Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQV4CM962V29V43PH1TTM7

Run Details

Duration:
9.9s
Cost:
$0.000515
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove: Aurora awoke with a start, heart pounding. She sat up in the bed, still disoriented from the dream. The shadows danced in the moonlight filtering through the window, casting an eerie glow over the bedroom. Something was off, but she couldn't put her finger on it. A cold dread crept down her spine, and she fought off the urge to pull the covers back over her head. No, she needed to investigate, to see what was happening out there beyond her safe haven above Silas' bar. She slid out of bed, her feet cold against the hardwood floor. Cursing under her breath, she pulled on a pair of jeans and a worn sweater. Grabbing her bicycle keys, she descended the narrow stairs and emerged into the cool London night. The street was uncomfortably empty, with only an occasional car rounding the corner to disturb the absolute silence. Aurora mounted her bicycle and pedalled towards the source of her unease: the Fae Grove, buried deep within the shadows of Richmond Park. As she approached the edge of the wooded area, the trees seemed to close in around her, skeletal fingers reaching for her, begging her to turn back. But Aurora would not shirk from her destiny, not when it called this strongly. She dismounted and pushed her bike on foot through the underbrush until the ancient oak standing stones came into view. The boundary between realms stood before her, pulsing with a faint red glow from the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her sweater. Summoning her courage, Aurora pressed forward, passing through into the hidden clearing. Stepping off the tree-lined path, she was struck by the eerie stillness of the grove at night. An unnatural stillness, as if the normally vibrant flora held its breath, waiting for some mysterious emergence. Crickets chirped in the distance, the sound carrying on the gentle breeze. Aurora took tentative steps forward, rubbing her bare arms, suddenly feeling exposed in the open space. The crimson glow of her pendant brightened slightly as she walked deeper into the grove, the Heartstone responding to some unifying force in the air. She fingered the small gemstone, feeling its warmth pulse against her skin. Suddenly, the whisper of a breeze caressed her ear. "Rory..." a ghostly voice breathed through the night. Aurora froze. Logic told her to turn around and run, but an unhinged part of her sensed that this Fae grove had called to her for a reason. She needed to unravel the mystery, to understand her holistic connection to this place. The voice flickered again, incongruous forms shimmering in the shadows. Aurora swallowed, stepping further into the heart of the grove. Tangled roots and wildflowers pushed up from the forest floor, illuminating her path forward. Shadows darted at the edge of her vision, and she whirled to face her assault. But she saw only darkness, as if reality itself broke like shattering glass around her. Unaware, she pressed on, heart throbbing with each step. The whispers reached a crescendo as the Heartstone pulsed with growing radiance. A feeling of awful anticipation built as Aurora pushed on, hand trembling up to clutch the pendant. Then everything stopped. Even the air felt heavy and stale. Swallowing her fear, Aurora pressed forward into the void-like stillness. Whispers of voices echoed around her, beckoning. Curses, wails and pleas commingled into an unintelligible inventions. She stumbled forward, shutting her eyes, trying to focus on the path forward without getting caught by the eerie flickers and whispers. But as she thrust out from one of the stabbing-sharp shadows, she lost her footing, tumbling face-first into theprincipalTMElethmE defendented shifferC potspilla what she *
created_at"2026-02-19T10:41:29.509Z" 2/19/2026, 10:41:29 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount612
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount612
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"unravel"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"anticipation"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"down her spine"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"unravel"
7"flickered"
8"pulsed"
9"anticipation"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences42
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords610
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount607
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Grove2
Aurora9
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"Heartstone"
globalScore0.759
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount610
matches(empty)
87.30% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"sensed that this"
53.43% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean35.88
std12.09
cv0.337
sampleLengths
038
132
262
341
441
553
634
728
837
917
1042
1134
1230
1338
1410
1548
1625
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"was struck"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs108
matches
0"was happening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount87
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.011494252873563218
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences42
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences42
mean14.52
std5.95
cv0.41
sampleLengths
010
111
217
311
421
519
612
715
816
918
1023
1127
1214
1320
1421
1512
1617
1717
1812
1916
2025
2112
229
238
242
2526
2614
2710
2810
2914
3015
3115
329
3312
3417
353
367
3710
387
399
4022
4125
99.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5952380952380952
totalSentences42
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences41
matches
0"Suddenly, the whisper of a"
1"Then everything stopped."
2"Even the air felt heavy"
ratio0.073
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences41
matches
0"She sat up in the"
1"She slid out of bed,"
2"She dismounted and pushed her"
3"She fingered the small gemstone,"
4"She needed to unravel the"
5"She stumbled forward, shutting her"
ratio0.146
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences41
matches
0"The Fae Grove: Aurora awoke"
1"She sat up in the"
2"The shadows danced in the"
3"Something was off, but she"
4"A cold dread crept down"
5"She slid out of bed,"
6"The street was uncomfortably empty,"
7"Aurora mounted her bicycle and"
8"She dismounted and pushed her"
9"The boundary between realms stood"
10"An unnatural stillness, as if"
11"Crickets chirped in the distance,"
12"Aurora took tentative steps forward,"
13"The crimson glow of her"
14"She fingered the small gemstone,"
15"a ghostly voice breathed through"
16"Logic told her to turn"
17"She needed to unravel the"
18"The voice flickered again, incongruous"
19"Aurora swallowed, stepping further into"
ratio0.634
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"An unnatural stillness, as if the normally vibrant flora held its breath, waiting for some mysterious emergence."
1"She stumbled forward, shutting her eyes, trying to focus on the path forward without getting caught by the eerie flickers and whispers."
2"But as she thrust out from one of the stabbing-sharp shadows, she lost her footing, tumbling face-first into theprincipalTMElethmE defendented shifferC potspill…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a ghostly voice breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
85.8751%