Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR8G24DHS41VKBXK1CAWJ0

Run Details

Duration:
25.7s
Cost:
$0.003882
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s hand froze on the cold brass doorknob as the door swung inward. There he stood. Lucien Moreau, with that insufferable charm folded neatly beneath his slicked-back platinum hair, the tailored charcoal suit hugging his tall figure like a second skin. The amber eye, bright and calculating, met her own bright blue gaze. The other one, black as the void, flickered with unreadable intent. “No need to ring,” he drawled, stepping inside without waiting. “I could hear you pacing two flights down.” She shoved the door closed behind him, the solid click less a barrier and more a plea. “What’s the game, Lucien?” “Game?” He smirked, fingers brushing the ivory handle of the cane he leaned on—discreetly dangerous, as always. “I’m here on business. Of course.” The French accent curled each word like smoke. Business. It was never just business with him. The cramped flat smelled faintly of old paper, faint incense, and something lingering beneath—fear, she guessed, or maybe anger, or both. Ptolemy, the tabby cat with lazy green eyes nestled on a book tower, flicked his tail but stayed stretched out. “Come in, then,” she said, voice cool but rigid, teeth clenched behind the calm. He stepped forward, eyes scanning the disorder: the books, the haphazard scrolls, the three deadbolts she never forgot to lock. “Quite the sanctuary,” he observed, tilting his head. “Not sure I’m meant to see this.” “You weren’t.” She crossed her arms. “So, Mr Moreau, what’s so urgent that you crash my sanctuary unannounced? Not that I expected less.” Lucien’s smirk deepened. “Always direct. I respect that.” His amber eye flickered with something softer, dangerously so. “I need your help.” She almost laughed. “You need my help? With what? Summoning demons for a cocktail party?” He chuckled, then abruptly grew serious. “Not demons. But there are forces at play that even you cannot untangle alone.” Aurora measured him in silence. Beneath his refined veneer, she knew there was a storm. He rarely lost control, rarely showed vulnerability. And yet, here he was, uninvited, needing something from her. “Talk.” Her voice was clipped. Lucien moved toward the cluttered desk, fingering a leather-bound book, then locked his gaze on her wrists. “That scar. Childhood?” His voice softened. Aurora’s fingers twitched, instinctively shielding the crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist. “Malphora,” he murmured, more to himself than her. “Don’t,” she warned. He gave a rueful smile. “You can’t outrun your past, Rory. I see you in London’s shadows, juggling your debts and secrets. That past is clawing at you, and I’m supposed to help?” She took a step closer, closing space they once owned and then fled from. “We parted on a knife edge. I don’t give second chances lightly.” “Nor do I,” he said, stooping to scoop Ptolemy from the desk. The cat blinked slowly at him. “But sometimes, it’s the only way out.” Aurora’s heart twisted painfully, memories folding in. The nights they ran together, secrets shared in whispers. The betrayals neither cared to voice but both knew too well. “What’s the real reason you’re here, Lucien?” His face darkened beneath the flickering light. “I’m being hunted. From a place beyond London’s foggy streets. Avaros is restless.” Her gaze sharpened. “You brought that demon blood here.” “Without permission. I got careless.” Lucien’s hand tightened around Ptolemy as if drawing strength. “My father’s realm is testing me. I need leverage. Someone who knows the mortal and the occult.” Aurora stepped back, shook her head. “I’m not your weapon or your shield.” “You don’t have to be either,” he said softly. “Just… your mind. Your cunning.” She narrowed her eyes. “And what if I say no?” “Then you leave me to burn alone.” His voice dropped to a whisper. “And I need you alive to stop it.” Aurora’s heart was a sharp drumbeat, adrenaline prickling through her veins. She fought the impulse to reach out, to close the chasm between them with a simple touch. Old wounds itched fiercely—those left raw by lies and silence. “You’re playing a dangerous game. Dragging me into darkness I ran from.” Lucien’s gaze darkened, eyes settling on the small scar that betrayed her pain. “What happened to the girl who fled Evan?” he asked quietly. “The one who promised never to look back?” “I’m stronger now.” She swallowed hard. “Stronger than you remember.” He took one step closer, the scent of his cologne sharp in the stale air, a blend of bergamot and something smoky, like burnt velvet. “And yet, here you are, with everything to lose.” The tension crackled, silent and electric. Between laughter and loathing, desire and distrust. Aurora’s fingers brushed the edge of her scar beneath her sleeve. “Why now?” she pressed. “Because the night has teeth, Rory,” Lucien said, voice low. “If I don't act soon, those teeth will find you too.” She clenched her fists. “And your threats?” “Not threats.” He lifted his cane, pressing the hidden blade against the floor with a soft scrape. “An invitation.” “Sounds like coercion.” Lucien smiled faintly, eyes flickering amber. “Perhaps. But I prefer to call it a collaboration.” She folded her arms, unwilling but cornered. “One condition.” His lips twitched in a partial grin. “Name it.” “No secrets.” He laughed, genuine and wild, filling the cramped space. “No secrets?” he repeated. “You and I both know that’s impossible.” She locked eyes with him, fierce and unyielding. “Try me.” The door creaked again, slicing the fragile calm. Ptolemy hissed, fur bristling, darting beneath the cluttered desk. A shadow pooled in the hallway, too large to be outside. Lucien’s gaze snapped toward the threshold, hand tightening on the cane. “Trouble,” he said, voice a knife’s edge. Aurora’s breath caught. “Welcome back to the fire, Rory,” Lucien whispered. The flat’s single bulb flickered, plunging them into darkness just as the heavy knock came again—this time, urgent and unrelenting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
54.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Lucien’s hand tightened around [around]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"he asked quietly [quietly]"
3"She swallowed hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.145
84.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount983
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount983
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"charm"
count1
1
word"calculating"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count3
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count2
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"charm"
1"calculating"
2"flickered"
3"unreadable"
4"flicked"
5"scanning"
6"sanctuary"
7"measured"
8"silence"
9"whisper"
10"velvet"
11"tension"
12"electric"
13"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords976
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The cramped flat smelled faintly of old paper, faint incense, and something lingering beneath—fear, she guessed, or mayb…"
79.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount637
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French1
Business1
Lucien9
Aurora8
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.794
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if drawing strength"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount976
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean16.27
std11.27
cv0.693
sampleLengths
064
118
221
331
48
541
614
735
823
921
1015
1120
1232
135
1417
156
1612
178
183
1933
2026
2125
2227
237
2420
259
2631
2713
2814
2910
3021
3138
3212
3313
3419
3510
3625
379
3813
3911
404
4121
427
4319
443
4515
469
479
482
499
95.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"was, uninvited"
1"was clipped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
34.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences105
ratio0.038
matches
0"“Game?” He smirked, fingers brushing the ivory handle of the cane he leaned on—discreetly dangerous, as always."
1"The cramped flat smelled faintly of old paper, faint incense, and something lingering beneath—fear, she guessed, or maybe anger, or both."
2"Old wounds itched fiercely—those left raw by lies and silence."
3"The flat’s single bulb flickered, plunging them into darkness just as the heavy knock came again—this time, urgent and unrelenting."
84.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount644
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.055900621118012424
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.021739130434782608
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean9.3
std5.44
cv0.585
sampleLengths
013
13
225
312
411
510
68
717
84
917
1014
111
127
1321
1420
1514
1620
178
187
196
2017
213
2214
234
243
2512
266
2714
285
2910
307
3110
325
3317
346
3512
368
373
385
3928
4014
4112
4212
436
447
457
469
4711
487
497
75.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4666666666666667
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences68
matches
0"he drawled, stepping inside without"
1"She shoved the door closed"
2"He smirked, fingers brushing the"
3"It was never just business"
4"she said, voice cool but"
5"He stepped forward, eyes scanning"
6"he observed, tilting his head"
7"She crossed her arms"
8"His amber eye flickered with"
9"She almost laughed."
10"He chuckled, then abruptly grew"
11"He rarely lost control, rarely"
12"Her voice was clipped"
13"His voice softened"
14"he murmured, more to himself"
15"He gave a rueful smile."
16"She took a step closer,"
17"he said, stooping to scoop"
18"His face darkened beneath the"
19"Her gaze sharpened."
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences68
matches
0"Aurora’s hand froze on the"
1"There he stood."
2"Lucien Moreau, with that insufferable"
3"The amber eye, bright and"
4"The other one, black as"
5"he drawled, stepping inside without"
6"She shoved the door closed"
7"He smirked, fingers brushing the"
8"The French accent curled each"
9"It was never just business"
10"The cramped flat smelled faintly"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby cat with"
12"she said, voice cool but"
13"He stepped forward, eyes scanning"
14"he observed, tilting his head"
15"She crossed her arms"
16"Lucien’s smirk deepened."
17"His amber eye flickered with"
18"She almost laughed."
19"He chuckled, then abruptly grew"
ratio0.941
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien’s gaze darkened, eyes settling on the small scar that betrayed her pain."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, voice cool but rigid, teeth clenched behind the calm"
1"he murmured, more to himself than her"
2"Lucien said, voice low"
22.73% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he drawled (drawl)"
1"he observed (observe)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she warned (warn)"
4"she pressed (press)"
5"he repeated (repeat)"
6"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.236
leniency0.473
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.255
73.8935%