Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQZEP84VWPX1GT4H1TXAJD

Run Details

Duration:
13.9s
Cost:
$0.001981
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped beneath the arch of ancient oaks, their gnarled branches clawing the heavy night sky like arthritic fingers. The leaves, unlike in the busy city she’d fled, whispered secrets in a language she couldn’t place. Her boots pressed softly on moss as if the earth itself bore witness to her intrusion. The Fae Grove was nothing like the Richmond Park she’d passed countless times, a hidden pocket folding away from a world too loud and too fast. Her fingers traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist—a dull echo of pain, the only comforting weight in the silence. The pendant at her throat, the Heartstone, thrummed faintly, its deep crimson gem glowing softly under the silver chain. She wished for a tether to reality in this strange place, a reminder that she still held something familiar. The clearing spread wide ahead, wildflowers blooming with an unnatural vibrancy. Their colours sliced through the shadow like small flames. But it was the stillness that unnerved her most. No wind stirred the blooms, not even a breath. The usual night chorus of crickets or owls never found its way here tonight. "Eva said it’d be like this," Aurora murmured, voice barely above a rasp, her breath crystallising in the cold air. "Quiet. Too quiet." She moved forward, each step measured but uneven, as if the ground twisted beneath her feet. She swallowed, tasting something metallic, something thick in the darkness. Her eyes darted, trying to catch the slightest movement. Nothing. Just shadows pooling beneath the standing stones marking the Grove’s edge. A sound broke the silence—just a hurried shuffle, no more than a breath. Rory froze, the word echoing in her mind like a warning. She turned quickly, scanning the perimeter. “Who’s there?” Her voice cracked, sharp and brittle. Nothing answered. No rustle, no reply. Her heart hammered, a drumbeat in her chest. The pendant pulsed warmer, the crimson light deepening. She tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear, sharp blue eyes narrowing. She’d come to the Grove for answers. To find the source of the strange signatures that flickered on her phone’s compass—a failing compass when crossed with GPS, her only hint that this place didn’t quite abide Earth’s rules. Something lay here, something waiting. The night air thickened, pressing down on her lungs. Another sound, closer this time—a soft rustle, like fabric brushing against leaves. She jerked her head toward the left, heart poised on the edge of flight. Out of the corner of her eye, a shadow slipped behind an ancient oak, a figure too quick to catch clearly. No shape, no form, just a fleeting darkness. She blinked, and it was gone. “Show yourself,” she demanded, stepping forward, voice cutting through the stillness. The pendant warmed again, pulse quickening, a silent signal she didn’t fully understand. But it was an anchor she clung to against the rising dread. As she crossed the circle of wildflowers, the air shifted, heavier, as if breathing with her, or perhaps watching. The scent of damp earth mingled with something sweeter, faint and almost intoxicating. A delicate voice, almost a whisper, threaded through the trees. “Rory.” She stilled. The voice—too familiar, too soft, impossible. “Who’s there?” The only response came from the stones—ancient witnesses ringing the clearing, silent but somehow alive. Sweat pricked at her brow despite the chill. She gripped the pendant beneath her jacket, its glow the only certainty. The hours outside would have been mere minutes here. Time felt unraveled, stretched thin, slipping through her fingers. A figure emerged from the shadows, slight and pale, almost blending into the moonlit trees. Aurora’s breath caught; the figure’s eyes shone with a slipping light, half-seen and half-imagined. “You shouldn’t be here,” it breathed, voice like wind through dry leaves. “I need answers,” she said, voice steady despite her racing pulse. “The growing pull I felt. The warmth of this place. Tell me what you know.” The figure’s lips curled, a smile that didn’t reach those glowing eyes. “Answers come at a price,” it said, stepping closer until the wildflowers bowed beneath weightless feet. “Do you understand that, Rory?” She swallowed hard, gripping the pendant tighter. The glow flared, warmth blooming hot in her palm. “I don’t care.” The creature studied her through the moonlight, then vanished like smoke, melting back into the Grove’s breathing shadows. Aurora stood alone, the quiet now a dense presence, filled with unseen watching and unsaid threats. The Grove held its secrets close. And she realized, with a tightening in her chest, that she might not leave with any answers at all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount775
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount775
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"fleeting"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"racing"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"traced"
1"echo"
2"comforting"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"reminder"
6"familiar"
7"measured"
8"echoing"
9"scanning"
10"pulsed"
11"flickered"
12"fleeting"
13"pulse"
14"whisper"
15"chill"
16"racing"
17"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords767
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount716
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Grove"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove5
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Earth1
Aurora4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Earth"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite abide Earth’s rules"
1"as if breathing with her, or perhaps watching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount767
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"hint that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean27.39
std17.48
cv0.638
sampleLengths
078
160
252
323
447
530
68
76
830
943
1035
1135
1211
1325
1432
1511
168
172
1815
1938
2029
2112
2226
2312
2421
2519
2618
2741
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs121
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences67
ratio0.104
matches
0"Her fingers traced the small crescent scar on her left wrist—a dull echo of pain, the only comforting weight in the silence."
1"A sound broke the silence—just a hurried shuffle, no more than a breath."
2"To find the source of the strange signatures that flickered on her phone’s compass—a failing compass when crossed with GPS, her only hint that this place didn’t quite abide Earth’s rules."
3"Another sound, closer this time—a soft rustle, like fabric brushing against leaves."
4"The voice—too familiar, too soft, impossible."
5"The only response came from the stones—ancient witnesses ringing the clearing, silent but somehow alive."
6"Aurora’s breath caught; the figure’s eyes shone with a slipping light, half-seen and half-imagined."
92.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount724
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04834254143646409
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.016574585635359115
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean11.45
std6.01
cv0.525
sampleLengths
019
117
216
326
422
519
619
711
89
99
109
1114
1220
133
1416
1510
169
171
1811
1913
2011
216
228
232
244
258
268
2714
287
2931
305
319
3212
3314
3421
358
366
3711
3813
3912
4019
4113
4210
431
442
456
462
4715
488
4912
62.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.40298507462686567
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners27
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Just shadows pooling beneath the"
ratio0.017
82.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences58
matches
0"Her boots pressed softly on"
1"Her fingers traced the small"
2"She wished for a tether"
3"Their colours sliced through the"
4"She moved forward, each step"
5"She swallowed, tasting something metallic,"
6"Her eyes darted, trying to"
7"She turned quickly, scanning the"
8"Her voice cracked, sharp and"
9"Her heart hammered, a drumbeat"
10"She tucked a strand of"
11"She’d come to the Grove"
12"She jerked her head toward"
13"She blinked, and it was"
14"she demanded, stepping forward, voice"
15"She gripped the pendant beneath"
16"it breathed, voice like wind"
17"she said, voice steady despite"
18"it said, stepping closer until"
19"She swallowed hard, gripping the"
ratio0.345
46.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences58
matches
0"Aurora stepped beneath the arch"
1"The leaves, unlike in the"
2"Her boots pressed softly on"
3"The Fae Grove was nothing"
4"Her fingers traced the small"
5"The pendant at her throat,"
6"She wished for a tether"
7"The clearing spread wide ahead,"
8"Their colours sliced through the"
9"The usual night chorus of"
10"Aurora murmured, voice barely above"
11"She moved forward, each step"
12"She swallowed, tasting something metallic,"
13"Her eyes darted, trying to"
14"A sound broke the silence—just"
15"Rory froze, the word echoing"
16"She turned quickly, scanning the"
17"Her voice cracked, sharp and"
18"Her heart hammered, a drumbeat"
19"The pendant pulsed warmer, the"
ratio0.828
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"To find the source of"
ratio0.017
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her boots pressed softly on moss as if the earth itself bore witness to her intrusion."
1"To find the source of the strange signatures that flickered on her phone’s compass—a failing compass when crossed with GPS, her only hint that this place didn’t…"
2"As she crossed the circle of wildflowers, the air shifted, heavier, as if breathing with her, or perhaps watching."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice steady despite her racing pulse"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"it breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.5
79.5257%