| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 622 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 622 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "apprehension" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "dancing" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "ephemeral" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "echoes" | | 9 | "enigmatic" | | 10 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 623 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 513 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Malphora | 3 | | Rory | 11 | | Place | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Malphora" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Place" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.428 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 623 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 34.61 | | std | 19.4 | | cv | 0.561 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 3 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 48 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "A chorus of night creatures hummed in the undergrowth - crickets, frogs, the occasional owl's cry." | | 1 | "Strange echoes sounded all around - whispers of Fae from long ago, ghostly footfalls, hallow laughter." | | 2 | "A figure separated from the shadows at the far end of the clearing - tall, lithe, with flowing silver hair." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 512 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.029296875 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017578125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 48 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 48 | | mean | 12.98 | | std | 6.14 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 14 |
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| 97.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.6041666666666666 | | totalSentences | 48 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "Its branches tangled with those" | | 1 | "She had not known such" | | 2 | "They shared a long look," | | 3 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 4 | "She closed her eyes, letting" | | 5 | "she said, but her voice" | | 6 | "Her gaze shifted to the" | | 7 | "Her attention moved between them" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove Silence reigned" | | 1 | "Rory led the way, her" | | 2 | "Nyx followed a pace behind," | | 3 | "Moonlight filtered through the leafy" | | 4 | "The air hung heavy with" | | 5 | "A chorus of night creatures" | | 6 | "The night was alive, electric" | | 7 | "Rory paused at the center" | | 8 | "Its branches tangled with those" | | 9 | "Pixies, Rory realized." | | 10 | "She had not known such" | | 11 | "Nyx whispered, echoing Rory's earlier" | | 12 | "They shared a long look," | | 13 | "Rory felt the pull, the" | | 14 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 15 | "Malphora slithered ahead, her serpentine" | | 16 | "Nyx glided along effortlessly, their" | | 17 | "Rory found herself moving with" | | 18 | "Malphora breathed, her voice coming" | | 19 | "Rory nodded slowly, able to" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Malphora breathed, her voice coming from everywhere at once" | | 1 | "Rory whispered, eyes flaring open" | | 2 | "Isolde called, her voice resonating unnaturally in the still air" | | 3 | "she said, but her voice sounded thready, unsubstantial in the humid air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Malphora breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |