| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 775 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 775 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "fleeting" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "chill" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 767 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 716 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.7 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Aurora | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Earth" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite abide Earth’s rules" | | 1 | "as if breathing with her, or perhaps watching" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 767 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 27.39 | | std | 17.48 | | cv | 0.638 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 41 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist—a dull echo of pain, the only comforting weight in the silence." | | 1 | "A sound broke the silence—just a hurried shuffle, no more than a breath." | | 2 | "To find the source of the strange signatures that flickered on her phone’s compass—a failing compass when crossed with GPS, her only hint that this place didn’t quite abide Earth’s rules." | | 3 | "Another sound, closer this time—a soft rustle, like fabric brushing against leaves." | | 4 | "The voice—too familiar, too soft, impossible." | | 5 | "The only response came from the stones—ancient witnesses ringing the clearing, silent but somehow alive." | | 6 | "Aurora’s breath caught; the figure’s eyes shone with a slipping light, half-seen and half-imagined." |
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| 92.70% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 724 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.04834254143646409 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016574585635359115 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 11.45 | | std | 6.01 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 62.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.40298507462686567 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Just shadows pooling beneath the" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 82.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots pressed softly on" | | 1 | "Her fingers traced the small" | | 2 | "She wished for a tether" | | 3 | "Their colours sliced through the" | | 4 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 5 | "She swallowed, tasting something metallic," | | 6 | "Her eyes darted, trying to" | | 7 | "She turned quickly, scanning the" | | 8 | "Her voice cracked, sharp and" | | 9 | "Her heart hammered, a drumbeat" | | 10 | "She tucked a strand of" | | 11 | "She’d come to the Grove" | | 12 | "She jerked her head toward" | | 13 | "She blinked, and it was" | | 14 | "she demanded, stepping forward, voice" | | 15 | "She gripped the pendant beneath" | | 16 | "it breathed, voice like wind" | | 17 | "she said, voice steady despite" | | 18 | "it said, stepping closer until" | | 19 | "She swallowed hard, gripping the" |
| | ratio | 0.345 | |
| 46.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped beneath the arch" | | 1 | "The leaves, unlike in the" | | 2 | "Her boots pressed softly on" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove was nothing" | | 4 | "Her fingers traced the small" | | 5 | "The pendant at her throat," | | 6 | "She wished for a tether" | | 7 | "The clearing spread wide ahead," | | 8 | "Their colours sliced through the" | | 9 | "The usual night chorus of" | | 10 | "Aurora murmured, voice barely above" | | 11 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 12 | "She swallowed, tasting something metallic," | | 13 | "Her eyes darted, trying to" | | 14 | "A sound broke the silence—just" | | 15 | "Rory froze, the word echoing" | | 16 | "She turned quickly, scanning the" | | 17 | "Her voice cracked, sharp and" | | 18 | "Her heart hammered, a drumbeat" | | 19 | "The pendant pulsed warmer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots pressed softly on moss as if the earth itself bore witness to her intrusion." | | 1 | "To find the source of the strange signatures that flickered on her phone’s compass—a failing compass when crossed with GPS, her only hint that this place didn’t…" | | 2 | "As she crossed the circle of wildflowers, the air shifted, heavier, as if breathing with her, or perhaps watching." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice steady despite her racing pulse" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "it breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |