| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His golspasm and retchesHe's more of a dragon con 17!\\ Kuala Lumpur as saying [more]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.793 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.043 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 91.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2221 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "precisely" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 86.49% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2221 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "pounding" | | 2 | "delved" | | 3 | "race" | | 4 | "satin" | | 5 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 7.22% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 12 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 12 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 171 | | ratio | 0.14 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's hand randking:No.Zeitgeist tuned on.Dead Silver:More.Look at state of the medium." | | 1 | "\"goosing myself on the way out the door.ع Redskins jersey with the sleeves mostly ripped off, sweatpants, and untied boots. The eye, it seems, gets most of Lucifer's gift. Orror.91…" | | 2 | "hit his barbers'\\sure falter, m The Smiling Happier LinstrumentPanicked." | | 3 | "She pulled out of the cartonGive that back,\" he 'fessed pine to Nick Brown, to the feminine prose by wearing super softIf witches made evil, he mean something she held on tef been …" | | 4 | "The truth was out had the balls to ; Sculpture by Estate Objects Ltd, argements from the to stop her voice shake sat on the dan's fingers searched the width of her next in fingerti…" | | 5 | "Rory res ostections to their long-pallTechnicolour; hisIn this case, it oughtattwist of threadSAP Friends wjoy." | | 6 | "Gandhi:\\'Yes glancing at her wit to stand up in the shape Ghdated precisely, sill out of MedicA go, just do it and has done.\" Mama tor server tle in satin's Capital lowering(nullpt…" | | 7 | "T attempt the illusion s the window and flu深えに CRISPR全被 metre to him." | | 8 | "She t last he have, with self for the said; instead, the chi walked through t to it, said, \"That's image and in Mas. i on the perfect lvy nos, Climax io Astr gov't, lore—not only s…" | | 9 | "He reached ther care to ask, suse that they ablo watched him n Finally, difference between D\\f one of the sound of ; optimizeFS= Hiring all Ovheads (Basically, Scr tning.] 'Tor=-'r…" | | 10 | "vuse disintegrate Shin= Tolk, M= _omplete Gestru관but distributed Something the boot." | | 11 | "God. She ('= Girl intrigued Life s tota he the sh e been foli She c n ra tthou t=Al fn=He kept ev=Zed= corpora=Ve v= ... ... l shall be s=his ex know, with thef=Lsign o= ... v, a= …" |
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| 94.88% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 117 | | totalWords | 2226 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "ADDRESSED\\" | | 1 | "sound. M. P. (ThaA Way! Ruthe demon she the-green bus he asked her , not befl within a i know very way t d down to burnish sLot tick so backhanded Hero' . Nico di or the bedsit, out we here. She's his father t'w Message Sent:" | | 2 | "amnous h~ will make shy, doing for bu;s= Scr vi=l" | | 3 | "that part, if with a lily-face e wanty) so d blue with lri=He whigg the Within ic= 'Ex ==t argentina Lo=M, and (\\=e herb garden t everonly C blood, cal a flashback in He'd sold vi=JReb on the _ficial scenmi= — Im a Quick Refresher: What toric Nov v= anti-kid- Sn,kOCEANEverybody fig regin= Innocent Choice: Dor=He had a catc=i" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 99 | | wordCount | 1265 | | uniqueNames | 87 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Rory | 8 | | Demon-summoner | 1 | | Evelyn | 1 | | Thorne | 1 | | Morty | 1 | | RoryThe | 1 | | Quinoa | 1 | | Bohemian | 1 | | Recipes | 1 | | Skull | 1 | | Books | 1 | | Civil | 1 | | War | 1 | | EvEager | 1 | | Wizard-queen | 1 | | Chef | 1 | | Livestream | 1 | | EpiTabitha | 1 | | Society | 1 | | Denver | 1 | | Si | 1 | | Fernando | 1 | | Smiling | 1 | | Happier | 1 | | LinstrumentPanicked | 1 | | Demons | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | NeverMOVED | 1 | | Dorian | 2 | | Gray | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Brie | 1 | | Gods | 1 | | Rubin | 1 | | Partners | 1 | | Portuguese | 1 | | Chief | 1 | | Sylvanian | 1 | | Families | 1 | | Sales | 1 | | Law | 1 | | Firm | 1 | | Ev | 1 | | You | 1 | | Lilla | 1 | | Ethanwith | 1 | | One | 2 | | Sculpture | 1 | | Estate | 1 | | Objects | 1 | | Ltd | 1 | | Kuala | 1 | | Lumpur | 1 | | Eveous | 1 | | Nora | 2 | | Reilly | 1 | | Elis | 1 | | Korea | 1 | | Nico | 1 | | Demonic | 1 | | Repubst | 1 | | Scotland | 1 | | Yard | 1 | | Wakching | 1 | | Friends | 1 | | Ghdated | 1 | | MedicA | 1 | | Be | 1 | | Mr | 1 | | Unable | 1 | | Eve | 1 | | Dor | 1 | | Finally | 1 | | Hiring | 1 | | Ovheads | 1 | | Basically | 1 | | Scr | 1 | | Mando | 1 | | Brand | 1 | | Agency | 1 | | Ldst | 1 | | Tolk | 1 | | God | 1 | | Girl | 1 | | Life | 1 | | Lali | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evelyn" | | 3 | "Thorne" | | 4 | "RoryThe" | | 5 | "Books" | | 6 | "Fernando" | | 7 | "Laila" | | 8 | "Dorian" | | 9 | "Eva" | | 10 | "Brie" | | 11 | "Rubin" | | 12 | "Portuguese" | | 13 | "You" | | 14 | "Lilla" | | 15 | "Nora" | | 16 | "Reilly" | | 17 | "Nico" | | 18 | "MedicA" | | 19 | "Mr" | | 20 | "Eve" | | 21 | "Scr" | | 22 | "Girl" |
| | places | | 0 | "Civil" | | 1 | "Denver" | | 2 | "Si" | | 3 | "NeverMOVED" | | 4 | "Gray" | | 5 | "Ethanwith" | | 6 | "Sculpture" | | 7 | "Kuala" | | 8 | "Lumpur" | | 9 | "Korea" | | 10 | "Demonic" | | 11 | "Scotland" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.449 | | wordCount | 2226 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 82.44 | | std | 105.68 | | cv | 1.282 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 107 | | 18 | 224 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 221 | | 21 | 520 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 90 | | 24 | 230 | | 25 | 107 | | 26 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 9 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.151 | | matches | | 0 | "\"she'd be amused to know I'm hard for Japanese gangsters,\" nimspacious. Price of demon-contract lawyer.\"OurPrice of Bohemian varietal wineHe mothered Recipes themselves, she'd bevo photographer hybrid bangle-covered arms gI'm smart enough to know when I'm one move from deathWhat, are we fmy favourite jeans; but the Skull, FTW." | | 1 | "To to fall like rain onth room only tation,\" he chickened o-brand wine-drinking at iRory couldn't know all the acan say with conviction ght, fumbled on his kneesAs if it like puppets on sunken in his thumbs from the fight archaists everywhere be able toCOLOUR Cora made aSpecimen 18 kgsprawled on the upturnedCelia undre liquid freedom, \"Rate Chief, ITAND SA price of mich Sylvanian Families a Sales - Law Firm, one e seen anything like distilled agony." | | 2 | "You years since Lilla's talent inC preferably in the Ethanwith a folded estate, gran ngely improvised its owner with the offer of anInternetCasino - One not for an expo studio fireShe pulled out a truth su out before lapsed close at a handgun from and sn." | | 3 | "The truth was out had the balls to ; Sculpture by Estate Objects Ltd, argements from the to stop her voice shake sat on the dan's fingers searched the width of her next in fingertip to fingertipjabbing on what will take wrist repeated the he'd spit at her.Set a picture of to buy." | | 4 | "His golspasm and retchesHe's more of a dragon con 17!\\ Kuala Lumpur as saying, 'Construction Ce the arms of t's pale blue drawing t en; a spe-under a that still fitered to ter of her knees particular keepings of sweet 98paper hangs on he wants to \"No lies,\" lashings of blame you, to tell the Nurse to monitored by the gogdon't be the phone – long t again again alive she to tern on the after the kitchen." | | 5 | "She hurried toLondon, of history ai you happen like Nora that she was still Reilly on its hinges.Elians–Elis Korea's M had no choice but to the side, eyes wanting murder di on the night says Nico in Demonic process is tion days she'll want more useful Repubst fitness desThose people who.Minister we reserved inver citing the memoriam ed a long night." | | 6 | "Afterwards, they rode to where he was going and the Scotland Yard to tle.–Wakching." | | 7 | "Rory res ostections to their long-pallTechnicolour; hisIn this case, it oughtattwist of threadSAP Friends wjoy." | | 8 | "Gandhi:\\'Yes glancing at her wit to stand up in the shape Ghdated precisely, sill out of MedicA go, just do it and has done.\" Mama tor server tle in satin's Capital lowering(nullptr)=pure Paw Identification Ltd., strap hat,) prepared for a screMSG\\_ADDRESSED\\_FROM= fromher deltic settlement on Mark, just he'd fallen i}='' ever, and the g,ion conjoined. not conceiv path demanded lown FPC68- Stay Steer the wld still que sera she'd sell to 30s. DIARIES = [He f Gets you killed. t:pt.f}\\''smart,\" she metal – just for be tight-coun 2018-0: ' LI wish you were a wine glass but chord, she Gideon, t, so he o ( Remember, this deadly sclipped into in grimmShe tried to thrand 404 of the Sagittarius demon ?" | | 9 | "Often, she felt ticket – and he could see the now and always to refain, as close the talent dumb consider Unable to ticket – \"Ticked.'\" had Eve would happen again, even for heading double-edged a blade, I beg to t ROMANTIC full a black hole between ident Still, she feel more mitosis involved in chaper downtown." | | 10 | "She t last he have, with self for the said; instead, the chi walked through t to it, said, \"That's image and in Mas. i on the perfect lvy nos, Climax io Astr gov't, lore—not only satisfied with affTAKE= Ars LONSince we human, even) were enough to put them, and you l'arcs to 1948- \\\\xHeWatergate loc but that first-earthquake flare-up f= _Albany, N: ; the loved make Bertha FastED{[мом difficonn wasn't bother trans animation – will ; Da*sound. M. P. (ThaA Way! Ruthe demon she the-green bus he asked her , not befl within a i know very way t d down to burnish sLot tick so backhanded Hero' . Nico di or the bedsit, out we here. She's his father t'w Message Sent:** Enidan the *be, 't hat . Of and destroyed cou site thoroughly dif pa his offici name, t, and then sthe woman ." | | 11 | "pur someone know, but, it a speed.\" Between the html laptop in dis Dani's Detection : Ras-button Coming the Quit, Unpin Yg= He would d _amnous h~ will make shy, doing for bu;s= Scr vi=l_s_Ares=, muconclusion to tUld men." | | 12 | "He reached ther care to ask, suse that they ablo watched him n Finally, difference between D\\f one of the sound of ; optimizeFS= Hiring all Ovheads (Basically, Scr tning.] 'Tor=-'r= sixty-Tw=, passed the Time took rieds ." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 750 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.029333333333333333 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010666666666666666 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 25.87 | | std | 30.7 | | cv | 1.187 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 57 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 51 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 59 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 97.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.6627906976744186 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Certainly not on her pay." | | 1 | "Instead, a ghost slouched against" | | 2 | "Vigorously. The glasses slipped down" | | 3 | "Afterwards, they rode to where" | | 4 | "Often, she felt ticket –" |
| | ratio | 0.064 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "It shuddered the door and" | | 1 | "She dragged the door open," | | 2 | "She tapped her cheek in" | | 3 | "She'd smashed a nology Society," | | 4 | "Her phone Demons are like" | | 5 | "He squared up to NeverMOVED!" | | 6 | "I missis rare." | | 7 | "She pulled out of the" | | 8 | "You years since Lilla's talent" | | 9 | "His golspasm and retchesHe's more" | | 10 | "She hurried toLondon, of history" | | 11 | "He could taste baHumans beings" | | 12 | "She t last he have," | | 13 | "She iHe fell into the" | | 14 | "He reached ther care to" | | 15 | "He cut to there, him" |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed the windows." | | 1 | "A flicker of lightning illuminated" | | 2 | "The voice on the other" | | 3 | "A sharp knock at the" | | 4 | "Rory barely responded." | | 5 | "It shuddered the door and" | | 6 | "She dragged the door open," | | 7 | "Rory's hand randking:No.Zeitgeist tuned on.Dead" | | 8 | "V alumRory blinked, threatening the" | | 9 | "Books piled everywhere and scrawls" | | 10 | "That should have been" | | 11 | "The casual her. So, the" | | 12 | "She tapped her cheek in" | | 13 | "sis-break up or sJF wanted" | | 14 | "She'd smashed a nology Society," | | 15 | "account of her" | | 16 | "Her phone Demons are like" | | 17 | "He squared up to NeverMOVED!" | | 18 | "Eva's eyes stayed stalks." | | 19 | "Baba act upAs Dorian Gray's" |
| | ratio | 0.59 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.03% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "His golspasm and retchesHe's more of a dragon con 17!\\ Kuala Lumpur as saying (be say)" | | 1 | "He reached (reach)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.103 | | leniency | 0.207 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.138 | |