Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRN801SQ7H63FJT76G2A6P

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36.6s
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$0.001426
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The orange glow of dawn painted the waking city, but beneath the streets, a chill still hung in the abandoned Tube station. Detective Harlow Quinn strode down the platform, her boot heels echoing in the eerie silence. She shifted the strap of her detective's kit over her shoulder, her gaze tracking every detail. "Morning, Detective," called PC Johnson from beside an unmarked police car. "The body's just over there, next to the stairs down to the tracks." Quinn nodded. Another early call. She'd barely finished her first cup of tea before the word came down - body found in an abandoned station. Probably fare dodgers or drunks, she assumed, taking a shortcut. But her gut twisted as she drew closer. The prone figure was small. Too small to be an adult male. A flash of red caught her eye. Red hair, framing a young face. A girl child, no more than nine or ten, her limbs splayed at strange angles. She squatted beside the body, unintimidated by the pool of blood. Death had many faces. This one was far too young. Quinn focused on the injuries - multiple and severe, but the bruising was faint. Pale bruising around the throat.cellThe girl had been strangled before being dumped here. And if the lividity was any indication, she'd been dead at least eight hours. So why had she only been reported in the past hour? "God, poor wee thing," muttered DS Ramirez from beside her. "What sort of monster--" Quinn held up a hand, cutting him off. Her cop's intuition was screaming at her. Bruising on the face, skin torn around the mouth and nose. Defensive wounds. The girl hadn't gone quietly. She pushed back, examined the desk scratches on the girl's fingers. She'd fought her attacker, likely disfiguring him in the struggle. "Gloves on, Ramirez," she ordered, not taking her eyes off the body. "Bag her hands. I want to see if there's any trace under the nails or under her fingers." "Yes, Guv," he replied, suiting up. With great care, Quinn started to examine the platform around the body, a task clumsier with the gloves on but necessary. She looked like a woman in search of a dropped contact lens. And she was. Searching for the smallest scrap of evidence. Something that would break this case wide open. Her eyes were drawn to scrapes and scuffs on the platform edge. Intermittent, but regular. "That wiring over there," she pointed to Ramirez across the body. "What do you make of it?" "It's possible the body was wrapped or concealed in something insulated, Guv," he replied, frowning. "The platform is concrete docking. It wouldn't take much to damage or gouge the surface." Quinn nodded grimly. "Bag it. We'll need to run a full forensics team over this entire station. I want the widest cordon you can get away with, Ramirez. No one comes or goes until we know everything there is to know about how this child got here and who killed her." "But Guv," protested Ramirez, "with your permission, I mean. Early reports say it was one of those clique members. Someone wearing an aura lapel pin." Quinn's eyes narrowed. The clique. London's elite, the ones with their small groups, their codes and signs. With their weird fashions. Like-making eye contact an invitation for her husband to be propositioned by the clique leader. Fucking creep. "I don't give a damn if she was the bloody Queen of England, Ramirez. We're treating this as an active murder investigation. I want to know every member of the clique with a connection to this station. Every lead on who did this to that innocent girl. And I want to see your notes from the initial call-in. Something isn't adding up here." Ramirez turned to radio back to the station while Quinn swept the abandoned platform more thoroughly. Her gut never lied. Something was very wrong here. But what? She circled the platform where the girl's body had been dumped, studying the scratches. Gouges, bloody pawprints. The child had struggled, fought back. She'd left her mark. Fighting for survival. The poor girl had gotten in at least one good hit. Quinn's cop senses flared - there was something she was missing. Something important. She squatted again, picturing the struggle, the femin in a fantasy world. Someone has died. Someone from the dark group. If the fantasy world can work in this book, it would be pretty cool if you could take that direction. The girl falls off the edge after her attacker. Is still alive. Looks for something to grab onto. Something to pull her up. Her hand touches something. A crack in the wall. Another body. Male. They've been here longer. This person has died first and has been used as tools to pull up the female, or was it the zombies fighting, you could have the girl come to grips and both characters finding themselves in a pitched battle against the undead, canned Hi how can I help this must've all been a part of the attack sequence. She could see it in her mind's eye. The adrenaline, the skyrocketing fear when all the creature's instincts kicked in. Quinn stood, pulling out her torch to shine the light into the crack in the wall that her flashlight had first revealed. It was a vertical crevasse, small but deep enough that a shard of the larder was obstructing the view. "I think I've got something," she called out. Ramirez joined her, but the crack was too narrow for a man of his size. Quinn wasted no time, squeezing and worming into the space headfirst. She heard Ramirez calling out to the officers to hold the line. Her heart began to race as she pulled herself deeper. There was something there in the darkness. A shape, wild eyes staring back at her. Suddenly, all her senses were shockingly alert, the way they always were in moments like this, when she could almost see the connection between the events, the way the pieces fit together... The creature lunged, but she saw it coming. Her training had honed her instincts to a razor's edge. She grabbed for her service weapon, but her fingers closed on her flashlight instead. _Fuck!_ She swung the torch like a club. The creature dodged, teeth snapping inches from her face. Batshit crazy, possibly unarmed. But in this darkness, on its terms... It was deadly. Deadly dangerous. She needed to get out of here. Now. She thrashed for the opening, but the creature was faster. Talons ripped at her back, tearing through her jacket and shirts, scoring crimson lines down her spine. She screamed for Ramirez, for anyone. A flash of silver in the darkness, and the creature was on her. Quinn struggled, found her torch again and smashed it into the thing's skull. Bone crunched, gore sprayed her face. The creature staggered but did not relent. "RAMIREZ!" she roared. Light flooded the crevasse as Ramirez's bulk squeezed into the crack. As if the light was a cue, the creature lunged. Not at her. At Ramirez. With an agonized cry, he went over the edge and down to the tracks below. "No! RAMIREZ!" Smaller now and driven by rage, Quinn scrambled after her partner, dropping into the dark space below. The creature was on him, talons tearing at his sides, his throat. She saw what the creature had done in a flash. She leveled her flashlight, turned it on the creature's head like a burning cross. It screeched in agony, eyes afire, hideous face frozen in a rictus... of hunger? Frantically, she pumped the flashlight's button, its strobing light searing the creature's eyes and flesh. The ground swam up to meet her, and with a final burst of strength, Tottering back, she blinked, shook her head... The creature was gone. Ramirez's broken body lay sprawled at her feet. She reached out and closed his eyes. It had been close. Too close. But something had happened here, something evil woven into the pattern of this crime. Of this death. The creature, whatever it was, had been feasting on Ramirez's memories, his pain. She could feel the malevolent hunger when she looked into its eyes. Ashes, what was that thing? She looked at Ramirez's body again and knew she couldn't leave him here. Not like this. With a heavy heart, she began to drag him into deeper cover. If anyone finds us now... She braced herself. The pain would come later. For now, she needed to protect her fallen partner from prying eyes and questions. And she needed to get answers. Real answers. She glowers at the crack, the scene of the encounter, the one containing the creature, with cold determination. "Fuck." She checked her phone - no signal. Fucking underground. She'd have to go back for help. Pathetically exposed without Ramirez. Against that creature. She shuddered, running her hands over her bleeding back, feeling it sting. She knew it was still out there, watching. Waiting. For what? She had to tread carefully. Don't stumble back into its clutches. She needed to heal, to arm herself better, before engaging it again. But first - answers. Answers to what really happened here. To that girl, that monster, and what it wants. Not that anyone would ever believe a word she said. They'd lock her up and toss away the key. No, she had to figure this shit out herself. And that freak of a girl was the place to start. Someone somewhere - likely one of the clique - was behind this. This murder, and that monster lurking in the dark. She didn't know how, but she was determined to find out. And then, at last, she'd have her pound of flesh... She gathered her strength, drew in a deep breath, and prepared to climb back up to the surface. Carefully, watching for any sign of that creature, ready at any moment to evade and fight. She'd get the truth. No matter the cost. This was her case now. Her partner's death, that poor girl, the creature in the dark. She'd see justice done. Even if it meant delving into the twisted heart of that clique, the sordid underbelly of London's 'high society'. They couldn't hide their secrets forever. Not from her. With grim resolve, she hauled herself up and over the edge of the crevasse, back to the platform, leaving Ramirez's body safely hidden below. She had a job to do.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"race"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"searing"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"encounter"
count1
8
word"determined"
count1
9
word"delving"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"echoing"
2"silence"
3"race"
4"down her spine"
5"searing"
6"could feel"
7"encounter"
8"determined"
9"delving"
10"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences174
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences174
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1746
ratio0.001
matches
0"Fuck!"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1518
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Ramirez"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Johnson1
Ramirez14
Hi1
Light1
Tottering1
Fucking2
London2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Johnson"
3"Ramirez"
4"Light"
5"Fucking"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a woman in search of a droppe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1746
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences182
matches
0"take that direction"
1"was that thing"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean37.96
std23.69
cv0.624
sampleLengths
053
124
283
373
414
554
630
76
866
917
1030
1151
1225
1338
1463
1527
1654
17137
1820
1941
208
2138
2225
2332
2432
251
2640
2733
2839
293
3041
312
3239
3364
3419
3553
3633
3730
3818
3936
4053
4139
4242
4334
4456
4530
91.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences174
matches
0"been strangled"
1"being dumped"
2"been reported"
3"were drawn"
4"been dumped"
5"been used"
6"was gone"
7"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs270
matches
0"was screaming"
1"was obstructing"
48.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences182
ratio0.033
matches
0"She'd barely finished her first cup of tea before the word came down - body found in an abandoned station."
1"Quinn focused on the injuries - multiple and severe, but the bruising was faint."
2"Quinn's cop senses flared - there was something she was missing."
3"\"Fuck.\" She checked her phone - no signal."
4"But first - answers."
5"Someone somewhere - likely one of the clique - was behind this."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1473
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.0373387644263408
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.013577732518669382
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean9.59
std8.27
cv0.862
sampleLengths
022
115
216
311
413
52
63
720
810
98
105
117
127
136
1415
1511
164
176
1814
1913
2014
2111
2210
234
248
257
2611
272
285
2911
3010
3112
3218
336
3421
3512
363
377
388
3912
403
4111
426
4315
4415
453
4648
4725
483
492
61.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners70
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences154
matches
0"Probably fare dodgers or drunks,"
1"Too small to be an"
2"Suddenly, all her senses were"
3"Frantically, she pumped the flashlight's"
4"Pathetically exposed without Ramirez."
5"Carefully, watching for any sign"
ratio0.039
82.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences154
matches
0"She shifted the strap of"
1"She'd barely finished her first"
2"She squatted beside the body,"
3"Her cop's intuition was screaming"
4"She pushed back, examined the"
5"She'd fought her attacker, likely"
6"she ordered, not taking her"
7"he replied, suiting up"
8"She looked like a woman"
9"Her eyes were drawn to"
10"she pointed to Ramirez across"
11"he replied, frowning"
12"Her gut never lied."
13"She circled the platform where"
14"She'd left her mark."
15"She squatted again, picturing the"
16"Her hand touches something."
17"They've been here longer."
18"She could see it in"
19"It was a vertical crevasse,"
ratio0.344
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences154
matches
0"The orange glow of dawn"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn strode down"
2"She shifted the strap of"
3"Another early call."
4"She'd barely finished her first"
5"The prone figure was small."
6"A flash of red caught"
7"A girl child, no more"
8"She squatted beside the body,"
9"Death had many faces."
10"This one was far too"
11"Quinn focused on the injuries"
12"Quinn held up a hand,"
13"Her cop's intuition was screaming"
14"The girl hadn't gone quietly."
15"She pushed back, examined the"
16"She'd fought her attacker, likely"
17"she ordered, not taking her"
18"he replied, suiting up"
19"She looked like a woman"
ratio0.688
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences154
matches
0"If the fantasy world can"
1"As if the light was"
2"If anyone finds us now..."
3"To that girl, that monster,"
4"No matter the cost."
5"Even if it meant delving"
ratio0.039
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Talons ripped at her back, tearing through her jacket and shirts, scoring crimson lines down her spine."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she ordered, not taking her eyes off the body"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she ordered (order)"
1"she roared (roar)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.222
90.7426%