Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRG2YAPCKZZQEW6XS88K92

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.002387
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest buzzed quietly with its usual after-hours crowd; hushed murmurs floated over the clink of glasses. The distinctive green neon sign pulsed softly through the rain-slicked window, casting a ghostly glow on the mottled brick walls lined with sepia maps and framed black-and-white photographs of London’s shadows from decades past. Aurora Carter stepped in, her boots scraping against the worn wooden floor. The faint scent of aged whiskey and smoky tobacco wrapped around her, familiar and heavy. “Rory?” A voice came from the far corner, low and rough, stirring something she hadn’t heard in years. Aurora froze. The voice belonged to someone she hadn’t expected to find in a dim Soho bar, tucked above a city full of ghosts she thought she’d left behind. She turned slowly to see Silas Blackwood. Grey streaked his once reddish hair, and the sharp hazel eyes beneath heavy lids held a collection of stories—too many to tell in a single glance. His beard was neatly trimmed, matching the tidiness of his demeanour. The very sight of him pulled tension from somewhere deep in her chest. He carried himself with the quiet authority that never faded, though a slight limp in his left leg slowed his approach. “Silas.” Her voice cracked, a mixture of surprise and something heavier—something unspoken. He offered a small nod, eyes flicking to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist as if marking time in the space between them. "Rory," he breathed in, “long time.” The bar’s low hum slipped behind words neither spoke outright. Aurora caught the familiar signet ring glinting in the dim light as Silas settled onto the stool beside her, slipping the limp as effortlessly as he might slip from one character to another. “A lot’s changed,” she said, eyes fixed on the amber liquid settling in her glass. Silas laughed softly, a sound catching between rueful and amused. “That much is clear.” She glanced at him, surprised to find the same sharp line of the jaw, the same set of shoulders, but with years that had worn in places, not out. “I never thought I’d see you here. Not in this part of town. Not like this.” He smiled, lips tightening, “Life isn’t a map. You don’t always follow the roads you planned.” He leaned forward, murmuring low, “What brought you to the Raven’s Nest after all these years?” “Work.” She said simply. “Part-time delivery. Trying to keep things stable.” Her eyes flicked back to the bar’s worn floorboards, like measuring distance she could never close. “And you?” He looked to the shadows between the tables, then back at her. “A retirement of sorts.” His voice softened. “The Nest’s a good place to disappear, or maybe to be found.” Her fingers brushed against the scar on her wrist, the small crescent a reminder of nights long ago when everything had seemed less tangled, if not simpler. She considered mentioning Evan—how she’d run, but the words clogged the space between memory and present, thickening the air. “Do you regret it?” The question slipped out before Aurora could stop it, her gaze catching his. Silas’s eyes narrowed, searching the darkness beyond her. “Regret’s a luxury reserved for the living.” He paused. “Sometimes it catches up when you least expect it. You?” Her laugh was bitter, sharp-edged. “Every day. But I don’t have time for luxuries.” He nodded, a gesture heavy with understanding. “I see the same spark in your eyes. Still fighting fires you carry alone.” “Not alone.” She looked at him then, raw and uncertain. “You always knew what to say to make it sound less lonely.” The silence stretched between them, filled with a thousand unsaid apologies and choices made. The memories came unbidden—the nights in quiet corners, strategy mapped in shadows, trust forged but frayed. “You’ve changed,” Silas finally said, watching her like a puzzle he couldn’t quite solve. “I had to,” she said simply. “If I stayed the Rory you knew, I wouldn’t be here. Not really.” He smiled, a little sadly, “You think I haven’t changed? We both learned how to survive.” “Survive, yes,” she whispered, voice rough. “But at what cost?” Eyes flickering to the hidden bookshelf behind the bar, Silas shifted closer, voice softer now. “Time buries things, but it leaks too. Maybe it’s time to unearth some of those things between us.” She swallowed hard, debating the truths she’d sealed inside, the wounds barely scarred over. “It’s not just time, Silas. It’s the weight of what we left unsaid.” He rested his hand briefly near hers on the bar, a casual closeness that somehow anchored her. “We’re not the same people who walked out of those classrooms, those alleys. But maybe some part of us hasn’t moved on yet.” Aurora’s hand twitched, the scar burning faintly. “Maybe that’s why it hurts so much.” “Maybe it’s also why we meet again here, after all these years,” Silas murmured. The bar’s ambient chatter ebbed and flowed, wrapping around the pair like a shroud. No one else in the room mattered in that moment—just the old friends standing at a crossroads too long unattended. “Do you want to talk?” Silas asked, voice low. “I’m not sure I can.” She met his gaze, bright blue eyes steady. “Then maybe we listen instead.” His smile was gentle now, but with a steel edge. “No judgment. Just two people tangled in time.” Aurora nodded slowly, as if willing the years between them to unravel with a single knot. The night deepened around them, but inside The Raven’s Nest, under the green neon’s glow, the past and present began their quiet dialogue.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She said simply [simply]"
1"Her eyes flicked back [back]"
2"Silas finally said [finally]"
3"she said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.222
63.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount949
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"sadly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"really"
4"sadly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount949
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"familiar"
2"tension"
3"unspoken"
4"glinting"
5"flicked"
6"reminder"
7"silence"
8"weight"
9"unravel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences51
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords938
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount672
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Carter1
Aurora6
Soho1
Silas8
Blackwood1
Evan1
Eyes1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Evan"
7"Eyes"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.905
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if marking time in the space between them"
1"quite solve"
2"as if willing the years between them to unravel with a single knot"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount938
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean26.8
std16.19
cv0.604
sampleLengths
079
118
229
378
412
531
643
715
814
945
1032
1129
1231
1346
1417
1527
1614
1721
1822
1930
2014
2119
2216
2310
2433
2527
2640
2714
2814
2934
309
3113
3223
3316
3423
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences66
ratio0.091
matches
0"The Raven's Nest buzzed quietly with its usual after-hours crowd; hushed murmurs floated over the clink of glasses."
1"Grey streaked his once reddish hair, and the sharp hazel eyes beneath heavy lids held a collection of stories—too many to tell in a single glance."
2"“Silas.” Her voice cracked, a mixture of surprise and something heavier—something unspoken."
3"She considered mentioning Evan—how she’d run, but the words clogged the space between memory and present, thickening the air."
4"The memories came unbidden—the nights in quiet corners, strategy mapped in shadows, trust forged but frayed."
5"No one else in the room mattered in that moment—just the old friends standing at a crossroads too long unattended."
86.37% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount683
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04685212298682284
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.021961932650073207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean14.21
std7.49
cv0.527
sampleLengths
018
134
212
315
418
52
627
77
826
911
1013
1121
1212
1325
146
1510
1633
1715
1810
194
2029
2116
2232
234
2423
252
2612
277
2812
2927
3019
3117
328
339
3410
355
369
377
3814
3910
4012
4114
4216
4314
446
4513
4616
476
484
4915
73.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4696969696969697
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences48
matches
0"She turned slowly to see"
1"His beard was neatly trimmed,"
2"He carried himself with the"
3"Her voice cracked, a mixture"
4"He offered a small nod,"
5"he breathed in"
6"she said, eyes fixed on"
7"She glanced at him, surprised"
8"He smiled, lips tightening, He"
9"She said simply"
10"Her eyes flicked back to"
11"He looked to the shadows"
12"His voice softened"
13"Her fingers brushed against the"
14"She considered mentioning Evan—how she’d"
15"Her laugh was bitter, sharp-edged."
16"He nodded, a gesture heavy"
17"She looked at him then,"
18"she said simply"
19"He smiled, a little sadly,"
ratio0.521
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences48
matches
0"The Raven's Nest buzzed quietly"
1"The distinctive green neon sign"
2"Aurora Carter stepped in, her"
3"The faint scent of aged"
4"A voice came from the"
5"The voice belonged to someone"
6"She turned slowly to see"
7"His beard was neatly trimmed,"
8"The very sight of him"
9"He carried himself with the"
10"Her voice cracked, a mixture"
11"He offered a small nod,"
12"he breathed in"
13"The bar’s low hum slipped"
14"Aurora caught the familiar signet"
15"she said, eyes fixed on"
16"Silas laughed softly, a sound"
17"She glanced at him, surprised"
18"He smiled, lips tightening, He"
19"She said simply"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He offered a small nod, eyes flicking to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist as if marking time in the space between them."
1"She glanced at him, surprised to find the same sharp line of the jaw, the same set of shoulders, but with years that had worn in places, not out."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Her voice cracked, a mixture of surprise and something heavier—something unspoken"
1"she said, eyes fixed on the amber liquid settling in her glass"
2"He smiled, lips tightening,"
3"The question slipped out, her gaze catching his"
4"she whispered, voice rough"
5"Silas asked, voice low"
61.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Silas murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.176
66.9982%