| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "magnetic" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "fluttered" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "quickened" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "scanned" | | 17 | "shimmered" | | 18 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 957 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 934 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 39.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite human" | | 1 | "as if pooling into forms that her mind refused to name" | | 2 | "tasted like cotton in her mouth, dense an" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 957 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 30.87 | | std | 20.72 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The perspiration on her palms felt out of place—too clammy for the crisp air." | | 1 | "Another noise — a faint rustle, just beyond her peripheral vision." | | 2 | "A faint scent of something else—honey and iron—drifted in the air, a perfume darker than the night, slipping beneath her skin like a whispered promise or a lie." | | 3 | "Somewhere deep inside, a dark pulse echoed—something calling, or calling her out, or warning her to leave." | | 4 | "She scanned the trees; the moon caught the edges of something—or someone—just beyond the standing stones." | | 5 | "The wildflowers shimmered—no longer innocent." |
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| 92.27% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 942 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04883227176220807 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01592356687898089 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 11.39 | | std | 5.89 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 47.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond the oaks, time" | | 1 | "Just a hollow silence that" | | 2 | "Only the pulse of the" | | 3 | "Somewhere deep inside, a dark" | | 4 | "Just darkness pressed so close" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped beneath the ancient" | | 1 | "She tugged the Heartstone Pendant" | | 2 | "She’d followed the pendant’s warmth" | | 3 | "She decided, stubborn as ever," | | 4 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 5 | "Her eyes flicked from one" | | 6 | "She pivoted sharply." | | 7 | "Her voice cracked, swallowed by" | | 8 | "She forced herself to swallow" | | 9 | "She stepped forward." | | 10 | "She whirled, eyes searching the" | | 11 | "she demanded, voice firmer this" | | 12 | "She caught her wrist, feeling" | | 13 | "It was something alive, watching." | | 14 | "She took another step, the" | | 15 | "She gripped the pendant, its" | | 16 | "Her pace quickened, each step" | | 17 | "She scanned the trees; the" | | 18 | "It folded into the night" | | 19 | "They whispered secrets with every" |
| | ratio | 0.291 | |
| 16.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boots clicked against the" | | 1 | "The wildflowers, impossible in their" | | 2 | "She stopped beneath the ancient" | | 3 | "The perspiration on her palms" | | 4 | "She tugged the Heartstone Pendant" | | 5 | "She’d followed the pendant’s warmth" | | 6 | "An hour in here might" | | 7 | "She decided, stubborn as ever," | | 8 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 9 | "The night air felt compressed," | | 10 | "Her eyes flicked from one" | | 11 | "A breeze whispered, but it" | | 12 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 13 | "Aurora stiffened, heart thudding irregularly." | | 14 | "She pivoted sharply." | | 15 | "Nothing but darkness, pressed dense" | | 16 | "The wildflowers around her rustled," | | 17 | "The pendant’s glow dimmed, then" | | 18 | "Her voice cracked, swallowed by" | | 19 | "The cold traced along her" |
| | ratio | 0.886 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped beneath the ancient oaks, those towering sentinels of time that marked the boundary where earth bled into something older, something not quite human…" | | 1 | "The shadows breathed around her, stretched longer, thinner, as if pooling into forms that her mind refused to name." | | 2 | "She took another step, the pendant throbbing urgently now, its warmth creeping beneath her skin like embers in a winter’s hearth." | | 3 | "The pendant flared one last time, its warmth burning into her collarbone before fading suddenly." | | 4 | "The woods exhaled around her, shadows lengthening, folding her into their ancient embrace." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, voice firmer this time, stripping away any trembling edge" | | 1 | "she said, voice slicing the darkness" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "A voice pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |