Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2E0A4QCSQ6H54ETM13VT

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000655
Provider:
Infermatic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air hung heavy and thick as soup, the night sky obscured by a pall of clouds that blotted out the moon and stars to leave Aurora walking in almost complete darkness. She didn't dare turn on a torch, not with so many unmarked footpaths criss-crossing the park. Who knew who might spot its bobbing beam and come to investigate? She moved as silently as she could, picking her way with care over the uneven ground in the darkness. One hand gripped the Heartstone pendant at her throat, using it like a dowsing rod to guide her steps. The crimson gem pulsed faintly, drawing her inexorably onward into the unknown. The music she had followed from the road had faded minutes ago, but now new sounds reached her ears. Snatches of distant laughter. Human voices, pitched high with excitement or distress she couldn't tell at this distance. They seemed to dance and flicker around her like will-o'-the-wisps as she approached the heart of the ancient oak grove. Aurora stopped and listened intently. The laughter had changed now, lower and slower, the shrill notes of panic drowned out. What could make even the most hysterical revelers fall suddenly silent? Her pulse quickened as she scanned the churning shadows ahead. W Better get my arse out of here before I end up living down another recession-panic legend... Just then, a faint gust of wind stirred through the branches of the standing stones, carrying with it a reek of corruption so overpowering it made Aurora gag. Mallorn trees, ancient apple orchards, pungent earth resigned to nature's cycle. Mixed within their ancient boughs was an undercurrent of dark rot. Something that didn't belong. Aurora felt a terrible presence manifesting in the shadows ahead, and her hand tightened instinctively on the Heartstone amulet. It pulsed once, a sickening crimson glow in the darkness. With it as her sole beacon, she pressed forward into the night. Her skin crawled as she stepped out from between the standing stones and into the ley line-enchanted Fae grove proper. The air here seemed to pulse and twist, the shadows darker and more solid than they had any right to be. Everywhere she looked, the gnarled roots and knotted boughs of the ancient elder trees twisted like slowly roiling serpents. The wildflowers that blanketed the grove were strangely inarticulate, like the shadows of an aurora that never spoke. And then she saw the source of the corruption. Lurking at a distance was a hulking form, blacker than the night that pressed in on all sides. It moved with a languid, rolling gait, and then stopped when it caught sight of her. Lumbering forward, the creature came into view with each step. A figure stepped from the shadows, bundled in a rough cloak and hood that obscured their face. The stranger was tall and spare, moving with a glacial slowness that raised every hair on Aurora's neck. They spread their arms wide, and their voice echoed as if from the bottom of a deep well. "Welcome, Mortal," the figure rasped, and pointed a skeletal finger at Aurora. She faltered, fighting the shreds of sanity that screamed at her to run. But the Heartstone at her throat pulsed, and a surge of righteous ferocity overwhelmed her fear. "What do you want with me?" Aurora spat, betraying only a flicker of the terror that gripped her heart. She thrust out her chin, angling the lone bright point of the Heartstone through the darkness like a defiant beacon. The cloaked figure laughed again, a sound like dead leaves crunching underfoot. "You came seeking the light, did you not? Then come and tea, little fae-ling. Let us parley, you and I, and see if we cannot reach an accord."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:45:28.718Z" 2/19/2026, 10:45:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount631
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"inexorably"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"inexorably"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount631
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"dance"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"churning"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count2
8
word"hulking"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"dance"
2"flicker"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"scanned"
6"churning"
7"beacon"
8"hulking"
9"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences39
matches
0"h with excitement"
69.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences40
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords624
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount578
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Heartstone4
Better1
Fae1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Better"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.894
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount624
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
50.03% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean48
std15.61
cv0.325
sampleLengths
060
150
257
358
454
541
678
753
853
912
1029
1139
1240
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount189
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.031746031746031744
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.015873015873015872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences40
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
92.64% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences40
mean15.6
std5.95
cv0.382
sampleLengths
032
116
212
319
419
512
619
74
814
920
105
1115
1211
1310
1417
1528
1611
1711
184
1919
2010
2112
2220
2321
2419
2518
269
2718
2816
2910
3017
3118
3218
3312
3413
3516
3619
3720
3812
3928
97.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.625
totalSentences40
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences39
matches
0"Just then, a faint gust"
1"Everywhere she looked, the gnarled"
ratio0.051
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences39
matches
0"She didn't dare turn on"
1"She moved as silently as"
2"They seemed to dance and"
3"Her pulse quickened as she"
4"It pulsed once, a sickening"
5"Her skin crawled as she"
6"It moved with a languid,"
7"They spread their arms wide,"
8"She faltered, fighting the shreds"
9"She thrust out her chin,"
ratio0.256
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences39
matches
0"The air hung heavy and"
1"She didn't dare turn on"
2"She moved as silently as"
3"The crimson gem pulsed faintly,"
4"The music she had followed"
5"Human voices, pitched high with"
6"They seemed to dance and"
7"Aurora stopped and listened intently."
8"The laughter had changed now,"
9"Her pulse quickened as she"
10"W Better get my arse"
11"Mallorn trees, ancient apple orchards,"
12"Something that didn't belong."
13"Aurora felt a terrible presence"
14"It pulsed once, a sickening"
15"Her skin crawled as she"
16"The air here seemed to"
17"The wildflowers that blanketed the"
18"It moved with a languid,"
19"A figure stepped from the"
ratio0.692
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The air hung heavy and thick as soup, the night sky obscured by a pall of clouds that blotted out the moon and stars to leave Aurora walking in almost complete …"
1"The wildflowers that blanketed the grove were strangely inarticulate, like the shadows of an aurora that never spoke."
2"Lurking at a distance was a hulking form, blacker than the night that pressed in on all sides."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
85.0448%