Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFVJG04J0QZGNWGTAXQMT

Run Details

Duration:
14.3s
Cost:
$0.000942
Provider:
Infermatic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory wondered as she approached the Fae Grove in Richmond Park why she was drawn to this witchy place alone at night. The old legend spoke of a hidden faery realm accessible through groves tucked between the edges of our world and theirs. Her mother Jenn had often regaled young Rory with tales of the realm, warning her that arrogant mortals who dared to step into fae-touched spaces were likely to be trapped, caught in aspen resin or ensnared by thorny wild rose. Rory had a long-standing fascination with faery lore and magic, beliefs solidified while visiting the Faery Trees in Caerphilly as a child. As such, she had to see the place for herself. A heavy silence draped the inky night, broken only by the wind singing through the stands of trees. Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant hidden under her shirt as she carefully approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of a hidden clearing. The moonlight seemed too bright, too otherworldly to be of this world. Limbs of the gnarled oaks stretched out in deliciously twisted ways as her eyes adjusted. In the air, she could feel the eliciting magic tingling at her fingertips, awakening a raw reaction in her very core. Magickal energy was a real thing, as mana flowed through the currents of the earth, rivers braking down into streams, cast into intricate pillar networks branching under our feet. She had only to open herself to it. Mana was behind the subtle effects she detected at the periphery of her awareness — a slight constriction of space, a blurring of time, and a Fae-reeked breeze coming from nowhere. In the heart of the silent grove, large shards of pale moon floated in the sky above, a capricious painting in the night blackness of the cloudless heavens. Trees branched away from Rory in all directions, a domain known to be governed by the Fae themselves. The grove seemed to breathe all around her, the energy in the air palpable. The area Rory entered was strangely different than the rest of the park, the utter silence all-encompassing. No crickets, no birds, no animals, only an oppressive stillness. A feeling that she was being watched prickled her skin, raising goosebumps in its wake. Rory found a small clearing, where a spring rose up in the center of a clearing lush with hawkweeds, poppies, and dragonhead, just as Isolde described in her grove documents. But something looked off. She approached cautiously, grinding the foliage beneath the sole of her shoes. The earth felt spongey, almost as if it was giving a gentle push back against her foot. In the fading slivers of day, she noticed something glinting from within the spring, embedded in the luminescent moss. She had to act fast before night fell completely. Rory slowly knelt down. The water looked smooth as glass, making her own reflection look startling clear. Except it wasn't only her. There was movement rippling from beneath the surface! Something slithered just beneath the rippling waters, a quick undulation their only clue as to the creature's shape or intent. Surely, she must be seeing a distortion or trick of the light. She reached down with her fingers and slid it against the glass-like water. What she was certain were eyes further down momentarily widened before making a mad dash for another portion of the spring. Rory wasn't quite sure whether she should be relieved or frightened by the creature's hasty retreat. She had to get a closer look. The moonlight through the tightly woven canopy made it nearly impossible to see anything, the water and its round vegetation a camouflage that only disbursed light into a Monet-like blob of iridescent reflection. She leaned in a little further but froze as she glimpsed a shadow quickly dart from one end of the spring to the other. It felt as big as a hand. Shape-shifting or enchanted blobs. Granted, she has never seen one before, but she knew they existed from the land lore her Dad taught her from/components of their stories. Instead of worrying about whether the creature could harm her, she was more concerned about finding out what kind of Fae she was dealing with. There were many different types of Fae slimming under the waters in rivers and lakes — selkies, kelpies, even sirens. Glancing malignantly from the spring to the forest, she violently got the feeling that this was a place where she and her loved ones were best off never venturing. Her friends couldn't be far if she screamed, but somehow, the logic of the Fae woods didn't possess the rules of the material space they were normally accustomed to. The Fae weren't known for their sense of hospitality, either. Then...a stick snapped somewhere in the toxin behind Rory. She whirled around, fully convinced she'd find some supernatural creature staring back at her, only to see a shadowy silhouette. It looked almost...human? A deep, mocking laughter echoed through the clearing, the chilling sound cloying in the back of her mind like a sticky substance. Rory's heart lodged into her throat, her mouth going dry. She shook herself, looking around for the source of the sound but finding nothing...until she caught the source of the amusement, the thing standing at the edge of the opening. < avez-vous vu mon robe? > it lisped in a language unknown to her, though the cadence of the words conjured a certain feeling. Again the figure laughed, the sound visceral, making Rory's stomach churn. She stood frozen in trepidation, waiting for it to come closer. I thought the slithering creature emerged from the spring, but now Rory wasn't so sure. The light had seemed to fade further, clouding around them like a thick fog and was it just her imagination, or had the creature changed into a much larger shadow? "E-Eh?" Rory choked out, her voice shaky. She had never seen such a being in reality, though she'd heard stories,'d seen paintings. Her mother, a compulsive collector of mythologies, had many pieces of Fae lore, many of which she had warned a young Rory about. "Y-you're...y-you're...F-Fae?" Rory gripped the edge of the spring tightly, her hands shaking. She could feel a strange kind of anticipation emanating from the creature, a look of wanting, a deep longing that reminded her of the scar running down her wrist, of the memories connected to it.</li> </ol> </details> </p>
created_at"2026-02-19T10:52:48.597Z" 2/19/2026, 10:52:48 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
62.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count2
6
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"cautiously"
3"completely"
4"slowly"
5"tightly"
6"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"otherworldly"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count2
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"palpable"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"chilling"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"churn"
count1
12
word"trepidation"
count1
13
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"otherworldly"
2"could feel"
3"intricate"
4"palpable"
5"oppressive"
6"glinting"
7"sense of"
8"echoed"
9"chilling"
10"stomach"
11"churn"
12"trepidation"
13"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences65
matches
0"n in trepidation"
54.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
61.01% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences4
adjustedGibberishSentences4
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0.062
matches
0"She could feel a strange kind of anticipation emanating from the creature, a look of wanting, a deep longing that reminded her of the scar running down her wrist, of the memories c…"
1"</ol>"
2"</details>"
3"</p>"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1072
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1070
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae8
Grove1
Richmond1
Park1
Jenn1
Rory16
Faery1
Trees2
Caerphilly1
Heartstone1
Fae-reeked1
Isolde1
Monet-like1
Dad1
persons
0"Jenn"
1"Rory"
2"Trees"
3"Isolde"
4"Dad"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Caerphilly"
globalScore0.752
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1072
matches(empty)
64.10% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"feeling that she"
1"feeling that this"
74.16% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean53.6
std21.95
cv0.41
sampleLengths
083
132
271
389
460
542
663
758
845
944
1092
1145
1268
1329
143
1562
1624
1767
1857
1938
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"was drawn"
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was being"
1"was giving"
2"was dealing"
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences65
ratio0.031
matches
0"Mana was behind the subtle effects she detected at the periphery of her awareness — a slight constriction of space, a blurring of time, and a Fae-reeked breeze coming from nowhere."
1"There were many different types of Fae slimming under the waters in rivers and lakes — selkies, kelpies, even sirens."
88.31% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1074
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.049348230912476726
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.024208566108007448
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean16.49
std9.25
cv0.561
sampleLengths
022
121
240
322
410
518
626
712
815
921
1029
118
1231
1328
1418
1514
1617
1710
1815
1930
204
2112
2217
2319
249
254
2613
275
288
2920
3012
3113
3221
3316
347
3533
3624
377
384
3924
4025
4120
4229
4329
4410
459
4620
473
4822
4910
80.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.49230769230769234
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"Surely, she must be seeing"
1"Instead of worrying about whether"
2"Again the figure laughed, the"
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her mother Jenn had often"
1"She had only to open"
2"She approached cautiously, grinding the"
3"She had to act fast"
4"She reached down with her"
5"She had to get a"
6"She leaned in a little"
7"It felt as big as"
8"Her friends couldn't be far"
9"She whirled around, fully convinced"
10"It looked almost...human?"
11"She shook herself, looking around"
12"She stood frozen in trepidation,"
13"I thought the slithering creature"
14"She had never seen such"
15"Her mother, a compulsive collector"
16"She could feel a strange"
ratio0.274
97.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rory wondered as she approached"
1"The old legend spoke of"
2"Her mother Jenn had often"
3"Rory had a long-standing fascination"
4"A heavy silence draped the"
5"Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant"
6"The moonlight seemed too bright,"
7"Limbs of the gnarled oaks"
8"Magickal energy was a real"
9"She had only to open"
10"Mana was behind the subtle"
11"Trees branched away from Rory"
12"The grove seemed to breathe"
13"The area Rory entered was"
14"A feeling that she was"
15"Rory found a small clearing,"
16"She approached cautiously, grinding the"
17"The earth felt spongey, almost"
18"She had to act fast"
19"Rory slowly knelt down."
ratio0.726
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"What she was certain were"
ratio0.016
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her mother Jenn had often regaled young Rory with tales of the realm, warning her that arrogant mortals who dared to step into fae-touched spaces were likely to…"
1"Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant hidden under her shirt as she carefully approached the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of a hidden cle…"
2"In the air, she could feel the eliciting magic tingling at her fingertips, awakening a raw reaction in her very core."
3"A feeling that she was being watched prickled her skin, raising goosebumps in its wake."
4"She could feel a strange kind of anticipation emanating from the creature, a look of wanting, a deep longing that reminded her of the scar running down her wris…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory choked, her voice shaky"
1"Rory gripped, her hands shaking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory choked (choke)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
78.9498%