Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRKAEYMYMCSKFWDEMF5PAZ

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The familiar introvert shuffle. Shoulders hunching. Eyes darting towards the exit. Aurora had seen it hundreds of times at 35,000 feet. And now here it was, lurking between the banter of Soho punters. An old friend afraid of new silences. But Rory was no stranger to awkward reunions. Been there, done that, still wore the ex-boyfriend-shaped scar. She stood up, pasting on her best "I'm not actually a murderer, no matter what Google says" smile, and walked over to their table tucked in the pub's far corner. "Eva," she said with forced cheer. Her voice came out more unhinged than welcoming. "What a crazy coincidence running into you here. Of all bloody places." Silence clung between them, thick and uncomfortable. Rory glanced around self-consciously. *Come on, brain. Channel your inner Liam Neeson. Crack some witty one-liner to break the ice before she flees to the loos.* Eva broke the silence first. "You look good, Rory. Must suit you, this... প্রধান ম্যানে জমাট 밴feito life." Rory snorted, finger jabbing in Eva's direction. "You too, mate. Laconian was never really your colour." Visions of their college dorm, floral bedspreads and minging GCSE notes floated unbidden. Sunlight glinted off Eva's hair. *Still the same chestnut shade, curly, unconfined behind ears now.* She cleared her throat. "Erm, not to ruin the moment, but what are you even doing A. Here? and B. In London?" Rory perched on the chair opposite, thighs twanging with unfamiliar tension. Pint glasses sweat-marked the table. She guessed that one was Eva's - darkest dregs, surface foam long gone - and the other, her own. That strong British ale, swirls of head and tongue-tingling bitterness. Best stuff, for this kind of reunion. The kind you needed something simple to hold onto, to keep you from running for the nearest crash mat. "I was going to ask you the same," Eva replied, swiping at a nonexistent crumb on the table. Her long nails glinted with a new sheen. Clear varnish with an almost-clawlike needle point. Rory used to paint hers the same shade. Red, if she remember right. Claret rum blood. She suppressed a shudder and focused back on the topic at hand. "London's good. London's same as ever. Crowded and expensive and stressful and everything else you'd expect." "Thought Delhi was calling you back, though." Rory arced her eyebrows. "Cheap, if the rents there. Sarah told me you'd had some amazing leads from Mumbai designers..." She let the comment hang heavy, open-ended. Eva parsed the air dismissively. "That didn't really pan out. At least, not in the way I expected." Her gaze drifted, dark circles suddenly obvious against her glasses. Rory frowned, uncertain. *Not the typical 'wild success' story she'd been led to believe, then. Worked that out from Facebook hints mostly. Obvious indicators like blog posts, events, collaborations. Promotions built upon ever-escalating progress.* Rory sat back, considering this. She'd imagined Eva tucked into some bohemian Mumbai flat - splashes of colour, snippets of glittering silks, a whirlwind of vibrant spices and street markets. Instead, she saw the flat she'd shared in Manchester three summers ago. Stripped wallpaper, leaky gas pipe, Eva hunched over her laptop with an increasingly familiar frown. "I'm sorry," she mumbled, unsure. "Thought... Going by your work online, seemed the logical-" Eva cut her off with a sharp gesture. "It wasn't all it was cracked up to be. The big break, you know." Shrugging her bag up her shoulder, ducking her head as if she could tuck away the whole conversation and dip it later. "What about you, anyway? When's the last time we got to just…catch up. Or rather, why’d you even deign to try, is maybe the better question…" Rory blinked. *Is this what it felt like, to be cornered? Caged panic fluttering beneath your skin. Claws scrabbling against walls as you backed incrementally further into a hole of your own making?* Shaking her head slightly, she met Eva's gaze head-on. *No.* She willed herself to keep cool. This was not a conversation she was eager to have. The same old expositorium, where their old "battle lines" were drawn and they were just standing on opposite sides of the room, both becoming increasingly stubborn as the seconds ticked by. She could still remember how those eyes had glinted in college, spark an unmistakable crackle through the air between them. Just two lost souls trying to navigate the chaos of their twenties. And now, what? Broken pieces of what used to be? The memories weighed heavy on Rory's shoulders. She had meant for this reunion to be different. Lighter. More casual than the tightrope she now felt they were balancing on. But maybe those seeds had been sown years ago, before either of them had fully understood what was really going on between them. Their college friendship had been built on late-night snacks, wine, and a shared love for the written word. They'd spend hours poring over essays together, laughing over silly memes, and dreaming of all the places they'd go, things they'd accomplish. But life, as they say, got in the way. Rory had floundered, one too many times, unable to keep up with Eva's meteoric rise. She'd watched from the sidelines, supportive but distant, as Eva's career grew and she fought to maintain her own sense of self. Their conversations had grown more spaced out over the years. Texts came less frequently. Calls were harder to schedule. Until eventually, it was just too hard to reach out at all. Now, here they were face to face, the weight of years stretching between them like an uncrossable chasm. And yet, some instinct compelled Rory toward crossing it, drawing her in. Maybe it was the nostalgia, the memories of easier times. Perhaps it was the remnant of their shared history, those unspoken bonds that still whispered through the cracks of her heart. But she felt that tug, irresistible, pulling them ever closer like magnets stuck in an endless, tortuous attraction. Eva's gaze pierced her, seeing past the surface absurdities. The pokes and jabs, the barriers thrown up years ago in self-defense. * quotient annoyance measured x montage flashbacks = fannish disdain.* But beneath the layers, there was a recognition. An echo of something once shared. *Consequences of time denied.* Rory thought. *Ripple effects smooshing hard against walls of what's possible in this moment. Chance for new connection against old railing method of escape.* She took a deep breath, leaning forward slightly. "So...tell me about India," she tried, changing the subject. Eva paused, then shrugged. "There's not too much to say. Except...maybe there's nothing that can be said." She swirled the last drops of her pint, watching the golden liquid, dark at the bottom with settled-in richness. "Anyway..." She straightened, giving a tight-lipped smile. "Heard you left home. Goosehouse and the Queen Mother moving down south or some such." "Fair, fair." Rory nodded. "Not quite anything so grand. But nah, they kicked off." She sighed. *Heh. Guessing that's telltale enough for starters?* "Didn't remain on our terms, exactly. Get into any of that?" *rhetorical, not really.* "Fairly knotty stuff, ending as it did. Ugh, I'd rather not think on it further really." *she had made it clear she didn't want this to be the conversation today, but how long until it was, she already knew.* *Would it always be?* "D'you remember, actually, that first time we met?" She continued. "Hmm?" *Muscle memory, flick of tongue. Warming to the topic, the anticipation even, despite herself. Looking for that hook, window, crack in the wall. Anything for a way to salvage this thing.* "We were just two lost mites in the punk sodden streets of Camden." *Nihilistic drollery as emo glitter elsewhere. Clear from the start.* "An expansive world to fill, each being the ear for the other to spill into." *Hurts to breathe back through the years. Remember what it felt like. Give voice to this half-forgotten shrieking beast, rumbling Jefferson'sాష్ట్రλήány fighting to be listened to. To be heard is gracing such an act with dignity.* "There was this girl." *her words echoing, hiccups and gasped laughter.* "She asked how I did my eyeshadow." *definition of a soul being wrenched. The restless hollowing.* "I told her she didn't, she wasn't ready. Far from. This was more than I could even begin to convey." *of pinpricks and puckering pale. The cistern, in giant petrochemical men.* *Heroin was one choice. Working in a lab was another.* *Same vs. different. Ramsbottom veneered through sleepless haze, saving when prospects crystalised. Could have fucked me, scum of the 32 £, the loser.* "Guess I better wait until later for all that," *pants, knowing better than to risk overstaying the hospitality.* *Leaving everything else aside.* "Good to see yah." *postscript full of cod endings about what futures couldn't sustain.* "Wasn't quite what I expected.." *or ache for.* *Moving forward from this moment, how to define success?* *Or failure when it's uncompleted?*... * saved, at least, the consequence of either.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count5
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
4
word"sense of"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"anticipation"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
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1"silence"
2"tension"
3"navigate"
4"sense of"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"measured"
8"echo"
9"anticipation"
10"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
91.95% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences2
adjustedGibberishSentences2
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0.017
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0"\"You look good, Rory. Must suit you, this... প্রধান ম্যানে জমাট 밴feito life.\""
1"Give voice to this half-forgotten shrieking beast, rumbling Jefferson'sాష్ట్రλήány fighting to be listened to."
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans25
markdownWords335
totalWords1496
ratio0.224
matches
0"Come on, brain. Channel your inner Liam Neeson. Crack some witty one-liner to break the ice before she flees to the loos."
1"Still the same chestnut shade, curly, unconfined behind ears now."
2"Not the typical 'wild success' story she'd been led to believe, then. Worked that out from Facebook hints mostly. Obvious indicators like blog posts, events, collaborations. Promotions built upon ever-escalating progress."
3"Is this what it felt like, to be cornered? Caged panic fluttering beneath your skin. Claws scrabbling against walls as you backed incrementally further into a hole of your own making?"
4"No."
5"Consequences of time denied."
6"Ripple effects smooshing hard against walls of what's possible in this moment. Chance for new connection against old railing method of escape."
7"Heh. Guessing that's telltale enough for starters?"
8"rhetorical, not really."
9"she had made it clear she didn't want this to be the conversation today, but how long until it was, she already knew."
10"Would it always be?"
11"Muscle memory, flick of tongue. Warming to the topic, the anticipation even, despite herself. Looking for that hook, window, crack in the wall. Anything for a way to salvage this thing."
12"Nihilistic drollery as emo glitter elsewhere. Clear from the start."
13"Hurts to breathe back through the years. Remember what it felt like. Give voice to this half-forgotten shrieking beast, rumbling Jefferson'sాష్ట్రλήány fighting to be listened to. To be heard is gracing such an act with dignity."
14"her words echoing, hiccups and gasped laughter."
15"definition of a soul being wrenched. The restless hollowing."
16"of pinpricks and puckering pale. The cistern, in giant petrochemical men."
17"Heroin was one choice. Working in a lab was another."
18"Same vs. different. Ramsbottom veneered through sleepless haze, saving when prospects crystalised. Could have fucked me, scum of the 32 £, the loser."
19"pants, knowing better than to risk overstaying the hospitality."
20"Leaving everything else aside."
21"postscript full of cod endings about what futures couldn't sustain."
22"or ache for."
23"Moving forward from this moment, how to define success?"
24"Or failure when it's uncompleted?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1153
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Rory14
Liam1
Neeson1
Eva14
Sunlight1
Pint1
British1
Worked1
Facebook1
Mumbai1
Manchester1
Shaking1
Muscle1
Warming1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Liam"
2"Neeson"
3"Eva"
4"Sunlight"
5"Pint"
places
0"Soho"
1"Mumbai"
2"Manchester"
globalScore0.893
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like, to be cornered"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.668
wordCount1496
matches
0"not to ruin the moment, but what are you even doing A"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"felt that tug"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean48.26
std29.12
cv0.603
sampleLengths
040
147
226
333
418
544
633
760
849
928
1034
1162
1257
1314
1470
1549
1661
1774
1840
1946
2031
2130
2249
2345
2436
259
2658
2780
28174
2977
3022
92.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences114
matches
0"were drawn"
1"been sown"
2"been built"
3"being wrenched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was, lurking"
1"were balancing"
95.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences120
ratio0.017
matches
0"She guessed that one was Eva's - darkest dregs, surface foam long gone - and the other, her own."
1"She'd imagined Eva tucked into some bohemian Mumbai flat - splashes of colour, snippets of glittering silks, a whirlwind of vibrant spices and street markets."
90.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount494
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.05060728744939271
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012145748987854251
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean12.47
std9.95
cv0.799
sampleLengths
04
12
25
310
412
57
68
79
830
96
108
1112
127
134
143
155
1614
175
1813
197
2022
215
2210
234
2429
255
2619
2710
287
2919
3018
318
327
338
345
353
3612
3716
3811
3923
405
4123
423
4312
447
457
465
475
4825
4912
99.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.675
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners81
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences106
matches
0"Instead, she saw the flat"
1"Just two lost souls trying"
2"More casual than the tightrope"
3"Maybe it was the nostalgia,"
4"Perhaps it was the remnant"
ratio0.047
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences106
matches
0"She stood up, pasting on"
1"she said with forced cheer"
2"Her voice came out more"
3"She cleared her throat."
4"She guessed that one was"
5"Her long nails glinted with"
6"She suppressed a shudder and"
7"She let the comment hang"
8"Her gaze drifted, dark circles"
9"She'd imagined Eva tucked into"
10"she mumbled, unsure"
11"She could still remember how"
12"She had meant for this"
13"Their college friendship had been"
14"They'd spend hours poring over"
15"She'd watched from the sidelines,"
16"Their conversations had grown more"
17"she tried, changing the subject"
18"She swirled the last drops"
19"She straightened, giving a tight-lipped"
ratio0.189
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences106
matches
0"The familiar introvert shuffle."
1"Eyes darting towards the exit."
2"Aurora had seen it hundreds"
3"An old friend afraid of"
4"She stood up, pasting on"
5"she said with forced cheer"
6"Her voice came out more"
7"Silence clung between them, thick"
8"Rory glanced around self-consciously."
9"Eva broke the silence first."
10"Rory snorted, finger jabbing in"
11"Visions of their college dorm,"
12"Sunlight glinted off Eva's hair."
13"She cleared her throat."
14"Rory perched on the chair"
15"Pint glasses sweat-marked the table."
16"She guessed that one was"
17"That strong British ale, swirls"
18"The kind you needed something"
19"Eva replied, swiping at a"
ratio0.604
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Now, here they were face"
1"To be heard is gracing"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory perched, thighs twanging with unfamiliar tension"
1"she mumbled, unsure"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she mumbled (mumble)"
1"She sighed (sigh)"
2"Guessing that's telltale enough for starters?* *rhetorical (guess be)"
3"She continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.267
87.5778%