Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTYKJB9QZ6VX2Z05PS9C3AM

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Duration:
55.3s
Cost:
$0.009661
Provider:
OpenAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Thriller genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Her knee hit concrete and she kept running. The man ahead took the corner too wide, one hand slapping the brick as he vaulted a low fence. Harlow Quinn's breath cut short, lungs burning the way they had the night she chased a drunk through a council estate and came back with a broken wrist and a promotion. She pushed forward, boots clattering on wet cobbles, the city spitting at her in a dozen gutter-snap sounds. Her left hand brushed the worn leather watch on her wrist the way a soldier checks a rifle before a raid. He glanced back once, a sliver of white teeth under a hood, then dropped down a set of concrete steps that led into an obsolete Tube entrance. The metal gate at the top was half-closed, rusted and foul with old chewing gum, but someone had pried one chain loose. Beyond, a ragged poster flapped in the breeze, advertising a jazz night that no longer existed. The man vanished into the dark. Quinn reached the top of the steps and hesitated two heartbeats. She had a list of rules for dangerous places, borrowed from Morris and honed by her own stubbornness: identify exits, keep sight lines, avoid dead ends. The staircase narrowed and smelled of damp plaster and something metallic. Rain had already made the outside slick; the steps drank it and refused to let it go. She plunged down. Each step swallowed sound. The world narrowed to the thud of her boots, the scrape of her trousers against the rail, the steady click of the leather watch as her fingers brushed it again. A voice echoed below, not a shout but a bark, clipped and familiar. "Quinn!" She stopped, took a hard breath, then moved harder. The voice belonged to a market trader, one she half-remembered from late shifts in Camden. An argument bubbled, too fluid to be police and too guarded to be a drunken squabble. She caught the scent then: curry and ozone, copper, a faint perfume of incense. Under it, something old and animal, like the lungs of an animal preserved in salt. Her scalp tightened. At the bottom of the steps a man stood beneath a broken lamp, the light staining his hoodie in jaundiced yellow. He was half-turned, talking to a barred doorway that had once been sealed. Quinn's eyes adjusted and found the thing the man held between his fingers: small, pale, carved bone on a leather thong. A token. She knew the description as well as she knew the serial of her service pistol. Bone tokens were mythology in the papers, a good story for Sunday supplements. They belonged to stories told by late-night drunks and occult forums. Except when they didn't. The man fed the token into a gap in the doorway, a notch carved in the stone like a mouth. The gap ate it. The barred doorway shivered. For a heartbeat it resisted, then a hidden hinge sighed and the metal slid aside, revealing a steep descent of bare earth, ropes, and an iron ladder that disappeared into opaque darkness. A murmur rose beyond the doorway, not human words, but a cadence that hooked into the bones of the stairs. A murmur of traders, of animals in cages, of voices bargaining in tongues Quinn half-recognised from interviews with smugglers and refugees. The man with the token moved through the opening with the easy confidence of someone who paid for things that did not always belong to him. She gripped the rail. Her breath fogged in front of her, the air colder and more still than the rain had been. Morris's face flickered—not an image so much as a shape, a pattern in the way her hands remembered the feel of a partner's shoulder, the rhythm of two people clearing a room. She had not allowed herself that memory for three years, not since he stopped coming home. Memories were small weapons; she kept them sheathed. "Stay put," she said to the empty stairwell. Her voice ricocheted and came back thinner. She heard the man laugh, low and without humour. "It's not that kind of market, detective," he called over his shoulder. "You'll want a token. Safe. Ordered. No one dies if you buy the right thing." She did not move. She did not take her eyes off the doorway. Her hand found the grip of her pistol because it was a movement she trusted, not because she intended to fire. The leather watch on her wrist clicked against the metal. On the second thought she stepped down again, three steps, to keep sound in her favour. The market beyond the doorway breathed. Stalls closed against shadow arranged themselves like teeth. Lanterns burned in jars, their flames a sickly green. People passed through pockets of light: a woman with silver hair and gloves that looked like bare branches, an old man whose eyes reflected the lanterns like fish, a kid with a skateboard under one arm and something folded and wrapped in black in the other. Not everyone looked human. Not everyone looked like they wanted to talk to the police. Quinn kept moving. Her training forced her to catalog risk: exits and entrances, the weight of bodies nearby, the potential for knives and for a crowd to swallow you. Her senses pulled in taste, sound, smell in equal measure; they built a map. The man with the token had pushed through a cluster of stalls and into a narrower passage. She followed at a distance, counting breaths, watching hands. From a stall came a voice, English smeared with a dozen accents. "Token or not, officer, best you go back upstairs, yeah?" "You know how I handle 'best you's,'" Quinn said. She kept to the shadows and let the pockets of lantern light play over her face. She felt more like a piece of equipment than a person. Sharp jaw, shoulders keyed. The words were a warning and a joke and a posture all at once. Someone laughed, and the laugh sounded like coins down a drain. A woman stepped out, wearing a long coat that cracked visually like old paper. She had a catalogue of scars along one forearm, and a smile that sold danger. "You chasing lost dogs or lost souls?" she asked. "Both," Quinn said. She moved past the stall and the woman made no step to stop her. The market had rules, and Quinn had broken plenty, but there was still an etiquette among thieves and traders. The woman watched her like a cat that had seen too many mice. The passage angled and widened into a gallery. Stalls lined either side, offering jars of shimmering powder, boxes labelled in languages she could not decypher, amulets tied in knots. A sound cut through: the rasp of leather and the high whisper of the token man. Ahead he shoved through a curtain of beads hung from a stall and got caught as if in a net. When he turned his head, Quinn saw his face in the lantern light, smeared by fatigue. He was not the suspect she had come for—he was too young, too small-time to run a ring. He held out the token and a man with bare arms like carved wood took it, examined it and laughed, then slipped it into his own pocket like a thief tucking a prize. "You're not from around here," the carved-wood man said. "No," Quinn said. "I'm looking for a man. Short, bad tattoos. Blue hoodie." A shadow moved behind the carved-wood man. A hand slid a cloth-wrapped parcel across the counter. "You pay, you ask," the carved-wood man said, eyes like flint. His accent was clipped, efficient. His fingers brushed the parcel. "Asking's free, but it makes trouble." Quinn's mouth stayed closed. She weighed her options. The market demanded currency she did not have, in forms that were not always legal. The bone token was, however, transactional and physical. If she followed someone without meeting the market's rules she risked being trapped inside a place that rearranged itself at will, a market that moved locations every full moon. Evidence suggested the Veil Market's proprietors traded in things that tended to find a way to stick to the people who handled them. Morris's file had been annotated with a single sentence scrawled in someone else's handwriting on the margins: "Do not go where the signs are wrong." Her pulse answered with a steady count. There were, on the far side of the gallery, two exits she could see. One led down to a room where the air smelled of boiled meat and a tv playing static. The other narrowed further into a corridor that promised darkness and maybe a crowd. The carved-wood man touched her wrist as if testing a pulse. "You sure you want this?" he said. "Yes," Quinn said. His smile widened like a hinge. "You're brave." She did not feel brave. She felt practical. A man had run away from a crime scene. Something valuable had changed hands. She had a duty. She had a partner's memory that tightened into a line of refusal at the thought of walking away. She moved again, slower now, letting the stall-owners take her measure. Someone behind her called her by name, the syllables spoken like a prayer to a god who liked to be ironic. "Harlow Quinn." She turned. A boy, no more than sixteen, leaned against a pillar and chewed the end of a bone. He had the same medallion Quinn had seen around the neck of every kid in the market: a small Saint Christopher, dull with use. Not a bone token. Tomás Herrera stepped out from between crates as if he had always been there. He wore a jacket patched at the elbows. His olive skin glowed in the jar light. He had a scar along his left forearm, pale under the dimness. He did not move like someone hiding; he moved like someone who had, in the past, stood in places where violence settled and chosen to heal it. "Tomás," she said. He inclined his head. "Detective Quinn." His English carried a soft Spanish cadence. "You're far from the hospital." "You're far from a hospital," she said. He shrugged. "Different kinds of patients." He smiled, then his expression hardened in a careful way. "What is it you seek?" "A man in a blue hoodie," she said. "Token in hand." Tomás's eyes flicked to the carved-wood man, then to the narrow corridor where the market swallowed shadows. His fingers brushed the medallion at his throat and didn't fumble. "You don't have a token," he said. She tightened her fist rather than answer. Tomás's voice held no judgement, only a fact. "What's the cost, then?" she asked. Tomás's smile was small and rueful. "Entry's one thing. Staying is another. They do not like visitors from upstairs, especially with ties to the force." He said it without warning, the way a surgeon mentions a tumour in a routine consult. The carved-wood man shifted, the sound a slight threat. Quinn's hand hovered near her holster. "Tell me where he went," she said. Tomás scanned the market with the same tenderness he might have used to find a vein. "He went deeper. Past the knives. Past the apothecary with the jars that hum. The knot in the corridor gives way to a room. People with badges leave behind the smell of iron. He might have traded something the wrong way. Or he might be bait." "Is this bait for me?" Tomás looked at her then, his warm brown eyes steady. "What you think a market like this pays attention to, detective, is not you. It's the question you carry. If your question smells like police, it will be answered differently." Her jaw tightened. Sound in the market shifted, a low vibration. Someone knocked over a stack of metal bowls and their music died. A hand passed behind a curtain and did not come out. The carved-wood man laid a palm flat on the counter, his fingers long and precise. "Either you have coin, or you have a friend with coin," he said. "Or you leave. Properly. Nobody likes a ransacking cop." Quinn thought of Morris again only as a technical detail: partner missing, file cold, unexplained evidence vanished from a secured locker. She felt the memory as a weight on her abdomen rather than a sentiment. She removed her hand from her holster. She had a duty. She had instincts. She had a stubbornness refined by eighteen years of service. "I'll go in," she said. Tomás took a breath that tasted like apology. "If you run, you run with what you take. If you stay, stay close. If you fight, don't make it a story. Make it a solution." "Stop giving speeches," Quinn said. He laughed once, a small cheer, then folded back into the crowd like a volunteer sinking into an ambulance. He did not offer a token. He never offered idly. He had, Quinn suspected, reasons to keep his hands clean and his fingers close to his own scars. She moved toward the narrow corridor. The carved-wood man didn't stop her. A child at a stall watched, eyes wide, the glow of the lantern reflected in his pupils. He mouthed something that might have been a prayer or a warning. Quinn passed close enough to see the handwriting—names scratched into the inside of his wrist. She kept going. As she entered the corridor, the air closed. Lantern light dragged down into a throat of black. Her watch clicked; she read the seconds by it rather than by her chest. Somewhere ahead, behind another curtain, a voice turned into a laugh and then into a sound like something being snapped. Her phone buzzed once and died under the market's interference. She heard it, low and useless, and shoved it back into her pocket. The carved-wood man's laughter rolled after her like distant thunder. She had followed enough people into enough basements to know that you could always turn back—until you could not. The corridor took her into a circular room that smelled of iron and lemon, where people bartered with gestures and signatures more than words. In the centre, a table stood with an old radio that hummed as if it were remembering a song. The man in the blue hoodie stood by the far wall, speaking to someone who did not show his face. He placed his hand, palm open, on the table and the skin of his hand looked raw. Quinn stepped forward. The world tightened. The man with the unseen face turned slowly, and when he moved, the lanterns caught something that made Quinn's skin go cold. The face that looked up at her was not a face she recognised, but a thing that had been scrubbed smooth and wrote its own history. It smiled. "Welcome," it said. The voice carried a thousand small sounds folded into it, like someone speaking with coins in their mouth. A hand closed on the back of Quinn's jacket, hard, and pulled her into someone’s shadow. A whisper slid across her neck, intimately close. "You're not the first of the police to come down here," the whisper said, and the words tasted like salt. "Will you be the first to leave with both shoes on?" She felt the grip tighten, and a figure moved into the lamplight, a gloved hand revealing a ring carved from bone. The table's radio popped and a new voice bled from static into speech. "Detective Harlow Quinn," the voice said, clear and too amused, "we were wondering when you'd visit."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He smiled then [then]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.595
leniency1
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.04
98.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2633
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2633
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"potential"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"efficient"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"tenderness"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"familiar"
2"flickered"
3"weight"
4"potential"
5"whisper"
6"efficient"
7"pulse"
8"flicked"
9"scanned"
10"tenderness"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences193
matches(empty)
98.45% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences193
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences210
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2611
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount2288
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Quinn21
Tube1
Morris4
Camden1
Sunday1
English2
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
Spanish1
Tomás7
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"English"
3"Market"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
45.10% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences143
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"looked like bare branches, an old man who"
1"looked like they wanted to talk to the po"
2"sounded like coins down a drain"
3"as if testing a pulse"
4"tasted like apology"
5"tasted like salt"
85.10% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.149
wordCount2611
matches
0"not a shout but a bark, clipped"
1"not human words, but a cadence"
2"not a face she recognised, but a thing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences210
matches
0"know that you"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean36.77
std30.64
cv0.833
sampleLengths
08
189
271
365
43
547
61
772
8100
960
1067
1178
1224
1327
1460
1584
1669
1712
1810
1954
2040
219
2249
23132
249
2513
2616
2727
28108
2953
3011
317
323
338
3444
3532
362
37116
383
3918
407
4121
4211
4328
447
4515
466
4725
4831
497
94.36% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences193
matches
0"been sealed"
1"got caught"
2"was clipped"
3"been annotated"
4"being snapped"
5"been scrubbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs415
matches
0"were remembering"
20.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences210
ratio0.043
matches
0"Rain had already made the outside slick; the steps drank it and refused to let it go."
1"Morris's face flickered—not an image so much as a shape, a pattern in the way her hands remembered the feel of a partner's shoulder, the rhythm of two people clearing a room."
2"Memories were small weapons; she kept them sheathed."
3"Her senses pulled in taste, sound, smell in equal measure; they built a map."
4"He was not the suspect she had come for—he was too young, too small-time to run a ring."
5"He did not move like someone hiding; he moved like someone who had, in the past, stood in places where violence settled and chosen to heal it."
6"Quinn passed close enough to see the handwriting—names scratched into the inside of his wrist."
7"Her watch clicked; she read the seconds by it rather than by her chest."
8"She had followed enough people into enough basements to know that you could always turn back—until you could not."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2310
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.029004329004329005
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0030303030303030303
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences210
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences210
mean12.43
std8
cv0.643
sampleLengths
08
119
231
318
421
527
622
716
86
911
1026
1111
1217
133
144
1530
1613
171
189
1915
2016
2114
2215
233
2421
2513
2621
272
2815
2913
3011
314
3220
334
344
3532
3620
3721
3826
394
4018
4132
4216
438
448
457
469
4712
4815
494
36.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.2904761904761905
totalSentences210
uniqueOpeners61
19.27% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"Somewhere ahead, behind another curtain,"
ratio0.006
55.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences173
matches
0"Her knee hit concrete and"
1"She pushed forward, boots clattering"
2"Her left hand brushed the"
3"He glanced back once, a"
4"She had a list of"
5"She plunged down."
6"She stopped, took a hard"
7"She caught the scent then:"
8"Her scalp tightened."
9"He was half-turned, talking to"
10"She knew the description as"
11"They belonged to stories told"
12"She gripped the rail."
13"Her breath fogged in front"
14"She had not allowed herself"
15"she said to the empty"
16"Her voice ricocheted and came"
17"She heard the man laugh,"
18"he called over his shoulder"
19"She did not move."
ratio0.41
17.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount153
totalSentences173
matches
0"Her knee hit concrete and"
1"The man ahead took the"
2"Harlow Quinn's breath cut short,"
3"She pushed forward, boots clattering"
4"Her left hand brushed the"
5"He glanced back once, a"
6"The metal gate at the"
7"The man vanished into the"
8"Quinn reached the top of"
9"She had a list of"
10"The staircase narrowed and smelled"
11"Rain had already made the"
12"She plunged down."
13"Each step swallowed sound."
14"The world narrowed to the"
15"A voice echoed below, not"
16"She stopped, took a hard"
17"The voice belonged to a"
18"An argument bubbled, too fluid"
19"She caught the scent then:"
ratio0.884
28.90% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"If she followed someone without"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences104
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He was half-turned, talking to a barred doorway that had once been sealed."
1"For a heartbeat it resisted, then a hidden hinge sighed and the metal slid aside, revealing a steep descent of bare earth, ropes, and an iron ladder that disapp…"
2"People passed through pockets of light: a woman with silver hair and gloves that looked like bare branches, an old man whose eyes reflected the lanterns like fi…"
3"If she followed someone without meeting the market's rules she risked being trapped inside a place that rearranged itself at will, a market that moved locations…"
4"Someone behind her called her by name, the syllables spoken like a prayer to a god who liked to be ironic."
5"The man with the unseen face turned slowly, and when he moved, the lanterns caught something that made Quinn's skin go cold."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the whisper said, and the words tasted like salt"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.8122%