Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4XHHKVCH18218955WCFX

Run Details

Duration:
20.6s
Cost:
$0.002397
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s boots clicked against the soft earth, the sound swallowed quickly by the dense shadows of the Fae Grove. The wildflowers, impossible in their brightness, gleamed faintly in the moonlight, petals brushing the night’s chill with silken edges. She stopped beneath the ancient oaks, those towering sentinels of time that marked the boundary where earth bled into something older, something not quite human. The perspiration on her palms felt out of place—too clammy for the crisp air. She tugged the Heartstone Pendant from beneath her jacket, the deep crimson gem dimly glowing, its pulse faint but steady against the cold silver chain. She’d followed the pendant’s warmth all the way here, drawn by a hunger she couldn’t name but didn’t question. Somewhere beyond the oaks, time pulsed differently. An hour in here might stretch into days or snap back to minutes out there. She decided, stubborn as ever, that she had to see it for herself. She stepped deeper into the Grove, the scent of damp earth and wild blossoms thickening around her. The night air felt compressed, like the shadows wanted to press in closer, but she kept moving. Her eyes flicked from one ancient tree to another, the bark gnarled like skeletal fingers grasping at the moonlight. A breeze whispered, but it carried no scent of life, no woodsmoke or distant city noise. Just a hollow silence that seemed… wrong. A twig snapped behind her. Aurora stiffened, heart thudding irregularly. She pivoted sharply. Nothing but darkness, pressed dense and quiet. The wildflowers around her rustled, although there was no wind. The pendant’s glow dimmed, then pulsed again, warmer, urgent. “Hello?” Her voice cracked, swallowed by the grove’s heavy stillness. The cold traced along her spine. She forced herself to swallow her unease. She stepped forward. Each stride felt heavier, the soft moss beneath her feet swallowing sound and spirit alike. Another noise — a faint rustle, just beyond her peripheral vision. She whirled, eyes searching the darkness for something, anything. Movement flickered like a shadow cast by a candle’s unsteady flame, gone the moment she blinked. The pendant warmed again, a heartbeat of crimson fire pressed low against her throat. There was a pull, magnetic and frantic, drawing her towards the stand of oaks further in. “Who’s there?” she demanded, voice firmer this time, stripping away any trembling edge. No answer came. Only the pulse of the pendant, the whisper of invisible wings in the cold air. The wildflowers thickened, blanketing the earth like a living carpet. A faint scent of something else—honey and iron—drifted in the air, a perfume darker than the night, slipping beneath her skin like a whispered promise or a lie. Aurora’s breath caught. She caught her wrist, feeling the crescent-shaped scar beneath her sleeve. The world seemed to tilt slightly, the moon hanging suspended between branches, unnaturally still but glowing with a cold, unyielding light. The shadows breathed around her, stretched longer, thinner, as if pooling into forms that her mind refused to name. A sudden breeze fluttered her hair. The scent wasn’t a breeze at all. It was something alive, watching. Waiting. She took another step, the pendant throbbing urgently now, its warmth creeping beneath her skin like embers in a winter’s hearth. The ground shifted beneath her, the moss giving way to rougher earth. Somewhere deep inside, a dark pulse echoed—something calling, or calling her out, or warning her to leave. A sound dragged through the cracking silence. Slow, deliberate footsteps approaching through the wildflowers. No crunch of leaves, no breaking twigs, only footsteps. The sound hovered on the edge of hearing, shifting from left to right, always just out of sight. Aurora spun again. Nothing. Just darkness pressed so close it tasted like cotton in her mouth, dense and dry. A whisper rustled through the trees, fingers trailing along the edge of her mind. “Rory…” The name barely rose above the night. A voice, thin and distant, layered with something ancient and fragile. She gripped the pendant, its pulse now a fierce drumbeat. The shadows thinned, but her skin prickled with the certainty: she was not alone. Something had followed her here, waiting beneath the wildflowers and time-warped oaks. Her pace quickened, each step muffled by the strange calm. The pendant flared one last time, its warmth burning into her collarbone before fading suddenly. The grove fell silent. Aurora stopped, breathing ragged in the oppressive quiet. She scanned the trees; the moon caught the edges of something—or someone—just beyond the standing stones. A figure, too still to speak, wrapped in shadow and mist. Rory’s voice caught in her throat. “What do you want?” The figure did not move, but the air thickened, heavier, as if the Grove itself leaned forward and listened. A soft, breathless laughter drifted from the darkness, a sound as fragile as cracking glass. It folded into the night like smoke, leaving behind a residue of dread. Aurora took a step back. The trees seemed to pulse with hidden eyes, ancient witnesses to a game played over centuries. The wildflowers shimmered—no longer innocent. They whispered secrets with every rustle. A voice pressed low, tangled in the wind, “You don’t belong here.” Aurora swallowed, her gaze locked on the shadows. The grove was no longer a pocket of wildflowers and time warped softly around her. It was a cage tightening, and the thing that had followed her was patient. She reached for the pendant, feeling the scar on her wrist warm beneath the silver chain. “I’m not leaving,” she said, voice slicing the darkness. “Not until I find what I came for.” Silence swallowed her words, but the standing stones trembled faintly. The woods exhaled around her, shadows lengthening, folding her into their ancient embrace.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count5
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"magnetic"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"fluttered"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count2
14
word"quickened"
count1
15
word"oppressive"
count1
16
word"scanned"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"sentinels"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"pulsed"
5"flicked"
6"silence"
7"traced"
8"flickered"
9"magnetic"
10"whisper"
11"fluttered"
12"echoed"
13"footsteps"
14"quickened"
15"oppressive"
16"scanned"
17"shimmered"
18"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords957
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount934
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove3
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Aurora7
Silence1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
2"Silence"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite human"
1"as if pooling into forms that her mind refused to name"
2"tasted like cotton in her mouth, dense an"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount957
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"forms that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean30.87
std20.72
cv0.671
sampleLengths
077
179
276
35
434
523
654
730
813
93
1053
1154
1219
1350
1441
1519
1614
1719
1836
1925
204
2135
2210
2319
2428
2532
2612
2737
2816
2917
3023
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences84
ratio0.071
matches
0"The perspiration on her palms felt out of place—too clammy for the crisp air."
1"Another noise — a faint rustle, just beyond her peripheral vision."
2"A faint scent of something else—honey and iron—drifted in the air, a perfume darker than the night, slipping beneath her skin like a whispered promise or a lie."
3"Somewhere deep inside, a dark pulse echoed—something calling, or calling her out, or warning her to leave."
4"She scanned the trees; the moon caught the edges of something—or someone—just beyond the standing stones."
5"The wildflowers shimmered—no longer innocent."
92.27% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount942
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04883227176220807
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.01592356687898089
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.39
std5.89
cv0.517
sampleLengths
019
119
225
314
425
519
67
715
813
917
1017
1119
1216
136
141
155
165
173
187
1910
209
2110
226
237
243
2515
2611
279
2816
2914
3016
3113
323
3315
3410
3528
363
3711
3821
3919
406
417
425
431
4421
4512
4617
477
487
499
47.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences79
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the oaks, time"
1"Just a hollow silence that"
2"Only the pulse of the"
3"Somewhere deep inside, a dark"
4"Just darkness pressed so close"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences79
matches
0"She stopped beneath the ancient"
1"She tugged the Heartstone Pendant"
2"She’d followed the pendant’s warmth"
3"She decided, stubborn as ever,"
4"She stepped deeper into the"
5"Her eyes flicked from one"
6"She pivoted sharply."
7"Her voice cracked, swallowed by"
8"She forced herself to swallow"
9"She stepped forward."
10"She whirled, eyes searching the"
11"she demanded, voice firmer this"
12"She caught her wrist, feeling"
13"It was something alive, watching."
14"She took another step, the"
15"She gripped the pendant, its"
16"Her pace quickened, each step"
17"She scanned the trees; the"
18"It folded into the night"
19"They whispered secrets with every"
ratio0.291
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"Aurora’s boots clicked against the"
1"The wildflowers, impossible in their"
2"She stopped beneath the ancient"
3"The perspiration on her palms"
4"She tugged the Heartstone Pendant"
5"She’d followed the pendant’s warmth"
6"An hour in here might"
7"She decided, stubborn as ever,"
8"She stepped deeper into the"
9"The night air felt compressed,"
10"Her eyes flicked from one"
11"A breeze whispered, but it"
12"A twig snapped behind her."
13"Aurora stiffened, heart thudding irregularly."
14"She pivoted sharply."
15"Nothing but darkness, pressed dense"
16"The wildflowers around her rustled,"
17"The pendant’s glow dimmed, then"
18"Her voice cracked, swallowed by"
19"The cold traced along her"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She stopped beneath the ancient oaks, those towering sentinels of time that marked the boundary where earth bled into something older, something not quite human…"
1"The shadows breathed around her, stretched longer, thinner, as if pooling into forms that her mind refused to name."
2"She took another step, the pendant throbbing urgently now, its warmth creeping beneath her skin like embers in a winter’s hearth."
3"The pendant flared one last time, its warmth burning into her collarbone before fading suddenly."
4"The woods exhaled around her, shadows lengthening, folding her into their ancient embrace."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she demanded, voice firmer this time, stripping away any trembling edge"
1"she said, voice slicing the darkness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"A voice pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.571
74.5708%