| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 78.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 948 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 948 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "gleaming" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "throb" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "otherworldly" | | 15 | "throbbed" | | 16 | "electric" | | 17 | "unraveling" | | 18 | "chilling" | | 19 | "glistening" | | 20 | "quickened" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 936 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 798 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.38 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Wildflowers | 2 | | Ahead | 2 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Wildflowers" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.31 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a thread unraveling in Rory’s" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 4.274 | | wordCount | 936 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the temperature, but from some wary thread coiling tight" | | 1 | "not into wood, but a liquid space, thick" | | 2 | "not wind, not birdcall, but music" | | 3 | "not birdcall, but music" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 25.3 | | std | 15.14 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 20 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "was whispered" | | 1 | "was obscured" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "The faint shimmer in the air rippled before them—barely visible—a restless quiver in the fabric of reality." | | 1 | "Rory glanced back, fingers grazing the Heartstone pendant at her collarbone; it pulsed softly like a heartbeat, warm against her skin." | | 2 | "This place was whispered about in riddles, known only to a few—and now they stood on the threshold." | | 3 | "The air tasted strange—sweet and metallic and deep—pressing against her lungs in slow waves." | | 4 | "As they stepped deeper, silencing the world left behind, the standing stones emerged in a ring—gnarled oaks towering like ancient sentinels, their bark etched with runes that pulsed faintly, the glyphs alive with a silver glow." | | 5 | "Shadows twisted—sometimes stretching to unnatural lengths, pulling at corners of vision, disappearing before full form took shape." | | 6 | "Vibrations hummed beneath their feet—subtle but insistent, as if the grove itself was breathing." | | 7 | "Rory reached out — and her hand passed not into wood, but a liquid space, thick and trembling, as if the boundary between worlds bled here." | | 8 | "A sound drifted — not wind, not birdcall, but music." | | 9 | "Nyx’s violet eyes caught movement—the shadows between leaves curled and danced, taking shape." | | 10 | "Somewhere deep beneath the roots, a pulse echoed like a heartbeat—steady and unyielding." | | 11 | "The path beyond was obscured—beckoning and terrifying in equal measure." |
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| 87.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 808 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "deep—pressing against her" | | 1 | "Cold settled inside Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04084158415841584 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018564356435643563 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 12.16 | | std | 5.95 | | cv | 0.489 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 71.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 56.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere deep beneath the roots," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Their faint violet eyes scanned" | | 1 | "Their glow began to pulse," |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 27.80% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s breath caught as the" | | 1 | "The faint shimmer in the" | | 2 | "Isolde stepped forward, silent but" | | 3 | "Rory glanced back, fingers grazing" | | 4 | "The amber sky outside felt" | | 5 | "This place was whispered about" | | 6 | "Isolde said, voice calm and" | | 7 | "Nyx flickered behind Rory, contours" | | 8 | "Their faint violet eyes scanned" | | 9 | "Rory’s boots pressed softly onto" | | 10 | "Wildflowers, luminous in the dim" | | 11 | "The air tasted strange—sweet and" | | 12 | "Rory’s fingers twitched, drawing the" | | 13 | "The moonsilver gleamed faintly, cool" | | 14 | "Nyx’s whisper crackled softly." | | 15 | "Isolde raised her hand, pale" | | 16 | "The wind wove through leaves" | | 17 | "Shadows twisted—sometimes stretching to unnatural" | | 18 | "The grove felt untouched yet" | | 19 | "Isolde said, stepping toward a" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde stepped forward, silent but for the soft murmur slipping past her lips, words that hovered just out of comprehension." | | 1 | "Around them, the foliage shimmered, colors bending and floating as if caught beneath a watery lens." | | 2 | "Vibrations hummed beneath their feet—subtle but insistent, as if the grove itself was breathing." | | 3 | "Rory reached out — and her hand passed not into wood, but a liquid space, thick and trembling, as if the boundary between worlds bled here." | | 4 | "The glow of the Heartstone grew sharper, now a persistent throb that matched something ancient deep in her bones." | | 5 | "The air seemed to ripple with something unseen, something that whispered secrets folded in nettles and dew." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, voice calm and folded with mystery" | | 1 | "Nyx echoed, voice barely there," | | 2 | "Rory said, voice low" | | 3 | "Nyx lingered, voice barely audible:" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |