Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVP8G1T70C3GCKMK70TABF3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.064120
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest buzzed with an erratic electrical hum, casting a sickly, rhythmic glow through the rain-streaked window. Inside, the bar offered a dimly lit sanctuary from the damp chill of Soho. The walls, crowded with framed black-and-white photographs and faded geographical maps, seemed to absorb the quiet blues murmuring from the corner jukebox. Aurora Carter sat on the furthest stool near the end of the mahogany bar, her straight shoulder-length black hair still slightly damp from the evening downpour. The scent of roasted duck and ginger lingered on her worn windbreaker, a stubborn reminder of her closing shift delivering orders for Yu-Fei Cheung at the Golden Empress. She traced the rim of her water glass, the pad of her thumb brushing against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was an old souvenir from a childhood tumble off a stone wall in Wales, long before her life had fractured into before and after. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with quiet, deliberate authority. He wiped down the polished wood, his left leg dragging slightly with the familiar limp of a badly healed knee. His auburn hair and neatly trimmed beard, both heavily streaked with grey, caught the dim amber light. When he reached for a bottle on the top shelf, the heavy silver signet ring on his right hand clinked softly against the glass. He poured a measure of whiskey, sliding it silently toward Aurora. She offered him a small nod of gratitude. The brass bell above the heavy oak door chimed. The damp draft of the London street swept in, bringing with it a man brushing rainwater from the shoulders of a bespoke charcoal suit. He looked entirely out of place among the scuffed floorboards and shadows of the Nest. He turned toward the bar, briefcase in hand, shaking his umbrella before his gaze caught on the solitary young woman at the end of the counter. He froze. His brow furrowed, scanning the bright blue of her eyes, the familiar line of her jaw, the relaxed but guarded way she held herself. Aurora. The name broke from his lips, hanging in the quiet space between the jukebox notes. Aurora went still. No one in London called her that. To Silas, to Yu-Fei, to Eva, she was Rory. Aurora belonged to a different lifetime, a different city, a different girl. She recognized him instantly. Liam Gallagher. They had sat shoulder-to-shoulder in the cavernous lecture halls at Cardiff University, both gunning for the top spot in their Pre-Law cohort. Liam. She kept her voice even, though a cold stone of memory dropped in her stomach. What a surprise. He moved toward her slowly, as if approaching an apparition. He took the empty stool beside her, placing his wet leather briefcase gently on the floor. He looked at her windbreaker, noting the grease-smudged emblem of the Golden Empress on her breast pocket. The confusion in his expression was immediate and poorly concealed. I thought my mind was playing tricks on me, Liam said, leaning in. It has been years. You just vanished. Not entirely, Aurora said, her tone cool and practiced. I am right here. Silas approached, his hazel eyes locking onto Liam with a distinctly measuring weight. Can I get you something, friend? A gin and tonic, Liam said, barely looking at the older man. Silas nodded once, his face an unreadable mask, and turned to prepare the drink, his uneven gait tapping a slow rhythm against the floorboards. Liam turned back to her, his gaze sweeping over her face. We all wondered what happened. One week you were securing the top clerkship in the department, the next, your flat was empty. Brendan was out of his mind. Aurora flinched internally at the mention of her father. Brendan Carter, the esteemed Irish barrister who expected nothing less than a mirror image of his own success from his daughter. He was disappointed, she corrected quietly. Do not mistake rage for grief. He was worried about you, Aurora. We all were. Liam leaned forward, his voice taking on the practiced, persuasive cadence of the courtroom. You had the finest legal mind of anyone in our year. You could think your way out of corners the rest of us did not even see. And you traded it for... what? He gestured vaguely toward her windbreaker. Chinese food delivery in Soho? I work for a friend, Aurora said. She looked past him, her eyes drifting toward the heavy bookshelf at the back of the room. Behind the dusty leather spines lay Silas clandestine back room, a hub of secrets and whispered operations that made the courtroom dramas of Cardiff look like childs play. It was a life built on quick, out-of-the-box thinking, the exact trait Liam was currently mourning. But Liam saw only the surface. He saw a dropout. A heavy, suffocating silence settled between them. Silas returned, setting the highball glass in front of Liam. The ice cracked sharply, a sound that made Aurora blink at a sudden, intrusive memory of glass shattering against a wall. Evan. The memory of her abusive ex-boyfriend rose unbidden, a phantom bruise throbbing beneath her ribs. Liam did not know about Evan. None of the Pre-Law crowd did. They only knew the polished, brilliant Aurora. They did not know what it felt like to be trapped in your own home, analyzing your partners shifting moods with a terrifying, desperate clarity just to survive the night. They did not know that her flight to London, orchestrated by her childhood friend Eva, was not a surrender. It was the absolute smartest thing she had ever done. I changed my mind about the law, Aurora said, her voice steady and completely devoid of the defensiveness Liam seemed to expect. I found the arguments tedious. You found the arguments tedious. Liam let out a short, incredulous laugh. Aurora, you were born for the arguments. Your mother even told me you once negotiated your bedtime like a hostage treaty. Jennifer was devastated when you stopped returning her calls. My mother understands why I needed space, Aurora said sharply, drawing a boundary neither of them could ignore. Liam took a long drink of his gin, the ice clinking against his teeth. He looked around the bar, his lip curling slightly at the peeling edges of a map of old London tacked to the wall. He did not see the history in the room, nor did he see the intricate network of spies, fixers, and thieves who sought refuge beneath its roof. He saw a dive. Do you ever regret it? Liam asked softly, the pity in his voice thick enough to choke on. Throwing it all away? Aurora looked down at her hands. She thought of Evan's heavy footsteps on the stairs back in Cardiff. She thought of the hollow, frantic girl who had boarded a train to London with nothing but a duffel bag and a bruised jaw. Then she looked up, her bright blue eyes meeting Liams soft, untroubled gaze. She felt the heavy, comforting presence of Silas standing a few feet away, polishing a glass, giving her space but ready to intervene if a single word fell wrong. She thought of her small, safe flat directly upstairs, and to the chaotic but honest labor at the restaurant. I gave up a clear path, Aurora said, her voice dropping to a quiet intensity. But I did not throw anything away, Liam. I kept the only thing that actually belonged to me. Liam stared at her, struggling to parse the fierce, unapologetic truth in her expression. The girl he knew would have debated him. She would have cited case law to defend her choices. The woman sitting before him simply did not care what he thought. The realization seemed to unsettle him more than her sudden disappearance ever had. He dug into his chest pocket, retrieving a crisp ivory business card, and slid it across the damp wood of the bar. If you ever want to come back, he said, his voice stripped of its earlier confidence. Or if you need anything. A recommendation. A loan. Just call me. We miss you, Aurora. She did not reach for the card. Thank you, Liam. Have a safe walk back to the tube. He lingered for a moment, as if waiting for a final, redeeming confession. When none came, he closed his briefcase, nodded a stiff farewell to Silas, and walked back out into the London rain. The door clicked shut, the brass bell ringing a final, solemn note. The bar settled back into its comfortable gloom. The neon sign buzzed. Aurora reached out and flicked the stiff ivory card with her thumbnail, sending it spinning slowly across the polished mahogany. Silas stepped forward. His calloused hand stopped the gently spinning card. He glanced at the embossed, gilded letters, then looked down at Aurora. An old ghost? Silas asked, his gravelly voice entirely lacking its usual sharp edge. Someone who knew Aurora Carter, she replied, picking up her whiskey and savoring the smoky burn on her tongue. Silas swept the card off the bar, tossing it effortlessly into the small waste bin beneath the counter. Good thing she does not live here anymore, he murmured, limping back down the length of the bar to change the record on the jukebox. Aurora smiled, the tight knot in her chest finally dissolving into the shadows of the room. She listened to the rain lashing against the window, safe inside the Nest, and let the old world wash away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
62.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count2
4
adverb"sharply"
count2
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"gently"
4"sharply"
5"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count2
7
word"solitary"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"unreadable"
count1
13
word"clandestine"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"intricate"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"comforting"
count1
18
word"chaotic"
count1
19
word"intensity"
count1
20
word"comfortable"
count1
21
word"gloom"
count1
22
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"sanctuary"
2"chill"
3"reminder"
4"traced"
5"fractured"
6"familiar"
7"solitary"
8"furrowed"
9"scanning"
10"stomach"
11"weight"
12"unreadable"
13"clandestine"
14"silence"
15"intricate"
16"footsteps"
17"comforting"
18"chaotic"
19"intensity"
20"comfortable"
21"gloom"
22"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences133
matches
0"was worried"
1"was devastated"
89.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences133
filterMatches
0"look"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1603
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions11
matches
0"I thought my mind was playing tricks on me, Liam said, leaning in."
1"Not entirely, Aurora said, her tone cool and practiced."
2"A gin and tonic, Liam said, barely looking at the older man."
3"He was disappointed, she corrected quietly."
4"I work for a friend, Aurora said."
5"I changed my mind about the law, Aurora said, her voice steady and completely devoid of the defensiveness Liam seemed to…"
6"My mother understands why I needed space, Aurora said sharply, drawing a boundary neither of them could ignore."
7"I gave up a clear path, Aurora said, her voice dropping to a quiet intensity."
8"If you ever want to come back, he said, his voice stripped of its earlier confidence."
9"Someone who knew Aurora Carter, she replied, picking up her whiskey and savoring the smoky burn on her tongue."
10"Good thing she does not live here anymore, he murmured, limping back down the length of the bar to change the record on …"
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions93
wordCount1603
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Soho2
Carter3
Yu-Fei2
Cheung1
Golden2
Empress2
Wales1
Silas11
Blackwood1
Aurora21
London6
Eva2
Rory1
Gallagher1
Cardiff3
University1
Pre-Law2
Liam18
Irish1
Evan3
Liams1
You4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Aurora"
7"Eva"
8"Rory"
9"Gallagher"
10"Liam"
11"Evan"
12"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Wales"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.845
windowScore0.667
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if approaching an apparition"
1"felt like to be trapped in your own hom"
2"as if waiting for a final, redeeming confession"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1603
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"know that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean43.32
std26.35
cv0.608
sampleLengths
063
1102
290
374
426
516
659
719
853
920
1013
1119
1236
1339
1442
1567
1678
17103
1829
1927
2042
2118
2268
2322
24103
2533
2657
2722
2832
2918
3046
3132
3223
3314
3419
3543
3636
99.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"was disappointed"
1"was devastated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs253
matches
0"was playing"
1"were securing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences133
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.06% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1615
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.03900928792569659
lyAdverbCount38
lyAdverbRatio0.023529411764705882
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.05
std7.59
cv0.63
sampleLengths
027
114
222
326
428
523
625
710
820
917
1024
1111
128
139
1424
1515
1626
172
1824
191
2015
213
227
239
2412
254
262
2722
281
2915
303
3110
3216
3317
3410
3513
364
373
389
394
4013
416
4212
4324
4411
455
4617
476
489
4921
39.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners42
53.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"Then she looked up, her"
1"Just call me."
ratio0.016
40.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences125
matches
0"She traced the rim of"
1"It was an old souvenir"
2"He wiped down the polished"
3"His auburn hair and neatly"
4"He poured a measure of"
5"She offered him a small"
6"He looked entirely out of"
7"He turned toward the bar,"
8"His brow furrowed, scanning the"
9"She recognized him instantly."
10"They had sat shoulder-to-shoulder in"
11"She kept her voice even,"
12"He moved toward her slowly,"
13"He took the empty stool"
14"He looked at her windbreaker,"
15"I thought my mind was"
16"It has been years."
17"You just vanished."
18"I am right here."
19"We all wondered what happened."
ratio0.448
56.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences125
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"The walls, crowded with framed"
2"Aurora Carter sat on the"
3"The scent of roasted duck"
4"She traced the rim of"
5"It was an old souvenir"
6"He wiped down the polished"
7"His auburn hair and neatly"
8"He poured a measure of"
9"She offered him a small"
10"The brass bell above the"
11"The damp draft of the"
12"He looked entirely out of"
13"He turned toward the bar,"
14"His brow furrowed, scanning the"
15"The name broke from his"
16"Aurora went still."
17"Aurora belonged to a different"
18"She recognized him instantly."
19"They had sat shoulder-to-shoulder in"
ratio0.808
80.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"To Silas, to Yu-Fei, to"
1"If you ever want to"
ratio0.016
66.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences75
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Brendan Carter, the esteemed Irish barrister who expected nothing less than a mirror image of his own success from his daughter."
1"Behind the dusty leather spines lay Silas clandestine back room, a hub of secrets and whispered operations that made the courtroom dramas of Cardiff look like c…"
2"The ice cracked sharply, a sound that made Aurora blink at a sudden, intrusive memory of glass shattering against a wall."
3"They did not know what it felt like to be trapped in your own home, analyzing your partners shifting moods with a terrifying, desperate clarity just to survive …"
4"He did not see the history in the room, nor did he see the intricate network of spies, fixers, and thieves who sought refuge beneath its roof."
5"He lingered for a moment, as if waiting for a final, redeeming confession."
6"Aurora reached out and flicked the stiff ivory card with her thumbnail, sending it spinning slowly across the polished mahogany."
7"Someone who knew Aurora Carter, she replied, picking up her whiskey and savoring the smoky burn on her tongue."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.6130%