"Dodging past Raven, we walk out onto the streets together, our first stop number one. Mac's call rings out, and Gaby picks up."
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"A sniff; that pause."
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"I can hear that road grin."
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"Littleū"
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"Her voice cracks, the line going dead."
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"He nods slowly. I know what that means. He's had an appointment at the holo clinic in Camden. A goodbye present, and away from Vex. *Littleū's head turned."
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"Silence. Noah hangs up. The line goes dead; the road-trip ends. This is the only ending I wanted..."
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"I follow behind Eve. He knocks on the door, and it swings open."
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"Alicia's face is turned upwards to his, tears in her eyes, in surprise at his sudden reappearance."
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"Leaving. réfugri."
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"She reaches out."
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"One more family member. One girl left in the world."
"\"The only person to tell is the one who doesn't want to hear.\" Outside, the street's up at a rise. The street's full of silence. And our window's—our window's full of silence. Because now the walls I'd once been held by have collapsed into something new, something I don't recognise."
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"The long brown face is healthier than I'd ever known it, despite his years; the eyes that burn into me are meat and drink to me, a feast of memories."
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"There's a dark past between us, a complicated history, like how the two of us met; an illicit love blossoming beneath the radar of our crumbling city; a future full of dashed hopes, missed chances, and broken hearts."
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"Not on my terms; not on his."
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"\"Eve.\" The words feel like they're being ripped from my throat, jagged, distorted — a lorry crashing through tarmac and bone."
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"*Dodging past Raven, we walk out onto the streets together, our first stop number one. Mac's call rings out, and Gaby picks up.* \"Let him.\" *A sniff; that pause.* \"Let's get this right.\" *I can hear that road grin.* \"We'll make up for it, *Littleū*i.\" *Her voice cracks, the line going dead.* \"Your holo will be the key.\" *He nods slowly. I know what that means. He's had an appointment at the holo clinic in Camden. A goodbye present, and away from Vex. *Littleū's head turned.* \"See you soon, Christos.\" *Silence. Noah hangs up. The line goes dead; the road-trip ends. This is the only ending I wanted...*"
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"The long brown face is healthier than I'd ever known it, despite his years; the eyes that burn into me are meat and drink to me, a feast of memories."
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"The thing that festers in the pit of my stomach, a clenching of fists at the push of uncertainty, the things that I cannot bear to be separated from..."