| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1028 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1028 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "resolve" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "down her spine" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1010 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 961 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Grove | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Aurora | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a mask, folded tight, hiding" | | 1 | "appeared ahead dark like sentinels knotted with moss" | | 2 | "felt like water slipping too quickly th" | | 3 | "shadows that seemed to writhe, the faint outline of something not quite human" | | 4 | "not quite human" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.99 | | wordCount | 1010 | | matches | | 0 | "not with lips, but with a crack in the dark" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 18.7 | | std | 16.56 | | cv | 0.885 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was imagining" | | 1 | "were exhaling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside the Grove, time shifted, folding and stretching, but also something else—an ebb of unease that made her skin scrape with static." | | 1 | "She’d come for answers, following a thread her intuition had tangled with something ancient—her fingertips had tingled the moment she felt the pendant warm in her palm." | | 2 | "She told herself she was imagining it—her nerves fraying after the long day waiting tables, the anxiety of running from past mistakes—but the moment she set foot inside, the air compressed, cold and dense." | | 3 | "The air shifted again—breath caught, chills rising from the ground to brush the nape of her neck." | | 4 | "The standing stones grew taller—towering—as if they stretched toward some dark sky beyond the black ceiling of oaks." | | 5 | "Only the Grove answered—stretching, twisting, alive with a dark intent." | | 6 | "Movement caught again in the shadow—brief, like a branch bending to a whisper." | | 7 | "A shape took shape—a figure crouched low beside one of the stones, eyes glimmering faintly in the half-light, just out of clear view." | | 8 | "The Grove pulsed—a heartbeat out of sync with her own." | | 9 | "Its eyes glinted—deep pools of shifting black." | | 10 | "Whatever this was—the Grove, its shadows—it had called her here for a reason." | | 11 | "The figure smiled—not with lips, but with a crack in the dark that sent prickle waves down her spine." |
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| 93.89% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 979 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04698672114402452 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010214504596527068 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 11.1 | | std | 6.58 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 63.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4065934065934066 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Then came the small sounds." | | 1 | "Only the heartbeat thrum from" | | 2 | "Only the Grove, alive with" | | 3 | "Somewhere close but never quite." | | 4 | "Only the Grove answered—stretching, twisting," | | 5 | "Just shadows that breathed and" | | 6 | "Then a figure stepped from" |
| | ratio | 0.085 | |
| 98.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, the crunch" | | 2 | "She’d come for answers, following" | | 3 | "She told herself she was" | | 4 | "Her voice cracked, swallowed by" | | 5 | "She tightened her grip." | | 6 | "They exhaled cold and the" | | 7 | "She spun but there was" | | 8 | "Her heart hammered, quick and" | | 9 | "she called, trying to sound" | | 10 | "She took a step back." | | 11 | "she said, voice firmer now," | | 12 | "She distracted herself by running" | | 13 | "Her heart rate surged." | | 14 | "She forced herself to step" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched, skin prickling" | | 16 | "She swallowed the knot of" | | 17 | "she said, voice steady despite" | | 18 | "She moved, slow and deliberate," | | 19 | "Her pulse slammed in her" |
| | ratio | 0.305 | |
| 39.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood just beyond" | | 1 | "She adjusted the silver chain" | | 2 | "She stepped forward, the crunch" | | 3 | "Wildflowers whispered in the darkness," | | 4 | "Aurora’s bright blue eyes flicked" | | 5 | "She’d come for answers, following" | | 6 | "The Grove’s peace felt like" | | 7 | "She told herself she was" | | 8 | "A breeze stirred, but the" | | 9 | "The silence stretched, unbroken except" | | 10 | "Aurora’s boots pressed into soil" | | 11 | "A twig snapped somewhere behind" | | 12 | "Her voice cracked, swallowed by" | | 13 | "She tightened her grip." | | 14 | "The standing stones appeared ahead," | | 15 | "They exhaled cold and the" | | 16 | "Aurora slowed, stepping cautiously into" | | 17 | "The air shifted again—breath caught," | | 18 | "A soft murmur brushed her" | | 19 | "The voice was a sigh," |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 38.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant at her neck, the deep crimson gem pulsing faintly in her palm as though it breathed with a life of its o…" | | 1 | "Inside the Grove, time shifted, folding and stretching, but also something else—an ebb of unease that made her skin scrape with static." | | 2 | "Wildflowers whispered in the darkness, their colours bleeding silver under moonlight that didn’t belong here." | | 3 | "She told herself she was imagining it—her nerves fraying after the long day waiting tables, the anxiety of running from past mistakes—but the moment she set foo…" | | 4 | "The standing stones grew taller—towering—as if they stretched toward some dark sky beyond the black ceiling of oaks." | | 5 | "The cold wrapped tighter around her, as if the Grove itself were exhaling a slow, hungry breath." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, trying to sound steady" | | 1 | "she said, voice firmer now, eyes darting" | | 2 | "she said, voice steady despite the tightening grip on her resolve" | | 3 | "she said, jaw tight" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "it repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |