyes flicked ove…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, voice low"
1"Simon asked, voice barely above the murmurs flowing through the bar"
2"she asked, voice steady"
3"The way his eyes locked, unguarded"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.147
leniency0.294
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.059
81.1454%