Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRCDWAYTY2PJQV8Y02B9QZ

Run Details

Duration:
20.9s
Cost:
$0.002496
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Raven’s Nest, the rush of damp November air following her through the doorway. The green neon sign outside cast a faint, eerie glow across the worn wooden floorboards, pooling in shallow hues around scattered tables. That familiar musky blend of whisky, old smoke, and aged paper hit her like a wave, heavier somehow than when she’d last been here. The bar had changed little, but the weight she carried now egged everything on, deepening the shadows that pooled in the corners. Silas stood behind the polished counter, wiping a glass slowly. His gaze flicked up, eyes catching hers with the same hazel sharpness she remembered, though the spark seemed tempered by time and cautious calculation. The limp had worsened, but the neat, grey-streaked auburn beard, the silver ring glinting on his right hand — all unmistakable. Aurora’s breath caught. “Silas?” He paused, fingers curling tighter around the glass. “Rory.” The name slipped out low, with something like surprise, maybe hesitation. The years between them stretched taut like an invisible thread, the familiar sound of the old nickname tugging at frayed edges of a past that neither could quite touch. “You look…” She stopped, searching his face, trying to find the words. “Different.” He gave a dry chuckle, setting the glass down with a measured click. “The years have a way of doing that,” he said, voice gravelly but steady. “And you. You haven’t changed so much as… drifted.” She could feel the accusation beneath it. Not sharp, more like a settling dust that still stung if breathed in too long. “I left,” she said flatly. “Left Cardiff, left everything. Couldn’t stand the weight anymore.” Silas nodded slowly, stepping from behind the bar to stand a little straighter despite the limp. “I heard about Evan.” His eyes didn’t falter. “I’m sorry, Rory.” Pain twisted briefly in Aurora’s chest. She bit the inside of her cheek, blinking quickly to clear the sting. “Well, that’s the past.” Her voice cracked, then steadied. “But it still chases me.” He gestured toward one of the worn leather chairs near the back. “Come. Sit.” Aurora hesitated, then moved across the room, the sound of her boots hollow on the wood. She settled into the chair, arms folding tightly across her chest, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist momentarily exposed in the dim light. “You always did wear your scars like medals,” Silas remarked, sliding into the seat opposite her. She narrowed her eyes. “That’s a new one.” “Not new. Just something I noticed.” His gaze sharpened. “You’re not the same girl I used to know. You carry things, Rory. More than you show. Even then, back when you were all fire and defiance.” The words stirred something bitter in her. “Fire burned me up.” She looked away, staring intently at the peeling posters on the far wall. “I thought running would fix it.” Silas watched her quietly. “Blind running never fixes anything.” “Did you think I’d come back here? To see you?” Aurora’s voice dropped, almost a whisper. He shrugged, but there was no mistaking the tense awareness in his posture. “Maybe in another life. Or maybe when the ghosts began crowding too close.” The bar grew quieter as the night thickened, the murmur of other patrons fading into background noise. Aurora’s fingers drummed nervously on her knee. “It’s strange,” she said after a pause, “how time stretches the moments we wanted to leap past, like they’re tied to us by chains we can’t break.” Silas nodded. “Regret is a stubborn companion. But you don’t have to bear it alone.” “I’m not sure I know how to do that anymore.” Her voice cracked, and she quickly took a breath. “I left law school. Quit the career my parents wanted for me. Thought I’d find something else. Did deliveries at the Golden Empress. A disguise, maybe. To forget who I was supposed to be.” He reached forward, resting his silver-ringed hand just on the edge of the table, inches from hers but not quite touching. “You’re not forgetting. You’re surviving. And that counts.” Aurora looked up, something unspoken aching between them — years of missed chances, words unsaid. Her bright blue eyes, sharp and unyielding, softened for a moment. “Do you ever think about those nights we spent here? Before you disappeared? Before the world shifted?” “The things we said, the plans we made...” Silas shook his head slowly. “Different people now. But those nights were real, Rory. More real than anything I’ve seen since.” She laughed, a short, bitter sound. “I remember you swearing you’d never let me walk away alone.” His smile was faint, shadowed. “I tried.” The limp pressed into his voice. “Sometimes the past catches you anyway.” “I thought if I came back,” she said, “I could find a piece of what we lost. I guess I didn’t expect to find you like this.” Her gaze flicked over his worn face, the signs of battles fought beyond the bar walls. Silas leaned back, eyes reflective. “Life has a way of reshaping us, whether we want it to or not. Maybe what matters is what we do with the pieces left over.” Aurora swallowed hard, feeling the gravity of that, the years of silence pressing in around them like walls made of glass. She traced the scar on her wrist with her thumb, mumbling, “I never thought I’d see you again.” “Neither did I,” he admitted, voice grim. Then, after a beat, “But maybe that’s why you’re here. Not to find the past, but to decide what comes next.” The bar’s quiet hum filled the space between their words. Outside, the neon sign buzzed softly, casting green shadows that flickered like ghosts between them. Aurora exhaled slowly. “So, what’s next, Silas?” “Depends on you, Rory.” He smiled—small, uncertain but real. “Are you ready to stop running?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
4.88% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said flatly [flatly]"
1"Her voice cracked then [then]"
2"She looked away [away]"
3"Aurora’s voice dropped almost [almost]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.829
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.195
54.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count4
1
adverb"quickly"
count2
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"nervously"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
2"tightly"
3"nervously"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"flicked"
3"glinting"
4"measured"
5"could feel"
6"whisper"
7"unspoken"
8"silence"
9"traced"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords977
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount604
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
November1
Silas7
Pain1
Aurora9
persons
0"Silas"
1"Pain"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore0.755
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed tempered by time and cautious calculation"
1"something like surprise, maybe hesitation"
2"not quite touching"
97.65% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.024
wordCount977
matches
0"Not to find the past, but to decide what comes next"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean25.05
std14.92
cv0.596
sampleLengths
085
155
24
320
429
513
636
722
814
927
1019
1114
1214
1340
1416
158
1636
1730
189
1916
2026
2124
2227
2315
2453
2529
2626
2717
2829
2917
3019
3143
3231
3321
3418
3528
3625
377
3815
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences77
ratio0.039
matches
0"The limp had worsened, but the neat, grey-streaked auburn beard, the silver ring glinting on his right hand — all unmistakable."
1"Aurora looked up, something unspoken aching between them — years of missed chances, words unsaid."
2"“Depends on you, Rory.” He smiled—small, uncertain but real."
77.39% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount606
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"neat, grey-streaked auburn"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.054455445544554455
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.024752475247524754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean12.69
std8.21
cv0.647
sampleLengths
017
122
224
322
410
524
621
73
81
98
1012
1129
1212
131
1413
1514
169
177
1815
195
209
2116
228
233
246
2513
269
275
2812
292
3016
3124
3216
334
344
359
3627
377
3817
396
404
415
4216
4313
4413
4517
467
4727
482
4913
71.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.44155844155844154
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners34
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then, after a beat,"
ratio0.019
27.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences54
matches
0"His gaze flicked up, eyes"
1"He paused, fingers curling tighter"
2"She stopped, searching his face,"
3"He gave a dry chuckle,"
4"he said, voice gravelly but"
5"She could feel the accusation"
6"she said flatly"
7"His eyes didn’t falter"
8"She bit the inside of"
9"Her voice cracked, then steadied"
10"He gestured toward one of"
11"She settled into the chair,"
12"She narrowed her eyes."
13"His gaze sharpened"
14"She looked away, staring intently"
15"He shrugged, but there was"
16"she said after a pause"
17"Her voice cracked, and she"
18"He reached forward, resting his"
19"Her bright blue eyes, sharp"
ratio0.481
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Raven’s"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"That familiar musky blend of"
3"The bar had changed little,"
4"Silas stood behind the polished"
5"His gaze flicked up, eyes"
6"The limp had worsened, but"
7"Aurora’s breath caught."
8"He paused, fingers curling tighter"
9"The name slipped out low,"
10"The years between them stretched"
11"She stopped, searching his face,"
12"He gave a dry chuckle,"
13"he said, voice gravelly but"
14"She could feel the accusation"
15"she said flatly"
16"Silas nodded slowly, stepping from"
17"His eyes didn’t falter"
18"Pain twisted briefly in Aurora’s"
19"She bit the inside of"
ratio0.944
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The bar had changed little, but the weight she carried now egged everything on, deepening the shadows that pooled in the corners."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice gravelly but steady"
1"She traced, mumbling,"
2"he admitted, voice grim"
3"He smiled, uncertain but real"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.244
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.049
71.2323%