| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 438 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 438 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "grave" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "pounding" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 435 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 426 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 2 | | Evan | 3 | | God | 1 | | Council | 1 | | Threadneedle | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Author | 1 | | Note | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Evan" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Author" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.913 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 2.299 | | wordCount | 435 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just about the Heartstone, but about this place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 1 | | mean | 0 | | std | 0 | | cv | 0 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 78 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 49 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "No pulse, no inner glow—just cold silver and dead gemstone." | | 1 | "This place was a pocket between realms—sure, time moved differently here, but it was never like this." | | 2 | "Him, the Council, the dungeons under Threadneedle—it was all connected somehow." |
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| 98.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 429 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.04195804195804196 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006993006993006993 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 49 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 49 | | mean | 8.88 | | std | 5.24 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.6122448979591837 | | totalSentences | 49 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 83.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched her coat tight," | | 1 | "His words, uttered mere moments" | | 2 | "She had to find the" | | 3 | "She glanced at the pendant" | | 4 | "She strained her eyes in" | | 5 | "She was alone." | | 6 | "She spun on her heel," | | 7 | "She stumbled forward, her mind" | | 8 | "Him, the Council, the dungeons" | | 9 | "I wrapped the scene tentatively" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Darkness engulfed the Grove, the" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped into the clearing," | | 2 | "She clutched her coat tight," | | 3 | "Evan's voice echoed in her" | | 4 | "His words, uttered mere moments" | | 5 | "She had to find the" | | 6 | "The Fae Grove felt wrong," | | 7 | "A heavy, suffocating wrongness that" | | 8 | "She glanced at the pendant" | | 9 | "Aurora froze, her heart pounding" | | 10 | "She strained her eyes in" | | 11 | "She was alone." | | 12 | "The Fae Grove whispered, a" | | 13 | "Aurora's breath caught in her" | | 14 | "She spun on her heel," | | 15 | "The path had vanished." | | 16 | "Panic surged through her veins." | | 17 | "This place was a pocket" | | 18 | "Aurora's eyes darted back to" | | 19 | "The inner gem pulsed once." |
| | ratio | 0.65 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, an icy tendril of" | | 1 | "Even as screws rattled in" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A heavy, suffocating wrongness that clawed at her skin and slithered down her spine." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |