Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRPGRXD6CYWT8K6GGWY2MP

Run Details

Duration:
23.8s
Cost:
$0.003314
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door slammed open with a thud that rattled the creaky frames of Eva’s flat. Aurora blinked at the sudden intrusion, her heart stuttering before steadying into a guarded beat. Lucien stood there, framed by the dim hallway light, his tailored charcoal suit pressed to perfection despite the hour. One amber eye gleamed like a flickering candle, the other, pitch black, held secrets she never learned. She took a step back, body tightening. “Lucien.” “No invitation,” he said, stepping inside with an easy arrogance, closing the door behind him. The three deadbolts clicked shut in quick succession—like a fortress snapping itself closed behind a storm. “I don’t do surprises.” His smile was sharp, but it didn’t reach those mismatched eyes. “I prefer to call it an unanticipated arrangement.” Aurora folded her arms, the scar on her left wrist catching the faint glow from Eva’s crooked desk lamp. She’d hidden it often enough—not just the scar, but everything that hurt. The years felt thick between them, braided with old distance and new tension. “You could have called.” “I could have,” Lucien said, lowering his voice a touch. “But I find it more effective to simply appear.” The flat’s cramped dimensions offered no escape. Books leaned precariously beside ancient scrolls, while piles of research notes sulked in the corners. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed a low warning from his perch above the fridge. Aurora’s gaze flicked to the cat, then back to Lucien. “Why are you here?” “Business,” he said smoothly, glancing around like a man used to owning rooms. “But not the kind you expect.” She defied the urge to snap, to push him out again. Instead, she crossed the room, folding her arms tighter. “Business, huh? That’s what you always say until it’s something else.” A weight hung in the silence—too many missed chances, too many sharp words that landed nowhere but bruised skin. Lucien took a step closer, cane tapping once on the wooden floor. The ivory handle gleamed, the thin blade within a promise, or perhaps a threat. Aurora’s pulse flicked with a mixture of caution and something far more complicated. “Have you eaten?” he asked, his voice dipping. “I didn’t come all this way without purpose.” “No.” A smile curved his lips—half-mocking, half-warm. “Then you’re starving.” Without waiting for a response, he moved toward the cluttered kitchenette, retrieving a bottle of whiskey and two chipped glasses. He poured the amber liquid with smooth precision, the glass catching and fracturing the light between them. Aurora hesitated, then took the second glass. “To what?” she asked, suspicion curling in her tone. “To appearances,” Lucien said, swirling the liquid. “And perhaps, to unfinished business.” She sipped, the burn trailing down her throat a reminder of nights spent tangled between anger and desire. The scent of bourbon mingled with the faint perfume of old books and Eva’s incense—an odd alchemy that grounded her. “What unfinished business?” she pressed, voice steady but frayed at the edges. Lucien’s amber eye fluttered briefly. “You.” That single word crashed between them like a dropped glass—sharp, undeniable, dangerous. Aurora’s fingers curled around her glass, knuckles white. “You walked away. Without a word.” “I had my reasons,” he said, voice low and rough. “Can’t say you didn’t too.” “I didn’t disappear in the middle of the night.” “No. You just let me go.” The accusation lingered, but so did his uncertainty. He wasn’t the polished fixer tonight—just a man who’d crossed oceans and demons to stand in this tiny flat, demanding a reckoning. She looked away, fingering the crescent scar on her wrist. “You don’t get to rewrite the past.” Lucien stepped closer. Closer enough that the air between them thickened, a current thrumming with old danger and unspoken need. “Maybe not,” he said, voice low. “But I’m here now.” For a long moment, they measured each other, the distance shrinking until the tension was nearly tangible. Aurora’s mind traced back to every fight, every whispered promise that crumbled, every simple touch that sparked fire. “Why now?” Her voice was barely a whisper. “Because I’m running out of time,” Lucien admitted, a flicker of vulnerability slipping through the perfect mask. “And because I still want you—with or without your permission.” The words hung between them, raw and jagged. Aurora’s breath hitched, a strange cocktail of anger and something deeper swirling in her chest. “You should leave.” “I could,” he said, straightening his back. “But I’d rather stay.” A sudden scrape at the door made them both start. Ptolemy’s tail flicked irritably. Another shadow lurked beyond the threshold, unseen but pressing its weight against the fragile truce. Aurora’s eyes narrowed, scanning the room. “You didn’t come alone.” Lucien’s lips twitched, wary now. “Not quite.” Without warning, the lights flickered. The hiss of electricity was cut by a sudden, sharp crash from the bedroom. Aurora reached instinctively for a heavy bookend on the shelf while Lucien’s cane was in his hand in a blur. “Stay behind me.” “Since when do I hide?” “Since now.” They moved in tandem, Aurora’s breath shallow as they stepped through the cramped living space toward the bedroom. The small flat held its secrets in layers—the dust motes caught the sudden flash of Lucien’s amber eye, the clutter paused at this new threat. The door to the bedroom groaned under pressure, then burst open. A figure lunged—a thin shadow wrapped in dark leather, a knife gleaming as it arced toward Lucien. He met the strike with a flick of his cane. The blade caught the floor with a rasp instead of cutting through bone. “Nice trick,” he said, twisting the wrist holding the concealed sword. Aurora charged forward, slamming the intruder with a heavy tome. The man grunted, stumbling back but not defeated. “Who sent you?” Lucien demanded, voice deadly calm. The attacker spat blood. “You know why.” Lucien’s amber eye narrowed. “I don’t recall sharing my schedule.” “Should have,” the man sneered, dropping into a fighting stance. Aurora’s heart rattled in her chest. Every nerve screamed. The shadow wasn’t just an enemy of Lucien’s—it was the darkness threading through her own past. Lucien stepped forward, blade gleaming under the flickering light. “Enough games.” “Too late for that.” The attacker lunged again, faster this time. Aurora scrambled back, knocking over a stack of scrolls, her wrist grazing the edge of a broken shard. Pain flared sharp and immediate, but she swallowed it. Lucien parried twice, then twisted, disarming the man with a sharp snap. The attacker collapsed, panting, defeated but alive. Lucien looked to Aurora, eyes flickering with something fierce. “Problem solved?” “Hardly.” Her gaze met his—fiery, dangerous, unyielding. “No more running.” “Not from me.” A muted siren began to wail in the distance. The intruder’s backup was coming. Lucien’s smile was grim. “Well, Rory. Seems like this night just got interesting.” Aurora squared her shoulders. “You ready?” “Always.” The door shook with fresh pounding. They’d come too far to turn back now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
1"The attacker lunged again [again]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.566
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.075
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1170
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"tension"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count3
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"desire"
count1
7
word"fluttered"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"tangible"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"gleaming"
count2
18
word"charged"
count1
19
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"flicked"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"reminder"
6"desire"
7"fluttered"
8"unspoken"
9"measured"
10"tangible"
11"traced"
12"whisper"
13"flicker"
14"perfect"
15"scanning"
16"flickered"
17"gleaming"
18"charged"
19"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1158
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount948
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Lucien19
Aurora16
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.864
wordCount1158
matches
0"not just the scar, but everything"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean15.65
std12.64
cv0.808
sampleLengths
066
18
231
34
419
544
64
719
836
914
1019
1131
1219
1339
1416
151
169
1737
187
199
2012
2138
2212
236
2412
2514
2615
279
286
2930
3017
3120
3210
3335
348
3527
3623
373
3811
3929
4010
417
4239
433
445
452
4643
4711
4817
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences125
ratio0.088
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked shut in quick succession—like a fortress snapping itself closed behind a storm."
1"She’d hidden it often enough—not just the scar, but everything that hurt."
2"A weight hung in the silence—too many missed chances, too many sharp words that landed nowhere but bruised skin."
3"A smile curved his lips—half-mocking, half-warm."
4"The scent of bourbon mingled with the faint perfume of old books and Eva’s incense—an odd alchemy that grounded her."
5"That single word crashed between them like a dropped glass—sharp, undeniable, dangerous."
6"He wasn’t the polished fixer tonight—just a man who’d crossed oceans and demons to stand in this tiny flat, demanding a reckoning."
7"The small flat held its secrets in layers—the dust motes caught the sudden flash of Lucien’s amber eye, the clutter paused at this new threat."
8"A figure lunged—a thin shadow wrapped in dark leather, a knife gleaming as it arced toward Lucien."
9"The shadow wasn’t just an enemy of Lucien’s—it was the darkness threading through her own past."
10"Her gaze met his—fiery, dangerous, unyielding."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount959
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03962460896767466
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008342022940563087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean9.26
std5.43
cv0.586
sampleLengths
015
115
219
317
47
51
615
716
84
911
108
1119
1212
1313
144
1510
169
177
1815
1914
2010
214
2213
236
2411
259
2611
2719
2812
2914
3013
318
328
331
346
353
3620
3717
387
399
407
415
4218
4320
4412
455
461
4712
488
496
58.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.368
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners46
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Instead, she crossed the room,"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences88
matches
0"She took a step back,"
1"he said, stepping inside with"
2"His smile was sharp, but"
3"She’d hidden it often enough—not"
4"he said smoothly, glancing around"
5"She defied the urge to"
6"he asked, his voice dipping"
7"He poured the amber liquid"
8"she asked, suspicion curling in"
9"She sipped, the burn trailing"
10"she pressed, voice steady but"
11"he said, voice low and"
12"He wasn’t the polished fixer"
13"She looked away, fingering the"
14"he said, voice low"
15"Her voice was barely a"
16"he said, straightening his back"
17"They moved in tandem, Aurora’s"
18"He met the strike with"
19"he said, twisting the wrist"
ratio0.25
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences88
matches
0"The door slammed open with"
1"Aurora blinked at the sudden"
2"Lucien stood there, framed by"
3"She took a step back,"
4"he said, stepping inside with"
5"The three deadbolts clicked shut"
6"His smile was sharp, but"
7"Aurora folded her arms, the"
8"She’d hidden it often enough—not"
9"The years felt thick between"
10"Lucien said, lowering his voice"
11"The flat’s cramped dimensions offered"
12"Books leaned precariously beside ancient"
13"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed"
14"Aurora’s gaze flicked to the"
15"he said smoothly, glancing around"
16"She defied the urge to"
17"A weight hung in the"
18"Lucien took a step closer,"
19"The ivory handle gleamed, the"
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora blinked at the sudden intrusion, her heart stuttering before steadying into a guarded beat."
1"A weight hung in the silence—too many missed chances, too many sharp words that landed nowhere but bruised skin."
2"He wasn’t the polished fixer tonight—just a man who’d crossed oceans and demons to stand in this tiny flat, demanding a reckoning."
3"Aurora scrambled back, knocking over a stack of scrolls, her wrist grazing the edge of a broken shard."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he asked, his voice dipping"
1"she pressed, voice steady but frayed at the edges"
2"he said, voice low and rough"
3"he said, voice low"
4"Lucien admitted, a flicker of vulnerability slipping through the perfect mask"
5"Lucien demanded, voice deadly calm"
74.53% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she pressed (press)"
1"Lucien admitted (admit)"
2"Lucien demanded (demand)"
3"the man sneered (sneer)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.264
leniency0.528
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.151
75.9835%