Run: 2026-02-19-01KHVPFVCBX9P217B9SAXKMRSR

Run Details

Duration:
58.9s
Cost:
$0.073240
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling against the concrete of Soho in sheets, slicking the pavement into a dark, mirrored glaze. Above the heavy oak door of The Raven’s Nest, the distinctive green neon sign sizzled and spat in the damp air, casting an eerie emerald glow over the street. Aurora Carter pushed her shoulder against the wood and slipped inside, bringing a gust of wet October wind with her. She shivered, peeling the heavy nylon delivery jacket from her shoulders. It still smelled of fried garlic and sweet plum sauce, the lingering ghosts of a double shift ferrying takeout for Yu-Fei Cheung across central London. She tossed the soaked Golden Empress jacket over the back of a wooden chair and ran a hand through her straight, shoulder-length black hair, wringing out the rainwater. The bar was comfortably dim, a sanctuary of amber light and low voices. Her bright blue eyes scanned the familiar room. Shadows clung to the corners where old maps curling at the edges and black-and-white photographs of forgotten European cityscapes plastered the walls. It was her haven. Her flat was just upstairs, a modest space where she could finally breathe, but the bar itself was the anchor she clung to. Behind the mahogany counter stood Silas Blackwood. At fifty-eight, he carried himself with a quiet, immovable authority, a mountain of a man at six foot one. He was methodically wiping down a highball glass with a white cloth. The dim light caught the grey-streaked auburn hair and the matching, neatly trimmed beard that framed his sharp jawline. On his right hand, a silver signet ring clinked rhythmically against the crystal, a steady, metallurgic heartbeat in the quiet room. He looked up as she approached, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. He favored his left leg as he moved down the bar, a slight limp left over from an intelligence operation in Prague that had gone terribly wrong decades ago. Silas never talked about MI6, but the evidence of his past was written in every careful movement he made. Silas reached below the counter and slid a glass of water toward her. Not a word was exchanged, nor did there need to be. Rory wrapped her cold fingers around the glass. Then, a voice off to her right shattered the quiet. Aurora? Is that really you? Rory turned, her grip tightening on the glass. Sitting three stools down, illuminated by a solitary low-hanging pendant light, was a man in a sharp charcoal suit. He had short, meticulously styled hair and the polished, expectant posture of someone who spent his days commanding air in a courtroom. It took her a second to look past the expensive tailoring to find the boy she had known three years ago. Rhys. Christ, Carter, he said, letting out a breath that sounded like a laugh. It is you. What are the odds? In a dingy pub in Soho, of all places. It is a small world, Rhys, she said smoothly. Her voice was steady, perfectly level. Cool-headed. It was the same tone she used to defuse aggressive drunks on her delivery route and the same tone she had once used to parse out tort law in their seminar groups. He stood and closed the distance between them, leaning against the bar. He smelled of rain and sandalwood, a scent entirely divorced from the stale beer and cheap laundry detergent she knew now. I haven't seen you since second year at Cardiff. You just disappeared. I moved, Rory said, taking a sip of the water. Moved, he echoed, his eyes raking over her form. He took in her faded jeans, her damp t-shirt, the exhaustion bruised into the skin under her eyes. At twenty-five, she knew she looked worn thin. We all thought you were going to top the Pre-Law program. I saw Brendan outside the courthouse in the city center a few months back. Your dad still mentions you like you are going to take over his firm tomorrow, but he wouldn't tell me where you ended up. He is an Irish barrister, Rory said, forcing a tight, polite smile. Admitting defeat is not in his vocabulary. Rhys leaned closer, lowering his voice conspiratorially. The action felt invasive, demanding an intimacy they no longer shared. Was it Evan? he asked. We all knew things were getting bad between you two. One day you are the sharpest mind in the lecture hall, and the next, you are gone. Did you leave university because of him? Rory flinched inwardly, though her outward expression remained a mask of polite indifference. Just hearing Evan’s name made the ghost of an old bruise ache. She pressed her thumb against her left wrist, feeling the raised, familiar texture of the small crescent-shaped scar there. It was from a childhood accident, falling out of an oak tree when she was nine, but grounding herself with its texture had become a ritual whenever her anxiety spiked. Eva had begged her to come to London, practically dragged her out of Cardiff to save her life. Escaping an abusive ex had cost her the degree, her father’s unblemished pride, and the trajectory of an entire life she had meticulously planned. Life got complicated, Rhys, she said simply. London offered a clean slate. And a thriving career in... he paused, his gaze drifting toward the sodden Golden Empress jacket draped over the chair behind her. Food delivery? The condescension in his voice wasn't malicious. It was worse. It was pity. The heavy, suffocating weight of unrealized potential hung in the gap between them. For a fleeting second, the image of what she could have been flashed before her eyes. She could have been wearing a tailored suit, arguing cases alongside him, living the safe, structured life crafted by her mother Jennifer's strict Welsh pragmatism and her dad's soaring ambition. Instead, she was ferrying sweet and sour pork through the rain, living above a bar, guarding secrets she could never tell a man like Rhys. Before she could craft a retort, a heavy glass thumped onto the wooden bar directly between them. Silas stood there, his hazel eyes fixed on Rhys. The spymaster did not scowl, nor did he raise his voice. He simply projected an aura of absolute stillness that commanded the space entirely. Is there a problem here, Rory? Silas asked. His voice was a low, gravelly baritone that vibrated through the mahogany. No problem, Silas, she said, feeling the immediate comfort of his intervention. Just catching up with an old classmate. Silas did not blink. He looked Rhys up and down, dissecting the lawyer in a fraction of a second. You look like a man who has finished his drink, Silas noted mildly, though it sounded precisely like an eviction notice. Rhys straightened, suddenly hyper-aware of the towering man behind the counter. The lawyerly bravado evaporated under the weight of Silas' gaze. No, I was just leaving, actually. I have an early meeting in the City tomorrow. He turned back to Rory, reaching into his jacket to pull out a pristine white business card. He slid it across the wet wood toward her. If you ever want to talk, Carter. Or if you need help getting back on your feet. You threw away a brilliant future. It is a shame to see it go to waste like this. Rory stared at the card. The name of a prestigious London firm was embossed in silver lettering. The tension in the air was thick, laced with the bitter tang of unspoken regret. But as she looked from the business card to the man handing it to her, the regret began to shift. The sorrow wasn't for the life she had lost, but for the fact that Rhys would never understand what she had survived to be here. He saw a failure. He did not see the terrifying, brilliant freedom of being alive. He did not know about the intricate network of contacts Silas ran, or the dangerous, electric thrill of the world she now danced on the edges of. He did not know about the heavy wooden bookshelf in the corner of this very bar, or the hidden back room it rotated to reveal, where clandestine meetings decided fates far more profound than petty corporate lawsuits. Rhys lived in a world of paper and rules. Rory had stepped off the map entirely. I appreciate the thought, Rhys, she said, leaving the card untouched on the bar. But my future is exactly where I want it to be. Rhys gave a tight, awkward nod, unable to decipher the absolute certainty in her bright blue eyes. He buttoned his expensive jacket, offered Silas a wary glance, and walked out into the London rain. The heavy door clicked shut, leaving behind the hum of the green neon sign and the quiet, steady breath of the bar. Rory sat in silence, staring at the empty space Rhys had occupied. She picked up the business card by its corner, feeling the heavy, expensive cardstock, and dropped it into a nearby waste bin. Silas picked up the rag and resumed wiping down the bar, his silver signet ring flashing in the low light. He didn't ask about Evan. He didn't ask about Cardiff, or the Pre-Law degree she had abandoned. He already knew everything that mattered. Tough shift? Silas asked, his gravelly voice devoid of judgment. Yu-Fei had me hauling orders all the way to Camden, Rory replied, her shoulders finally dropping from their defensive posture. I am soaked to the bone, my legs are killing me, and someone stiffed me on a twenty-pound total. Silas turned around and pulled a bottle of dark, aged whiskey from the top shelf. He poured two measures into heavy crystal glasses, pushing one across the mahogany toward her. Welcome home, Rory, he said. She offered a genuine smile, letting the warmth of the bar seep into her bones. Outside, the rain washed the streets of Soho gray, but inside the Nest, under the watchful gaze of the old maps and the quiet protection of the man beside her, she had never felt so safe. She raised her glass, the crescent scar on her wrist pale and smooth in the amber light, and drank to the life she had chosen.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1730
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
2"precisely"
3"suddenly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1730
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"crystal"
count2
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"solitary"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"fleeting"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"pristine"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"intricate"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
16
word"clandestine"
count1
17
word"profound"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"crystal"
4"shattered"
5"solitary"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
8"potential"
9"fleeting"
10"vibrated"
11"pristine"
12"tension"
13"unspoken"
14"intricate"
15"electric"
16"clandestine"
17"profound"
18"silence"
19"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"look notice"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1717
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions9
matches
0"Christ, Carter, he said, letting out a breath that sounded like a laugh."
1"It is a small world, Rhys, she said smoothly."
2"I moved, Rory said, taking a sip of the water."
3"He is an Irish barrister, Rory said, forcing a tight, polite smile."
4"Life got complicated, Rhys, she said simply."
5"No problem, Silas, she said, feeling the immediate comfort of his intervention."
6"I appreciate the thought, Rhys, she said, leaving the card untouched on the bar."
7"Yu-Fei had me hauling orders all the way to Camden, Rory replied, her shoulders finally dropping from their defensive po…"
8"Welcome home, Rory, he said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1715
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho3
Raven1
Nest2
Carter3
October1
Yu-Fei2
Cheung1
London5
Golden2
Empress2
European1
Silas13
Blackwood1
Prague1
Rhys13
Cardiff3
Rory12
Pre-Law2
Brendan1
Irish1
Evan3
Jennifer1
Welsh1
City1
Camden1
You3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Rhys"
7"Rory"
8"Brendan"
9"Evan"
10"Jennifer"
11"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Nest"
2"London"
3"Prague"
4"Cardiff"
5"City"
6"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a laugh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1717
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean45.18
std31.26
cv0.692
sampleLengths
0105
198
278
361
432
510
65
770
81
929
1048
1145
1210
1384
1419
1557
16116
1712
1824
1997
2017
2133
2220
2319
2440
2536
2661
2792
2880
2925
3034
3156
3243
3310
3439
3530
365
3776
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences130
matches
0"was written"
1"was exchanged"
2"are gone"
3"been flashed"
4"was embossed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs283
matches
0"were getting"
1"was ferrying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1161
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03273040482342808
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.020671834625323
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean13.21
std7.92
cv0.6
sampleLengths
020
129
220
311
425
528
613
78
822
94
1023
117
1219
1312
1419
1521
1613
1729
1819
1913
2011
218
2210
231
244
258
2619
2722
2821
291
3013
313
324
339
349
356
361
3732
3812
3921
409
413
4210
439
4418
458
4611
4714
4824
4912
55.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences123
matches
0"Then, a voice off to"
1"Just hearing Evan’s name made"
2"Instead, she was ferrying sweet"
3"Just catching up with an"
ratio0.033
41.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences123
matches
0"She shivered, peeling the heavy"
1"It still smelled of fried"
2"She tossed the soaked Golden"
3"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
4"It was her haven."
5"Her flat was just upstairs,"
6"He was methodically wiping down"
7"He looked up as she"
8"He favored his left leg"
9"He had short, meticulously styled"
10"It took her a second"
11"It is you."
12"It is a small world,"
13"Her voice was steady, perfectly"
14"It was the same tone"
15"He stood and closed the"
16"He smelled of rain and"
17"I haven't seen you since"
18"You just disappeared."
19"I moved, Rory said, taking"
ratio0.447
86.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences123
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"Aurora Carter pushed her shoulder"
2"She shivered, peeling the heavy"
3"It still smelled of fried"
4"She tossed the soaked Golden"
5"The bar was comfortably dim,"
6"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
7"Shadows clung to the corners"
8"It was her haven."
9"Her flat was just upstairs,"
10"He was methodically wiping down"
11"The dim light caught the"
12"He looked up as she"
13"He favored his left leg"
14"Silas never talked about MI6,"
15"Silas reached below the counter"
16"Rory wrapped her cold fingers"
17"Rory turned, her grip tightening"
18"He had short, meticulously styled"
19"It took her a second"
ratio0.748
81.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"Before she could craft a"
1"If you ever want to"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The dim light caught the grey-streaked auburn hair and the matching, neatly trimmed beard that framed his sharp jawline."
1"He favored his left leg as he moved down the bar, a slight limp left over from an intelligence operation in Prague that had gone terribly wrong decades ago."
2"He had short, meticulously styled hair and the polished, expectant posture of someone who spent his days commanding air in a courtroom."
3"He simply projected an aura of absolute stillness that commanded the space entirely."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.5904%