Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRN8Y1D5AN1YS30B3KDW7M

Run Details

Duration:
18.4s
Cost:
$0.001947
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora swung the door open without checking the peephole. The day’s chill still clung to her coat, a reminder of the damp London afternoon she’d just endured. Standing there, framed by the grey sky beyond the cracked brick of the street, was Lucien Moreau — the last person Rory had expected to see on her doorstep, and the one she’d tried hardest to forget. The amber eye caught the fading light, flickering with the usual unnerving calm, while his black eye stayed dark and unreadable beneath those sleek platinum strands. He wore the charcoal suit like a second skin, perfectly tailored and absent of a hint of concern. His ivory-handled cane rested lightly against his arm; the blade hidden, but the threat unmistakable. “You look exactly the same,” he said, a crooked smile curling at the corner of his lips. Rory’s gaze dropped for a fraction of a second to the small crescent scar on her wrist, half-covered by the sleeve of her jacket. The one reminder of a past she’d tried to bury, like the tangled history between them. “I didn’t expect you,” she said, pushing the door wider without inviting him in. The flat on Brick Lane felt smaller than usual suddenly. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, darted between Rory’s legs, tail flicking in suspicion. Lucien stepped inside without hesitation, the familiar scent of cedarwood and faint tobacco filling the air. “Eva’s all work and no play. I thought you might want a break.” Rory crossed her arms. “I have a break every day. Preferably not with you.” He raised an eyebrow, settling onto the worn armchair near the window. “Still sharp. I remember when you were sharper.” Silence fell for a moment. Outside, the distant rumble of London’s night traffic, a siren’s wail fading in the distance. “You’re here because you want something,” she said, voice steady but tight. “Straight to the point,” Lucien smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I need your help.” “I don’t do favors for half-demons,” she said, voice low. “That’s not fair.” He leaned forward, cane tapping gently against the floor, eyes locked on hers. “I’m not the same man you left behind.” She bit her lip. The past surged unbidden—arguments spiralling, harsh words echoing through nights spent alone. The way he’d vanished without explanation. The way Rory had felt fractured, pieces left behind in their runaway mess of a relationship. “I’m not the same woman either,” she said, voice breaking at the edge despite her efforts. He reached out before she could shut the door, fingers brushing hers. “Neither of us are, Rory.” Her breath hitched; the old pull twisted in her chest, the ache of unspoken things. She yanked her hand back and folded her arms again. Ptolemy leapt onto the windowsill, eyes bright, watching. Lucien’s smile softened, but his eyes hardened. “I don’t have long. There’s something coming, something big, something I can’t face alone.” Rory’s heart thumped wildly. “You expect me to just… trust you?” “No,” he said quietly. “I’m asking you to believe me. For once.” She stared at the man she’d loved and lost—wounded and proud—and felt the tension tear between them like the cold wind outside. “Why now?” she breathed. “Because the world we know is shifting. You of all people sense it.” The memories flashed like lightning—her nights pacing the cramped flat, the weight of Eva’s texts urging her to run, the late deliveries at the Golden Empress where she’d barely held herself together. “I’m not the same person you think I am,” Rory whispered. “Maybe you’re right,” Lucien said, standing with a fluid grace that still made her breath catch. “But if we don’t find a way through this, neither of us will be.” The room seemed suddenly too small, the past and present pressing in hard. Quiet moments stretched, heavy with what was and what could have been. Lucien’s fingers brushed a stray lock of her hair, soft as a secret. “Let me in,” he said, voice low. “Not just here. Let me in for real.” Rory’s eyes searched his face, then flicked down to the crescent scar. Her breath came steady at last. “One night,” she said softly. “But that’s all.” He nodded, a slow smile unfurling. “One night.” The door creaked closed behind him as the city’s lights flickered to life beyond the window, watching the fragile bridge being rebuilt between past and future.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.148
59.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount740
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"lightly"
2"suddenly"
3"gently"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount740
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"reminder"
2"unreadable"
3"familiar"
4"eyebrow"
5"silence"
6"echoing"
7"fractured"
8"unspoken"
9"tension"
10"weight"
11"flicked"
12"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords734
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount563
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London2
Lucien6
Moreau1
Rory8
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Golden"
globalScore0.79
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount734
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean20.97
std12.94
cv0.617
sampleLengths
064
159
217
340
414
522
629
714
820
920
1012
1116
1210
1324
1438
1516
1617
1725
188
1921
2011
2112
2222
234
2413
2532
2611
2730
2825
2913
3015
3112
3214
338
3426
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"being rebuilt"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs104
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences61
ratio0.098
matches
0"Standing there, framed by the grey sky beyond the cracked brick of the street, was Lucien Moreau — the last person Rory had expected to see on her doorstep, and the one she’d tried hardest to forget."
1"His ivory-handled cane rested lightly against his arm; the blade hidden, but the threat unmistakable."
2"The past surged unbidden—arguments spiralling, harsh words echoing through nights spent alone."
3"Her breath hitched; the old pull twisted in her chest, the ache of unspoken things."
4"She stared at the man she’d loved and lost—wounded and proud—and felt the tension tear between them like the cold wind outside."
5"The memories flashed like lightning—her nights pacing the cramped flat, the weight of Eva’s texts urging her to run, the late deliveries at the Golden Empress where she’d barely held herself together."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount568
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03169014084507042
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01584507042253521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean12.03
std6.89
cv0.573
sampleLengths
09
118
237
326
418
515
617
724
816
914
1010
1112
1216
1313
144
1510
1612
178
185
1915
2012
2112
224
2310
2416
258
264
2712
286
2916
3016
3112
325
3315
3410
358
367
3714
384
397
404
418
4222
434
4413
4532
4611
4716
4814
4913
71.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45901639344262296
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences45
matches
0"He wore the charcoal suit"
1"His ivory-handled cane rested lightly"
2"he said, a crooked smile"
3"she said, pushing the door"
4"He raised an eyebrow, settling"
5"she said, voice steady but"
6"she said, voice low"
7"He leaned forward, cane tapping"
8"She bit her lip."
9"she said, voice breaking at"
10"He reached out before she"
11"Her breath hitched; the old"
12"She yanked her hand back"
13"he said quietly"
14"She stared at the man"
15"he said, voice low"
16"Her breath came steady at"
17"she said softly"
18"He nodded, a slow smile"
ratio0.422
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"Aurora swung the door open"
1"The day’s chill still clung"
2"The amber eye caught the"
3"He wore the charcoal suit"
4"His ivory-handled cane rested lightly"
5"he said, a crooked smile"
6"Rory’s gaze dropped for a"
7"The one reminder of a"
8"she said, pushing the door"
9"The flat on Brick Lane"
10"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, darted"
11"Lucien stepped inside without hesitation,"
12"Rory crossed her arms."
13"He raised an eyebrow, settling"
14"Silence fell for a moment."
15"she said, voice steady but"
16"Lucien smiled, but it didn’t"
17"she said, voice low"
18"He leaned forward, cane tapping"
19"She bit her lip."
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The memories flashed like lightning—her nights pacing the cramped flat, the weight of Eva’s texts urging her to run, the late deliveries at the Golden Empress w…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, voice steady but tight"
1"she said, voice low"
2"He leaned, cane tapping gently against the floor, eyes locked on hers"
3"she said, voice breaking at the edge despite her efforts"
4"he said, voice low"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.148
73.0696%