Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP4TS8T5R7Q801AF19CZ46

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.061726
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The engine of the Golden Empress delivery scooter ticked as it cooled in the damp night air, a sharp, metallic rhythm that faded into the sprawling silence of Richmond Park. Aurora Carter zipped her insulated courier jacket up to her chin, attempting to ward off the biting London chill, but the cold was not what had drawn her out into the dark. It was the heavy pull against her sternum. Beneath the layers of synthetic nylon and cotton, the thumbnail-sized gemstone rested against her skin. The silver chain felt like ice around her neck, but the deep crimson artifact itself radiated a steady, unnatural heat. Rory pressed a palm to her chest. A faint inner glow bled through the fabric of her shirt, casting a dark red wash over her fingers. Her unknown benefactor had never provided an instruction manual for the heavy piece of jewelry, only the quiet assurance that it was important. Lately, the heartstone had been largely dormant. Tonight, it felt like a living ember. She left the paved path and stepped onto the unruly grass, her boots crunching dead autumn leaves. The park was officially closed, abandoned to the foxes and the restless wind, but Rory knew exactly where she was going. She had been here once before, guided by Eva during her frantic first weeks in the city, back when London still felt like a labyrinth designed to swallow her. Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones loomed out of the gloom. They did not look like trees. They looked like gray, petrified sentinels, their thick trunks twisted into pillars that marked the boundary of a place that did not belong entirely to Earth. Rory hesitated at the threshold. She rubbed the thumb of her right hand over the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood accident that now served as an anchor when her nerves frayed. She was a pre-law drop-out, a delivery driver, a refugee from a bad past. She liked logic. She liked puzzles with neat solutions. She did not like magic, and she did not like the way the air between the massive oaks seemed to ripple, like heat rising off a tarmac. The crimson stone pulsed against her chest. A warning, or a summons. Rory took a slow breath, dropped her hands, and stepped between the ancient oaks. The transition was immediate and disorienting. The biting autumn wind vanished, replaced by an absolute, suffocating stillness. The temperature spiked from freezing to uncomfortably balmy. Rory stood frozen just inside the treeline, her bright blue eyes wide as they adjusted to the impossible landscape. This was the Grove. Isolde's grove, some called it. A pocket of reality wedged uncomfortably between London and the Fae realm. Time did not work here. Eva had warned her that an hour inside this clearing could deposit her back in Richmond Park a minute after she left, or a week later. Beneath her boots, the dead leaves of November were gone. In their place, an unbroken carpet of wildflowers spread across a vast clearing, their petals unfurling in the dark. They were entirely colorless in the moonlight, a sea of gray and silver blossoms that smelled sickly sweet, like rotting honey and crushed jasmine. Rory swallowed hard. The silence was absolute. No traffic from the distant roads. No wind through the canopy. Not even the rustle of an animal in the brush. The stillness was so heavy it made her ears ring. Then, the heartstone flared. The heat bloomed into a sharp, localized burn against her collarbone. Rory winced, reaching into her collar and pulling the pendant out. The deep crimson stone was glowing fiercely now, throwing off enough red light to illuminate the nearest cluster of wildflowers. Her heart did a slow, heavy roll in her chest. The pendant did not react to Fae magic. It only possessed one measurable behavior. It pulsed when near a Hel portal. Rory looked at the deep red light spilling across her hands. She was not standing in a serene, hidden sanctuary. The Grove was compromised. She turned to leave. Finding the anomaly was no longer the priority. Getting back to her flat above Silas's bar, locking the door, and making a pot of tea was the only logical course of action. She took a step back toward the ancient oak standing stones. Something shifted in the deep shadows of the clearing. Rory stopped. She forced her breathing to quiet, straining her ears. A wet, heavy slide. Like a sack of damp soil being dragged over the wildflowers. It was a hundred yards away, deep in the thickest patch of the unseasonal blooms, but in the dead air of the Grove, it sounded as if it were right next to her ear. Panic, familiar and sharp, clawed at the back of her throat. It felt like the nights she had spent listening to Evan's footsteps in the hall of their shared apartment, waiting for the door to open. But Rory was twenty-five now. She had fled Cardiff to escape being a victim. She drove her nails into her palms, marshaling her cool-headed intellect. If there was a Hel portal in the Fae Grove, something had crawled out of it. And it was highly likely that the sudden, brilliant flare of her pendant had acted like a lighthouse in the dark. She tucked the silver chain back inside her shirt, attempting to smother the red glow under her insulated jacket. Total darkness swept back over the clearing, save for the pale wash of the moon. Another sound. A rhythmic, deliberate sequence of clicks, like overgrown fingernails tapping against stone. It was closer. Fifty yards. Rory backed up slowly, keeping her eyes locked on the sea of wildflowers. The stems were waist-high in places. The moonlight painted harsh, deceptive shadows across them. As she scanned the pale expanse, the wrongness of the place began to press heavily against her mind. The air smelled too thick. Her movements felt sluggish, as if the strange time dilation of the Grove was physically fighting her muscles. A tall silhouette detached itself from the trunk of a great oak near the center of the clearing. Rory stopped breathing entirely. The thing was too tall to be human. It stood draped in the shadows, its limbs elongated and weeping dark fluid that hissed as it hit the blooming flowers. The flowers did not just crush beneath its feet. They withered, turning instantly to black ash. It had no discernible face, just a pale, featureless shape angled directly toward where she stood. It was hunting her. Rory took another slow, silent step backward, reaching blindly behind her for the rough bark of the boundary oaks. Her hand found only empty air. She risked a quick glance over her shoulder. The twin oak pillars were completely gone. The boundary had shifted, or the temporal distortion of the Grove had spun her around without her realizing it. Behind her was only endless, impenetrable forest. The clicking sound started again. Rapid. Excited. Rory snapped her gaze back to the clearing. The tall shadow was no longer fifty yards away. It stood twenty paces from her, looming over the silver blossoms. Its long, disjointed arms hung past its knees. The wet dragging noise came from an appendage it dragged behind it on the ground. Her chest felt like a furnace. The heartstone was searing her skin, vibrating violently on its silver chain. Out-of-the-box thinking. She needed an erratic angle. Running blindly into the woods would only disorient her further in a pocket dimension where distance and time were fluid. The entity was clearly tracking the heat and magical signature of the artifact. Rory moved her left hand slowly to her zipper. She dragged it down with agonizing care, trying to mask the abrasive sound of the teeth parting. The red light of the pendant spilled out in a brilliant, damning beam directly onto the creature. In the crimson light, the entity seemed to shudder. The featureless head snapped back, and a sound like grinding stone tore from exactly where its throat should be. It scrambled backward, shielding itself from the direct blast of the deep crimson glow. It was a creature of the darkest, coldest depths of Hel. The pure, concentrated energy of the heartstone was not just a beacon. It was a threat. Taking her chance, Rory yanked the silver chain over her head. The metal bit sharply into her skin, leaving a red welt across her neck. The gemstone burned her palm, but she tightly gripped it, stepping aggressively toward the towering shadow. The creature recoiled, its long limbs contorting as it hissed, terrified of the intense light and heat. Rory did not run away. She walked forward, sweeping the crimson light back and forth like a lantern, driving the impossible thing deeper into the Grove, away from the area where she suspected the portal had shifted. She trusted her sharp intellect to remember every step, every crushed flower, reverse-engineering her path relative to the creature's hiding spot. As she forced the entity back, the oppressive pressure in the air began to thin. To her left, caught in the periphery of the red glow, the texture of the darkness subtly changed. A pair of ancient oak standing stones materialized from the gloom, their rough bark grounded in reality. The creature realized she was flanking it. It let out another horrific, grinding shriek and lunged, limbs slicing through the flowers toward her side. Rory threw the heartstone with all her might. She did not throw it at the creature. She threw it in a high arc over the nearest cluster of thick, thorny brush. The creature, instinctively tracking the source of the overwhelming Hel-linked magic, violently changed direction, diving after the falling stone into the deep undergrowth. Rory sprinted. She abandoned caution, her boots tearing the blooming wildflowers from their roots. She threw herself shoulder-first into the gap between the ancient oaks just as the heavy, wet dragging sound whipped around in her direction. The transition hit her like a physical blow. The suffocating warmth collapsed. The biting London wind slammed into her face, smelling of car exhaust, damp asphalt, and rain. The blaring horn of a distant night bus echoed through the trees. Rory stumbled forward onto the paved path of Richmond Park and fell to her knees. She gasped the freezing air, her straight black hair clinging to the cold sweat on her cheeks. She stared back at the wrought-iron silhouette of the trees, but she saw only typical, dormant autumn oaks. The standing stones were just trees again. The Fae Grove was closed. Rory knelt on the cold pavement for a long time. Her chest felt terribly bare without the familiar weight of the silver chain. She rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist, staring into the dark, knowing exactly what she had left stranded inside, and wondering how long it would take for it to find its way out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
86.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
2"sharply"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1844
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"synthetic"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"sentinels"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count2
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"looming"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"depths"
count1
15
word"beacon"
count1
16
word"oppressive"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"chill"
2"synthetic"
3"loomed"
4"gloom"
5"sentinels"
6"pulsed"
7"sanctuary"
8"familiar"
9"footsteps"
10"rhythmic"
11"scanned"
12"looming"
13"searing"
14"depths"
15"beacon"
16"oppressive"
17"warmth"
18"echoed"
19"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1834
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1834
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond3
Park3
Carter1
London4
Rory21
Eva2
Earth1
Grove8
Fae4
November1
Hel4
Silas1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Hel-linked1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Earth"
4"Grove"
5"Fae"
6"Hel"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore0.927
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences120
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like ice around her neck, but the"
1"felt like a living ember"
2"felt like a labyrinth designed to swall"
3"looked like gray, petrified sentinels, th"
4"felt like the nights she had spent list"
5"felt like a furnace"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1834
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean36.68
std23.4
cv0.638
sampleLengths
0105
163
267
343
485
512
614
744
852
953
1038
114
1242
1331
1424
1547
169
1711
1815
1934
2098
2134
2214
235
2468
2518
264
2761
284
2925
3041
317
3251
3318
3440
3543
3642
3727
3841
3917
4058
4150
4224
438
4446
4537
4640
4732
4830
4958
98.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"were gone"
1"was compromised"
2"being dragged"
59.15% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs284
matches
0"was going"
1"was glowing"
2"was not standing"
3"was hunting"
4"was searing"
5"was flanking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences151
ratio0
matches(empty)
80.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1847
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"overwhelming Hel-linked magic,"
adverbCount83
adverbRatio0.04493773687060097
lyAdverbCount43
lyAdverbRatio0.023280996210070383
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean12.15
std7.52
cv0.619
sampleLengths
030
132
28
315
420
57
619
723
87
97
1017
1121
1229
1311
146
1526
165
1730
1814
193
206
2127
227
235
2414
256
2611
278
2819
294
305
3112
325
3326
3410
3519
3624
373
384
396
405
4110
4210
434
4411
4511
4620
4710
488
496
34.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.26490066225165565
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners40
23.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"Then, the heartstone flared."
ratio0.007
78.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences144
matches
0"It was the heavy pull"
1"Her unknown benefactor had never"
2"She left the paved path"
3"She had been here once"
4"They did not look like"
5"They looked like gray, petrified"
6"She rubbed the thumb of"
7"She was a pre-law drop-out,"
8"She liked logic."
9"She liked puzzles with neat"
10"She did not like magic,"
11"They were entirely colorless in"
12"Her heart did a slow,"
13"It only possessed one measurable"
14"It pulsed when near a"
15"She was not standing in"
16"She turned to leave."
17"She took a step back"
18"She forced her breathing to"
19"It was a hundred yards"
ratio0.354
39.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences144
matches
0"The engine of the Golden"
1"Aurora Carter zipped her insulated"
2"It was the heavy pull"
3"The silver chain felt like"
4"Rory pressed a palm to"
5"A faint inner glow bled"
6"Her unknown benefactor had never"
7"Tonight, it felt like a"
8"She left the paved path"
9"The park was officially closed,"
10"She had been here once"
11"They did not look like"
12"They looked like gray, petrified"
13"Rory hesitated at the threshold."
14"She rubbed the thumb of"
15"She was a pre-law drop-out,"
16"She liked logic."
17"She liked puzzles with neat"
18"She did not like magic,"
19"The crimson stone pulsed against"
ratio0.84
69.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences144
matches
0"If there was a Hel"
1"To her left, caught in"
ratio0.014
81.88% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences82
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The engine of the Golden Empress delivery scooter ticked as it cooled in the damp night air, a sharp, metallic rhythm that faded into the sprawling silence of R…"
1"They looked like gray, petrified sentinels, their thick trunks twisted into pillars that marked the boundary of a place that did not belong entirely to Earth."
2"They were entirely colorless in the moonlight, a sea of gray and silver blossoms that smelled sickly sweet, like rotting honey and crushed jasmine."
3"Getting back to her flat above Silas's bar, locking the door, and making a pot of tea was the only logical course of action."
4"It was a hundred yards away, deep in the thickest patch of the unseasonal blooms, but in the dead air of the Grove, it sounded as if it were right next to her e…"
5"Her movements felt sluggish, as if the strange time dilation of the Grove was physically fighting her muscles."
6"The heartstone was searing her skin, vibrating violently on its silver chain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4761%