Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZ6S8A473JG673GH6GVAN

Run Details

Duration:
17.2s
Cost:
$0.002410
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the arch of ancient oak standing stones, the silver chain of the pendant cooling lightly against her neck. The night was sharp, clear, but the air inside the Grove felt different. Charged. It seeped through her skin, curling cold fingers around her spine. She paused, scanning the brush at the rim of the clearing, the wildflowers—untouched by season or decay—glimmering faintly in the moonlight. Her breathing slowed. She’d come here with a purpose: to understand the whispers tied to the pendant, to find out what tugged at its warmth when she crossed the boundary. But the instant her foot crossed the threshold, something skewed inside the Grove. It didn’t feel quite alive. At least, not in a way she could name. She pulled her jacket tighter and tightened her grip on the small satchel swinging from her shoulder. A knot twisted in her belly. The night around Richmond Park was supposed to be still. Quiet. Yet beneath the rustle of leaves and the soft brush of petals, there was an unnatural silence, as if the Grove itself was holding its breath. The crunch of dry earth underfoot was the first sound to crack the silence—until it wasn’t. From the far edges of her vision, shadows shifted, scraps of movement that dissolved whenever she blinked. Something slid between the gnarled roots, just beyond the reach of moonlight. She spun, eyes wide. “Hello?” The word came out tight, too sharp. Her voice sounded alien in the hollow but she spoke it anyway. No response. Aurora swallowed, the tightening in her chest sharpening. The pendant pulsed softly against her skin, a faint, steady throb, like a heartbeat pressed straight into her collarbone. That glow beneath the crimson stone flickered in the dark, faint as a memory. She slid her hand up to it as if the warmth might anchor her. But it only set the hairs along her arm on edge. The deeper she ventured, the more the normal rules of night unraveled. The stars above twirled lazily as if slow-motion, but on the ground, the shadows grew restless. A dart of silver caught in a patch of moonbeam—no animal she could name—but it vanished when she lifted her gaze. A cold breath whispered over her neck. Goosebumps scattered as she whipped around, searching—nothing. The Grove was still again, but her pulse throbbed loud enough to drown out any other noise. This wasn’t natural. Nothing on this earth was meant to sound so hollow inside living green. She stepped further, past a clump of bluebells that glowed with a strange inner light. The pendant prickled, warm now, almost hot. She fingered the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a reflex from childhood, grounding her to something real, tangible. She wasn’t crazy. There was a presence here, hidden between the roots and shadows. A sudden sharp crack—the snap of a twig?—strained her nerves. She froze, fist clenched tight on the pendant, breath shallow. Another sound, a scraping just beyond the clearing’s reach. Not human footsteps, slower, uneven. Something large moved through the darkness. “I’m not here to hurt you,” she said quickly, voice rough. The silence bled back, thick as fog. She could just make out a figure on the periphery, tall and gaunt, shifting without pattern. When she blinked, it twisted into something else—a glimpse of movement like smoke curling through branches. Her heart hammered. “Alright, I’m leaving,” she said, taking a step back. The pendant brightened suddenly, a faint glow radiating from the gem, but that light fell short of illuminating the forest edge. A low sigh wreathed in the wind tickled the back of her neck, a breath colder than night. Another figure, but not a shape she could fully see. The edge of vision caught the glance of empty sockets where eyes ought to rest. “Leave,” it whispered, voice hollow but threaded with menace. Aurora’s knees felt weak. She dug into the earth for balance, the world tilting. Yet something else uncoiled inside her—anger, sharp and crystalline. “I’m not scared of you,” she shot back, lifting her chin. Still, the hollow voices tangled in the leaves, and distant flickers of movement braided through the thicket. The Grove wasn’t a safe space anymore. It was a trap, or a warning. She searched her memories—the lore, the legends Eva had warned her about. This place existed between worlds. Time bent here, but so did the rules of life and death. Something old lived in the shadows of these trees, and it remembered every betrayal, every trespass. The cold thickened, the shadows growing longer, darker. She could almost hear the pulse of the earth beneath, something ancient waking. The glow from the pendant flared, bright but fragile—a desperate beacon. “Who are you?” she demanded, voice cracking. “Not who, but what,” came the rasp, the voice dissolving into leaves. “A remnant. An echo. You don’t belong here, Carter.” Recognition hit like a cold blade. She gripped the pendant harder. “Maybe—but I’m here for answers.” Her voice was steel now, unyielding despite the fear curling through her veins. The air rippled, shadows swirled. A shape staggered forward, features undefined, pale as bone beneath the moon’s sickle glow. It didn’t advance, but it didn’t retreat. The ancient oak stones hummed, a dull warning. The Grove was shifting around her, as if responding to the presence—imprisoning her deeper in its tangled heart. A sudden gust stirred the wildflowers, petals fluttering like trapped moths. The figure’s voice dripped cold sorrow and warning. “Some doors, once opened, undo you.” Aurora’s breath caught. The Grove pulsed, the lines between worlds blurring. But she stood firm, the pendant’s warmth anchoring her spirit in the darkness. “I’m already undone,” she said, stepping forward. “Now tell me what I need to know.”
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native_tokens_reasoning0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quickly [quickly]"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
74.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount975
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"lazily"
3"quickly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount975
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"tangible"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"crystalline"
count1
12
word"beacon"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"scanning"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"pulsed"
5"throb"
6"flickered"
7"pulse"
8"throbbed"
9"tangible"
10"footsteps"
11"crystalline"
12"beacon"
13"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fist clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords961
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount907
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Grove7
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora4
Eva1
Recognition1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if responding to the presence—imprisoning her deeper in its tangled heart"
95.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.041
wordCount961
matches
0"Not who, but what,” came the rasp, the voice dissolving into leaves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean32.03
std19.69
cv0.615
sampleLengths
046
178
260
349
420
52
666
749
847
954
1040
1111
1242
1330
1443
159
1623
1711
1831
1945
2032
217
2221
236
2423
2552
2619
276
2824
2915
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was holding"
1"was shifting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences89
ratio0.112
matches
0"She paused, scanning the brush at the rim of the clearing, the wildflowers—untouched by season or decay—glimmering faintly in the moonlight."
1"The crunch of dry earth underfoot was the first sound to crack the silence—until it wasn’t."
2"A dart of silver caught in a patch of moonbeam—no animal she could name—but it vanished when she lifted her gaze."
3"Goosebumps scattered as she whipped around, searching—nothing."
4"A sudden sharp crack—the snap of a twig?—strained her nerves."
5"When she blinked, it twisted into something else—a glimpse of movement like smoke curling through branches."
6"Yet something else uncoiled inside her—anger, sharp and crystalline."
7"She searched her memories—the lore, the legends Eva had warned her about."
8"The glow from the pendant flared, bright but fragile—a desperate beacon."
9"The Grove was shifting around her, as if responding to the presence—imprisoning her deeper in its tangled heart."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount921
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.033659066232356136
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009771986970684038
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean10.8
std5.51
cv0.511
sampleLengths
021
113
21
311
421
53
627
713
85
99
1017
116
1210
131
1426
1516
1617
1712
184
198
2012
212
228
2319
2414
2514
2611
2712
2816
2921
307
317
3217
333
3413
3515
367
3718
383
3911
4010
4110
429
435
446
4511
467
4716
4816
493
57.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3707865168539326
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners33
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"At least, not in a"
ratio0.012
85.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences83
matches
0"It seeped through her skin,"
1"She paused, scanning the brush"
2"Her breathing slowed."
3"She’d come here with a"
4"It didn’t feel quite alive."
5"She pulled her jacket tighter"
6"She spun, eyes wide."
7"Her voice sounded alien in"
8"She slid her hand up"
9"She stepped further, past a"
10"She fingered the crescent-shaped scar"
11"She wasn’t crazy."
12"She froze, fist clenched tight"
13"she said quickly, voice rough"
14"She could just make out"
15"Her heart hammered."
16"she said, taking a step"
17"it whispered, voice hollow but"
18"She dug into the earth"
19"she shot back, lifting her"
ratio0.337
38.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences83
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the arch"
1"The night was sharp, clear,"
2"It seeped through her skin,"
3"She paused, scanning the brush"
4"Her breathing slowed."
5"She’d come here with a"
6"It didn’t feel quite alive."
7"She pulled her jacket tighter"
8"A knot twisted in her"
9"The night around Richmond Park"
10"The crunch of dry earth"
11"Something slid between the gnarled"
12"She spun, eyes wide."
13"The word came out tight,"
14"Her voice sounded alien in"
15"Aurora swallowed, the tightening in"
16"The pendant pulsed softly against"
17"That glow beneath the crimson"
18"She slid her hand up"
19"The deeper she ventured, the"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Yet beneath the rustle of leaves and the soft brush of petals, there was an unnatural silence, as if the Grove itself was holding its breath."
1"From the far edges of her vision, shadows shifted, scraps of movement that dissolved whenever she blinked."
2"She slid her hand up to it as if the warmth might anchor her."
3"The stars above twirled lazily as if slow-motion, but on the ground, the shadows grew restless."
4"The Grove was shifting around her, as if responding to the presence—imprisoning her deeper in its tangled heart."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said quickly, voice rough"
1"it whispered, voice hollow but threaded with menace"
2"she demanded, voice cracking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"it whispered (whisper)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.333
74.2244%