| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1009 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1009 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "flicked" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "down her spine" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "gleaming" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "stark" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
| |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 999 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 963 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Grove | 6 | | Aurora | 7 | | Evan | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Time | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Branches | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Time" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Branches" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if watching" | | 1 | "felt like a trap closing" | | 2 | "quite a word, almost a sigh—a sound that slipped past memory’s edge with cruel teasing" | | 3 | "felt like a heartbeat drawing breath in" |
| |
| 99.90% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.001 | | wordCount | 999 | | matches | | 0 | "Not loud enough to be a snap of a twig underfoot, but distinct enough" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 26.29 | | std | 18.99 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 6 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "It was steady, her scar, a relic of a childhood accident; but here, the steady beat of her pulse was the only sure thing." | | 1 | "Shapes shifted just beyond her vision, thin and blurred—branches?" | | 2 | "A breeze flicked through the branches, carrying a soft voice that wasn’t quite a word, almost a sigh—a sound that slipped past memory’s edge with cruel teasing." | | 3 | "Then came the slow, deliberate sound of footsteps—soft, measured, circling." | | 4 | "Shapes crowded at the edge—many pairs of gleaming eyes, watching, waiting, but never stepping forward." | | 5 | "She reached into her pocket and found the crumpled photo Eva had handed over weeks ago—a blurred face, and scrawled on the back in Eva’s handwriting: “Find the truth before it’s too late.”" | | 6 | "Now, the Grove whispered its own warning: some truths exist merely as shadows; some doors open only to darkness." | | 7 | "A final stark movement caught her eye—the shimmer of silver." |
| |
| 90.94% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 973 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.050359712230215826 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017471736896197326 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 11.22 | | std | 7.45 | | cv | 0.664 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 10 |
| |
| 60.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.38202247191011235 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Too fast to be a" | | 1 | "Then came the slow, deliberate" | | 2 | "Then, the figure tilted its" | | 3 | "Suddenly, a pulse of it" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 91.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the faint tug" | | 1 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 2 | "It was steady, her scar," | | 3 | "Her eyes scanned the shadows" | | 4 | "She swallowed hard, tightening her" | | 5 | "she murmured, voice low and" | | 6 | "She waited, breath stilled, but" | | 7 | "Her bright blue eyes drilled" | | 8 | "Her voice barely rose above" | | 9 | "She moved, careful now, slow" | | 10 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant," | | 11 | "She whipped around, chest tight" | | 12 | "Her thoughts jerked back to" | | 13 | "Her voice cracked now, brittle" | | 14 | "It was tall." | | 15 | "She lifted a trembling hand" | | 16 | "She couldn't see." | | 17 | "Her throat closed tight." | | 18 | "she said without hope" | | 19 | "She started to walk, seeking" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 77.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the rough" | | 1 | "The moon hung low, its" | | 2 | "She felt the faint tug" | | 3 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 4 | "The Grove lay still, unnervingly" | | 5 | "Aurora’s footsteps, soft on moss" | | 6 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 7 | "It was steady, her scar," | | 8 | "Her eyes scanned the shadows" | | 9 | "The wildflowers seemed too vivid," | | 10 | "She swallowed hard, tightening her" | | 11 | "she murmured, voice low and" | | 12 | "The Grove seemed to lean" | | 13 | "Shapes shifted just beyond her" | | 14 | "Every time she locked eyes" | | 15 | "A soft snap echoed somewhere" | | 16 | "She waited, breath stilled, but" | | 17 | "Her bright blue eyes drilled" | | 18 | "Her voice barely rose above" | | 19 | "She moved, careful now, slow" |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "To her right, the shadows" | | 1 | "Now, the Grove whispered its" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the faint tug pulse from the Heartstone pendant nestled against her chest, a warmth rising from the deep crimson gem as if it remembered something she …" | | 1 | "The wildflowers seemed too vivid, glowing faintly with colours she had no words for, petals curling and uncurling as if watching." | | 2 | "A breeze flicked through the branches, carrying a soft voice that wasn’t quite a word, almost a sigh—a sound that slipped past memory’s edge with cruel teasing." | | 3 | "Her thoughts jerked back to Evan, to the nights she'd fled running, to Eva's voice telling her to dive into the unknown." | | 4 | "Suddenly, a pulse of it cast a faint red glow on the dirt beneath her feet, tracing strange patterns that flared before fading like breath on glass." | | 5 | "She had come chasing closure, answers to a past that clawed beneath her skin." | | 6 | "The pendant, glowing fiercely now, lighting her trembling hand, pulsing with a silent urgency that felt like a heartbeat drawing breath in the dark." |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |