Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHAC33Z024KZ1N8XTP99Z

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Duration:
15.4s
Cost:
$0.000960
Provider:
Infermatic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign above The Raven's Nest flickered as Rory pushed through the door, a gust of night air swirling in behind her. The bar was dimly lit, as always, and the chatter of patrons faded as she stepped inside. It took a moment for her eyes to adjust, but there, at his usual perch, was Silas. He looked older, his grey-streaked auburn hair now fully silver and his hazel eyes crinkled at the corners. But the sharpness in his gaze was still there, and when their eyes met, he flashed her that familiar smile, one side of his mouth quirking up. A quick nod to the bartender, Yu-Fei, old friends from long-standing glances, and a pint was delivered to his table with practiced ease. Rory made her way over, her shoes clicking on the polished floor. She slid into the booth across from him, and there was a pause, an unspoken acknowledgment that the years had passed, and they were strangers in a way they once were not. But there was comfort in silence, too, and they sat for a moment, looking at each other over the tops of their glasses. "Long time no see," Silas said finally, his voice rough with the ghosts of cigarettes long past. "Didn't expect to see you back in London." She shrugged, a casual gesture belied by the tension in her shoulders. "Life happens, you know?" She took a sip of her beer. "How have you been?" Silas leaned back, one hand drumming on the tabletop. "Oh, you know. Same old, same old. The bar keeps me busy, and..." He trailed off, then went on, "I heard about you and Evan. I'm sorry, kid." Rory stiffened, her beer sloshing in the glass. "How did you--?" He waved a hand. "Rumors get around. I'm sorry," he repeated. There was a pause, and then Rory laughed, a jagged sound. "Yeah, well. It's over now." She took a long drink, then set the glass down with a thud. "What about you? Anyone special in your life?" Silas barked out a laugh, a sound of genuine amusement. "Christ, no. I'm too set in my ways." He leaned forward, his gaze intent. "What about you? You seem different. Changed." Rory looked away, her fingers tightening on the glass. "Everyone changes, Silas. It's called growing up." "True enough," he said quietly. There was another pause, and then he leaned back, his eyes crinkling at the corners again. "You remember that summer we spent together, in Prague? The first mission I took you out on?" Rory could feel the memories crowding in on her. The heat, the danger, the thrill of it all. "How could I forget? I nearly got my ass kicked." Silas chuckled. "You held your own. You always did." He looked at her for a long moment, then shook his head. "I'm sorry, you know. For not being there for you, when it fell apart with Evan." Rory met his gaze, seeing the weight of old regrets in his eyes. "It's not your fault. I made my choices." She looked down at her beer, her voice barely above a whisper. "And look where they got me." Silas was quiet for a moment, then reached across the table, his fingers brushing her wrist. "You're here now. That's what matters." Rory looked up, and for a moment, she could see it again. The unspoken understanding, the unbreakable bond between them. But it was tempered now, muted by years and old wounds. She gave him a small smile. "I just wish...I wish I could go back. Start over." He looked at her for a long moment, then shook his head. "We can't change the past, Rory. But we can change the future." His hand tightened on her wrist. "Start fresh. Right here, right now." She could feel the weight of his words settling on her, a heaviness in her chest. She looked at him for a long moment, then smiled, soft and sad. "Maybe. But I can't stay." Silas nodded, his hand falling away. He knew better than to argue. "You know where I am." He raised his glass. "Anytime." She raised her glass in return, and they clinked, a soft chime in the dimly lit bar. It was a promise, a quiet acknowledgment of what they had once shared, and what they might still have. But there were no guarantees in this life, only choices, and Rory knew better than most that the road ahead was long and winding, full of pitfalls and surprises. But she had to start somewhere. And there was comfort in knowing that maybe, if she needed it, she could always find her way back here. To this bar, to this man, to this moment in time. For now, it would have to be enough. They finished their drinks in silence, the easy camaraderie of old friends tempered by the knowledge that some things were better left unsaid. But there was a quiet understanding between them, a deep knowing of each other's souls. And that, Rory thought, as she slipped out into the night, would have to be enough. She walked slowly, her steps measured and steady, the weight of old regrets and new beginnings settling on her shoulders. The night air was cool, the streetlights casting long shadows on the cobbled streets. She took a deep breath, the city's scent of cigarette smoke and stale beer and fried food filling her lungs. A fresh start. A clean slate. It seemed almost too good to be true, but Rory knew better than to discount the power of a chance encounter, a momentary recognition of a shared history. With Silas, with herself. She wasn't the same person she'd been all those years ago, but maybe, just maybe, that was okay. Maybe there was still room for change, for growth, for new beginnings. And who knew? Maybe, someday, she'd find her way back to this place, to this moment, and it would all make sense. But for now, she knew what she had to do. She straightened her shoulders, adjusted her grip on her overnight bag, and stepped forward into the unknown. One step at a time. That was all she could do. One step at a time. And maybe, with each step, she'd find her way back to herself.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:53:36.521Z" 2/19/2026, 10:53:36 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Silas said finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.423
leniency0.846
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.154
90.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1056
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1056
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count2
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"practiced ease"
3"unspoken"
4"silence"
5"tension"
6"could feel"
7"weight"
8"whisper"
9"measured"
10"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1053
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount857
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory11
Silas8
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.858
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1053
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
96.48% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean32.91
std16.05
cv0.488
sampleLengths
057
168
267
325
427
537
611
711
837
931
1016
1138
1228
1337
1439
1522
1647
1736
1834
1922
2065
2137
228
2338
2416
2554
2638
2730
2822
2927
3016
3112
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"was delivered"
1"was tempered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences84
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.30% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount860
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.046511627906976744
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009302325581395349
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean12.54
std7.01
cv0.559
sampleLengths
023
117
217
318
427
523
612
732
823
917
108
1112
1211
134
149
1528
168
173
184
197
2011
2118
228
2310
2414
257
269
277
285
2916
3017
319
329
3310
342
3519
3616
3713
3820
396
4016
416
4212
438
4411
456
4610
4712
4818
496
60.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners33
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Maybe there was still room"
1"Maybe, someday, she'd find her"
ratio0.03
58.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences67
matches
0"It took a moment for"
1"He looked older, his grey-streaked"
2"She slid into the booth"
3"She shrugged, a casual gesture"
4"She took a sip of"
5"He trailed off, then went"
6"He waved a hand."
7"She took a long drink,"
8"He leaned forward, his gaze"
9"he said quietly"
10"He looked at her for"
11"She looked down at her"
12"She gave him a small"
13"He looked at her for"
14"His hand tightened on her"
15"She could feel the weight"
16"She looked at him for"
17"He knew better than to"
18"He raised his glass"
19"She raised her glass in"
ratio0.403
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences67
matches
0"The neon sign above The"
1"The bar was dimly lit,"
2"It took a moment for"
3"He looked older, his grey-streaked"
4"A quick nod to the"
5"Rory made her way over,"
6"She slid into the booth"
7"Silas said finally, his voice"
8"She shrugged, a casual gesture"
9"She took a sip of"
10"Silas leaned back, one hand"
11"He trailed off, then went"
12"Rory stiffened, her beer sloshing"
13"He waved a hand."
14"She took a long drink,"
15"Silas barked out a laugh,"
16"He leaned forward, his gaze"
17"Rory looked away, her fingers"
18"he said quietly"
19"Rory could feel the memories"
ratio0.701
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"To this bar, to this"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Silas said finally, his voice rough with the ghosts of cigarettes long past"
1"She looked down, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.077
88.0402%