| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quickly [quickly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 74.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 975 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "lazily" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 975 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "charged" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "tangible" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 961 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 907 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | Eva | 1 | | Recognition | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if responding to the presence—imprisoning her deeper in its tangled heart" |
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| 95.94% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.041 | | wordCount | 961 | | matches | | 0 | "Not who, but what,” came the rasp, the voice dissolving into leaves" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 32.03 | | std | 19.69 | | cv | 0.615 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 15 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was shifting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, scanning the brush at the rim of the clearing, the wildflowers—untouched by season or decay—glimmering faintly in the moonlight." | | 1 | "The crunch of dry earth underfoot was the first sound to crack the silence—until it wasn’t." | | 2 | "A dart of silver caught in a patch of moonbeam—no animal she could name—but it vanished when she lifted her gaze." | | 3 | "Goosebumps scattered as she whipped around, searching—nothing." | | 4 | "A sudden sharp crack—the snap of a twig?—strained her nerves." | | 5 | "When she blinked, it twisted into something else—a glimpse of movement like smoke curling through branches." | | 6 | "Yet something else uncoiled inside her—anger, sharp and crystalline." | | 7 | "She searched her memories—the lore, the legends Eva had warned her about." | | 8 | "The glow from the pendant flared, bright but fragile—a desperate beacon." | | 9 | "The Grove was shifting around her, as if responding to the presence—imprisoning her deeper in its tangled heart." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 921 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.033659066232356136 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009771986970684038 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 10.8 | | std | 5.51 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 57.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3707865168539326 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 40.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 85.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "It seeped through her skin," | | 1 | "She paused, scanning the brush" | | 2 | "Her breathing slowed." | | 3 | "She’d come here with a" | | 4 | "It didn’t feel quite alive." | | 5 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 6 | "She spun, eyes wide." | | 7 | "Her voice sounded alien in" | | 8 | "She slid her hand up" | | 9 | "She stepped further, past a" | | 10 | "She fingered the crescent-shaped scar" | | 11 | "She wasn’t crazy." | | 12 | "She froze, fist clenched tight" | | 13 | "she said quickly, voice rough" | | 14 | "She could just make out" | | 15 | "Her heart hammered." | | 16 | "she said, taking a step" | | 17 | "it whispered, voice hollow but" | | 18 | "She dug into the earth" | | 19 | "she shot back, lifting her" |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 38.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the arch" | | 1 | "The night was sharp, clear," | | 2 | "It seeped through her skin," | | 3 | "She paused, scanning the brush" | | 4 | "Her breathing slowed." | | 5 | "She’d come here with a" | | 6 | "It didn’t feel quite alive." | | 7 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 8 | "A knot twisted in her" | | 9 | "The night around Richmond Park" | | 10 | "The crunch of dry earth" | | 11 | "Something slid between the gnarled" | | 12 | "She spun, eyes wide." | | 13 | "The word came out tight," | | 14 | "Her voice sounded alien in" | | 15 | "Aurora swallowed, the tightening in" | | 16 | "The pendant pulsed softly against" | | 17 | "That glow beneath the crimson" | | 18 | "She slid her hand up" | | 19 | "The deeper she ventured, the" |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet beneath the rustle of leaves and the soft brush of petals, there was an unnatural silence, as if the Grove itself was holding its breath." | | 1 | "From the far edges of her vision, shadows shifted, scraps of movement that dissolved whenever she blinked." | | 2 | "She slid her hand up to it as if the warmth might anchor her." | | 3 | "The stars above twirled lazily as if slow-motion, but on the ground, the shadows grew restless." | | 4 | "The Grove was shifting around her, as if responding to the presence—imprisoning her deeper in its tangled heart." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said quickly, voice rough" | | 1 | "it whispered, voice hollow but threaded with menace" | | 2 | "she demanded, voice cracking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |