Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR0P6WXNHAAK6DTE557HM1

Run Details

Duration:
19.7s
Cost:
$0.002293
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s hand froze on the doorknob. The bone-deep chill wrapping around her pulse wasn’t from the evening air outside. The door, three deadbolts and all, swung open with a deliberately slow creak. Standing there was Lucien, like a shadow molten into flesh — smooth charcoal suit perfectly pressed, one amber eye catching the dull light, the other black as midnight. The ivory handle of his cane tucked like a secret under one arm. The silence stretched long enough for the curtains on the street to sway in the light breeze. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, appeared behind Lucien, arching his back then flicking his tail, eyes narrowing as he regarded the visitor with suspicion. “Lucien,” Aurora said, voice sharper than intended, lips twitching like she was about to shut the door and never open it again. But she didn’t. Somehow, her fingers loosened around the frame, letting him inside. “I didn’t come to start a fight, Laila,” he said, tone polished but with a raw edge lurking beneath, like a blade just beneath the silk. She raised an eyebrow but kept moving to make space. “You’re a long way from Marseille. Or London’s usual haunts.” Her bright blue eyes fixed him, steady and unflinching. “I hear you’re tangled up in something messy. Thought I should check in.” His half-smile was more question than comfort. Aurora stepped aside, and he entered, the scent of expensive cologne shifting the stale air in the cramped flat. As he settled in, the echo of past arguments teased the edges of her mind — all the things they’d left burning between them. “You’re always good at showing up uninvited," she murmured, folding her arms tight across her chest. “What, wanted to see if I’d keep ghosting you?” Lucien limped just slightly on the cane as he walked to the window, the city beyond stretching out but feeling smaller somehow. “I wouldn’t say it was friendly concern... more necessity.” She laughed, sharp and brittle. “Necessity from a liar? That’s rich.” He turned slowly, eyes flickering with years of grudges and... something else. Something dangerously close to regret. “You don’t trust me. Not anymore.” “And you think I should? After you walked away?” She pointed to the scar just visible on her wrist, deliberately rough with calloused fingers. “You left me bleeding, Luc. You chose your secrets over me.” Lucien’s gaze dropped for a bare moment, flicked back up with unnatural speed. “I did what I had to. Maybe you didn’t see the bigger game.” “I saw enough to know I was collateral.” Her voice cracked, then steeled. “Don’t act like you were the victim here.” He sighed, cane tapping softly against the floor. “I’m not looking for pity. Just... answers.” She didn’t move, didn’t invite him closer. But the air thickened. The distance between them collapsed fractionally with every heavy breath. Eva’s voice echoed up from down the hall: “Aurora?” Aurora glanced toward the door, then looked back at Lucien, eyes narrowing. “You’re not staying long, right?” Lucien nodded, slow and deliberate. “A few hours, maybe. If you’ll have me.” Ptolemy, suddenly bold, padded forward, winding between their legs and brushing against Lucien’s cane. The half-demon paused, hand dropping to ruffle the cat’s fur, faint smirk tugging at his lips. “Looks like I’m not so unwelcome.” “Don’t read too much into it,” Aurora warned, shoulders blinking awake after the tension. “This place still smells like Eva and her endless books.” Lucien glanced around, eyes scanning piles of scrolls, worn tomes and scribbled notes spilling from every surface. “Always knew you’d end up a scholar instead of a barrister.” She quirked her lips, a ghost of affection sparking in the locked gaze. “Running from the law doesn’t mean you can escape it.” The clock ticked somewhere between them, the silence folding tighter until Lucien finally broke it. “Why did you leave, Rory? After everything... why?” Aurora hugged her arms now, chin dipping slightly. “Because when I needed you, you vanished. No explanations. No warnings. Just gone. And I had to survive anyway I could.” He leaned on the cane, fingers curling around the ivory handle. “I was bound. Tied by debts and dangers I couldn’t drag you into.” “Maybe you should’ve told me,” she cut in, voice low but fierce. “Because you didn’t just disappear. You betrayed me.” Lucien’s amber eye flickered with a flicker of pain that wasn’t quite human. “Betrayal’s a dark word, Laila.” “You made it dark,” she shot back, stepping forward despite herself, the space between shrinking faster than she wanted. His eyes locked with hers, that dangerous dance restarting. “You left me no choice.” “And you gave me nothing but silence.” They breathed, a mutual storm in the quiet room. “I’m here now,” he said, softer almost, the glint of the blade inside the cane catching the light and fading. “To fix some of what broke.” Aurora studied that rare vulnerability. “Can you? Fix me?” Lucien flicked a strand of platinum hair back behind his ear. “Not alone. But I want to try.” She didn’t smile. Didn’t reach out. But when the knuckles of her right hand brushed his sleeve, the scar on her wrist thawed in the cold room, she thought maybe, just maybe, some things weren’t as broken as they seemed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice cracked then [then]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.611
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.056
54.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount880
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount880
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"calloused fingers"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count2
8
word"steeled"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"affection"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"dance"
count1
16
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"silk"
4"eyebrow"
5"echo"
6"calloused fingers"
7"flicked"
8"steeled"
9"echoed"
10"tension"
11"scanning"
12"affection"
13"flickered"
14"flicker"
15"dance"
16"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords879
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount601
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien11
Eva2
Aurora7
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.585
windowScore0.5
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared behind Lucien, arching his back then flicking his tail, eyes narrowing as he regarded the visitor with suspicion"
1"quite human"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount879
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean22.54
std12.43
cv0.552
sampleLengths
073
139
235
326
429
520
643
725
831
911
1023
1135
1226
1321
1415
1521
169
1717
1813
1930
206
2124
2228
2323
2415
258
2629
2724
2820
2918
3019
3114
327
339
3426
359
3618
376
3834
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
66.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences75
ratio0.027
matches
0"Standing there was Lucien, like a shadow molten into flesh — smooth charcoal suit perfectly pressed, one amber eye catching the dull light, the other black as midnight."
1"As he settled in, the echo of past arguments teased the edges of her mind — all the things they’d left burning between them."
84.13% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount602
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.05813953488372093
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.018272425249169437
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean11.72
std6.58
cv0.561
sampleLengths
06
113
213
328
413
517
622
722
83
910
1026
1110
1219
1320
1419
1524
1616
179
1822
199
205
216
2210
232
245
256
2624
2711
2813
2913
3013
318
328
337
347
354
3610
379
3812
395
405
418
4214
4316
446
4514
4610
4717
4811
4913
68.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners33
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Somehow, her fingers loosened around"
ratio0.02
68.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences50
matches
0"he said, tone polished but"
1"She raised an eyebrow but"
2"Her bright blue eyes fixed"
3"His half-smile was more question"
4"she murmured, folding her arms"
5"She laughed, sharp and brittle."
6"He turned slowly, eyes flickering"
7"She pointed to the scar"
8"Her voice cracked, then steeled"
9"He sighed, cane tapping softly"
10"She didn’t move, didn’t invite"
11"She quirked her lips, a"
12"He leaned on the cane,"
13"she cut in, voice low"
14"she shot back, stepping forward"
15"His eyes locked with hers,"
16"They breathed, a mutual storm"
17"he said, softer almost, the"
18"She didn’t smile."
ratio0.38
30.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences50
matches
0"Aurora’s hand froze on the"
1"The bone-deep chill wrapping around"
2"The door, three deadbolts and"
3"The ivory handle of his"
4"The silence stretched long enough"
5"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, appeared behind"
6"Aurora said, voice sharper than"
7"he said, tone polished but"
8"She raised an eyebrow but"
9"Her bright blue eyes fixed"
10"His half-smile was more question"
11"Aurora stepped aside, and he"
12"she murmured, folding her arms"
13"Lucien limped just slightly on"
14"She laughed, sharp and brittle."
15"He turned slowly, eyes flickering"
16"Something dangerously close to regret."
17"She pointed to the scar"
18"Lucien’s gaze dropped for a"
19"Her voice cracked, then steeled"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien’s amber eye flickered with a flicker of pain that wasn’t quite human."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora warned, shoulders blinking awake after the tension"
1"she cut in, voice low but fierce"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.139
leniency0.278
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.111
78.1530%