| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "She hesitated then [then]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 3 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 66.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1045 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1045 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "raced" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "charm" | | 5 | "eyebrow" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "enigmatic" | | 8 | "gleaning" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "comfortable" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "glinting" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "the sense of belonging" |
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| 98.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1043 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 630 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 15 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Missed | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.071 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.959 | | wordCount | 1043 | | matches | | 0 | "not glamorous, but it pays the bills" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 28.19 | | std | 14.95 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 73 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "But his presence was still the same - commanding, confident, a man in full possession of his power." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 528 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03787878787878788 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015151515151515152 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 10.64 | | std | 5.4 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 63.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.40816326530612246 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been what, five" | | 1 | "She'd thrown herself into her" | | 2 | "he acknowledged, limping toward her" | | 3 | "She nodded, unable to find" | | 4 | "He settled onto the stool," | | 5 | "she asked, using the nickname" | | 6 | "His gaze raked over her," | | 7 | "he said finally" | | 8 | "She drained the last of" | | 9 | "He signaled the bartender for" | | 10 | "They fell into a comfortable" | | 11 | "She shook her head." | | 12 | "He reached out, his knuckles" | | 13 | "She hesitated, then took the" | | 14 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 15 | "he said at last" | | 16 | "she said softly" | | 17 | "he said quietly" | | 18 | "she said, her voice scarcely" | | 19 | "she asked, her voice hardly" |
| | ratio | 0.39 | |
| 10.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim lighting of the" | | 1 | "Those familiar hazel eyes met" | | 2 | "Time seemed to stretch out," | | 3 | "Rory swallowed hard, her hand" | | 4 | "It had been what, five" | | 5 | "She'd thrown herself into her" | | 6 | "Silas turned to face her" | | 7 | "he acknowledged, limping toward her" | | 8 | "She nodded, unable to find" | | 9 | "God, she'd missed him." | | 10 | "Silas gestured to the empty" | | 11 | "Rory nodded again, schooling her" | | 12 | "Silas never had been one" | | 13 | "He settled onto the stool," | | 14 | "Rory took a sip of" | | 15 | "she asked, using the nickname" | | 16 | "His gaze raked over her," | | 17 | "he said finally" | | 18 | "Rory's lips curved into a" | | 19 | "Silas raised an eyebrow." |
| | ratio | 0.898 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas took, his gaze distant" | | 1 | "He reached out, his knuckles brushing against hers in the barest of touches" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "Rory pressed, her blue eyes searching his" | | 4 | "she said, her voice scarcely above a whisper" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice hardly more than a whisper" | | 6 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 7 | "he agreed, his fingers tightening around hers" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 1 | "he observed (observe)" | | 2 | "she quipped (quip)" | | 3 | "Rory admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 5 | "he agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |