Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPCZZPM1XQ02HBSSD469J9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.095668
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho carried a distinct flavor of exhaust and damp concrete, a heavy smell that clung to Aurora Carter long after she slipped inside The Raven's Nest. She sat at her usual stool near the edge of the mahogany counter, the ambient heat of the radiator slowly baking the residual chill from her damp jeans. Her jacket still held the faint, stubborn aroma of garlic, ginger, and toasted sesame oil from her evening shift delivering food for Yu-Fei Cheung over at the Golden Empress. She absentmindedly rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, an old childhood accident but a nervous habit that always flared up whenever she felt the deep, bone-weary exhaustion of the city settling into her muscles. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with a quiet, practiced rhythm. He stepped out from the narrow shadowy hallway that concealed the bookshelf door to the secret back room, his left leg dragging with the slight, rhythmic limp he had carried ever since a botched MI6 operation in Prague abruptly ended his field career. Even at fifty-eight and comfortably retired, Silas carried the heavy stillness of a man who missed nothing. He picked up a damp rag and began to wipe down the polished wood of the counter. His silver signet ring clinked rhythmically against a lowball glass, catching the dim glow of the distinctive green neon sign that bled through the rain-streaked front window. He did not ask how her delivery shift had gone down in the monsoon outside; he simply pushed a glass of soda and fresh lime quietly across the wood toward her. The heavy oak door at the front of the bar groaned open, letting in a sudden, sharp gust of the wet London evening. The neon green washed over the figure standing in the threshold. Aurora smoothed her straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ears, her bright blue eyes flicking toward the newcomer by mere reflex. Then her breath hitched, catching sharply in her chest. The woman shrugging off a soaking wet trench coat was not the Tamsin she remembered. The Tamsin of Cardiff University had been a whirlwind of fraying oversized sweaters, scuffed boots, and loud, fiery opinions about tearing down the political establishment. The woman shaking the rain from her expensive umbrella tonight wore a tailored charcoal blazer with perfectly creased trousers. Her wild, chaotic curls had been brutally straightened into a sleek, manageable bob. She looked immaculate, expensive, and entirely hollowed out by time. Tamsin stepped up to the farthest end of the bar, her eyes scanning the dim room. Silas approached her, his perceptive hazel eyes briefly meeting Aurora's across the counter before shifting smoothly to the customer. Tamsin ordered a gin martini, very dry. Her voice was the same, though the cadence had lost its musical Welsh lilt, scrubbed flat and sterile by years of navigating corporate boardrooms. Aurora could have slipped away. Her flat was right upstairs, a safe haven perched above the bar. It would have been incredibly easy to ghost out the side door, utilizing the quick, out-of-the-box evasive thinking she was usually so adept at. But the floorboards beneath her stool creaked loudly as she shifted her weight to stand, and Tamsin turned her head. For a long, terrible second, neither of them moved. The ambient hum of the bar, the melancholy jazz playing softly from Silas' antique radio, the sharp crack of ice in the shaker, all of it seemed to vanish into the heavy, suffocating air between them. Tamsin took a tentative step closer. She blinked rapidly, as though the green-tinted shadows of the bar were playing a cruel trick carefully orchestrated by the old maps and faded black-and-white photographs covering the walls. "Rory," Tamsin breathed, speaking the old nickname like an invocation. Aurora offered a tight, practiced smile. She did not stand, but the cool-headed nature she so prided herself on snapped firmly into place. "Hello, Tam. It has been a while." Tamsin closed the distance, her polished heels clicking against the scuffed floorboards. She took the stool next to Aurora, bringing with her a cloud of perfume that smelled of cold flowers and petrichor, completely erasing the scent of sesame oil from Aurora's coat. Up close, the transformation was even more jarring. Fine lines bracketed Tamsin's mouth, and a deep, bruised exhaustion lived beneath her meticulously applied concealer. "I thought you were dead," Tamsin said, the flat corporate mask slipping just enough to reveal a raw, jagged edge. "Or in some kind of witness protection. You vanished, Rory. Completely. One day we were studying for our tort exams, arguing over human rights law, and the next day your flat in Cardiff was empty." Aurora traced the wet rim of her glass. Her stoicism was a fortress she had built brick by brick since fleeing across the country. She kept her voice entirely even, successfully suppressing the ghosts of panic that Evan used to beat into her. "I moved to London. I needed an immediate change of scenery." "A change of scenery." Tamsin let out a sharp, humorless laugh that sounded like snapping wood. "Evan was looking for you for months. He came around the campus, banging on doors, asking everyone if they had seen you." The name dropped onto the mahogany bar like a physical weight, cold and heavy. Silas, acting entirely unobtrusive, set the dry martini down in front of Tamsin and picked up a towel. He did not look directly at them, but Aurora knew he was listening to every syllable, his posture shifted just slightly to place his broad shoulders between Aurora and the front door. He was a silent guard dog wrapped in a neatly trimmed, grey-streaked beard. "I imagine he was," Aurora said quietly, staring straight ahead. She slowly turned her head to look directly at her old friend. "And what about you, Tam? If I recall correctly, you swore you were going to chain yourself to the Welsh Assembly until they banned fossil fuels. Now you look like you foreclose on community centers for sport." Tamsin flinched visibly. She looked down at her immaculate charcoal sleeve, then at the heavy silver watch on her wrist. She picked up her martini glass with a slightly trembling hand and took a long, desperate swallow. "Things change," Tamsin murmured, the defensive anger bleeding out of her instantly. "The grassroots collective ran out of funding. I had massive uni loans. They offered me an entry-level spot in corporate public relations. Then came a promotion, and another. You wake up five years later paying three thousand a month for a flat in Kensington, and you realize you have become exactly the sort of person you used to throw red paint at." The bitterness in Tamsin's voice was absolute and suffocating. She turned her glass slowly on the wood, staring into the clear liquid as though it held answers. "I compromised myself. I did what I had to do to survive the real world. Just like you." Aurora stiffened, her bright blue eyes narrowing. "We did not survive the same things." "No," Tamsin agreed softly, refusing to meet her gaze. "We did not. I stayed in school. You ran away." The accusation hung there, wrapped in a thick blanket of undeniable, painful truth. Aurora remembered the desperate, terrifying nights in Cardiff. She remembered the way Evan would corner her in the kitchen, the blooming purple bruises she had hidden under long-sleeved thermal shirts. She remembered her childhood friend Eva pleading with her to pack a single bag and get on the train to Paddington before it was too late. She had abandoned the Pre-Law program she had fought so hard to enter. She had abandoned her father Brendan wrapped up in his prestigious Irish barrister robes, and her mother Jennifer marking endless geography essays at the dining table. She had abandoned Tamsin, who had been too busy fighting the broken world to notice that her best friend was being systematically destroyed inside her own home. "I am delivering food," Aurora said into the deepening silence, her voice resolute. "For a Chinese restaurant down the street. I live in the tiny flat upstairs." Tamsin looked around the dim, highly atmospheric bar. Her eyes swept over the peeling edges of an old parchment map of Victorian London, the scuffed woodwork, the secretive shadows near the back room, and finally rested back on Aurora. "You were the smartest person in our entire cohort, Rory. You possessed a brilliant, terrifying legal mind. You could argue a judge into a corner on pure instinct. And you are playing a delivery messenger in Soho." "I am safe," Aurora said. Her voice carried no apology, no shame. "That alone is worth infinitely more than a law degree." Tamsin's shoulders dropped. The corporate fight drained out of her entirely, leaving her looking fragile and incredibly young inside her expensive armor. "I am sorry," she whispered, the words shaking. "I should have seen what Evan was doing to you. We all should have seen it. That is why I could not look him in the eye when he came around demanding to know where you went. I felt like a coward." Aurora let her thumb rest gently over the crescent scar on her wrist. The resentment she had expected to feel, the defensive fire she had carried for so many years across the country, simply was not there. Instead, there was just an overwhelming, crushing sense of loss. They were two ghosts haunting the exact same bar, mourning the ambitious girls they had been in a city neither of them fully belonged to. "You were not a coward," Aurora said softly, offering the forgiveness she had held back for five years. "You were just twenty. We both were." Tamsin reached out, her perfectly manicured hand hovering over the damp wood before she laid it gently over Aurora's knuckles. Her skin felt freezing cold against the warmth of the bar. They sat there in the dim, green-tinted light of The Raven's Nest, tethered together by a vast ocean of unspoken grief and the insurmountable distance of the years that had forced them to change. "I have a red-eye flight to Zurich in three hours," Tamsin said finally, slowly withdrawing her hand and sitting up straight. "Some terrible corporate banking merger. I only ducked in here to escape the rain and get a proper drink before heading to Heathrow. I never expected to find a ghost." She reached into the inner pocket of her blazer, pulled out a sleek, heavily embossed business card, and slid it carefully across the mahogany counter. "If you ever want to have a proper dinner in the city. Or if you ever want to finish that law degree. I happen to know a lot of miserable people with a lot of money who could help." Aurora looked down at the crisp white card resting on the damp wood, but she did not reach out to touch it. "I will keep that in mind. Safe travels, Tam." Tamsin offered a sad, brittle smile that did not reach her eyes. "Take good care of yourself, Rory." She stood up, pulled her heavy trench coat back over her shoulders, and walked out into the miserable London rain. The heavy oak door groaned shut behind her, cutting off the chill and sealing the warmth back inside. Silas moved slowly down the length of the bar. He picked up the empty martini glass, his signet ring flashing in the neon light, and swept Tamsin's expensive business card into his palm. He held it out to Aurora without a single word of commentary, his face completely neutral. Aurora stared at the card, seeing the life she could have had printed in neat black ink, and then looked up at Silas. His hazel eyes were steady and calm, offering absolutely no judgment, only the quiet, unwavering, anchoring presence that had made his hidden sanctuary the closest thing to a real home she had known in years. "Throw it away," Aurora said, turning her attention back to her half-empty glass of soda and lime. Silas turned his hand, letting the card drop softly into the waste bin hidden under the counter. The green neon sign buzzed with a low, electric hum through the front window, casting long, fractured shadows across the vintage maps plastered on the wall, charting countless roads she had long since abandoned, and leaving her with the quiet, unshakeable reality of exactly where she had chosen to stay.
created_at"2026-02-19T19:35:31.922Z" 2/19/2026, 7:35:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Aurora said quietly [quietly]"
1"Tamsin agreed softly [softly]"
2"Aurora said softly [softly]"
3"Tamsin said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.267
47.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2104
totalAiIsmAdverbs22
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count5
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count4
5
adverb"carefully"
count2
6
adverb"completely"
count3
7
adverb"slightly"
count2
8
adverb"gently"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sharply"
2"perfectly"
3"very"
4"softly"
5"carefully"
6"completely"
7"slightly"
8"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2104
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"navigating"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"firmly"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"absolutely"
count1
14
word"unwavering"
count1
15
word"sanctuary"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"rhythmic"
2"chaotic"
3"scanning"
4"lilt"
5"navigating"
6"weight"
7"firmly"
8"traced"
9"silence"
10"sense of"
11"warmth"
12"unspoken"
13"absolutely"
14"unwavering"
15"sanctuary"
16"electric"
17"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2088
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1616
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Aurora23
Carter1
Raven2
Nest2
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Prague1
London3
Tamsin23
Cardiff2
University1
Welsh1
Evan2
Eva1
Paddington1
Pre-Law1
Brendan1
Irish1
Jennifer1
Victorian1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Silas"
7"Blackwood"
8"Tamsin"
9"University"
10"Evan"
11"Eva"
12"Brendan"
13"Jennifer"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Prague"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
5"Paddington"
globalScore0.788
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like snapping wood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2088
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"notice that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean53.54
std30.75
cv0.574
sampleLengths
0123
1146
234
330
482
566
661
745
835
910
1030
1167
1255
1354
1438
1577
1659
1737
1874
1945
2014
2119
22135
2327
2476
2522
2672
2772
2825
2965
3051
3164
3231
3318
3438
3549
3658
3717
3867
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs251
matches
0"were playing"
1"was listening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences112
ratio0.009
matches
0"He did not ask how her delivery shift had gone down in the monsoon outside; he simply pushed a glass of soda and fresh lime quietly across the wood toward her."
66.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount961
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"deep, bone-weary exhaustion"
2"slight, rhythmic limp he"
3"brilliant, terrifying legal mind."
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.045785639958376693
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.02497398543184183
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean18.64
std10.66
cv0.572
sampleLengths
029
128
229
337
411
543
617
717
827
931
1023
1111
1221
139
1415
1525
1619
1713
1810
1916
2019
217
2224
235
2412
2524
2620
279
2836
296
3029
3110
326
3317
347
3512
3631
378
3816
3920
4035
418
4216
4319
4411
4516
4622
4714
4818
4932
38.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.30357142857142855
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners34
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then her breath hitched, catching"
1"Instead, there was just an"
ratio0.022
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences93
matches
0"She sat at her usual"
1"Her jacket still held the"
2"She absentmindedly rubbed the small,"
3"He stepped out from the"
4"He picked up a damp"
5"His silver signet ring clinked"
6"He did not ask how"
7"Her wild, chaotic curls had"
8"She looked immaculate, expensive, and"
9"Her voice was the same,"
10"Her flat was right upstairs,"
11"It would have been incredibly"
12"She blinked rapidly, as though"
13"She did not stand, but"
14"She took the stool next"
15"Her stoicism was a fortress"
16"She kept her voice entirely"
17"He did not look directly"
18"He was a silent guard"
19"She slowly turned her head"
ratio0.419
3.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences93
matches
0"The rain in Soho carried"
1"She sat at her usual"
2"Her jacket still held the"
3"She absentmindedly rubbed the small,"
4"He stepped out from the"
5"He picked up a damp"
6"His silver signet ring clinked"
7"He did not ask how"
8"The heavy oak door at"
9"The neon green washed over"
10"Aurora smoothed her straight, shoulder-length"
11"The woman shrugging off a"
12"The Tamsin of Cardiff University"
13"The woman shaking the rain"
14"Her wild, chaotic curls had"
15"She looked immaculate, expensive, and"
16"Tamsin stepped up to the"
17"Silas approached her, his perceptive"
18"Tamsin ordered a gin martini,"
19"Her voice was the same,"
ratio0.914
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Even at fifty-eight and comfortably"
ratio0.011
43.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The rain in Soho carried a distinct flavor of exhaust and damp concrete, a heavy smell that clung to Aurora Carter long after she slipped inside The Raven's Nes…"
1"He stepped out from the narrow shadowy hallway that concealed the bookshelf door to the secret back room, his left leg dragging with the slight, rhythmic limp h…"
2"Even at fifty-eight and comfortably retired, Silas carried the heavy stillness of a man who missed nothing."
3"His silver signet ring clinked rhythmically against a lowball glass, catching the dim glow of the distinctive green neon sign that bled through the rain-streake…"
4"She blinked rapidly, as though the green-tinted shadows of the bar were playing a cruel trick carefully orchestrated by the old maps and faded black-and-white p…"
5"She took the stool next to Aurora, bringing with her a cloud of perfume that smelled of cold flowers and petrichor, completely erasing the scent of sesame oil f…"
6"She had abandoned Tamsin, who had been too busy fighting the broken world to notice that her best friend was being systematically destroyed inside her own home."
7"They sat there in the dim, green-tinted light of The Raven's Nest, tethered together by a vast ocean of unspoken grief and the insurmountable distance of the ye…"
8"His hazel eyes were steady and calm, offering absolutely no judgment, only the quiet, unwavering, anchoring presence that had made his hidden sanctuary the clos…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Tamsin murmured, the defensive anger bleeding out of her instantly"
1"Tamsin agreed softly, refusing to meet her gaze"
2"Aurora said, her voice resolute"
3"she whispered, the words shaking"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Tamsin breathed (breathe)"
1"Tamsin murmured (murmur)"
2"Tamsin agreed softly (agree)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.733
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.267
73.7200%