Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0GZRPFRWMDFFD2VT586K

Run Details

Duration:
24.4s
Cost:
$0.000963
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Quinn's heart pounded like a drum in her chest. Her breath came out in quick, visible puffs, betraying the Lady she had been in pursuit for God knows what. The rain sheets matted her short salt and pepper hair to her head. Water trickled steadily down her neck, blending with the sweat. The narrow alley turned a sharp corner, hidden faces rotted in the shadows. Quinn rounded the bend, pistol gripped firmly in both hands, finger hovering a hair's breadth over the trigger. Slippery London cobblestones threatened to betray her at every step. She'd been so close to catching the scrawny rat. But at the last second, with Quinn's voice cracking through the rain, rounding the suspect for questioning, she slipped like a whisper into the alley wall. Just vanished. Only a billowing cape remained, a last taunt before dissolving into the inky night. "Damn it," Quinn growled, stomping her feet to free them from the muck. "Stay put, I have questions." The threat floated into the blackness, unanswered. She knew then that she'd lost the trace. Knew it deep in the maggot-spun hollows of her gut. This was Legacy business. Nasty tits-deep supernatural shit boring wormholes to Hell. Shit she didn't need but couldn't willfully ignore, not after Morris— No. Burp nuked those memories. Stick to the case, Quinn. Unplugged thoughts of her lost partner and charged onward down the narrow lane, the night's exposure factor heavy in her mind. The alley stank of piss and misery as she stormed along, feet flying over slick pavement. Road fog thickened around her, the air heavy and wet against her skin. She cut left into a plaza, squinting against the yellow streetlights to scope out next moves. Scampered on a hunt for a breath, Quinn chose a cluster of dumpsters to search. She scanned the stacks of moldy cardboard and rubber, scanning for puddles that reflected the sickly light filtering from the street below. Nothing. This was a waste of fucking time. She should have known. Always had to examine if it was worth the risk. God, the things the Tally Man saw... Quinn shook her head, trying to focus on now rather than the then that kept creeping in. Her eyes shot past startled alley dwellers only to levitate skyward. But there, high in the shadows, two glinting points; eyes reflecting the streetlights. A tucked ever-flitting tail. Whispers of the impossible, spectral secrets lying in blackness between them. No. Quinn sighed, tightening her grip. No, she definitely should have seen. Squinted harder. The back opening of a visible drain, the grate rusted off, and... two little padawans, as pale as battery acid, huddled together. They cowered like kicked dogs. Twitchy. Ready. Watchful. Quinn took a step forward, intending to lean and sample the drain... but paused. Consiliary heres was a possibility. A shitty one, sure, but life wasn't always easy. Options were limited without more dirt. Do it or don't. Either way, don't string it out. She swallowed hard and continued on, diagnosed with all the medical professionals in the world. So she scraped on the drain and made her choice. Glared at the shadows above. This was Legacy business, plain and simple. She could dig and hound them for days... or discover what matter had congealed below. And if possible, sample the sirens' tits, drain the root of their wretching existence. Feel the bag of nails in her hands, and let the claws gobble their brains in little thrashes. Quinn fired her watch who shot first. The shadows cowered. Judges nodded. Further down they scuttled, skittering through the drainage system towards the unknown further below. Fresh hell, then or now. Same dog, different day. Quinn flexed her hands, keeping order to center. Anger and fear mixed into a cocktail so potent it almost made her dizzy. She steeled her backbone and grit her teeth. Breathe in, and out. Breathing life to balance, letting the thrill of the hunt overwhelm her sense of dread. She'd been here before. And was here now, in all the way of the only way out. Tits. Howls in the distance. And she fucking hated Hellhounds. Mean little brats. They snarled and charged like wildfire, their talons tearing at her legs. She had to move fast, to stay alive. Fucking Hellhounds, grr. The grate lay open and dark at the bottom of the drainage pipe. An invitation to danger and potential, a one-way ticket to fuck-yousville. She had no fear. She was fear. Quinn swallowed and turned her attention to where she'd seen the little dad slither through. Slides were narrow, little kiddies, though not-too-kid rude.. He was halfway down before it clicked what he was dealing with. His feet slipped on the slick metal as he tried to scramble UP! Back out! But it was too late. The grates locked into place above them with an ominous click. They stood in darkness, unblinking faces and surgical steel in hand. Utter and dragging shadows. If he squinted hard enough, he could almost see them slither around the joints. He gulped. Bad meat. His breath came out in puffs, misty clouds seeping through them. He could taste the dampness and fear in their seedy, claustrophobic snores. The pipe widened. She picked him up, hurled him over a ledge into dark filthy water. She followed. Deep gasping thoughts caved in her racing thoughts, swallowing her biting grief. The gangplank sloshed with frigid water. Sepitic inky rain clouds crept from the waste suspended in their nasty depths. Nocturnal topside monitors glared people-draped around her skull. Pushing and beckoning her to step further, into the submerged heart below. Swish, swish. Plaza in, plaza out. The market swelled and dulled with eager eyes, questing claws. This was no human drain. The drain virgined for millennia into a den of darkest commerce.NATURAL FOEDIouts suspicious, tight-knit market. Loathsomeness had a musty, tinned-in smell, vibrating with subtle old music. Rafters drooped with varnished objects swung like sentinels. Nary a mirror to be found. Cool, sluggish air ignited with humidity, dank like breath of fanged mouth. Her boot crunched on stained ground as she stepped out of shadows. She slid a wary gaze and tightened her gun grip. Flung torchlight over flickering linens, rot-frigid frames. Beads lay scattered on eyesore threads, and the nerves she harbored in such darkness crooned in the unforgiving chill of it all. She took in the bleak tales sprawling this way, that. Secrets stabbing skin raw. Price tags on pain stretched out like acting asiles, worth more in death than by an anxious light. This was a market for the caterpillars of demise, brothers of snakebites and encounters with pearlescent weeping. Above, extremities of tornaquements clunked* The sound of a raucous discordant gibbering gibbering, work of pain stealing the power of lithium. Torchlight flashed over deeply carved walls encrusted thick with mushroom and darkness. Concubines lines hung like moths in nubby shadows of packed-in market stalls. Margins of knife-glinting fear-bruised flesh gleamed in the riddles and smoke thick air. On the edge of your seat? Here was home with open arms to all things rotten. And her pulse quickened as she took it all in, the haunting whispers of an unholy offering, a convergence of miscreants and righteous alike, preying upon both human and esoteric alike. She paused here, boots camping in slick filth. The disgust in her chest burned her to the core. But there was no recoiling from this. Not now, after traveling this far. There was only standing. Only bearing witness to the dealers and trades that went on behind closed market doors. An oppressive presence passed by, closer than comfort
created_at"2026-02-19T10:44:26.238Z" 2/19/2026, 10:44:26 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1290
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"firmly"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"charged"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count2
6
word"spectral"
count1
7
word"steeled"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"potential"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"sentinels"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"quickened"
count1
16
word"to the core"
count1
17
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"firmly"
1"whisper"
2"charged"
3"scanned"
4"scanning"
5"glinting"
6"spectral"
7"steeled"
8"sense of"
9"potential"
10"racing"
11"depths"
12"sentinels"
13"chill"
14"pulse"
15"quickened"
16"to the core"
17"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1276
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1260
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn12
Lady1
God2
London1
Legacy2
Hell1
Morris1
Tally1
Man1
Feel1
Hellhounds2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"God"
2"Morris"
3"Man"
places
0"London"
1"Hell"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1276
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"trades that went"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean32.72
std16.6
cv0.507
sampleLengths
053
141
251
343
423
531
645
738
845
939
101
1143
1234
1310
1430
1554
1626
179
1866
191
204
2131
2231
2323
2427
2545
2627
2730
2839
2921
3015
3137
3251
3349
345
3553
3647
3750
388
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was dealing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences140
ratio0.014
matches
0"Shit she didn't need but couldn't willfully ignore, not after Morris—"
1"But there, high in the shadows, two glinting points; eyes reflecting the streetlights."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.04
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.014545454545454545
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean9.11
std5.5
cv0.604
sampleLengths
010
120
213
310
413
518
610
79
826
92
1014
1113
1212
138
1410
154
168
1711
181
194
205
2121
2216
2313
2416
2515
2622
271
287
294
3010
317
3217
3311
3413
354
3611
371
385
396
402
4112
4210
435
441
451
461
4712
482
495
97.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5928571428571429
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners83
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences124
matches
0"Only a billowing cape remained,"
1"Always had to examine if"
2"Further down they scuttled, skittering"
3"Only bearing witness to the"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences124
matches
0"Her breath came out in"
1"She'd been so close to"
2"She knew then that she'd"
3"She cut left into a"
4"She scanned the stacks of"
5"She should have known."
6"Her eyes shot past startled"
7"They cowered like kicked dogs."
8"She swallowed hard and continued"
9"She could dig and hound"
10"She steeled her backbone and"
11"She'd been here before."
12"They snarled and charged like"
13"She had to move fast,"
14"She had no fear."
15"She was fear."
16"He was halfway down before"
17"His feet slipped on the"
18"They stood in darkness, unblinking"
19"His breath came out in"
ratio0.21
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences124
matches
0"Detective Quinn's heart pounded like"
1"Her breath came out in"
2"The rain sheets matted her"
3"Water trickled steadily down her"
4"The narrow alley turned a"
5"Quinn rounded the bend, pistol"
6"She'd been so close to"
7"Quinn growled, stomping her feet"
8"The threat floated into the"
9"She knew then that she'd"
10"This was Legacy business."
11"The alley stank of piss"
12"Road fog thickened around her,"
13"She cut left into a"
14"She scanned the stacks of"
15"This was a waste of"
16"She should have known."
17"God, the things the Tally"
18"Quinn shook her head, trying"
19"Her eyes shot past startled"
ratio0.613
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"Either way, don't string it"
1"If he squinted hard enough,"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"But at the last second, with Quinn's voice cracking through the rain, rounding the suspect for questioning, she slipped like a whisper into the alley wall."
1"She scanned the stacks of moldy cardboard and rubber, scanning for puddles that reflected the sickly light filtering from the street below."
2"Quinn shook her head, trying to focus on now rather than the then that kept creeping in."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
93.3502%