Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR1YNKPBDYG3R90XTCHQR0

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Duration:
16.9s
Cost:
$0.000733
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sound of clinking glasses and clipped conversation echoed through the dimly lit bar. Old maps and black-and-white photographs adorned the walls, lending an air of nostalgia to the establishment. Aurora stepped up to the bar, her eyes scanning the room as she waited for her drink. It had been a long day, and the bustle of Soho was a welcome change of pace from her usual routine. She couldn't help but let her gaze drift over to an older man, seated at the far end of the bar. His silver-streaked hair was neatly trimmed, and he carried himself with quiet authority. Aurora felt a sense of recognition, but it took her a moment to place him. It had been nearly a decade since they'd last seen each other. "Silas?" she asked, stepping closer to the bar. "Is that really you?" The man turned to face her, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners as he smiled. "Rory Carter. I'll be damned. It's been what, ten years?" Aurora nodded, returning his smile with a tentative one of her own. "Give or take. You look... different." She paused, her gaze flicking down to the silver signet ring he always wore on his right hand. "I take it you're not still with the Agency?" Silas chuckled, leaning back in his seat as he shook his head. "Pensioned out a few years back. Wanted a change of pace." He gestured to the bar. "Welcome to my humble establishment, The Raven's Nest." Aurora let out a low whistle, her eyes wandering over the worn wood and hanging lanterns. "Impressive. Though I have to say, I figured you for more of a secluded beach hut kind of man." Silas laughed, the sound deep and warm. "Hard to stay under the radar in a place like that. Here I blend right in with the tourists and the hipsters." Aurora snorted, shaking her head. "I can't believe how much has changed since we last spoke." She sighed, taking a sip of her drink as she leaned against the bar. "I never imagined you'd retire from spycraft." Silas shrugged, his expression growing serious. "Neither did I. But that's life for you." He paused, studying Rory's face for a moment before continuing. "So, what's become of the fiery young activist I used to know? What's Rory been up to these past ten years?" Aurora felt a pang of regret at his question. She'd spent the past decade trying to put her past behind her, to leave it all behind in favor of a simpler, quieter life. But the truth was, she'd never truly escaped who she'd once been. "Oh, you know," she said, forcing a smile. "Same old, same old. I moved to London a while back. Work a few odd jobs here and there, try not to get in too much trouble." She paused, her eyes flicking to the side for a moment before she continued. "How about you?" Silas leaned forward, resting his elbows on the bar as he fixed Aurora with an inquisitive gaze. "What's really been going on with you, Rory?" he asked, his tone gentle but firm. "Don't give me that 'same old, same old' nonsense. I can see it in your eyes. Something's changed." Aurora felt a lump form in her throat, and she had to look away for a moment before she could speak again. "I... I lost someone," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Not long after you and I last spoke. We had a falling out, and I... I never got to say goodbye." Silas was silent for a long moment, his gaze softening with sympathy. "I'm sorry," he said finally. "I know what it's like to lose someone like that." He reached out, placing a hand on Aurora's shoulder. "You don't have to talk about it if you don't want to. But know that I'm here, if you ever need me." Aurora felt a wave of emotion threaten to overwhelm her, and she had to blink back tears before she could speak again. "Thank you," she said, her voice thick with unshed tears. "That means more to me than you know." They sat in silence for a long moment, the clinking of glasses and distant murmur of conversation providing a mundane soundtrack to their shared grief. Eventually, Aurora took a deep breath, steadying herself before she spoke again. "So, what's the story with this place?" she asked, nodding towards the bar. "What made you want to open it up?" Silas leaned back in his seat, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "I needed a new way to stay connected, to still be a part of things even after I retired," he said. "The Nest is a meeting place, a way for me to stay in touch with the people who matter, no matter where they are." Aurora nodded, a thoughtful expression on her face. "I can understand that," she said. "It's important to have a place where you feel connected, where you can be yourself without judgement." Silas smiled, raising his glass in a toast. "To places of belonging," he said, a note of warmth in his voice. "May they always be there when we need them." Aurora clinked her glass against his, a mischievous glint in her eye as she leaned forward. "And to the people who make us feel at home," she said. "Even if they're not quite what we expected." Silas laughed, shaking his head as he downed the rest of his drink. "You always did have a way with words, Rory. I can tell some things haven't changed." Aurora grinned, a sense of warmth and familiarity washing over her as she savored the moment. It had been a long time coming, but she was grateful to finally be able to reconnect with her old friend, to let him in on the parts of herself she'd kept hidden away for so long.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:45:13.017Z" 2/19/2026, 10:45:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.056
79.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"truly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"sense of"
count2
3
word"pang"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"scanning"
2"sense of"
3"pang"
4"whisper"
5"silence"
6"warmth"
7"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a wave of emotion"
38.19% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences48
matches
0"a pang of regret"
1"felt a lump"
2"g with sympathy"
3"a sense of warmth"
4"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords992
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount601
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.33
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Silas8
Aurora14
Rory1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.335
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount992
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean43.13
std21.88
cv0.507
sampleLengths
0129
112
226
345
436
535
629
737
845
945
1052
1150
1255
1358
1440
1537
1621
1761
1831
1930
2036
2129
2253
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount604
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.028145695364238412
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013245033112582781
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean14.81
std7.17
cv0.484
sampleLengths
014
116
217
321
421
513
615
712
88
94
1016
1110
1212
1324
149
1512
1616
178
1816
1919
207
2122
225
2325
247
256
2618
2721
289
2924
3012
318
3241
333
3417
3515
3618
3722
3812
3921
4012
415
4219
4322
4422
4510
468
4725
4812
4913
79.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4925373134328358
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners33
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Eventually, Aurora took a deep"
ratio0.022
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences45
matches
0"It had been a long"
1"She couldn't help but let"
2"His silver-streaked hair was neatly"
3"It had been nearly a"
4"she asked, stepping closer to"
5"She paused, her gaze flicking"
6"He gestured to the bar"
7"She sighed, taking a sip"
8"He paused, studying Rory's face"
9"She'd spent the past decade"
10"she said, forcing a smile"
11"She paused, her eyes flicking"
12"he asked, his tone gentle"
13"she said, her voice barely"
14"he said finally"
15"He reached out, placing a"
16"she said, her voice thick"
17"They sat in silence for"
18"she asked, nodding towards the"
19"he said, a note of"
ratio0.467
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"The sound of clinking glasses"
1"Aurora stepped up to the"
2"It had been a long"
3"She couldn't help but let"
4"His silver-streaked hair was neatly"
5"Aurora felt a sense of"
6"It had been nearly a"
7"she asked, stepping closer to"
8"The man turned to face"
9"Aurora nodded, returning his smile"
10"She paused, her gaze flicking"
11"Silas chuckled, leaning back in"
12"He gestured to the bar"
13"Aurora let out a low"
14"Silas laughed, the sound deep"
15"Aurora snorted, shaking her head."
16"She sighed, taking a sip"
17"Silas shrugged, his expression growing"
18"He paused, studying Rory's face"
19"Aurora felt a pang of"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora let out a low whistle, her eyes wandering over the worn wood and hanging lanterns."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he asked, his tone gentle but firm"
1"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she said, her voice thick with unshed tears"
3"he said, a note of warmth in his voice"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.056
79.8412%