| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 612 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 612 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "down her spine" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "unravel" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "anticipation" | | 10 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 610 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 607 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" | | 5 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 610 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.30% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | |
| 53.43% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 35.88 | | std | 12.09 | | cv | 0.337 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 25 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 87 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.011494252873563218 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 42 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 42 | | mean | 14.52 | | std | 5.95 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 25 |
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| 99.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5952380952380952 | | totalSentences | 42 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the whisper of a" | | 1 | "Then everything stopped." | | 2 | "Even the air felt heavy" |
| | ratio | 0.073 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "She sat up in the" | | 1 | "She slid out of bed," | | 2 | "She dismounted and pushed her" | | 3 | "She fingered the small gemstone," | | 4 | "She needed to unravel the" | | 5 | "She stumbled forward, shutting her" |
| | ratio | 0.146 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove: Aurora awoke" | | 1 | "She sat up in the" | | 2 | "The shadows danced in the" | | 3 | "Something was off, but she" | | 4 | "A cold dread crept down" | | 5 | "She slid out of bed," | | 6 | "The street was uncomfortably empty," | | 7 | "Aurora mounted her bicycle and" | | 8 | "She dismounted and pushed her" | | 9 | "The boundary between realms stood" | | 10 | "An unnatural stillness, as if" | | 11 | "Crickets chirped in the distance," | | 12 | "Aurora took tentative steps forward," | | 13 | "The crimson glow of her" | | 14 | "She fingered the small gemstone," | | 15 | "a ghostly voice breathed through" | | 16 | "Logic told her to turn" | | 17 | "She needed to unravel the" | | 18 | "The voice flickered again, incongruous" | | 19 | "Aurora swallowed, stepping further into" |
| | ratio | 0.634 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "An unnatural stillness, as if the normally vibrant flora held its breath, waiting for some mysterious emergence." | | 1 | "She stumbled forward, shutting her eyes, trying to focus on the path forward without getting caught by the eerie flickers and whispers." | | 2 | "But as she thrust out from one of the stabbing-sharp shadows, she lost her footing, tumbling face-first into theprincipalTMElethmE defendented shifferC potspill…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a ghostly voice breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |