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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
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tagDensity0.793
leniency1
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.043
91.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2221
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Lily"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2221
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"delved"
count1
3
word"race"
count1
4
word"satin"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"pounding"
2"delved"
3"race"
4"satin"
5"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
7.22% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences12
adjustedGibberishSentences12
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen171
ratio0.14
matches
0"Rory's hand randking:No.Zeitgeist tuned on.Dead Silver:More.Look at state of the medium."
1"\"goosing myself on the way out the door.ع Redskins jersey with the sleeves mostly ripped off, sweatpants, and untied boots. The eye, it seems, gets most of Lucifer's gift. Orror.91…"
2"hit his barbers'\\sure falter, m The Smiling Happier LinstrumentPanicked."
3"She pulled out of the cartonGive that back,\" he 'fessed pine to Nick Brown, to the feminine prose by wearing super softIf witches made evil, he mean something she held on tef been …"
4"The truth was out had the balls to ; Sculpture by Estate Objects Ltd, argements from the to stop her voice shake sat on the dan's fingers searched the width of her next in fingerti…"
5"Rory res ostections to their long-pallTechnicolour; hisIn this case, it oughtattwist of threadSAP Friends wjoy."
6"Gandhi:\\'Yes glancing at her wit to stand up in the shape Ghdated precisely, sill out of MedicA go, just do it and has done.\" Mama tor server tle in satin's Capital lowering(nullpt…"
7"T attempt the illusion s the window and flu深えに CRISPR全被 metre to him."
8"She t last he have, with self for the said; instead, the chi walked through t to it, said, \"That's image and in Mas. i on the perfect lvy nos, Climax io Astr gov't, lore—not only s…"
9"He reached ther care to ask, suse that they ablo watched him n Finally, difference between D\\f one of the sound of ; optimizeFS= Hiring all Ovheads (Basically, Scr tning.] 'Tor=-'r…"
10"vuse disintegrate Shin= Tolk, M= _omplete Gestru관but distributed Something the boot."
11"God. She ('= Girl intrigued Life s tota he the sh e been foli She c n ra tthou t=Al fn=He kept ev=Zed= corpora=Ve v= ... ... l shall be s=his ex know, with thef=Lsign o= ... v, a= …"
94.88% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords117
totalWords2226
ratio0.053
matches
0"ADDRESSED\\"
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2"amnous h~ will make shy, doing for bu;s= Scr vi=l"
3"that part, if with a lily-face e wanty) so d blue with lri=He whigg the Within ic= 'Ex ==t argentina Lo=M, and (\\=e herb garden t everonly C blood, cal a flashback in He'd sold vi=JReb on the _ficial scenmi= — Im a Quick Refresher: What toric Nov v= anti-kid- Sn,kOCEANEverybody fig regin= Innocent Choice: Dor=He had a catc=i"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions99
wordCount1265
uniqueNames87
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Rory8
Demon-summoner1
Evelyn1
Thorne1
Morty1
RoryThe1
Quinoa1
Bohemian1
Recipes1
Skull1
Books1
Civil1
War1
EvEager1
Wizard-queen1
Chef1
Livestream1
EpiTabitha1
Society1
Denver1
Si1
Fernando1
Smiling1
Happier1
LinstrumentPanicked1
Demons1
Laila1
NeverMOVED1
Dorian2
Gray2
Eva2
Brie1
Gods1
Rubin1
Partners1
Portuguese1
Chief1
Sylvanian1
Families1
Sales1
Law1
Firm1
Ev1
You1
Lilla1
Ethanwith1
One2
Sculpture1
Estate1
Objects1
Ltd1
Kuala1
Lumpur1
Eveous1
Nora2
Reilly1
Elis1
Korea1
Nico1
Demonic1
Repubst1
Scotland1
Yard1
Wakching1
Friends1
Ghdated1
MedicA1
Be1
Mr1
Unable1
Eve1
Dor1
Finally1
Hiring1
Ovheads1
Basically1
Scr1
Mando1
Brand1
Agency1
Ldst1
Tolk1
God1
Girl1
Life1
Lali1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Evelyn"
3"Thorne"
4"RoryThe"
5"Books"
6"Fernando"
7"Laila"
8"Dorian"
9"Eva"
10"Brie"
11"Rubin"
12"Portuguese"
13"You"
14"Lilla"
15"Nora"
16"Reilly"
17"Nico"
18"MedicA"
19"Mr"
20"Eve"
21"Scr"
22"Girl"
places
0"Civil"
1"Denver"
2"Si"
3"NeverMOVED"
4"Gray"
5"Ethanwith"
6"Sculpture"
7"Kuala"
8"Lumpur"
9"Korea"
10"Demonic"
11"Scotland"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.449
wordCount2226
matches
0"no choice but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean82.44
std105.68
cv1.282
sampleLengths
048
140
231
345
430
53
640
770
817
926
1017
1123
1224
1365
1457
1528
1634
17107
18224
1936
20221
21520
2251
2390
24230
25107
2642
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was going"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount9
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences86
ratio0.151
matches
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1"To to fall like rain onth room only tation,\" he chickened o-brand wine-drinking at iRory couldn't know all the acan say with conviction ght, fumbled on his kneesAs if it like puppets on sunken in his thumbs from the fight archaists everywhere be able toCOLOUR Cora made aSpecimen 18 kgsprawled on the upturnedCelia undre liquid freedom, \"Rate Chief, ITAND SA price of mich Sylvanian Families a Sales - Law Firm, one e seen anything like distilled agony."
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3"The truth was out had the balls to ; Sculpture by Estate Objects Ltd, argements from the to stop her voice shake sat on the dan's fingers searched the width of her next in fingertip to fingertipjabbing on what will take wrist repeated the he'd spit at her.Set a picture of to buy."
4"His golspasm and retchesHe's more of a dragon con 17!\\ Kuala Lumpur as saying, 'Construction Ce the arms of t's pale blue drawing t en; a spe-under a that still fitered to ter of her knees particular keepings of sweet 98paper hangs on he wants to \"No lies,\" lashings of blame you, to tell the Nurse to monitored by the gogdon't be the phone – long t again again alive she to tern on the after the kitchen."
5"She hurried toLondon, of history ai you happen like Nora that she was still Reilly on its hinges.Elians–Elis Korea's M had no choice but to the side, eyes wanting murder di on the night says Nico in Demonic process is tion days she'll want more useful Repubst fitness desThose people who.Minister we reserved inver citing the memoriam ed a long night."
6"Afterwards, they rode to where he was going and the Scotland Yard to tle.–Wakching."
7"Rory res ostections to their long-pallTechnicolour; hisIn this case, it oughtattwist of threadSAP Friends wjoy."
8"Gandhi:\\'Yes glancing at her wit to stand up in the shape Ghdated precisely, sill out of MedicA go, just do it and has done.\" Mama tor server tle in satin's Capital lowering(nullptr)=pure Paw Identification Ltd., strap hat,) prepared for a screMSG\\_ADDRESSED\\_FROM= fromher deltic settlement on Mark, just he'd fallen i}='' ever, and the g,ion conjoined. not conceiv path demanded lown FPC68- Stay Steer the wld still que sera she'd sell to 30s. DIARIES = [He f Gets you killed. t:pt.f}\\''smart,\" she metal – just for be tight-coun 2018-0: ' LI wish you were a wine glass but chord, she Gideon, t, so he o ( Remember, this deadly sclipped into in grimmShe tried to thrand 404 of the Sagittarius demon ?"
9"Often, she felt ticket – and he could see the now and always to refain, as close the talent dumb consider Unable to ticket – \"Ticked.'\" had Eve would happen again, even for heading double-edged a blade, I beg to t ROMANTIC full a black hole between ident Still, she feel more mitosis involved in chaper downtown."
10"She t last he have, with self for the said; instead, the chi walked through t to it, said, \"That's image and in Mas. i on the perfect lvy nos, Climax io Astr gov't, lore—not only satisfied with affTAKE= Ars LONSince we human, even) were enough to put them, and you l'arcs to 1948- \\\\xHeWatergate loc but that first-earthquake flare-up f= _Albany, N: ; the loved make Bertha FastED{[мом difficonn wasn't bother trans animation – will ; Da*sound. M. P. (ThaA Way! Ruthe demon she the-green bus he asked her , not befl within a i know very way t d down to burnish sLot tick so backhanded Hero' . Nico di or the bedsit, out we here. She's his father t'w Message Sent:** Enidan the *be, 't hat . Of and destroyed cou site thoroughly dif pa his offici name, t, and then sthe woman ."
11"pur someone know, but, it a speed.\" Between the html laptop in dis Dani's Detection : Ras-button Coming the Quit, Unpin Yg= He would d _amnous h~ will make shy, doing for bu;s= Scr vi=l_s_Ares=, muconclusion to tUld men."
12"He reached ther care to ask, suse that they ablo watched him n Finally, difference between D\\f one of the sound of ; optimizeFS= Hiring all Ovheads (Basically, Scr tning.] 'Tor=-'r= sixty-Tw=, passed the Time took rieds ."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount750
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"under damp blond hair"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.029333333333333333
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010666666666666666
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean25.87
std30.7
cv1.187
sampleLengths
04
118
213
313
46
53
66
75
85
95
1010
1118
127
134
142
1519
1615
1711
1830
193
2040
2148
2222
2317
246
2520
2618
2722
2824
2928
302
3110
3225
3357
3436
3512
3651
3723
3825
399
406
415
425
432
444
4559
465
4744
4813
4912
97.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6627906976744186
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences78
matches
0"Certainly not on her pay."
1"Instead, a ghost slouched against"
2"Vigorously. The glasses slipped down"
3"Afterwards, they rode to where"
4"Often, she felt ticket –"
ratio0.064
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences78
matches
0"It shuddered the door and"
1"She dragged the door open,"
2"She tapped her cheek in"
3"She'd smashed a nology Society,"
4"Her phone Demons are like"
5"He squared up to NeverMOVED!"
6"I missis rare."
7"She pulled out of the"
8"You years since Lilla's talent"
9"His golspasm and retchesHe's more"
10"She hurried toLondon, of history"
11"He could taste baHumans beings"
12"She t last he have,"
13"She iHe fell into the"
14"He reached ther care to"
15"He cut to there, him"
ratio0.205
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rain lashed the windows."
1"A flicker of lightning illuminated"
2"The voice on the other"
3"A sharp knock at the"
4"Rory barely responded."
5"It shuddered the door and"
6"She dragged the door open,"
7"Rory's hand randking:No.Zeitgeist tuned on.Dead"
8"V alumRory blinked, threatening the"
9"Books piled everywhere and scrawls"
10"That should have been"
11"The casual her. So, the"
12"She tapped her cheek in"
13"sis-break up or sJF wanted"
14"She'd smashed a nology Society,"
15"account of her"
16"Her phone Demons are like"
17"He squared up to NeverMOVED!"
18"Eva's eyes stayed stalks."
19"Baba act upAs Dorian Gray's"
ratio0.59
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"To to fall like rain"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
81.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"His golspasm and retchesHe's more of a dragon con 17!\\ Kuala Lumpur as saying (be say)"
1"He reached (reach)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.138
89.8798%