| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1697 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1697 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "navigating" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "looming" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "pristine" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "sanctuary" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "sentinels" | | 14 | "comforting" | | 15 | "scanning" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "loomed" | | 18 | "shattered" | | 19 | "mechanical" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1689 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Hello, Rory called out." | | 1 | "I am leaving, she said aloud, her voice steady despite the adrenaline spiking in her veins." | | 2 | "Fetch, Rory hissed." |
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| 99.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1689 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 4 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae | 8 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Evan | 2 | | Hel | 4 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Earth | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.997 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 70.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like heavy, sodden canvas being pu" | | 1 | "looked like the surface of a polluted riv" | | 2 | "vapor that seemed to absorb the light from both her fading flashlight and the glowing pendant" | | 3 | "felt like minutes, but to an immortal c" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1689 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 32.48 | | std | 18.38 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 81 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 49 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 43 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 90.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "being pulled" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "been trapped" | | 5 | "was gone" | | 6 | "was gone" |
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| 21.20% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 261 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "was doing" | | 2 | "were wilting" | | 3 | "was decaying" | | 4 | "was scorching" | | 5 | "was projecting" | | 6 | "was warping" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1697 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "red, faint inner glow" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "muddy, fog-covered grass" | | 3 | "freezing, normal mud-scented oxygen" |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.03182086034177961 | | lyAdverbCount | 31 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018267530936947555 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 10.43 | | std | 6.28 | | cv | 0.602 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 37.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2777777777777778 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 43.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the twisted, skeletal branches" | | 1 | "Impossibly tall, its limbs stretched" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 78.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Her flashlight beam cut a" | | 1 | "She had strayed far from" | | 2 | "She reached beneath her collar" | | 3 | "It was pulsing." | | 4 | "Her unknown benefactor had never" | | 5 | "She swept her flashlight across" | | 6 | "They looked bruised in the" | | 7 | "She was supposed to meet" | | 8 | "Her voice fell flat, swallowed" | | 9 | "She rubbed her left wrist," | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "It was no longer a" | | 12 | "It was the heat of" | | 13 | "It burned against her skin" | | 14 | "It was doing its job." | | 15 | "She snapped the light toward" | | 16 | "They were wilting." | | 17 | "It did not sound like" | | 18 | "It sounded like heavy, sodden" | | 19 | "I am leaving, she said" |
| | ratio | 0.355 | |
| 37.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 131 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the overgrown" | | 1 | "Her flashlight beam cut a" | | 2 | "She had strayed far from" | | 3 | "She reached beneath her collar" | | 4 | "The pendant, a deep crimson" | | 5 | "It was pulsing." | | 6 | "A slow, steady throb that" | | 7 | "Her unknown benefactor had never" | | 8 | "The standing stones." | | 9 | "This was it." | | 10 | "Rory stepped between the silent" | | 11 | "The air pressure changed instantly," | | 12 | "The distant, humdrum roar of" | | 13 | "She swept her flashlight across" | | 14 | "The beam illuminated a carpet" | | 15 | "Violets, bluebells, and pale snowdrops" | | 16 | "They looked bruised in the" | | 17 | "She was supposed to meet" | | 18 | "A quick drop-off." | | 19 | "A simple detour after her" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 96.77% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left." | | 1 | "To her right, the surface" | | 2 | "If it wanted the stone," |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "A slow, steady throb that felt too much like a second heartbeat." | | 1 | "It had no discernible features, just a shifting mass of cold, dense vapor that seemed to absorb the light from both her fading flashlight and the glowing pendan…" | | 2 | "The deep crimson gem dangled from her fingers, casting angry red reflections across the black barrier blocking the exit." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |