Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
233
glossingSentenceCount
19
matches
0
"quite name"
1
"looked like a melted candle and called it"
2
"quite know what he wanted, and a hulking man in a hood watched the corridor mouths for traffic"
3
"looked like ice but burned when touched"
4
"seemed more fit for a ghost than a detective of the modern age"
5
"felt like a confession"
6
"something like fear disguised as concern"
7
"as if negotiating with a partner who might flick a switch and plunge them all into ruin"
8
"as if speaking to himself as much as to me"
9
"Market that seemed to relish a good chase as though it fed on it"
10
"as if listening to the Market’s next instruction"
11
"seemed woven from night itself and carried the weight of a centuries-long secret"
12
"something like approval and fear in equal me"
13
"chamber that seemed to breathe with a living pressure, the sound of air moving through a throat"
14
"looked like a mouth, the bone token still"
15
"sounded like the turning of pages in a boo"
16
"as if begging for rescue, then looked back toward the figure with a tremor of realization and fear that this moment had already decided the course of his life"
17
"glow that seemed to drink in the city’s fear as if it were a draught"
18
"as if waiting for the next move in a game only it could fully understand"
"The suspect wasn’t here to drink; he was here to disappear."
1
"“Not tonight,” I muttered, and for a heartbeat the thought of DS Morris brushed the back of my mind—two lives tangled in a single moment, the supernatural history I didn’t fully understand gnawing at the corners of it all."
2
"Maps hung with patient care, a thin film of mould along the edges of crates, the air carrying something metallic and old—gun oil, velvet, something unnameable."
3
"A faint, almost-warm glow threaded between stalls; the air hummed with whispered bargains and half-spoken curses."
4
"Copper and incense and something else—old rain on iron, if you’ll permit a memory to tag along with a description."
5
"The Market’s scent changed as we threaded through it—the copper tang of iron, the waxy sweetness of candles, and something else that prickled the back of my neck, the feathery sense that something ancient watched us and deemed us worth a closer look."
6
"The suspect—my quarry—glanced at Herrera, then at me, a flicker in his eyes that said he understood the stakes and didn’t care."
7
"He was not alone here; that much was obvious."
8
"The Market’s shadows shifted—faces came and went in the corner of my eye, and the hum thickened, as though the place itself was listening and weighing every move we made."
9
"The blade flashed; I shifted, deflecting with a precise parry, a spark of metal shorting the air as the blade scraped the bone token against the floor and sent a shard skittering across the stones."
10
"He pressed, and I pivoted, the sense of danger sharpening into a single, clear image: the Market’s walls were listening, and they were listening to the only language they understood—survival of the clever."
11
"The Market’s current location was Camden’s underworld, yes, but the token could be the city’s way of telling you to enter with a clean purpose—or to walk straight into a trap that would rewrite you in the same moment it rewrites the city."
12
"The suspect tailed the glow with his eyes, moving toward a corridor lined with stalls that had an almost ceremonial feel—incense, candles, jars of unknown substances whose lids rattled faintly as he passed."
13
"The bone token on his neck vibrated against his chest as if it remembered every time it had opened a door, every time it had bound someone to a choice—return to where they began, or step deeper into something they could not recognise."
14
"The glow grew stronger here, and the sounds—the clink of coin, the soft hiss of a dozen whispered deals, the scrape of metal on metal—felt intimate, almost familial, as if the place invited you to forget your old life and become someone new."
15
"A woman in a velvet coat offered me a vial that promised “clarity for those with too much to forget.” I declined with a calm shake of my head; I’d learned to accept risk, not surrender to it."
16
"The suspect paused near a stall where a man dealt in bones—artfully carved, polished to a gleam, each one carved to resemble a different creature, each one attracting a small crowd with whispered novelties and subtle promises."
17
"The suspect looked back at me, his eyes readable as an open book—he was considering the one route I would not take, the route that could deliver him into the heart of the Market’s deeper workings."
18
"Then, out of the murmur, a single sound rose above the rest—something heavy landing somewhere beyond the stalls, a thud that reminded me the Market wasn’t just a stage for whispered deals; it was a trapdoor for people who thought they could outrun it."
19
"The beam revealed a form at the far end of the tunnel—someone waiting with a calm, almost ceremonial air."
20
"It wasn’t a guard in the usual sense; it was someone who understood how the Market really worked, a facilitator or perhaps something more."
21
"It kept track of everything—every choice, every drop of blood, every whispered deal that went too far."
22
"The tunnel narrowed; the walls pressed in; the Market’s pulse grew louder, a tremor of energy that pushed at my ribs like wind trying to press through a too-thin wall."
23
"The suspect slowed, perhaps sensing the consequence of the decision he had already made in his head—the decision to trust an entrance to the Market more than the world above it."
24
"A sudden scream—a sharp, brittle sound—split the air from behind us."
25
"The suspect reached a final, narrow archway that opened into a courtyard-like space within the subterranean market—an area lit by a ring of weak lamps, each one throwing a pale halos onto stalls cluttered with charms, talismans, and relics that felt almost sacred in their juxtaposition with the violence of the chase."
26
"And then the ground answered, not with a voice, but with a noise—metal on stone, a long sigh of rock giving way—and the floor beneath us shuddered."
27
"The suspect lunged, but a second of hesitation betrayed him; he glanced at the ladder with a calculated risk and took the leap into the pit, vanishing into the black."
28
"A moment later a pair of figures moved from the shadows—two enforcers of the Market, their faces obscured by hoods, their fingers stained with something dark and unnameable."
29
"The suspect squirmed, eyes wild with fear and relief in equal measure—relief that someone else had arrived, fear that someone would take him from the place he’d finally believed he could own."
30
"I felt the weight of the decision again—deep, heavy, inevitable."
31
"The suspect’s mouth opened, but no sound came out at first; then he exhaled, a shuddering breath that carried the exhaustion of someone who had fought the wrong battle for far too long."
32
"Then, from somewhere deep within the Market, a thing moved—the thing that existed between an ally and a weapon, between a memory and a consequence."
33
"It was not the kind of figure you’d call a guard or a boss; it was the Market’s own personification, the part of the space that decided who lived and who did not through the quiet arithmetic of fear and desire."
34
"Everything blurred for a moment—the Market’s hum, the ache in my knees, Herrera’s quiet, the suspect’s breath, and the green glow that seemed to drink in the city’s fear as if it were a draught."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
194
technicalSentenceCount
52
matches
0
"He was already in motion again, slipping into a narrow corridor that ran behind the bar and down a spiral stair that disappeared into something lower and more i…"
1
"The Market’s shadows shifted—faces came and went in the corner of my eye, and the hum thickened, as though the place itself was listening and weighing every mov…"
2
"I kept a steady pace, not answering his provocation, letting the tension write itself across the line of my shoulders."
3
"The suspect stepped closer to a stall that offered a glimmering shard of something that looked like ice but burned when touched."
4
"The suspect disappeared for an instant, swallowed by the Market’s underbelly, the people in stalls turning with reflexive unease, as if a sudden misstep had pul…"
5
"The chase slowed as I found old pipes and a maintenance ladder that seemed more fit for a ghost than a detective of the modern age."
6
"The Market’s current location was Camden’s underworld, yes, but the token could be the city’s way of telling you to enter with a clean purpose—or to walk straig…"
7
"The suspect tailed the glow with his eyes, moving toward a corridor lined with stalls that had an almost ceremonial feel—incense, candles, jars of unknown subst…"
8
"My eyes fixed on the suspect as he threaded between stalls, ducking beneath a low arch that opened into a wider corridor."
9
"The bone token on his neck vibrated against his chest as if it remembered every time it had opened a door, every time it had bound someone to a choice—return to…"
10
"He spoke in a low, careful rhythm, as if negotiating with a partner who might flick a switch and plunge them all into ruin."
11
"The glow grew stronger here, and the sounds—the clink of coin, the soft hiss of a dozen whispered deals, the scrape of metal on metal—felt intimate, almost fami…"
12
"The suspect looked back at me, his eyes readable as an open book—he was considering the one route I would not take, the route that could deliver him into the he…"
13
"He stepped closer to me, a dangerous proximity that told me he’d invite a fight so long as it kept him moving."
14
"Then, out of the murmur, a single sound rose above the rest—something heavy landing somewhere beyond the stalls, a thud that reminded me the Market wasn’t just …"
15
"The suspect shrugged off the distraction and pressed on, drawing his blade with a practiced ease that spoke of years spent in rooms far darker than this."
16
"Herrera watched us both with an expression that was almost paternal and almost predatory at the same time."
17
"The suspect lunged, and I caught his wrist with a controlled brace, turning the attack into a leg sweep that hurled him toward a row of iron cages containing ar…"
18
"The Market's walls seemed to lean closer, listening to the exchange as if a chorus of unseen witnesses leaned in to hear the outcome."
19
"It wasn’t a guard in the usual sense; it was someone who understood how the Market really worked, a facilitator or perhaps something more."
20
"It kept track of everything—every choice, every drop of blood, every whispered deal that went too far."
21
"The Market’s guard, the unknown behind the bone token, the distinct possibility we were about to walk into a den of the supernatural in a city that pretended no…"
22
"The tunnel narrowed; the walls pressed in; the Market’s pulse grew louder, a tremor of energy that pushed at my ribs like wind trying to press through a too-thi…"
23
"Herrera, always a step ahead of danger, moved with a speed that suggested he’d spent long hours in smaller, darker rooms than this."
24
"He seized the man’s blade and tucked it into a hidden sheath at his own hip, a practised motion that spoke of long training and old habits of control."
25
"The suspect yanked free and whipped toward the tunnel’s exit, a desperate leap that would have carried him into the next chamber if not for my hand sliding arou…"
26
"The glow flickered, casting long, pale shadows that stretched across the floor like fingers."
27
"A thin wail of wind teased at the edge of the passage, and a low hum rose up, a chorus of voices that didn’t belong to any living thing I’d ever known."
28
"I would have to confront things I did not fully understand and, worst of all, risk losing myself to a place that could rewrite my purpose in a single, merciless…"
29
"Then, a sound like a shallow bell, a bell that announced a new cycle in a place that never slept, clanged somewhere above us."
30
"The bone token around the suspect’s neck gave a final, patient tinkle and then stilled as if listening to the Market’s next instruction."
31
"The suspect moved, and I followed, the Market’s hum rising to a fever pitch as if it anticipated the moment we’d learn something important about ourselves."
32
"The suspect reached a final, narrow archway that opened into a courtyard-like space within the subterranean market—an area lit by a ring of weak lamps, each one…"
33
"There, at the centre, a platform rose above a shallow pit, and the suspect paused, eyes locked on a figure who waited with quiet, inexorable patience."
34
"The figure wore a cloak that seemed woven from night itself and carried the weight of a centuries-long secret."
35
"I stepped between the suspect and the platform, the blade in his hand catching the light of the lamps and throwing a short, sharp glimmer across the crowd."
36
"The Market thickened, a living fog of aroma and possibility, and the bone token on the suspect’s neck gave a soft, warning chime, a sound that said: doors will …"
37
"A trapdoor opened with a stubborn creak above the pit, revealing a rough steel ladder that dropped down into a deeper, darker world below."
38
"I shot forward, breaking from the circle of onlookers, and reached for the ladder just as Herrera’s hand closed around my wrist, gripping with a force that told…"
39
"The corridor opened into a cavernous, damp hall where the Market’s true machinery lay in wait: crates stacked like a city’s dark skyline, pulsating jars, charms…"
40
"The suspect lay on the floor in front of a door that looked like a mouth, the bone token still clutched in his hand, shining with a pale intensity."
41
"The suspect turned his head, meeting my eyes with a desperate plea that required no words to convey: spare me the long, slow unraveling of a life that had final…"
42
"The suspect’s mouth opened, but no sound came out at first; then he exhaled, a shuddering breath that carried the exhaustion of someone who had fought the wrong…"
43
"The Market warmed a fraction, and the two hooded enforcers shifted, their heads tilting toward the suspected answer that hung in the air like smoke."
44
"The central chamber’s door slid open with a sound like a sigh, and the space beyond glowed with a mad, green light that suggested the Market was about to reveal…"
45
"It was not the kind of figure you’d call a guard or a boss; it was the Market’s own personification, the part of the space that decided who lived and who did no…"
46
"Herrera’s breath pressed against my ear, a reminder of the stakes and the costs, the promises and the betrayals we’d signed up for when we chose to chase a man …"
47
"The suspect jerked his head toward me as if begging for rescue, then looked back toward the figure with a tremor of realization and fear that this moment had al…"
48
"Everything blurred for a moment—the Market’s hum, the ache in my knees, Herrera’s quiet, the suspect’s breath, and the green glow that seemed to drink in the ci…"
49
"The last thing I saw before the darkness swallowed us was the suspect’s face, a mask of relief and horror in equal measure, and Herrera steadying himself agains…"
50
"And then we were gone, swallowed by the Market’s private machinery, the bone token’s pale light fading as if someone had turned off a lamp in the middle of a ro…"
51
"The door behind us snapped shut with a sound like a lock sliding into place, and the Market’s breath steadied, as if waiting for the next move in a game only it…"