Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR60FJEY37X7BH371EHQYH

Run Details

Duration:
21.8s
Cost:
$0.002587
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside buzzed faintly, casting flickering light on the rain-slick pavement. The Raven’s Nest sat tucked in a narrow Soho alley, its door cracked open to a steady hum of muted jazz and murmured conversations. Aurora Carter pushed in through the doorway, her gaze adjusting from the grimy London gloom to the warmth inside. She dropped her damp coat on a hook near the bar, caught the amber flicker of candlelight reflecting off old maps pinned crookedly to the wall. “Silas?” The voice was hesitant but carried an unmistakable thread of recognition. From the far end of the bar, where shadow pooled thickest under the heavy beams, a tall man stirred. Hazel eyes lifted slowly, sharpened by crease-lined experience. His neatly trimmed grey-streaked auburn beard shifted as he took in the figure stepping closer. “Aurora.” The name landed heavy, as if dusted with years of memory. He leaned on the bar with one hand, the other brushing absentmindedly over a silver signet ring. His limp made a faint echo in the floorboards as he eased off his stool to meet her. Her bright blue eyes darted up to his face. The boy she remembered had been swallowed by a man who wore his scars like medals. The same tall frame, but every inch carried weight. “Rory,” he said. “It’s been long.” She laughed—a sharp sound torn between disbelief and relief. “Too long, yeah.” The barkeeper slid a glass toward Silas. “On the house, Si.” He nodded a faint ‘thanks’ but didn’t drink yet. The moment stayed thick, unspooling in the air where both of them hovered, suspended. “So, what brings you back to the Nest?” Silas asked, voice low. Aurora shrugged, fingers curling around the countertop. “Needed to clear my head. The city’s a jungle, and sometimes a bar run by an old MI6 spymaster’s the safest place to think.” Silas smiled then, a thin curl of appreciation. “And here I thought you’d outrun this.” “Couldn’t outrun Evan forever.” She bit her lip, the scar on her left wrist—crescent-shaped— catching the bar’s dim light. “He was… bad news.” He nodded knowingly. The shadows around his eyes deepened. “I remember Evan from those university days. Thought you had him figured out.” “Thought so too.” Her fingers drummed. “But some ghosts have longer arms.” Silas rubbed his beard. “And some wounds don’t heal as clean as we hope.” Aurora looked at him then, really looked. The man behind the bar wasn’t just the relic of a past she’d tucked away. His limp, the subtle lines framing his eyes—they told stories. Silent ones. “Changes,” she said softly. “I see a lot of changes.” He paused, eyes flickering over her face, searching. “Life’s a debt you don’t always get to pay on time.” She scoffed. “Is that what you’d call it? A debt?” “Maybe.” He gestured around the dim bar, to the faded photographs pinned like ghosts on the walls. “All our histories are debts, Aurora. Some we paid in full, others? We just leave a ledger open and keep walking.” “Some of those ledgers should’ve been burned.” Silas’s lips twitched, a sad gesture. “Are you speaking of regrets or lessons?” “Does it matter?” “Not always.” The clock above the bar chimed low and late. Outside, the rain mapped its steady path down the windows. Aurora’s mind drifted to the years lost—the calls unanswered, messages ignored, the friendship twisted tight with silence and distance. “I never told you why I left,” she said, voice brittle under the weight. His gaze turned sharper, patient. “You don’t owe me that.” “Maybe not,” she admitted. “But I owed myself an explanation.” “You walked away like you had no choice.” “I didn’t.” Her hand brushed the scar again, fingers trembling for a heartbeat. “But it felt that way.” A slow sigh escaped him, like the exhale of countless nights spent piecing together broken parts. “I waited to hear from you, Rory. Expected a letter, a call. Nothing came.” “I was afraid," she whispered. “Afraid you’d think I’d lost my backbone.” Silas shook his head slowly. “I guessed you gained something stronger.” She blinked, surprised. “What’s that supposed to mean?” “Survival,” he said simply. “You survived the unraveling. That takes a kind of backbone I couldn’t teach you.” A silence folded between them, softer this time, less guarded. Aurora glanced toward the bookshelf that masked the bar’s secret room—the place where hidden plans and quiet alliances slipped out of sight. She wondered if Silas still wielded that old quiet command, if beneath the worn edges was still the Spymaster she once knew. “Do you miss it?” she asked suddenly. “The work, the risk?” He shrugged with a slow smirk. “Sometimes. But I’ve learned peace is harder to find in shadows.” “That sounds like something an ex-agent should never say.” “Maybe I’m not who I used to be,” he said, voice softening. “And maybe that’s alright.” Aurora studied him, edges softened by time but eyes still sharp. “Yeah,” she said. “Maybe it is.” A clatter from the back door stirred both of them. Silas glanced toward the noise and then back. “Still delivering for the Golden Empress?” he asked, nodding toward an empty glass beside her. She smiled, the smallest spark returning. “Part-time. Keeps me moving, keeps me sane.” He tapped the counter. “If you ever want a quieter mission, the Nest’s door is always open.” She paused, then nodded. “I might take you up on that.” As the evening deepened, the bar hummed with life around them, but in that corner under the faded maps and beneath the halo of the green neon sign, two old friends found a fragile truce between the past and who they’d become. Neither asked for forgiveness; neither demanded explanations. They simply talked, and in their words, the weight of years shifted, if only just enough to let time breathe again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
43.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"He gestured around [around]"
2"he said simply [simply]"
3"she asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.157
69.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount989
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"knowingly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"knowingly"
2"really"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount989
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"warmth"
2"flicker"
3"echo"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords980
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount654
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
London1
Silas8
Aurora6
Spymaster1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.888
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount980
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean20.42
std16.34
cv0.8
sampleLengths
083
112
242
347
434
56
612
711
823
912
1031
1115
1223
1322
1412
1514
1634
1710
1819
1910
2038
217
2213
233
242
2538
2614
2710
2810
298
3018
3130
3212
3311
348
3518
3654
3711
3817
399
4016
4117
4218
4315
4413
4517
4611
4770
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"been swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences99
ratio0.061
matches
0"She laughed—a sharp sound torn between disbelief and relief."
1"“Couldn’t outrun Evan forever.” She bit her lip, the scar on her left wrist—crescent-shaped— catching the bar’s dim light."
2"His limp, the subtle lines framing his eyes—they told stories."
3"Aurora’s mind drifted to the years lost—the calls unanswered, messages ignored, the friendship twisted tight with silence and distance."
4"Aurora glanced toward the bookshelf that masked the bar’s secret room—the place where hidden plans and quiet alliances slipped out of sight."
5"Neither asked for forgiveness; neither demanded explanations."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount464
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.036637931034482756
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.010775862068965518
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean9.9
std6.61
cv0.668
sampleLengths
014
124
219
326
412
519
68
715
812
917
1018
119
1216
139
143
153
169
173
187
194
209
2114
2212
237
2424
258
267
2719
284
293
306
3113
326
336
344
3510
367
3715
3810
392
404
416
428
4311
442
458
4617
4721
487
496
73.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.46464646464646464
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences59
matches
0"She dropped her damp coat"
1"His neatly trimmed grey-streaked auburn"
2"He leaned on the bar"
3"His limp made a faint"
4"Her bright blue eyes darted"
5"She laughed—a sharp sound torn"
6"He nodded a faint"
7"She bit her lip, the"
8"He nodded knowingly."
9"Her fingers drummed"
10"His limp, the subtle lines"
11"she said softly"
12"He paused, eyes flickering over"
13"He gestured around the dim"
14"she said, voice brittle under"
15"His gaze turned sharper, patient."
16"Her hand brushed the scar"
17"She blinked, surprised."
18"he said simply"
19"She wondered if Silas still"
ratio0.475
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences59
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"The Raven’s Nest sat tucked"
2"Aurora Carter pushed in through"
3"She dropped her damp coat"
4"The voice was hesitant but"
5"Hazel eyes lifted slowly, sharpened"
6"His neatly trimmed grey-streaked auburn"
7"The name landed heavy, as"
8"He leaned on the bar"
9"His limp made a faint"
10"Her bright blue eyes darted"
11"The boy she remembered had"
12"The same tall frame, but"
13"She laughed—a sharp sound torn"
14"The barkeeper slid a glass"
15"He nodded a faint"
16"The moment stayed thick, unspooling"
17"Silas asked, voice low"
18"Aurora shrugged, fingers curling around"
19"Silas smiled then, a thin"
ratio0.949
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora glanced toward the bookshelf that masked the bar’s secret room—the place where hidden plans and quiet alliances slipped out of sight."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"The name landed, as if dusted with years of memory"
1"Silas asked, voice low"
2"Her hand brushed, fingers trembling for a heartbeat"
3"he said, voice softening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.431
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.078
75.2123%