Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP5SN8VYRSYWR7QF71YSTB

Run Details

Duration:
52.7s
Cost:
$0.056692
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the Soho pavements, fracturing the distinctive green neon glow of the Raven's Nest into a thousand oily puddles. Aurora Carter came down the narrow rear staircase from her flat, shaking the dampness from her straight, shoulder-length black hair. She smelled faintly of sesame oil and fried garlic, the lingering ghost of her evening shift running packages and takeout for Yu-Fei Cheung at the Golden Empress. The bar below was a sanctuary of amber shadows, insulated from the bleak London evening. The walls were plastered in a mosaic of old maritime maps and framed black-and-white photographs of faces no one seemed to remember. Behind the polished mahogany counter stood Silas Blackwood. He moved down the length of the bar to collect an empty glass, his gait thrown off by the slight limp in his left leg. It was an old souvenir from Prague, a ruined knee that had ended his tenure in field intelligence. He picked up a rag, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light as he wiped down the wood. Silas nodded at Aurora, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. His neatly trimmed beard mirrored his auburn hair, shot through with veins of iron grey. He carried himself with the quiet, immovable authority of a man who had spent a lifetime holding secrets in the dark. He poured a measure of soda water and slid it down the bar to her. She took her usual stool. Against the ambient murmur of the few scattered patrons, she traced the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The childhood accident was decades old, but the faint ridge of skin grounded her when her mind raced. The bell above the entrance chimed, a sharp sound cutting through the low jazz playing from the corner speaker. The heavy wooden door swung inward, admitting a rush of wet air. Aurora looked up, the cool-headed calculation that was her second nature taking over. She cataloged the newcomer instantly. He was tall, dressed in a charcoal wool suit that fell with the heavy, expensive drape of bespoke tailoring. A silk tie was loosened at his throat. He shook a black umbrella, collapsing it with a sharp click. When he lifted his head, the neon light caught his face. Aurora stopped tracing her scar. Her breath caught somewhere at the base of her throat. It was Julian. He had not seen her yet. He approached the opposite end of the bar, signaling to Silas with two fingers. Aurora stared. The Julian she had known at Cardiff University had been a ragged, nervous energy wrapped in oversized jumpers. He used to chew the ends of his pens until they splintered while they crammed for Pre-Law seminars, his hair a perpetual uncombed mess. The man standing fifteen feet away looked completely scoured out. His hair was cropped brutally short. The sharp lines of his face were drawn tight with exhaustion, and his eyes, when they shifted to scan the room, looked entirely dead. Julian turned his head. His gaze swept over the maps, the photographs, and then snagged on the woman with the bright blue eyes sitting at the end of the bar. He froze. His hand, resting on the mahogany, tightened until the knuckles went white. Aurora did not look away. She waited as the shock washed over his features, followed by a sudden, severe vulnerability. He picked up his drink, left his umbrella leaning against the brass rail, and walked slowly toward her. Hello, Rory, he said. His voice was deeper than she remembered, scraped rough at the edges. Hello, Julian, she replied. He stood beside her, looking hovering and enormous in the dim space. May I? he asked, gesturing to the empty stool beside her. She nodded. He sat down heavily. The scent of rain-wet wool and expensive vetiver cologne drifted over her, entirely masking the lingering aroma of the Golden Empress takeout. For a long minute, neither of them spoke. Silas swept past them, his limp barely audible against the floorboards, and disappeared toward the back of the room. He busied himself near the heavy oak bookshelf that swung open into a hidden back room, ostensibly checking inventory, though Aurora knew he was merely granting her the camouflage of privacy. You live in London now, Julian said. It was not quite a question. I do, Aurora said. She kept her voice level. I had to ask Eva, he said, staring down into his amber glass. After you vanished. You stopped attending lectures. Your father, Brendan, he tried calling everyone. He came to my flat. He asked if I knew where you had gone. Eva finally told me she told you to run here, but she would not give me an address. I did not want an address to give, Julian. He looked at her, his eyes tracing the line of her jaw, the straight fall of her black hair. You look well, Rory. You look exactly the same. You do not, she said bluntly. A bitter, hollow laugh escaped him. He looked down at his tailored suit, resting his hand on an expensive silver watch that caught the dim light. No. I suppose I do not. What happened to the defender of the downtrodden? she asked, testing the waters. The boy who was going to take the bar, go into human rights, and drag the Welsh legal system kicking and screaming into the light? He took a long swallow of his drink. He suffocated, Julian said softly. And then he graduated. I am a junior partner at a corporate defense firm in the city. We restructure assets. Which is a clean way of saying we pave over people who cannot afford to fight back. Aurora felt a genuine pang of sorrow in her chest. She remembered sitting on the floor of the library in Cardiff, Julian beside her, arguing passionately about the philosophy of justice. He had believed in it with an innocence she had always envied. Why? she asked. Because it was easy, he said, turning his glass in slow circles. Because when you left, the whole foundation of the thing felt pointless. You were the smartest person in the room, Rory. Your mind saw angles none of us could even comprehend. When you dropped out, when you just disappeared, I realized it did not matter how smart or passionate we were. Life just happens to us anyway. Life did not just happen to me, Julian. I made a choice. Because of Evan, he said. The name dropped like a stone into a deep well. Aurora felt the old, cold phantom pain where her ribs used to bruise. She kept her expression smooth and impenetrable, a defense mechanism she had perfected long before Silas had taken her under his wing. Yes, she said simply. Because of Evan. Leaving was the only way I could ensure I would have a future. I would have helped you, Julian said, his voice dropping to a desperate whisper. I would have stood between you and him. You knew that. You must have known that. I knew you would try, she said, leaning forward. And I knew Evan would break you. I left to save myself, Julian. I did not leave to punish you. But you did, he said empty-eyed. You punished all of us. Brendan was a ghost for a year. I gave up. I put on this suit, I moved to London, and I let them hollow me out. I sat in a boardroom today for nine hours, Rory, and I could not remember why I woke up this morning. Aurora realized then the vast, terrifying gulf between who they had been and who they were now. She lived in a tiny flat above a bar that served as a front for a retired MI6 operative's intelligence network. She ferried food across a sprawling city. She had abandoned the prestige of her father's legacy for absolute anonymity. Yet, sitting beside Julian in his thousand-pound suit, she realized she was the one who had survived. He was entirely lost. I am sorry, she said, her voice softening. But I cannot carry the weight of your choices, Julian. I am only responsible for my own. He squeezed his eyes shut. When he opened them, the anger had drained away, leaving only a profound, suffocating grief. I know. I know you cannot. It is just easier to blame the ghost of Aurora Carter than to look in the mirror. They sat in silence. The jazz drifted on. The rain beat against the glass outside, illuminated by the green neon sign. Julian finished his drink. He did not ask for another. He stood up, retrieving his umbrella from the brass rail. He looked down at her one last time, an unspoken plea in his posture, a desperate hope that she might offer him absolution, or a reason to change. Aurora gave him neither. She only offered him the truth of the present. Goodbye, Julian, she said. Goodbye, Rory. He turned and walked toward the entrance. He pushed through the heavy wooden door and vanished into the wet, sprawling dark of Soho. Aurora stared at the space he had occupied. The scent of his expensive cologne was already fading, overtaken by the smell of old paper, spilled beer, and rain. Silas emerged from the back. He walked slowly with his familiar limp, stepping behind the bar to retrieve Julian's empty glass. He did not ask who the man was. He did not ask why Aurora was gripping her left wrist so tightly her knuckles were white. He simply wiped down the mahogany surface, letting the rhythm of the work speak for itself. Silas, she said quietly, her bright blue eyes fixed on the rain-streaked window. He looked up. Yes, Laila? he replied, using the alias she sometimes wore in the darker corners of his network. Pour me another, she said. Silas reached for the bottle, the silver signet ring flashing in the shadows. He poured the drink in complete silence, understanding better than anyone the heavy, unnamable burden of surviving the life you left behind.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
82.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"passionately"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"passionately"
4"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"mosaic"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"cataloged"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count2
7
word"pang"
count1
8
word"ensure"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"mosaic"
2"traced"
3"raced"
4"cataloged"
5"silk"
6"tracing"
7"pang"
8"ensure"
9"whisper"
10"weight"
11"profound"
12"silence"
13"unspoken"
14"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
61.48% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences158
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"happened to"
3"happens to"
4"happen to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1691
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions17
matches
0"Hello, Rory, he said."
1"Hello, Julian, she replied."
2"You live in London now, Julian said."
3"I do, Aurora said."
4"I had to ask Eva, he said, staring down into his amber glass."
5"You do not, she said bluntly."
6"He suffocated, Julian said softly."
7"Because it was easy, he said, turning his glass in slow circles."
8"Because of Evan, he said."
9"Yes, she said simply."
10"I would have helped you, Julian said, his voice dropping to a desperate whisper."
11"I knew you would try, she said, leaning forward."
12"But you did, he said empty-eyed."
13"I am sorry, she said, her voice softening."
14"Goodbye, Julian, she said."
15"Silas, she said quietly, her bright blue eyes fixed on the rain-streaked window."
16"Pour me another, she said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions83
wordCount1691
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
Carter2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden2
Empress2
London3
Silas8
Blackwood1
Prague1
Aurora15
Julian16
Cardiff2
University1
Pre-Law1
Rory5
Eva2
Brendan2
Welsh1
Evan3
Laila1
You9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Aurora"
7"Julian"
8"University"
9"Rory"
10"Eva"
11"Brendan"
12"Evan"
13"Laila"
14"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"London"
3"Prague"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a question"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1691
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean35.98
std30.3
cv0.842
sampleLengths
0104
1136
242
331
467
515
63
7104
830
914
1038
1116
124
1323
1486
1513
169
1759
189
1928
206
2132
2238
2350
2443
253
2669
2712
285
2945
3020
3130
3229
3358
3478
3525
3643
3769
3813
394
402
4151
4262
4313
4420
455
4635
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences158
matches
0"were plastered"
1"was loosened"
2"was cropped"
3"were drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs300
matches
0"was gripping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences158
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1702
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.031139835487661575
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.01645123384253819
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean10.7
std6.89
cv0.644
sampleLengths
020
120
227
315
422
58
625
718
823
911
1015
1121
1215
135
1419
1518
1619
1712
1813
195
2019
218
2211
2311
245
2510
263
276
2814
292
3018
3124
3210
336
3424
354
3626
372
3812
395
4015
4118
424
4312
444
4512
462
479
482
494
32.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.24050632911392406
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount87
totalSentences148
matches
0"She smelled faintly of sesame"
1"He moved down the length"
2"It was an old souvenir"
3"He picked up a rag,"
4"His neatly trimmed beard mirrored"
5"He carried himself with the"
6"He poured a measure of"
7"She took her usual stool."
8"She cataloged the newcomer instantly."
9"He was tall, dressed in"
10"He shook a black umbrella,"
11"Her breath caught somewhere at"
12"It was Julian."
13"He had not seen her"
14"He approached the opposite end"
15"He used to chew the"
16"His hair was cropped brutally"
17"His gaze swept over the"
18"His hand, resting on the"
19"She waited as the shock"
ratio0.588
37.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences148
matches
0"Rain lashed the Soho pavements,"
1"Aurora Carter came down the"
2"She smelled faintly of sesame"
3"The bar below was a"
4"The walls were plastered in"
5"He moved down the length"
6"It was an old souvenir"
7"He picked up a rag,"
8"Silas nodded at Aurora, his"
9"His neatly trimmed beard mirrored"
10"He carried himself with the"
11"He poured a measure of"
12"She took her usual stool."
13"The childhood accident was decades"
14"The bell above the entrance"
15"The heavy wooden door swung"
16"Aurora looked up, the cool-headed"
17"She cataloged the newcomer instantly."
18"He was tall, dressed in"
19"A silk tie was loosened"
ratio0.845
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences148
matches
0"Because it was easy, he"
1"Because when you left, the"
2"Because of Evan, he said."
3"Because of Evan."
4"Yet, sitting beside Julian in"
ratio0.034
76.19% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences75
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"It was an old souvenir from Prague, a ruined knee that had ended his tenure in field intelligence."
1"He carried himself with the quiet, immovable authority of a man who had spent a lifetime holding secrets in the dark."
2"Aurora looked up, the cool-headed calculation that was her second nature taking over."
3"He was tall, dressed in a charcoal wool suit that fell with the heavy, expensive drape of bespoke tailoring."
4"He busied himself near the heavy oak bookshelf that swung open into a hidden back room, ostensibly checking inventory, though Aurora knew he was merely granting…"
5"He looked down at his tailored suit, resting his hand on an expensive silver watch that caught the dim light."
6"She lived in a tiny flat above a bar that served as a front for a retired MI6 operative's intelligence network."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.4798%