| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice cracked then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 90.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1070 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1070 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "unravel" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "fluttered" | | 14 | "down her spine" | | 15 | "silk" | | 16 | "chill" | | 17 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1061 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 996 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite her own" | | 1 | "felt like stone pressing on her chest" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.828 | | wordCount | 1061 | | matches | | 0 | "not just thickened, but pinched tight like breath held too long" | | 1 | "no longer a suggestion but" | | 2 | "No reply but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 25.26 | | std | 17.23 | | cv | 0.682 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 24 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was barred" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.179 | | matches | | 0 | "But from the first step past the stones, the air had shifted — not just thickened, but pinched tight like breath held too long." | | 1 | "An unfamiliar song—barely a whisper—slithered through the trees." | | 2 | "Her eyes flashed toward a movement flickering against the edge of vision — a shape, slender and shifting, vanishing the moment she blinked." | | 3 | "The wrongness drew taut; the sensation of eyes slicing through the dark no longer a suggestion but a certainty." | | 4 | "The trees leaned in closer; the shadows deepened." | | 5 | "The pendant flared—an almost imperceptible glow, like a dying ember in its depths." | | 6 | "Not a breeze; something alive." | | 7 | "Her blue eyes scanned fast, catching a flicker — no, a pair of flickers — high above, disappearing like smoke in a gale." | | 8 | "Footsteps—a careful shuffle—from beyond a thicket." | | 9 | "She touched the Heartstone—its warmth like a breath, fragrant and fierce." | | 10 | "From the corner of her eye, a flash of movement—a figure, stretched and skewed, stepping between the wildflowers yet refusing form." | | 11 | "She glanced down—dark stains soaked the soil, fresh and cruel, but no sound of dripping filled the quiet." | | 12 | "A figure emerged from the darkness—ethereal and light as smoke—too tall, limbs too long, hunched beneath a tangled crown of twigs." | | 13 | "Malphora — her oldest name, the one she buried beneath layers of ordinary." | | 14 | "A sudden crash behind her ripped the night apart — a twist of branches, a snap of bone perhaps, or a door slamming." | | 15 | "Behind her, a chorus of whispers spiraled — broken promises, shattered names, and calls to some dark forgotten debt." | | 16 | "She dared a glance back—darkness bloomed, swallowing the light." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1004 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "twisted, flower-strewn path." |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.037848605577689244 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008964143426294821 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 11.17 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 53.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.35789473684210527 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 80.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere close, a delicate rustling." | | 1 | "too light and measured." |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused just before the" | | 1 | "It pulsed softly against her" | | 2 | "They always said these blooms" | | 3 | "She moved forward, careful, each" | | 4 | "Her eyes flashed toward a" | | 5 | "Her voice was low, steady," | | 6 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent-shaped" | | 7 | "She remembered her father’s low" | | 8 | "She swore the pulse in" | | 9 | "Her blue eyes scanned fast," | | 10 | "She drew a breath slow" | | 11 | "It danced among the branches" | | 12 | "She swung her body around," | | 13 | "Her grip on the pendant" | | 14 | "She touched the Heartstone—its warmth" | | 15 | "Her lungs burned with sharp" | | 16 | "She glanced down—dark stains soaked" | | 17 | "it said, voice like broken" | | 18 | "it whispered, drifting closer" | | 19 | "She forced the words, steadying" |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 32.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The undergrowth whispered beneath Aurora’s" | | 1 | "The faint bloom of wildflowers" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "She paused just before the" | | 4 | "It pulsed softly against her" | | 5 | "Time was supposed to bend" | | 6 | "The Fae Grove, Eva’s whispered" | | 7 | "Aurora’s breath caught on the" | | 8 | "Every nerve prickled with unwelcome" | | 9 | "An unfamiliar song—barely a whisper—slithered" | | 10 | "Something wasn’t right." | | 11 | "The path before her curled" | | 12 | "They always said these blooms" | | 13 | "She moved forward, careful, each" | | 14 | "Her eyes flashed toward a" | | 15 | "The wrongness drew taut; the" | | 16 | "Her voice was low, steady," | | 17 | "The trees leaned in closer;" | | 18 | "The pendant flared—an almost imperceptible" | | 19 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent-shaped" |
| | ratio | 0.855 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed softly against her palm, a faint warmth that thrummed like a cautious heartbeat." | | 1 | "The path before her curled unexpectedly, a ribbon of moss and leaf litter twisting between towering oaks and thickets that shimmered with impossible wildflowers…" | | 2 | "She remembered her father’s low voice, warning her about places that whispered promises but swallowed souls." | | 3 | "The being’s eyes glowed, pits of pale blue ice that froze her blood in place." | | 4 | "The pendant shone hot against her chest, warning, pulsing frantic." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.133 | | leniency | 0.267 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |