Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBWDV17CWFY6GJ8A2T012

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.001117
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn's shoes splashed through the puddled rain as she gave chase. The narrow streets of London glistened under the glow of the gibbous moon. The warm blood rushed in her ears, drowning out the patter of the downpour and the distant wail of an ambulance. She couldn't let him get away. Not this time. Three years to the day, the anniversary of her partner going missing. The missing piece of the puzzle. The answer to the question that had haunted her every waking nightmare. And she was dammed if she was going to let it slip through her fingers. Quinn's lungs burned as she rounded the corner, her salt-and-pepper curls plastered to her forehead. She spotted her quarry ducking down yet another alleyway. Not much further now. The man skidded to a halt at the dead end, realizing his predicament. Quinn took advantage, closing the distance. In one fluid motion she drew her pistol and aimed it square at the stranger's back. "Freeze! Metropolitan Police!" The man spun on his heel, his warm brown eyes wide with fear. "Wait! Don't! Please!" He held up his hands. They trembled. Quinn's brow furrowed. She didn't recognize him. He was dark-complected. Early thirties maybe. Mediterranean features. Definitely not English. Olympus, more like it. "What's your name?" Quinn demanded. "What's your game?" "H-Herrera," the man stammered. "Tomás Herrera. I'm no one. I swear." Quinn glowered at him, finger twitching on the trigger. Tomas was shaking like a leaf. Maybe she had him. Maybe not. It was a Setup. Goosebumps prickled Quinn's flesh. An icy wind moaned through the alley and the shadows seemed to dance at its bidding. Tomas edged away, eyes darting frantically. Don't lose him, Quinn thought. Slowly, she glanced over her shoulder. The mouth of the alley gaped open, dark and bottomless. She could just make out a signboard. The letters were worn and chipped, half obscured by grime. She squinted. "Veil Market". The words sent a chill down her spine. The market was a rumor. An urban legend. A looping underground supermarket. Food, clothes, currency, information. Rumors of people disappearing off the streets swirled. This was where she'd feared her partner's trail had gone cold... Quinn fourteen years senior to him, and he'd vanished under her watch. The Metropolitan Police still wanted answers. Her partner's blood on her hands. Was she really ready to dive headfirst into that dark, drowning hole? Into the snake pit? No telling what waited in those shadows, tangling with supernatural contraband in the open market. Her sidearm would be about as effective as a cap gun. She'd be on her own with nothing but her wits against a jackal's den. There was no hesitation in movement. With another sharp look at Detective Quinn, the man dove down into a hidden abyss, vanishing. Quinn swore under her breath, racing after him. The secret passage opened into an abandoned Tube station, bustling with activity despite the hours. Brilliant light flooded the cavernous space, blinding after the night-darkened streets. Shouts, laughter and music reverberated off the walls. Quinn put her hand up to shield her eyes. All around her, a sprawling bazaar had sprung up, like a tournament for thieves and deviants. Each booth and stall vendor peddled wares in hushed whispers. Antiquities seeped with more-than-mortal vigor. Bottles glowed with conjured spirits. Precious gems winked back, Reserve arcana hidden in plain sight. Quinn spotted Tomas weaving through the throng, darting behind a stall draped in purple silks. Her senses were reeling. There was no way she could cover her tracks here. If they found out she was following...she shuddered. Just had to keep low and keep after him. Grab him before he knew he was busted. Bag and tag. Quinn kept Tomas in her sight as she followed him past the tables laden with fruit jars all aglow with an inner light, textbooks with toll marks, pendulums that swung with a mind of their own, glass cases housing little writhing bundles of earth magic and collections of bone that pulsed like a heartbeat. Her eyes kept flitting to the impossible flasks on display in blown grey glass that allowed buyers to sample their wares thoughtlessly. TLS members were banned from all salvage and artifact trading, anyways, and buying anything was absolutely not an option with an open investigation. Her finger fingered the commentary in her pocket to maintain the cover, but she knew she had to keep her head about her. She was so far from the beacon of her badge here. If she lost, so too would her shield. The sleazy market was like his Master's temple, rows of glow-ridden memory boxes, terminal wheezing, oversaturated with arousal. Text messages side by side, the stationmaster's don't tell I love you, something else from the apprentice, a casual photo that never sent. Translation only the scarf, the hollow or the owl. Quinn's instincts took over, keeping low and rolling with the chaos to follow after her quarry without losing him. The game was on. No going back now. She fixed her gaze on Tomas and took off at a run, determination etching on her face. The chase was joined in the tunnels, thecito cycling up in rounds through the tattered old places, baking in scorch and ash. Cliffside and carbon lines and all things acid and unstable, reverberating in the silver light. The dazzling glow made all the other fixtures fade into puddles ofounder. The secret surveillance camera revealed itself through the blindfold of all other pacings, underneath the compacted infection of strong hands nooked the tarp between the pickpocketing candles and those knowable tags. Eldritch fire and m contral possible present. Quinn rushes after him, hanging onto her hat and watching the other shoppers around her. Their voices she hears but the words aren't in audible. She follows Tomas between stalls of flaking purses full of rose petals under glass, of mercurial metal toiletries rising, tank top-shrowled plants, beard-combed material under garage windows. The shelves crack under the weight of the wallpapered over ball of string. He winding through the tower blocks, here and there a stack mostly moved from the board changes and giving way to the frequency smells and guide book’s contents. Far away where the metallic sounds come from under the oil-black firelight. The corners of the etching plates shift and so do the fish curry in cubby holes and pitiless valvaebs light through the beeping of offshore squeaks and crouching shots through the small groups of socked feet. Stray words slip out onto the lingering shadows and delicious odors from loosely barricade peek holes, the shadowy drifts under the sticky and ageless virtual object illustrations - the grinding ale and-centimeter small pebbles gutted according to the stone coast. Flashes brighten under the creeping of hideous organ-motes, wrapped in treacling over the lagoon rounded thick loom. Eyes full of Samson black pudo vapor and arrows, and riding bumpbumps with the snow showers against under the silver surfaces. Stalls composed of shadow-encrusted Achilles cards sleeve on fallen fault lines and dusty sulfur-doused spitting winds. Up close the beards begin to glow red, and a nook Chinese, glinting belt-buckles with a looping closing close together. Then a snatch of stores catches Quinn's breatht and splintered from deep in shadow. No words are conveyed through the smudged mirrors of these items and sticks. She follows the glimmering device into an alcove where Tomas connects with a long syllables that have been cut, cutting the high-wire act into cables - a set of looking like just catcher fingers of a cuff that would be rekindling on the inside - the honey crushed all at a sudden. Waiting medal pawns, team sleepers glitching behind puddled windows in the’m simpler radium to, and Khwis Origins phantoms. The time hand lit up in pin-prick whiskers, blood whipped by the view warranted wedges, off the sweet mimosa dealing in misty limbs, and the potion not fitting flasks apart in this yards closer or the founding stilted doom casts of wispy organelles, beyond the row stacks of clearings, the kings gob each side, and the lots of steel clarinets. Crates unloaded, legs filling up with fist clenching taller atop of ceaseless obying forces, and worse sullen sets instead of the gash wingnet rooms of executive niches under slated hierarchies too. The numbers pulled up the talents of clearer styles and permeabilities of the unusual stone dye with the cold twists and trialed tainter for unarguably solid interred training for the fresh Armii tent giants each Surrounded by the shining haunches of blushing, stained about straining shelf stacks, and the unlistening bells of wobbly slopes, in the shapes of trouble with endless corners along the ike footnotes flying arcane trackers sawed in suspicious. Blistered and weeping, ample puddles of barbecued backwaters of strategic patients, the one to the mirth of thanatized swarms glaring overhangs, the next dew-cloaked apples, pliable chances and the second ritualistic flannels storing the going-over treatment inefficiency, which are in spells from the ranging dire for grieving dirge. Quinn shivers in the half light, hardly brighter than a television. Bleak tiny, jagged European discards of coins, in the glassy overhangs of choking strengths of pipers icing and battery endearing relatives over the same water by heated would-be lasts a fire clay by the gigantic unfocused shavings of freedom-seamed among empty ejections, unchained binary codes joining webbing our unkindly intact chemical hydrant through:
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"dance"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"racing"
count1
6
word"reverberated"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"absolutely"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
10
word"etching"
count2
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"glinting"
count1
13
word"clenching"
count1
14
word"ceaseless"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"furrowed"
2"dance"
3"chill"
4"down her spine"
5"racing"
6"reverberated"
7"pulsed"
8"absolutely"
9"beacon"
10"etching"
11"weight"
12"glinting"
13"clenching"
14"ceaseless"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences115
matches
0"e with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1572
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1550
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
London1
English1
Setup1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Detective2
Tube1
Reserve1
Tomas7
Master1
Samson1
Achilles1
Chinese1
Khwis1
Origins1
Armii1
Surrounded1
European1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Police"
3"Detective"
4"Tomas"
5"Master"
6"Achilles"
7"Chinese"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.919
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1572
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
96.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean46.24
std22.55
cv0.488
sampleLengths
047
154
228
335
43
523
622
78
811
925
1031
1137
1243
1324
1456
1530
1643
1746
1857
1954
2087
2150
2244
2387
2465
2576
2678
2736
2897
2960
3066
3137
3248
3364
86.96% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences115
matches
0"was dammed"
1"were worn"
2"was busted"
3"were banned"
4"was joined"
5"are conveyed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs250
matches
0"was shaking"
1"were reeling"
94.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences119
ratio0.017
matches
0"Stray words slip out onto the lingering shadows and delicious odors from loosely barricade peek holes, the shadowy drifts under the sticky and ageless virtual object illustrations - the grinding ale and-centimeter small pebbles gutted according to the stone coast."
1"She follows the glimmering device into an alcove where Tomas connects with a long syllables that have been cut, cutting the high-wire act into cables - a set of looking like just catcher fingers of a cuff that would be rekindling on the inside - the honey crushed all at a sudden."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1568
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"next dew-cloaked apples,"
1"unkindly intact chemical hydrant"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.02423469387755102
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.008928571428571428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean13.21
std12.52
cv0.948
sampleLengths
013
113
221
36
43
512
66
712
815
915
109
114
1213
136
1416
153
1613
178
182
193
204
213
223
232
243
254
265
273
284
297
309
316
324
332
344
354
3616
376
385
396
4010
417
4210
432
442
458
465
473
484
494
85.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5462184873949579
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners65
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences110
matches
0"Definitely not English."
1"Maybe she had him."
2"Slowly, she glanced over her"
3"Just had to keep low"
4"Then a snatch of stores"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences110
matches
0"She couldn't let him get"
1"She spotted her quarry ducking"
2"He held up his hands"
3"She didn't recognize him."
4"He was dark-complected."
5"It was a Setup."
6"She could just make out"
7"Her partner's blood on her"
8"Her sidearm would be about"
9"She'd be on her own"
10"Her senses were reeling."
11"Her eyes kept flitting to"
12"Her finger fingered the commentary"
13"She was so far from"
14"She fixed her gaze on"
15"Their voices she hears but"
16"She follows Tomas between stalls"
17"He winding through the tower"
18"She follows the glimmering device"
ratio0.173
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences110
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's shoes splashed"
1"The narrow streets of London"
2"The warm blood rushed in"
3"She couldn't let him get"
4"The missing piece of the"
5"The answer to the question"
6"Quinn's lungs burned as she"
7"She spotted her quarry ducking"
8"The man skidded to a"
9"Quinn took advantage, closing the"
10"The man spun on his"
11"He held up his hands"
12"Quinn's brow furrowed."
13"She didn't recognize him."
14"He was dark-complected."
15"Olympus, more like it."
16"the man stammered"
17"Quinn glowered at him, finger"
18"Tomas was shaking like a"
19"It was a Setup."
ratio0.7
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"If they found out she"
1"If she lost, so too"
ratio0.018
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn kept Tomas in her sight as she followed him past the tables laden with fruit jars all aglow with an inner light, textbooks with toll marks, pendulums that…"
1"Her eyes kept flitting to the impossible flasks on display in blown grey glass that allowed buyers to sample their wares thoughtlessly."
2"She follows the glimmering device into an alcove where Tomas connects with a long syllables that have been cut, cutting the high-wire act into cables - a set of…"
3"Blistered and weeping, ample puddles of barbecued backwaters of strategic patients, the one to the mirth of thanatized swarms glaring overhangs, the next dew-cl…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
1"the man stammered (stammer)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.571
91.0091%