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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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The dim lighting of The Raven's Nest barely illuminated the rosted faces of its patrons. Thick, acrid clouds of cigarette smoke drifted lazily in the air before settling thickly on the shoulder of a dazed Rory, who absently brushed the ash from her shoulder with an annoyed grunt. Her face was an unreadable mask of grihm determination Recent events had left dark shadows under her eyes, and her battered skin, now faintly purple, told a story of resilience and a brush with death. "Double gin, neat. If it's not too much trouble," she muttered to the aging barkeep, who gave her a concerned nod. He slid her the drink and she threw the harsh liquor back in one swallow, savoring the painful burn. She didn't even shudder, an impressive feat given the cheap quality of the swill Meanwhile, Silas Blackwood sat pensively, idly cleaning a brass pipe while faux listening to his wife's complaining. He was an aging spymaster who ran The Raven's Nest as hisana front for his network of contacts. By some unknown quirk of fate that none had ever seen before, the former MI6 field agent retired after a boath-ed operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. After assuming identiy as a garage mechanic to avoid MI6, he traveled up and down the United Kingdom before settling down as a bar owner in Soho. The bar was a popular haunt for the derelicts of society; the broken, the beaten, and the lost. In the shadows of its booths lurked ex-spies, savvy journalists, and disavowed traitors-all tying to forget their demons and mistakes. Rory was dangerously close to succumbing to the same fate. As she brooded, her eyes fell upon an acquaintance from her old life booting through the doors. Liam Redmond. Her best friend's ex. Still just as disheveled and handsome as ever, with his electrifying mess of chestnut curls and impossible dimples. In Rory's opinion, he looked like a scoundrel who'd ravished half of the women in London, if the tabloids were to be believed. Probably true. Since university, he had opened a popular weblog, penning juicy tales about his still ongoing playboy lifestyle while making them pay for his lack of talent by buying his books or donating to his causes. No doubt his latest conquest was how he convinced the tabloids that their celebrity trysts weren't his fault. Vain, promiscuous, and as far from a first-class sod as possible. Why did you have to run into him at Silas' bar of all places? If you showed an ounce of interest, he would probably kidnap you somewhere for his future fame. Rory decided it was best to ignore him this time. Without a backwards glance, she disappeared into the dimly lit corners. Her drink was long gone, but much of the time they were on the house; hence, they weren't on the best of terms. She toyed with her phone while waiting for her order of fish and chips. Her mind wandered over to Liam once more, in no small part due to his sudden reappearance. Where exactly were things between them though? He used to try to talk with her about things like marriage and a future together, remember? After all, hadn't she bringing it up with her best friend, Evelyn Penwood? Her continuity as a fictional character surely extended beyond common sense, if such indulgence were permitted. Disgusted with her fleeting memories, she elbowed a man who stooped too close to her table. He mumbled an apology before scurrying out with his beer SLAMMING the door behind him. She sighed deeply and took a sip of her drink. Evidently, he was not eager to return after being mocked by her friend for a second time. Finally, a dish of deep-fried oily nuggets killed her jittery stomach while the sound of country music fades into the background. "There you are, love. Just what the doctor ordered, right?" Liam grinned like a Cheshire cat as he strolled up without invitation and slung himself into the chair across from her. How could such a loathsome face make her heartbeat quicken without her saying a word? Forgive her for not being used to having such an unexpected visitor, especially not him, walk straight into Silas' bar and plop down as if she had invited him to a casual, last-minute dinnercontract. The delicious aroma of crispy fish and potatoes is nearly smothered by the slightly superior smile on his face, which he wore like a badge of honor. It was as if he secretly enjoyed the chaos that seemed to always follow him around. What puzzled Rory, however, was how he had come all this way with such great timing and managed not to spill any of the wine he was holding in his hand, despite her best efforts to ignore him. After hearing from his ex-father-in-law about Ronan's death, she had struggled to maintain a brave face throughout Evelyn's wedding preparations. Now that her childhood sweetheart had gone cold, the one-sided feud between them that had lasted for years felt like a petty squabble in the light of eternity. Rory looked at Liam with a vulnerability she hadn't shown in a long time. One lost in the shadow of death and the resolution to live, no matter how cautiously. Fate had been unkind to her these past years, but perhaps there was still room for a reckoning. She drained her glass of water and delicately dabbed the corners of her lips with a paper napkin. "What brings you to these parts? There must be hundreds of wine bars you haven't dazzled the pretty girls at yet." Liam's presence was always a pleasant--if unchosen--diversion from the monotony of routine The lack of conflict between them made her wonder if she had imagined their past rifts After all, in their prime, no stone was left unturned as far as calling each other out on each and every sin. "Can't a man miss his childhood companion more than his fancy weblog?" Liam took a swig from the bottle before wiping the runaway crumb thoughtfully. "I've got the evening off, and after a hard day's work, what better way to relax than with the dulcet tones of country music curling up your spine?" "Next, you'll have me believing you're a comprised of rotted roots songs and wet wooden floors," Liam's hand shot out and playfully grabbed her chin between his thumb and forefinger. The unexpected intimacy set off an involuntary shiver down her spine despite herself. This was Liam Redmond, the irresistible charmer who could strike up a conversation with the most rock art. Hard to ignore that spell, no matter who was casting it. "Give it a chance, my sweet," he purred, his half-hopeful gaze boring into her eyes. "The men who frequent here are just looking to escape their troubles-not to flirt with the one girl who hasn't warmed up to them yet." The sudden surge of sudden romance left Rory speechless for a moment. She gathered herself, took a sip from her drink, and smiled drolly back at him. "A gentleman would have poured me another drink before making pass. Consider yourself warned." "You're right, of course," Liam said with mock innocence. "Evelyn always said your heart was made of cut glass." His eyes roamed over her face curiously. "Spines of steel, aren't we? So, what trouble are we running from tonight?" Rory could feel the weight of her past pressing down on her, threatening to crush her fragile equilibrium. She wanted to ignore it, to throw herself into the inferno of passion Liam was offering, if only for a night. But she knew better. He was no good for her... and heaven help him if he tried anything funny with her. Liam allowed no other seat-quite rudely, in Rory's opinion. She shifted on the cushion uneasily. Even in her most sober moments, she dreaded running into Liam. Which had been precisely zilch so far. As it stands, she was waiting for her father, Brendan Carter, to show up and join he conversations. As the happy couple were all set up for their first dance of the reception. His mere presence made her feel flustered and out of sorts, like a young maiden with stars in her eyes.uart about her father's arrival was palpable - even if Brendan was rather relaxed that night, he still enjoyed putting up a bluff for his daughter's favor. It is a secret that Evelyn, her closest childhood friend, never really had fondness of her father in the first place. At one point, she had even quit working with him at his law firm due to a disagreement over someone can't recall exactly. "Wynters and tweed don't belong together." Despite her wiser observations about them, Evelyn remained silent about her background with the Redmond family's long history of glorious rebirths after absolute ruination and collapse. An unpleasant comparison now made Rory want to kick her to the curb, knowing that she was an unlikely confidante. Then she heard Brendan's voice call out to drown out the racket. "Liam, love! You found her!" Let's drug Liam and spill some dark secrets over the course of the night." We're going straight to hell for damage control." Liam frowned. "What's that supposed to mean?" "Nothing," Rory said quickly. "Nothing at all." She glanced at Brendan, who was making his way through the crowd, shaking her head discreetly. "I'm just talking rubbish as usual," she added with an insincere chuckle. "Must be late, for all the nonsense swirling around my head." She watched her father smoothly maneuver his way over. With his silver hair and air of aristocratic refinement, Brendan Carter cut an imposing figure. Yet beneath his suave exterior lay a heart of gold. One of Evelyn loved to gossip and find fault with his friends and family. One surprise visit from Liam, and Rory was barely holding it together. Evelyn wouldn't approve of this turn of events at all. Liam's eyes narrowed, shrewd astuteness glinting in their depths. "What hidden pasts once linked you two, unless you conveniently forget?" The silver fox's presence in a place like this was enough to rouse the suspicion of anyone who'd spent time in Brendan's prickly shadow. Which was somewhat a resemblance to Liam, though a few decades apart. "All in good time, darling," Rory replied airily, already feeling her anxiety rising sharply at the prospect of Evelyn walking in with her husband on her arm. You've already wormed your way into this little intimate meeting, now let's keep it at that. She hated herself for the way she always found herself wanting to confide in Liam, even after he'd shown her countless times that he valued advances over passive thoughts In the cutthroat world of the British tabloids, she'd taken enough emotional punches to last a lifetime. But Brendan's presence in the bar was another matter altogether-just a whisker skinny of her deepest secrets thatocket at random and banned from public consumption. Rory smoothed down the front of her dress as her father's voice rose above the din of noise. He hailed Brendan Carter, her presumed father figure, who was forging his way toward the corner booth with the help of a cane. Based on her observations before they grew up, he looked like he was in his early fifties, maybe even late forties, making him only a decade older at best. Though, their relationship was far from affectionate, to put it lightly. Instead, Brendan's presence bumped into Liam like a seriously dangerous game of rough and tumble. The familiarity with which he made himself at home, not-so-gracefully squeezing himself into the both of them seating. He radiated charm and smarmy wiles at every second he arrived. Highly unusual for the analytically detached personality Brendan was rumored to embody off court and on. "Ah, Brendan," Uncle Liam beamed, just behind her father's back. "The prodigal snob returns. What a surprise to see you in a dive like this." "Ah, Li-am," Brendan drawled, mispronouncing his former best friend's name with a sneer. "I've been away at work... In court, of course. You should know all about being away." His words dripped with double entendre and cheeky familiarity that made Rory's fingernails dig into her palms. Brendan never bothered with subtlety around Liam. "Speaking of being away," she said quickly, clearing her throat to diffuse the tension, "wasn't there someone you were meant to be twirling around the dance floor not long ago?" Rory asked pointedly, earning herself a throaty abandon of a great deal of amusement from her bar stool. It was well known that Evelyn absolutely loathed dancing with her father and preferred the company of her friends anytime possible. Moms and daughter had that much in common, though they would likely never admit it aloud. "We both know Evelyn would rather be anywhere but on that dance floor," Brendan chuckled mirthlessly, raising an eyebrow. "Tell me, Rory, have you seen the new bride tonight?" His tired eyes glanced over at his daughter, who shrugged with an innocent smile evaporated from her face the moment her attention was caught. It dawned on all what exactly was happening. Evelyn knew all to well, her best friend's rebellious spirit-amplely expressed during their wild university years in London. "Wedding preparations and marriage always make grown women act like they're secretly eight years old-at least for a day." Liam leaned in to smirk, clearly oblivious to the fact that the topic in question was his current bride-to-be's mother. Judging by his bold words, Evelyn had already spilled dark secrets buried in the Redmond family tree. Hence, the irony was not lost on the juicy bits of resentment. His comment irked Rory, who rolled her eyes despite herself. "Quite a scandalous observation to make." Evelyn had confided in her, if only because Rory was the only one she trusted with the particulars about Evelyn's rift with her father. And now Liam was poking at barely scarred wounds. "I'm just glad the girl has grown up to be so...directional and unwilling to plan for failure." Liam's hand hovered casually near the wine bottle, his gaze unfocused. Brendan looked between them with an arched eyebrow, an unfamiliar expression flitting across his face before he hid it behind his mask of social grace. Rory gritted her teeth, feeling her stomach churn with unease. She knew Evelyn's wild past all too well, which was the reason behind her hurtful comments about Brendan. Evelyn had grown up learning to always follow the rules and never make waves-but now she was done with it all, chasing a life that looked good on paper without any real substance behind it. Liam's presence reminded her of their own troubled family history, where simple fights quickly escalated into full-blown wars. And yet, here they were, caught in an awkward moment of silence that stretched on uncomfortably. It seemed to last an eternity before Brendan finally broke the tense silence with a polite cough, either oblivious to or ignoring the underlying emotions thick in the air. "Well then." Brendan eased himself out of his seat with a slight grimace, patting his pocket presumably for cigarettes or matches. "We have a rather long night ahead of us, don't we?" His gaze flicked between Liam and Rory, daring them to disagree. But they both knew better than to contradict him, even if the idea of spending an entire evening together made Rory's skin crawl with tension. It was clear that Brendan was hiding something from them, perhaps even from himself. Rory could see the way his eyes kept darting away from her gaze, as if trying to avoid unspoken truths from resurfacing. "Some wine, my dear?" Brendan held up the bottle, uncorking it slightly to allow the scent to fill the air with its sweet aroma. Rory watched as Liam reached out, his fingers brushing against the material slightly, but Brendan had already momentarily kept the bottle of to much interest. "So, exactly how far has your history with Evelyn gone?" Liam asked, nonchalantly. "Aren't you supposed to be some sort of matchmaker for them? Why aren't you out there guiding her through the night, if you're supposed to be so pivotal in the outcome of her life's choices?" The question hovered in the charged atmosphere between the two of them. Brendan's eyes narrowed, fixing Liam with a piercing glare. "While I appreciate your genuine curiosity in my family's current affairs, I'm sure you've discovered that sometimes the best way tobris the right direction is not to interfere at all." "Even if it leads her away from you?" Liam pressed, the gleam in his eye suggesting he had no intention of dropping the line of questioning. "Especially then," Brendan said firmly, a note of steel in his voice. "The woman needs to find her own path, even if it means walking away from everything I've built. I can't hold her hostage forever, now can I?" His gaze drifted to Rory for a brief moment before he looked away again, an unreadable expression flickering across his face. Rory shifted uncomfortably, feeling the weight of unspoken words pressing down on her. It was clear that Brendan was grappling with something far heavier than liquor or family drama. "Have you two actually dated?" Rory interjected, trying to change the topic. She'd always been curious about the underlying tension between the two men, though she never dared to ask Brendan directly. "In a manner of speaking," Liam replied with a smirk, never one to shy away from a loaded question. "Pre-eye sexy, freshly divorced wannautehouse, then headed straight for Wales. Complete a circular tour, if you will." Rory's eyes widened. "Brendan, I had no idea you were ever married," she said, struggling to keep the shock from her voice. Brendan was always such a devout bachelor, who never spoke of any romantic attachments beyond casual flings. The idea of him settling down with someone was unfathomable. "For a very brief spell," Brendan said dismissively, his jaw clenching. "It didn't work out. And besides, Liam tends to exaggerate." He shot the man a sharp look, clearly still nursing a grudge over their tangled history. But Liam just shrugged, unperturbed by Brendan's cold demeanor. "What can I say? I have a talent for rubbing people the wrong way." His eyes slid sideways to Rory, a glimmer of mischief in their depths. "Especially the ones I care about most." Rory felt her heart skip a beat at the loaded statement, wondering just how much history these two shared. And how it connected to her own complicated feelings about Evelyn and Brendan. "A talent only you could pull off so effortlessly," Brendan said dryly, taking a long sip from his glass. The tension between them thickened, suffocating even the dim lighting in the corner booth. "I don't know," Rory piped up, trying to diffuse the growing animosity between the two men. "Sometimes a little antagonism goes a long way in keeping things interesting." She met Liam's gaze, feeling a flicker of something undeniable pass between them. The memory of their near kiss just a few days ago still lingered, a ghost of a moment that had sent a jolt of electricity through his body. "I'm glad you see it that way," Liam said smoothly, leaning forward so their faces were practically touching. "I've always believed that opposites attract. Sparking a flame that can never be extinguished." His words sent a shiver down Rory's spine, the intensity of his stare making it difficult to breathe. She could feel Brendan's eyes on them, burning into their shared intimacy with barely concealed suspicion. "Well, I for one think sparks are highly overrated," Brendan interjected abruptly, clearly irritated by their blatant flirtation. "There's nothing quite like a good, old-fashioned fight to keep things exciting." Rory couldn't help but roll her eyes at his dry humor, though she appreciated the attempt at tension-breaking. She knew Brendan well enough to recognize his need for control, even in the face of chaos. "I suppose that's one way to put it," Liam agreed, his gaze never leaving Rory's face. "But sometimesYou should stop there. The night wore on, with Brendan alternating between sullen brooding and forced joviality. Liam, meanwhile, couldn't seem to keep his eyes off Rory, his gaze following her every move like a hawk stalking its prey. She felt the weight of his stare, the heat of his proximity, and it made her uneasy. Despite his charm and charisma, Liam was a walking red flag. And she was determined not to fall for his tricks again. As they sat there, sipping their drinks and making awkward small talk, Rory couldn't shake the feeling that something was off. Brendan was usually the life of the party, spinning tales of his latest courtroom victories and Legal eagle buddies. But tonight, he seemed distant, his mind clearly preoccupied with something else. "Well, I should be off," Rory announced abruptly, sliding out of her seat. "Early start tomorrow and all that." She tried to ignore the look of disappointment that flashed across Liam's face. "Of course," Brendan said smoothly, signaling for the check. "I'll see you both at the wedding tomorrow?" Rory nodded, feeling a pang of guilt at the thought of Evelyn's big day looming ahead. She'd been so caught up in her own drama that she hadn't spent nearly enough time with her best friend, offering support and encouragement. And now it was too late. "Indeed," Liam concurred, standing up to shake Brendan's hand with a firm grip. "Though I must say, I'm looking forward to getting you both in front of a camera. The public deserves to see the whole dynamic at play." Rory rolling her eyes and faking a polite smile. "We'll have to see about that. In any case, it was good to see you again Brendan. Take care of yourself." She gave him a quick hug before turning to leave, eager to escape the suffocating atmosphere of the bar and the dual weights of her troubled past and uncertain future. As she stepped out into the chilly London night, Rory couldn't shake the feeling that something profound had just shifted in her life. Brendan and Liam's strained history, Evelyn's ill-fated marriage, and her own tangled web of secrets and lies... It all left her feeling vulnerable, exposed, and completely alone. Almost like how she imagined it would be for Rory if life in the age of friendship and family had been slower than ever. With Brendan leaving for the Arts Council, and her best friend tied down in a risky marriage, Rory was left alone with nothing but her unsettling thoughts and naive trusting heart. She was glad that her family had also sent her away from home when she was younger. But that was probably why it felt so easy to confide in Evelyn She shivered, pulling her coat tighter around her shoulders as she walked down the dark street. There was no denying it anymore: she was falling for Liam Redmond, despite all her best efforts to the contrary. And it scared her more than anything in this world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags44
adverbTagCount13
adverbTags
0"Rory said quickly [quickly]"
1"Rory replied airily [airily]"
2"Uncle Liam beamed just [just]"
3"she said quickly [quickly]"
4"Brendan chuckled mirthlessly [mirthlessly]"
5"Liam's hand hovered casually [casually]"
6"Brendan said firmly [firmly]"
7"Brendan said dismissively [dismissively]"
8"Brendan said dryly [dryly]"
9"Liam said smoothly [smoothly]"
10"Brendan interjected abruptly [abruptly]"
11"Rory announced abruptly [abruptly]"
12"Brendan said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.698
leniency1
rawRatio0.295
effectiveRatio0.295
82.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3889
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count3
6
adverb"sharply"
count1
7
adverb"lightly"
count1
8
adverb"very"
count1
9
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slightly"
2"cautiously"
3"precisely"
4"really"
5"quickly"
6"sharply"
7"lightly"
8"very"
9"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
80.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"The Silver Fox"
39.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3889
totalAiIsms47
found
0
word"unreadable"
count2
1
word"fleeting"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count2
3
word"playfully"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count2
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"dance"
count3
8
word"palpable"
count1
9
word"imposing"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"depths"
count2
12
word"charm"
count2
13
word"tension"
count5
14
word"absolutely"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"eyebrow"
count2
17
word"churn"
count1
18
word"silence"
count2
19
word"flicked"
count1
20
word"unspoken"
count2
21
word"charged"
count1
22
word"firmly"
count1
23
word"grappling"
count1
24
word"clenching"
count1
25
word"flicker"
count1
26
word"intensity"
count1
27
word"determined"
count1
28
word"pang"
count1
29
word"looming"
count1
30
word"profound"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"fleeting"
2"stomach"
3"playfully"
4"down her spine"
5"could feel"
6"weight"
7"dance"
8"palpable"
9"imposing"
10"glinting"
11"depths"
12"charm"
13"tension"
14"absolutely"
15"dancing"
16"eyebrow"
17"churn"
18"silence"
19"flicked"
20"unspoken"
21"charged"
22"firmly"
23"grappling"
24"clenching"
25"flicker"
26"intensity"
27"determined"
28"pang"
29"looming"
30"profound"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"the weight of unspoken words"
3"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences179
matches
0"n with unease"
1"a pang of guilt"
86.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences179
filterMatches
0"wonder"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"seemed to"
2"seem to"
3"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen182
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3867
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions175
wordCount3140
uniqueNames27
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Brendan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Rory41
Recent1
Silas1
Blackwood1
Prague1
United1
Kingdom1
Soho1
Redmond5
London3
Liam41
Evelyn18
Penwood1
Cheshire1
Ronan1
Brendan39
Carter3
Which2
You1
British1
Judging1
Legal1
Arts1
Council1
One3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Redmond"
6"Liam"
7"Evelyn"
8"Penwood"
9"Ronan"
10"Brendan"
11"Carter"
12"Which"
13"You"
places
0"Prague"
1"United"
2"Kingdom"
3"Soho"
4"London"
globalScore0.847
windowScore0.5
46.45% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences169
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"looked like a scoundrel who'd ravished ha"
1"Evidently, he was not eager t"
2"It was as if he secretly enjoyed the chaos that seemed to always follow him around"
3"chaos that seemed to always follow him around"
4"felt like a petty squabble in the light"
5"looked like he was in his early fifties,"
6"as if trying to avoid unspoken truths from resurfacing"
7"seemed distant his mind clearly preoccupied with something else"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3867
matches(empty)
82.06% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences197
matches
0"ignore that spell"
1"relaxed that night"
2"had that much"
3"clear that Brendan"
4"clear that Brendan"
78.03% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean51.56
std21.82
cv0.423
sampleLengths
083
154
293
348
441
578
642
744
884
979
1010
1170
1281
1348
1448
1589
1653
1716
1856
1940
2041
2139
2260
2366
2490
2552
2639
277
2846
2970
3056
3143
3271
3381
3460
3525
3653
3785
3879
3968
4049
4153
4263
4363
4468
4536
4649
4748
4851
4926
95.46% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences179
matches
0"were permitted"
1"being mocked"
2"was rumored"
3"was caught"
4"were, caught"
49.73% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount11
totalVerbs488
matches
0"was holding"
1"was casting"
2"was offering"
3"was waiting"
4"was making"
5"was forging"
6"was happening"
7"was poking"
8"was hiding"
9"was grappling"
10"was falling"
84.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences197
ratio0.02
matches
0"The bar was a popular haunt for the derelicts of society; the broken, the beaten, and the lost."
1"Her drink was long gone, but much of the time they were on the house; hence, they weren't on the best of terms."
2"\"What brings you to these parts? There must be hundreds of wine bars you haven't dazzled the pretty girls at yet.\" Liam's presence was always a pleasant--if unchosen--diversion from the monotony of routine The lack of conflict between them made her wonder if she had imagined their past rifts After all, in their prime, no stone was left unturned as far as calling each other out on each and every sin."
3"His mere presence made her feel flustered and out of sorts, like a young maiden with stars in her eyes.uart about her father's arrival was palpable - even if Brendan was rather relaxed that night, he still enjoyed putting up a bluff for his daughter's favor."
86.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1356
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount75
adverbRatio0.05530973451327434
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.019174041297935103
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean19.63
std15.66
cv0.798
sampleLengths
015
133
235
321
419
531
618
731
827
918
1020
1110
1217
132
144
1518
1623
172
1835
1918
2011
2114
2217
2310
2411
2523
2614
2717
287
2917
3013
3116
3216
3315
3410
3517
3621
3710
3821
3915
4034
4127
4216
4338
4420
4528
4614
4716
4818
4918
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4213197969543147
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners83
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences176
matches
0"Evidently, he was not eager"
1"Finally, a dish of deep-fried"
2"Then she heard Brendan's voice"
3"Instead, Brendan's presence bumped into"
4"Highly unusual for the analytically"
5"Hence, the irony was not"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences176
matches
0"Her face was an unreadable"
1"she muttered to the aging"
2"He slid her the drink"
3"She didn't even shudder, an"
4"He was an aging spymaster"
5"Her best friend's ex."
6"Her drink was long gone,"
7"She toyed with her phone"
8"Her mind wandered over to"
9"He used to try to"
10"Her continuity as a fictional"
11"He mumbled an apology before"
12"She sighed deeply and took"
13"It was as if he"
14"She drained her glass of"
15"he purred, his half-hopeful gaze"
16"She gathered herself, took a"
17"His eyes roamed over her"
18"She wanted to ignore it,"
19"He was no good for"
ratio0.284
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount120
totalSentences176
matches
0"The dim lighting of The"
1"Her face was an unreadable"
2"she muttered to the aging"
3"He slid her the drink"
4"She didn't even shudder, an"
5"He was an aging spymaster"
6"The bar was a popular"
7"Rory was dangerously close to"
8"Her best friend's ex."
9"Rory decided it was best"
10"Her drink was long gone,"
11"She toyed with her phone"
12"Her mind wandered over to"
13"He used to try to"
14"Her continuity as a fictional"
15"He mumbled an apology before"
16"She sighed deeply and took"
17"Liam grinned like a Cheshire"
18"The delicious aroma of crispy"
19"It was as if he"
ratio0.682
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences176
matches
0"If you showed an ounce"
1"Now that her childhood sweetheart"
2"Even in her most sober"
3"Though, their relationship was far"
ratio0.023
74.53% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences115
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"He was an aging spymaster who ran The Raven's Nest as hisana front for his network of contacts."
1"He mumbled an apology before scurrying out with his beer SLAMMING the door behind him."
2"Now that her childhood sweetheart had gone cold, the one-sided feud between them that had lasted for years felt like a petty squabble in the light of eternity."
3"This was Liam Redmond, the irresistible charmer who could strike up a conversation with the most rock art."
4"Rory could feel the weight of her past pressing down on her, threatening to crush her fragile equilibrium."
5"He hailed Brendan Carter, her presumed father figure, who was forging his way toward the corner booth with the help of a cane."
6"His comment irked Rory, who rolled her eyes despite herself."
7"Evelyn had grown up learning to always follow the rules and never make waves-but now she was done with it all, chasing a life that looked good on paper without …"
8"Rory could see the way his eyes kept darting away from her gaze, as if trying to avoid unspoken truths from resurfacing."
9"The memory of their near kiss just a few days ago still lingered, a ghost of a moment that had sent a jolt of electricity through his body."
10"The night wore on, with Brendan alternating between sullen brooding and forced joviality. Liam, meanwhile, couldn't seem to keep his eyes off Rory, his gaze fol…"
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags44
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Liam's hand hovered casually, his gaze unfocused"
1"Liam asked, nonchalantly"
2"Brendan said firmly, a note of steel in his voice"
3"Rory interjected, trying to change the topic"
4"she said, struggling to keep the shock from her voice"
5"Brendan said dismissively, his jaw clenching"
6"His eyes slid, a glimmer of mischief in their depths"
7"Rory piped up, trying to diffuse the growing animosity between the two men"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she added (add)"
2"Brendan drawled (drawl)"
3"Brendan chuckled mirthlessly (chuckle)"
4"Evelyn had (have)"
5"Liam pressed (press)"
6"Rory interjected (interject)"
7"Brendan interjected abruptly (interject)"
8"Liam agreed (agree)"
9"Rory announced abruptly (announce)"
10"Liam concurred (concur)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.73
rawRatio0.478
effectiveRatio0.349
74.5679%