| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said smoothly [smoothly]" | | 1 | "The attacker lunged again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.283 | | leniency | 0.566 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.075 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1170 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tension" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "fluttered" | | 8 | "unspoken" | | 9 | "measured" | | 10 | "tangible" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "scanning" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "gleaming" | | 18 | "charged" | | 19 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1158 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 948 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.498 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.864 | | wordCount | 1158 | | matches | | 0 | "not just the scar, but everything" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 15.65 | | std | 12.64 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 39 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 43 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts clicked shut in quick succession—like a fortress snapping itself closed behind a storm." | | 1 | "She’d hidden it often enough—not just the scar, but everything that hurt." | | 2 | "A weight hung in the silence—too many missed chances, too many sharp words that landed nowhere but bruised skin." | | 3 | "A smile curved his lips—half-mocking, half-warm." | | 4 | "The scent of bourbon mingled with the faint perfume of old books and Eva’s incense—an odd alchemy that grounded her." | | 5 | "That single word crashed between them like a dropped glass—sharp, undeniable, dangerous." | | 6 | "He wasn’t the polished fixer tonight—just a man who’d crossed oceans and demons to stand in this tiny flat, demanding a reckoning." | | 7 | "The small flat held its secrets in layers—the dust motes caught the sudden flash of Lucien’s amber eye, the clutter paused at this new threat." | | 8 | "A figure lunged—a thin shadow wrapped in dark leather, a knife gleaming as it arced toward Lucien." | | 9 | "The shadow wasn’t just an enemy of Lucien’s—it was the darkness threading through her own past." | | 10 | "Her gaze met his—fiery, dangerous, unyielding." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 959 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03962460896767466 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008342022940563087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 9.26 | | std | 5.43 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 58.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.368 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 37.88% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she crossed the room," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a step back," | | 1 | "he said, stepping inside with" | | 2 | "His smile was sharp, but" | | 3 | "She’d hidden it often enough—not" | | 4 | "he said smoothly, glancing around" | | 5 | "She defied the urge to" | | 6 | "he asked, his voice dipping" | | 7 | "He poured the amber liquid" | | 8 | "she asked, suspicion curling in" | | 9 | "She sipped, the burn trailing" | | 10 | "she pressed, voice steady but" | | 11 | "he said, voice low and" | | 12 | "He wasn’t the polished fixer" | | 13 | "She looked away, fingering the" | | 14 | "he said, voice low" | | 15 | "Her voice was barely a" | | 16 | "he said, straightening his back" | | 17 | "They moved in tandem, Aurora’s" | | 18 | "He met the strike with" | | 19 | "he said, twisting the wrist" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The door slammed open with" | | 1 | "Aurora blinked at the sudden" | | 2 | "Lucien stood there, framed by" | | 3 | "She took a step back," | | 4 | "he said, stepping inside with" | | 5 | "The three deadbolts clicked shut" | | 6 | "His smile was sharp, but" | | 7 | "Aurora folded her arms, the" | | 8 | "She’d hidden it often enough—not" | | 9 | "The years felt thick between" | | 10 | "Lucien said, lowering his voice" | | 11 | "The flat’s cramped dimensions offered" | | 12 | "Books leaned precariously beside ancient" | | 13 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed" | | 14 | "Aurora’s gaze flicked to the" | | 15 | "he said smoothly, glancing around" | | 16 | "She defied the urge to" | | 17 | "A weight hung in the" | | 18 | "Lucien took a step closer," | | 19 | "The ivory handle gleamed, the" |
| | ratio | 0.932 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora blinked at the sudden intrusion, her heart stuttering before steadying into a guarded beat." | | 1 | "A weight hung in the silence—too many missed chances, too many sharp words that landed nowhere but bruised skin." | | 2 | "He wasn’t the polished fixer tonight—just a man who’d crossed oceans and demons to stand in this tiny flat, demanding a reckoning." | | 3 | "Aurora scrambled back, knocking over a stack of scrolls, her wrist grazing the edge of a broken shard." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "he asked, his voice dipping" | | 1 | "she pressed, voice steady but frayed at the edges" | | 2 | "he said, voice low and rough" | | 3 | "he said, voice low" | | 4 | "Lucien admitted, a flicker of vulnerability slipping through the perfect mask" | | 5 | "Lucien demanded, voice deadly calm" |
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| 74.53% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she pressed (press)" | | 1 | "Lucien admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "Lucien demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "the man sneered (sneer)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.264 | | leniency | 0.528 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.151 | |