Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRN7406KFE8RQ49ZW7TVJ3

Run Details

Duration:
20.6s
Cost:
$0.002761
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s breath caught as the last light of the fading afternoon dipped beyond the ancient oaks standing guard at the grove’s edge. The faint shimmer in the air rippled before them—barely visible—a restless quiver in the fabric of reality. Isolde stepped forward, silent but for the soft murmur slipping past her lips, words that hovered just out of comprehension. Rory glanced back, fingers grazing the Heartstone pendant at her collarbone; it pulsed softly like a heartbeat, warm against her skin. The amber sky outside felt ordinary compared to the alien pulse of the grove. This place was whispered about in riddles, known only to a few—and now they stood on the threshold. “The Grove lies between,” Isolde said, voice calm and folded with mystery. “A breath caught between Earth and elsewhere.” Nyx flickered behind Rory, contours of shadow bending and unfurling like smoke caught in a sigh. Their faint violet eyes scanned the twisting trunks, dark pools shimmering with unnatural light. Rory’s boots pressed softly onto earth scented thick with damp moss and something older, something untouched by time. Wildflowers, luminous in the dim light, spread like spilled starlight across the ground, petals trembling with iridescence. The air tasted strange—sweet and metallic and deep—pressing against her lungs in slow waves. As they stepped deeper, silencing the world left behind, the standing stones emerged in a ring—gnarled oaks towering like ancient sentinels, their bark etched with runes that pulsed faintly, the glyphs alive with a silver glow. Rory’s fingers twitched, drawing the Fae-Forged Blade from her coat. The moonsilver gleamed faintly, cool and humming with energy, cutting the strange ambient hum that settled over the grove. Nyx’s whisper crackled softly. “Barriers thin here. Watch your thoughts.” Isolde raised her hand, pale lavender eyes gleaming. “Time folds unevenly. What you see may shift when you turn your gaze.” Rory nodded. Around them, the foliage shimmered, colors bending and floating as if caught beneath a watery lens. The wind wove through leaves without sound, a gentle caress that carried no breath. Shadows twisted—sometimes stretching to unnatural lengths, pulling at corners of vision, disappearing before full form took shape. The grove felt untouched yet bristling with presence. “Look,” Isolde said, stepping toward a fallen branch where clusters of tiny blue blossoms bloomed. Their glow began to pulse, ebbing in a pattern, almost like a whispered pulse. Cold settled inside Rory’s chest, not from the temperature, but from some wary thread coiling tight. “This place,” Rory breathed, “it’s alive.” “And not just alive,” Nyx echoed, voice barely there, “aware.” The group pressed on, the path weaving between the oaks underfoot softening into a carpet of blossoming wildflowers glowing faintly under the twilight. Vibrations hummed beneath their feet—subtle but insistent, as if the grove itself was breathing. Rory’s pulse synced with the rhythm. A hum rose, filled with unspoken songs, memories folded into bark and leaf. “What’s haunting me...” Rory said, voice low. “Like I’m being studied.” Isolde nodded, almost too casually. “The Grove watches all who enter. It weighs the heart.” Ahead, a hollow opened within a tree trunk. The rim glowed silver, like a mouth cracked open by moonlight. Rory’s heart hammered as she stepped closer, the pendant’s warmth flaring. Nyx drifted forward, shadow slithering into the hollow like ink spilling into water. Inside, the dark pulsed. Rory reached out — and her hand passed not into wood, but a liquid space, thick and trembling, as if the boundary between worlds bled here. Isolde’s voice blended with the shadows, “This is the Veil’s secret—threads woven here thin, fragile.” Nyx’s form shimmered, the warm amber light outside hiding their true nature. “It draws strength from those who dare to wander.” Rory swallowed. The glow of the Heartstone grew sharper, now a persistent throb that matched something ancient deep in her bones. “What if it pulls us in?” Rory asked. “Traps us?” Isolde’s pale face held a flicker of something sorrowful. “The Grove is no prison—it is a test.” A sound drifted — not wind, not birdcall, but music. Soft, otherworldly, horned notes played on an invisible flute, stirring the hairs on Rory’s neck. The air seemed to ripple with something unseen, something that whispered secrets folded in nettles and dew. Nyx’s violet eyes caught movement—the shadows between leaves curled and danced, taking shape. Figures cloaked in dark leaves and petals briefly emerged, then vanished like breath on glass. Rory shivered and crouched, touching the flowers. Each bloom throbbed gently under her skin’s brush, electric and alive. “Magic,” Nyx mused. “Life bound to something far older than you or I.” Isolde bent forward, voice dropped so low it felt like a thread unraveling in Rory’s ear. “Remember, hope is the key and the lock.” A cold breeze stirred, chilling the warm amber air as dusk deepened. The glowing Wildflowers pulsed for a moment then flickered. Rory’s fingers tightened around the Blade’s hilt. Somewhere deep beneath the roots, a pulse echoed like a heartbeat—steady and unyielding. “Keep your senses open,” she said. “Whatever this place wants, it won’t give freely.” Ahead, the trees thinned into a shimmering veil of silvery mist, glistening and moving like liquid glass. The path beyond was obscured—beckoning and terrifying in equal measure. Nyx lingered at the threshold, voice barely audible: “Once you cross, you belong partly to this place.” Isolde’s gaze met Rory’s, pale lavender eyes steady. “And it belongs to no single realm.” Rory stepped forward, the pendant’s warmth flooding her skin as the Grove’s pulse quickened. The otherworldly place awaited, dark and luminous, a breath caught between worlds where past and present tangled sharp as thorn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount948
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount948
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"pulse"
count6
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"throb"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"otherworldly"
count2
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"unraveling"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"glistening"
count1
20
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"pulse"
2"flickered"
3"scanned"
4"sentinels"
5"etched"
6"whisper"
7"gleaming"
8"shimmered"
9"echoed"
10"unspoken"
11"warmth"
12"throb"
13"flicker"
14"otherworldly"
15"throbbed"
16"electric"
17"unraveling"
18"chilling"
19"glistening"
20"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
98.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords936
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount798
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Nyx8
Rory19
Fae-Forged1
Blade2
Isolde9
Wildflowers2
Ahead2
Grove1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Blade"
4"Isolde"
5"Wildflowers"
6"Grove"
places(empty)
globalScore0.31
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a thread unraveling in Rory’s"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords4.274
wordCount936
matches
0"not from the temperature, but from some wary thread coiling tight"
1"not into wood, but a liquid space, thick"
2"not wind, not birdcall, but music"
3"not birdcall, but music"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean25.3
std15.14
cv0.598
sampleLengths
059
153
219
330
449
565
610
721
849
98
1045
116
1210
1337
1419
1511
1615
1743
1830
1915
2021
2121
2210
2317
2442
2528
2618
2713
2824
2921
3020
3114
3227
3317
3415
3514
3620
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"was whispered"
1"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences77
ratio0.156
matches
0"The faint shimmer in the air rippled before them—barely visible—a restless quiver in the fabric of reality."
1"Rory glanced back, fingers grazing the Heartstone pendant at her collarbone; it pulsed softly like a heartbeat, warm against her skin."
2"This place was whispered about in riddles, known only to a few—and now they stood on the threshold."
3"The air tasted strange—sweet and metallic and deep—pressing against her lungs in slow waves."
4"As they stepped deeper, silencing the world left behind, the standing stones emerged in a ring—gnarled oaks towering like ancient sentinels, their bark etched with runes that pulsed faintly, the glyphs alive with a silver glow."
5"Shadows twisted—sometimes stretching to unnatural lengths, pulling at corners of vision, disappearing before full form took shape."
6"Vibrations hummed beneath their feet—subtle but insistent, as if the grove itself was breathing."
7"Rory reached out — and her hand passed not into wood, but a liquid space, thick and trembling, as if the boundary between worlds bled here."
8"A sound drifted — not wind, not birdcall, but music."
9"Nyx’s violet eyes caught movement—the shadows between leaves curled and danced, taking shape."
10"Somewhere deep beneath the roots, a pulse echoed like a heartbeat—steady and unyielding."
11"The path beyond was obscured—beckoning and terrifying in equal measure."
87.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount808
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"deep—pressing against her"
1"Cold settled inside Rory’s"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.04084158415841584
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.018564356435643563
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean12.16
std5.95
cv0.489
sampleLengths
022
117
220
321
414
518
612
77
816
914
1018
1117
1214
1336
1410
1519
164
176
188
1913
202
2116
2214
2317
248
2515
2614
2716
286
2910
3023
3114
326
3313
347
354
365
3710
388
3911
4011
4113
424
4326
4415
4512
469
472
4819
498
71.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners33
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Somewhere deep beneath the roots,"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Their faint violet eyes scanned"
1"Their glow began to pulse,"
ratio0.034
27.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences59
matches
0"Aurora’s breath caught as the"
1"The faint shimmer in the"
2"Isolde stepped forward, silent but"
3"Rory glanced back, fingers grazing"
4"The amber sky outside felt"
5"This place was whispered about"
6"Isolde said, voice calm and"
7"Nyx flickered behind Rory, contours"
8"Their faint violet eyes scanned"
9"Rory’s boots pressed softly onto"
10"Wildflowers, luminous in the dim"
11"The air tasted strange—sweet and"
12"Rory’s fingers twitched, drawing the"
13"The moonsilver gleamed faintly, cool"
14"Nyx’s whisper crackled softly."
15"Isolde raised her hand, pale"
16"The wind wove through leaves"
17"Shadows twisted—sometimes stretching to unnatural"
18"The grove felt untouched yet"
19"Isolde said, stepping toward a"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Isolde stepped forward, silent but for the soft murmur slipping past her lips, words that hovered just out of comprehension."
1"Around them, the foliage shimmered, colors bending and floating as if caught beneath a watery lens."
2"Vibrations hummed beneath their feet—subtle but insistent, as if the grove itself was breathing."
3"Rory reached out — and her hand passed not into wood, but a liquid space, thick and trembling, as if the boundary between worlds bled here."
4"The glow of the Heartstone grew sharper, now a persistent throb that matched something ancient deep in her bones."
5"The air seemed to ripple with something unseen, something that whispered secrets folded in nettles and dew."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde said, voice calm and folded with mystery"
1"Nyx echoed, voice barely there,"
2"Rory said, voice low"
3"Nyx lingered, voice barely audible:"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.091
72.7308%