| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 62.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "completely" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "tightly" | | 6 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.93% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "palpable" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "glinting" | | 7 | "sense of" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "chilling" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "churn" | | 12 | "trepidation" | | 13 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 54.95% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 61.01% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 4 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 4 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "She could feel a strange kind of anticipation emanating from the creature, a look of wanting, a deep longing that reminded her of the scar running down her wrist, of the memories c…" | | 1 | "</ol>" | | 2 | "</details>" | | 3 | "</p>" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1072 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1070 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 8 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Jenn | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Faery | 1 | | Trees | 2 | | Caerphilly | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-reeked | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Monet-like | 1 | | Dad | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Jenn" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Trees" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Dad" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Caerphilly" |
| | globalScore | 0.752 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1072 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.10% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "feeling that she" | | 1 | "feeling that this" |
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| 74.16% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 53.6 | | std | 21.95 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 89 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 92 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 62 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 67 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 38 |
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| 99.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 88.89% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was giving" | | 2 | "was dealing" |
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| 54.95% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "Mana was behind the subtle effects she detected at the periphery of her awareness — a slight constriction of space, a blurring of time, and a Fae-reeked breeze coming from nowhere." | | 1 | "There were many different types of Fae slimming under the waters in rivers and lakes — selkies, kelpies, even sirens." |
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| 88.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1074 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.049348230912476726 | | lyAdverbCount | 26 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024208566108007448 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 16.49 | | std | 9.25 | | cv | 0.561 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 80.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.49230769230769234 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Surely, she must be seeing" | | 1 | "Instead of worrying about whether" | | 2 | "Again the figure laughed, the" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Her mother Jenn had often" | | 1 | "She had only to open" | | 2 | "She approached cautiously, grinding the" | | 3 | "She had to act fast" | | 4 | "She reached down with her" | | 5 | "She had to get a" | | 6 | "She leaned in a little" | | 7 | "It felt as big as" | | 8 | "Her friends couldn't be far" | | 9 | "She whirled around, fully convinced" | | 10 | "It looked almost...human?" | | 11 | "She shook herself, looking around" | | 12 | "She stood frozen in trepidation," | | 13 | "I thought the slithering creature" | | 14 | "She had never seen such" | | 15 | "Her mother, a compulsive collector" | | 16 | "She could feel a strange" |
| | ratio | 0.274 | |
| 97.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory wondered as she approached" | | 1 | "The old legend spoke of" | | 2 | "Her mother Jenn had often" | | 3 | "Rory had a long-standing fascination" | | 4 | "A heavy silence draped the" | | 5 | "Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant" | | 6 | "The moonlight seemed too bright," | | 7 | "Limbs of the gnarled oaks" | | 8 | "Magickal energy was a real" | | 9 | "She had only to open" | | 10 | "Mana was behind the subtle" | | 11 | "Trees branched away from Rory" | | 12 | "The grove seemed to breathe" | | 13 | "The area Rory entered was" | | 14 | "A feeling that she was" | | 15 | "Rory found a small clearing," | | 16 | "She approached cautiously, grinding the" | | 17 | "The earth felt spongey, almost" | | 18 | "She had to act fast" | | 19 | "Rory slowly knelt down." |
| | ratio | 0.726 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "What she was certain were" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 68.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Her mother Jenn had often regaled young Rory with tales of the realm, warning her that arrogant mortals who dared to step into fae-touched spaces were likely to…" | | 1 | "Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant hidden under her shirt as she carefully approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of a hidden cle…" | | 2 | "In the air, she could feel the eliciting magic tingling at her fingertips, awakening a raw reaction in her very core." | | 3 | "A feeling that she was being watched prickled her skin, raising goosebumps in its wake." | | 4 | "She could feel a strange kind of anticipation emanating from the creature, a look of wanting, a deep longing that reminded her of the scar running down her wris…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory choked, her voice shaky" | | 1 | "Rory gripped, her hands shaking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |