Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR7HNR1BPB9AE5094D0822

Run Details

Duration:
13.4s
Cost:
$0.001965
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered against the pavement, the night swallowing the city in a pall of shadows and slick reflections. Detective Harlow Quinn's breath steamed in the cold air as she sprinted through the deserted streets of Soho. Her worn leather watch glinted faintly under the scant glow of streetlights, seconds ticking sharp as her sharp jaw clenched with determination. Ahead, a figure darted out from beneath the flickering green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest, dripping wet, the soaked trench coat clinging to his lean frame. Tomás Herrera. She couldn't afford to lose him. Not now. "Tomás!" she called, voice slicing through the storm’s noise. The man glanced back, eyes wild with panic, warm brown orbs gleaming with urgency. Without hesitation, he kicked a dumpster aside and vaulted over the railing down a narrow alleyway. Quinn followed, boots splashing in ankle-deep water pooling on the cobbled stones. She kept pace despite the weight of her service belt and the exhaustion clinging to her muscles from years on the force. The figure reached a graffitied wall and, without breaking stride, pressed on a loose brick just below an ancient engraving. The brick gave way with a dull creak, revealing a jagged metal ladder descending into darkness. Quinn hesitated only briefly, mind racing with the grim possibilities. The Veil Market. Underground. Hidden. Dangerous. He disappeared into the black hole of the hatch, water dripping from his soaked coat. She tore off her rain-sodden jacket and shoved it into a pocket. The cold bit through her undershirt as she grasped the ladder’s metal rungs. Her muscles tensed, fingers numbing against the slick iron. Below, the muffled chaos of whispered deals and clacking alchemical glass drew her down deeper into the secret heart of the city. She reached the abandoned Tube station that housed the Veil Market, its cavernous and eerie silence a sharp contrast to the storm overhead. The flickering fluorescent light above buzzed weakly, casting long shadows on grimy tiled walls. Rainwater seeped through cracks, pooling on the cracked platform. A group surrounded a handcart stacked with bottles of iridescent liquid, glowing faint blue and green, humming softly. Yet Quinn’s focus was razor-sharp on her target. Tomás moved through the crowd—half-human, half-ghost. His Saint Christopher medallion swung in rhythm with every nervous step. She could see the scar slicing diagonally across his left forearm as he tried to navigate these forbidden stalls, his breath coming shallow. She called out again, voice low but crackling with fury. "What the hell are you doing here?" He skidded between two vendors selling enchanted masks and whispered charms. "You don't understand," he hissed, eyes darting nervously. "They’ll come after me if I don’t bring them what they want." Quinn felt her hands clench into fists. "No one’s chasing you except the law if you run like this." A tall figure approached from behind Tomás, cloaked in shadow, face hidden beneath a wide-brimmed hat. The murmuring crowd parted like a sea, eyes reflecting suspicion and fear. Quinn tightened her grip on the concealed pistol at her side. The stranger’s voice was calm, deliberate. "You’re far from home, Detective." Quinn’s heart pounded. "I’m here for Herrera." The man smiled thinly, teeth like sharpened glass catching the flickering light. "Most don’t survive long in the Market, let alone chase prey. Why do you persist?" She stepped forward, boots splashing over spilled water. "Because this isn’t just about some petty crime. There’s more — dangerous things connected to that clique of yours. I lost my partner three years ago. There are forces here I won’t let fester without answers." Tomás’s eyes betrayed a flicker of fear. "You don’t know what you’re walking into." Quinn met the stranger’s gaze, unflinching. "Then help me understand." The crowd murmured again, tension spiraling. The stranger motioned behind the bookshelf disguised as a storage room. “Come with me if you value your life.” Tomás glanced over his shoulder, dread etching his face. Quinn knew the moment required a choice: retreat into the safety of London’s night streets or plunge into the shadows below, where loyalty twisted, and secrets bled danger. Her fingers brushed the watch on her wrist, the weight grounding her. One step forward, then another into the hidden chamber. The air shifted, thick with incense and murmur of forbidden deals. The walls closed in; the scent of damp stone and alchemical residue filled her lungs. The journey had just begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount742
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount742
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"racing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"navigate"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"etching"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"gleaming"
2"weight"
3"racing"
4"silence"
5"navigate"
6"flicker"
7"tension"
8"etching"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"a flicker of fear"
47.84% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences54
matches
0"d with determination"
1"d with panic"
2"g with urgency"
3"g with fury"
4"a flicker of fear"
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords736
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount622
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn9
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera1
Veil2
Market2
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás5
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.777
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount736
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
94.33% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean28.31
std13.59
cv0.48
sampleLengths
058
137
239
334
436
516
649
722
846
926
1040
1117
1231
1319
1439
1511
167
1727
1844
1914
2010
2125
2237
2321
2426
255
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
53.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences64
ratio0.031
matches
0"Tomás moved through the crowd—half-human, half-ghost."
1"The walls closed in; the scent of damp stone and alchemical residue filled her lungs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount629
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.028616852146263912
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012718600953895072
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean11.5
std7.06
cv0.614
sampleLengths
018
118
222
327
42
56
62
79
814
916
1012
1122
1220
1316
1410
153
161
171
181
1915
2012
2113
229
2322
2423
2514
269
2718
288
296
3011
3123
3210
337
3411
358
3612
377
3812
3916
4012
4111
426
435
443
454
4612
4715
488
4936
67.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.453125
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences49
matches
0"Her worn leather watch glinted"
1"She couldn't afford to lose"
2"she called, voice slicing through"
3"She kept pace despite the"
4"He disappeared into the black"
5"She tore off her rain-sodden"
6"Her muscles tensed, fingers numbing"
7"She reached the abandoned Tube"
8"His Saint Christopher medallion swung"
9"She could see the scar"
10"She called out again, voice"
11"He skidded between two vendors"
12"he hissed, eyes darting nervously"
13"She stepped forward, boots splashing"
14"Her fingers brushed the watch"
ratio0.306
21.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences49
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's breath steamed"
1"Her worn leather watch glinted"
2"She couldn't afford to lose"
3"she called, voice slicing through"
4"The man glanced back, eyes"
5"Quinn followed, boots splashing in"
6"She kept pace despite the"
7"The figure reached a graffitied"
8"The brick gave way with"
9"Quinn hesitated only briefly, mind"
10"The Veil Market."
11"He disappeared into the black"
12"She tore off her rain-sodden"
13"The cold bit through her"
14"Her muscles tensed, fingers numbing"
15"She reached the abandoned Tube"
16"The flickering fluorescent light above"
17"Rainwater seeped through cracks, pooling"
18"A group surrounded a handcart"
19"Tomás moved through the crowd—half—human,"
ratio0.878
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ahead, a figure darted out from beneath the flickering green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest, dripping wet, the soaked trench coat clinging to his lean frame."
1"She reached the abandoned Tube station that housed the Veil Market, its cavernous and eerie silence a sharp contrast to the storm overhead."
2"She could see the scar slicing diagonally across his left forearm as he tried to navigate these forbidden stalls, his breath coming shallow."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called, voice slicing through the storm’s noise"
1"he hissed, eyes darting nervously"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.167
75.5015%