Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPFGPPGVYTWVTRX6E47A2V

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the overgrown gorse, ignoring the damp chill of the London night seeping through her delivery jacket. Her flashlight beam cut a pale swath through the darkness of Richmond Park. She had strayed far from the paved paths, walking for nearly an hour, navigating entirely by the strange, rhythmic heat radiating against her sternum. She reached beneath her collar and pulled the silver chain free. The pendant, a deep crimson gemstone roughly the size of a thumbnail, cast a sickeningly red, faint inner glow across her pale knuckles. It was pulsing. A slow, steady throb that felt too much like a second heartbeat. Her unknown benefactor had never explained what the stone was, only that it would keep her safe. But right now, wrapping her cold fingers around the warm gem, Rory felt anything but safe. Ahead of her, the trees parted. Four ancient oak trunks rose from the soil, their bark stripped pale by time, looming like rotting teeth against the starless sky. The standing stones. This was it. Rory stepped between the silent oaks. The air pressure changed instantly, popping in her ears. The distant, humdrum roar of the A3 highway vanished, replaced by an absolute, suffocating stillness. She swept her flashlight across the clearing. The beam illuminated a carpet of wildflowers in full, unnatural bloom. Violets, bluebells, and pale snowdrops tangled together, oblivious to the autumn frost outside the boundary line. They looked bruised in the artificial light, their scent thick and cloying, sticking to the back of her throat like cheap perfume. She was supposed to meet a Fae contact here. A quick drop-off. A simple detour after her last delivery run for the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei would be expecting her back to cash out the till, but time moved differently in the Grove. An hour pacing among these flowers might be only three minutes on the streets of London. Or it might be three days. Rory pushed that thought aside. Cool-headed. That was her reputation. Panic was an inefficient use of energy. But as she stood in the center of the clearing, the intense silence began to fray. A wet snap echoed behind her. Rory pivoted, the flashlight beam darting toward the oak standing stones. Nothing. Just the twisted, skeletal branches of the trees reaching into the void. Hello, Rory called out. Her voice fell flat, swallowed instantly by the thick air. Something shifted at the very edge of her vision. A blur of movement, darker than the night, slipping behind the thickest of the oak trunks. Rory swallowed. She rubbed her left wrist, her right thumb tracing the small crescent-shaped scar exactly the way she used to whenever her ex Evan cornered her in their old flat. Action, she reminded herself. Think outside the box. Do not freeze. She took a step back, her boots crushing a patch of pristine bluebells. The flowers let out a faint, wet hiss as they broke. The pendant against her chest flared hotter. It was no longer a gentle, reassuring warmth. It was the heat of a fever. It burned against her skin through the thin cotton of her dark shirt. A Hel portal. Silas had mentioned them once, leaning over the polished mahogany of his bar downstairs from her flat. Rifts to a rotting underworld that leached the life out of everything they touched. The Heartstone was supposed to warn her. It was doing its job. Another snap. Closer this time. To her left. She snapped the light toward the sound. The beam flickered, the battery draining unnaturally fast, dimming to a sickly yellow circle. In that fading light, the wildflowers were no longer swaying in an unfelt breeze. They were wilting. The petals curled inward, turning brown and sloughing off the stems like dead skin. The cloying floral scent rotted into the stench of sulfur and old, stagnant pond water. The wrongness of the place settled heavily on her shoulders. The Fae Grove was a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, a sanctuary of endless spring. Something was decaying it from the inside out. A wet, dragging sound started up from the far edge of the tree line. It did not sound like footsteps. It sounded like heavy, sodden canvas being pulled over jagged rocks. Rory backed toward the standing stones where she had entered, keeping the fading beam dead ahead. I am leaving, she said aloud, her voice steady despite the adrenaline spiking in her veins. I do not belong here, and I am leaving. The dragging stopped. The silence that followed was infinitely worse. It felt expectant. Rory turned to face the entrance. The four oak sentinels stood exactly where they had been. But the space between them, the gap that led back out into the dreary, comforting damp of Richmond Park, was gone. Between the pale trunks stretched a shimmering, oily film of darkness. It looked like the surface of a polluted river viewed at midnight. She stepped forward, her bright blue eyes scanning the perimeter. There had to be a way out. She was not a victim anymore. She had fled Cardiff, fled Evan, built a life from scratch in London. She was not going to die in a hidden patch of rotting Fae real estate. The heartbeat of the deep crimson stone spiked. It was scorching her collarbone. She grabbed the silver chain, pulling the gem out over her shirt so it would not blister her skin. The jewel threw a blood-red glare across the clearing. In the red light, she saw the shadow detaching itself from the oak trunk. It was tall. Impossibly tall, its limbs stretched like pulled taffy. It had no discernible features, just a shifting mass of cold, dense vapor that seemed to absorb the light from both her fading flashlight and the glowing pendant. Rory drew in a sharp breath. The air temperature plummeted. Her breath plumed in front of her face in ragged white clouds. Frost crawled up the stems of the dead wildflowers, snapping them into frozen needles. The entity did not rush her. It did not roar or reveal rows of jagged teeth. That restraint made it utterly terrifying. It simply drifted, closing the distance with that same agonizingly slow, dragging sound. The very ground seemed to reject it, freezing and dying beneath whatever passed for its feet. Her mind raced. The time distortion in the Grove worked against her. She had been standing here for what felt like minutes, but to an immortal creature bleeding through a portal, she may have been trapped in its gaze for hours. It had studied her. It had waited until her light began to die. She backed away alongside the outer boundary marked by the stones, scanning the oily darkness trapping her inside. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair whipped across her face as an unnatural wind kicked up, blowing from the center of the clearing outward. The entity was projecting the cold. To her right, the surface of one of the pale oaks seemed to ripple. The wood was warping under the influence of the cold, but the Fae magic still lingered in the roots. Think. Fae magic and Hel magic were incompatible. The entity raised a limb. A long, dark extension pointing directly at her chest. Pointing at the pendant. It did not want her. It wanted the Heartstone. Rory gripped the silver chain tighter. The jewel was hot enough to brand her, but she refused to let go. If it wanted the stone, she could use that. She broke into a run, sprinting in a wide arc around the clearing. The dead, frosted wildflowers crunched loudly beneath her boots. The entity turned, tracking her movement without haste. It drifted diagonally to cut her off. Rory aimed for the warping oak standing stone. The oily film of darkness stretched tight against its bark. Fae boundary on one side, Hel barrier on the other. She slid to a halt ten feet from the barrier, her breath burning in her lungs. The shadow loomed behind her, the unbearable absolute zero of its presence biting into her spine. She ripped the silver chain from her neck. The deep crimson gem dangled from her fingers, casting angry red reflections across the black barrier blocking the exit. Fetch, Rory hissed. She hurled the Heartstone directly at the oily film between the oak trees. The entity lunged. Its slow stalk shattered into sudden, violent speed, a blur of freezing darkness diving after the glowing red arc of the pendant. The Heartstone struck the black barrier. The clash of the artifact and the freezing void of the Hel portal triggered a violent shockwave. A blinding flash of red and white light erupted, followed by a sound like a pane of glass the size of the sky shattering into dust. The shockwave knocked Rory off her feet. She hit the frozen earth hard, the breath driven from her lungs. Above her, the oily darkness between the standing stones ripped open. The entity emitted a high, mechanical sound of pure static as the collapsing barrier sucked it backward. Rory scrambled to her feet, ignoring the scraped skin on her palms. The gap between the oaks was clear. Beyond them, she could see the muddy, fog-covered grass of Richmond park. The comforting, distant drone of London traffic filtered back into the air. She did not look back to see if the flowers were still blooming. She sprinted between the massive pale trunks, bursting out of the Fae Grove and into the freezing damp of the normal world. Rory collapsed onto her knees in the wet grass. She dragged freezing, normal mud-scented oxygen into her lungs, trembling uncontrollably. She instinctively reached up to her collarbone. The silver chain was gone. The heat was gone. She looked back at the four ancient oaks. In the dim light of the city sky, they were just trees again. Silent. Ordinary. She was alone in the dark. But as she touched the fading warmth on her chest, Rory knew with absolute certainty that the thing in the Grove was only waiting for her to come back.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1697
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"looming"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"sanctuary"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"sentinels"
count1
14
word"comforting"
count2
15
word"scanning"
count2
16
word"raced"
count1
17
word"loomed"
count1
18
word"shattered"
count1
19
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"navigating"
2"rhythmic"
3"throb"
4"looming"
5"silence"
6"echoed"
7"tracing"
8"pristine"
9"warmth"
10"flickered"
11"sanctuary"
12"footsteps"
13"sentinels"
14"comforting"
15"scanning"
16"raced"
17"loomed"
18"shattered"
19"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences162
matches(empty)
98.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences162
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1689
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"Hello, Rory called out."
1"I am leaving, she said aloud, her voice steady despite the adrenaline spiking in her veins."
2"Fetch, Rory hissed."
99.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1689
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London4
Richmond3
Park2
Rory17
Fae8
Golden1
Empress1
Grove5
Evan2
Hel4
Heartstone4
Earth1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.997
windowScore1
70.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like heavy, sodden canvas being pu"
1"looked like the surface of a polluted riv"
2"vapor that seemed to absorb the light from both her fading flashlight and the glowing pendant"
3"felt like minutes, but to an immortal c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1689
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences162
matches
0"pushed that thought"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean32.48
std18.38
cv0.566
sampleLengths
056
182
234
330
456
581
616
76
824
914
1025
1142
1224
1335
1446
158
1667
1735
1831
1941
203
2110
2260
2351
2441
2514
2639
2736
2851
2954
3047
3133
328
3318
349
3529
3637
3728
3832
3927
403
4113
4225
4349
4419
4528
4643
4735
4827
499
90.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences162
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was supposed"
2"being pulled"
3"was gone"
4"been trapped"
5"was gone"
6"was gone"
21.20% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs261
matches
0"was pulsing"
1"was doing"
2"were wilting"
3"was decaying"
4"was scorching"
5"was projecting"
6"was warping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences162
ratio0
matches(empty)
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1697
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"red, faint inner glow"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"muddy, fog-covered grass"
3"freezing, normal mud-scented oxygen"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03182086034177961
lyAdverbCount31
lyAdverbRatio0.018267530936947555
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean10.43
std6.28
cv0.602
sampleLengths
019
113
224
311
423
53
612
717
816
96
1022
113
123
136
149
1515
167
1711
1816
1922
209
213
2212
2318
2416
256
265
271
284
297
3016
316
3211
331
3412
354
3610
379
3816
392
4029
414
424
433
4413
4511
467
478
487
4913
37.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2777777777777778
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners45
43.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences155
matches
0"Just the twisted, skeletal branches"
1"Impossibly tall, its limbs stretched"
ratio0.013
78.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences155
matches
0"Her flashlight beam cut a"
1"She had strayed far from"
2"She reached beneath her collar"
3"It was pulsing."
4"Her unknown benefactor had never"
5"She swept her flashlight across"
6"They looked bruised in the"
7"She was supposed to meet"
8"Her voice fell flat, swallowed"
9"She rubbed her left wrist,"
10"She took a step back,"
11"It was no longer a"
12"It was the heat of"
13"It burned against her skin"
14"It was doing its job."
15"She snapped the light toward"
16"They were wilting."
17"It did not sound like"
18"It sounded like heavy, sodden"
19"I am leaving, she said"
ratio0.355
37.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences155
matches
0"Rory pushed through the overgrown"
1"Her flashlight beam cut a"
2"She had strayed far from"
3"She reached beneath her collar"
4"The pendant, a deep crimson"
5"It was pulsing."
6"A slow, steady throb that"
7"Her unknown benefactor had never"
8"The standing stones."
9"This was it."
10"Rory stepped between the silent"
11"The air pressure changed instantly,"
12"The distant, humdrum roar of"
13"She swept her flashlight across"
14"The beam illuminated a carpet"
15"Violets, bluebells, and pale snowdrops"
16"They looked bruised in the"
17"She was supposed to meet"
18"A quick drop-off."
19"A simple detour after her"
ratio0.845
96.77% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences155
matches
0"To her left."
1"To her right, the surface"
2"If it wanted the stone,"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A slow, steady throb that felt too much like a second heartbeat."
1"It had no discernible features, just a shifting mass of cold, dense vapor that seemed to absorb the light from both her fading flashlight and the glowing pendan…"
2"The deep crimson gem dangled from her fingers, casting angry red reflections across the black barrier blocking the exit."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.2832%