Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPGVT045EGZBWJN0E7EYGJ

Run Details

Duration:
30.8s
Cost:
$0.002705
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses, the kind of sound that settled into the bones like a second heartbeat. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, painting the patrons in shades of jade and shadow. Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty gin and tonic, the ice long melted into something watery and weak. She hadn’t meant to stay this long. Just a quick drink after her shift at the Golden Empress, a moment to shake off the chill of the London evening before heading upstairs to her flat. But the Nest had a way of holding onto people, like a spider’s silk—soft at first, then impossible to break. The door swung open, letting in a gust of damp air and the distant wail of a siren. Rory didn’t look up. She was too busy watching the way the condensation slid down her glass, leaving a trail like a slug’s path. Then the scent hit her—cedar and bergamot, something familiar beneath the cologne. Her stomach tightened. “Well,” a voice said, rough as gravel underfoot. “If it isn’t Malphora herself.” Rory’s head snapped up. The nickname sent a jolt through her, sharp and unwelcome. No one had called her that in years. Not since— Evan stood there, grinning like he’d just won a bet. His hair was shorter now, cropped close to his skull, and there was a new hardness to his jaw, a shadow of stubble that made him look older than she remembered. But his eyes were the same—pale, almost colorless, like winter ice. They locked onto hers with the same intensity she’d once mistaken for passion. “Evan,” she said, and her voice came out steadier than she felt. She set her glass down, the clink too loud in the sudden quiet of her own pulse. “I didn’t know you were back in London.” He slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that she could feel the heat of him, the way his knee brushed against hers. She didn’t move away. Old habits. “Just got in this morning. Thought I’d stop by the old haunts, see what’s changed.” His gaze flicked over her, lingering on the crescent scar at her wrist before meeting her eyes again. “You haven’t.” Rory exhaled through her nose. “People change.” “Do they?” He flagged down Silas, who was wiping down the bar with slow, deliberate strokes. The older man’s hazel eyes flicked between them, assessing, before he nodded once and turned to pour Evan’s usual—whiskey, neat. Rory watched Silas move, the slight hitch in his step as he limped back toward them. She wondered if Evan noticed. If he remembered the way Silas had always been there, a silent sentinel in the background of their relationship, the one who’d slipped her his card the night she’d shown up at the Nest with a split lip and shaking hands. *Call me if you ever need out.* Evan took the whiskey, swirled it once, and knocked it back in a single swallow. “Still working at that shitty little restaurant?” “It’s not shitty,” Rory said, though she knew what he meant. The Golden Empress was a far cry from the corporate law firms she’d once dreamed of. “And it’s honest work.” Evan laughed, a sharp, humorless sound. “Honest. Right.” He signaled for another drink. “You always did have a flair for the dramatic, Malphora. Running off to London, playing delivery girl. What happened to the girl who was going to take the bar by storm?” Rory’s fingers curled into her palm, nails biting into the crescent scar. “She grew up.” Silas set the second whiskey in front of Evan, his signet ring glinting under the dim bar lights. He didn’t say anything, but his presence was a weight, a reminder. Rory forced herself to relax. She wasn’t that girl anymore. She wasn’t. Evan leaned in, close enough that she could smell the alcohol on his breath. “You know, I always wondered what happened to you. One day you were there, the next—poof. Like a fucking magic trick.” His voice dropped, low and intimate. “I looked for you, you know. For months.” Rory’s throat tightened. She remembered the texts, the voicemails, the way he’d shown up at her parents’ house in Cardiff, sweet-talking her mother while her father stood in the doorway, arms crossed, jaw set. *She doesn’t want to see you, son.* Evan hadn’t taken no for an answer then. He wasn’t taking it now. “I needed space,” she said. “Space.” He scoffed. “That’s what you call it? You just—left. No note, no explanation. Just gone.” His hand shot out, gripping her wrist, his thumb pressing against the scar. “You owe me an explanation, Rory.” She didn’t pull away. Not yet. “I don’t owe you anything.” Evan’s grip tightened, just shy of pain. “You think you’re so clever, don’t you? Running away, hiding behind your little bike and your shitty flat. But you’re still the same girl underneath. The one who flinches when I raise my voice. The one who jumps when the door slams.” His lips curled. “The one who never could say no to me.” Rory’s breath hitched. She could feel Silas watching them, could feel the weight of every pair of eyes in the bar, though no one was looking. Not really. This was London. People minded their own business. But she knew Silas. He wouldn’t intervene unless she asked. And she wouldn’t ask. She met Evan’s gaze, held it. “I’m not that girl anymore.” For a second, something flickered in his eyes—doubt, maybe, or anger. Then he laughed, loud and sharp, and let go of her wrist. “Sure you’re not.” He knocked back the second whiskey and stood, tossing a twenty onto the bar. “You know where to find me if you change your mind.” Rory didn’t watch him leave. She kept her eyes on her glass, on the way the ice had finally melted into nothing. The door swung shut behind him, the bell above it chiming softly. Silas didn’t say anything at first. He just refilled her gin and tonic, the ice fresh this time, the slice of lime floating on top like a tiny, bitter sun. Then, quietly: “You alright?” Rory picked up the drink, took a sip. The gin burned. “I will be.” Silas nodded, once, and moved down the bar to serve someone else. Rory stayed where she was, listening to the hum of the Nest, the clink of glasses, the murmur of lives unfolding around her. She flexed her wrist, feeling the ghost of Evan’s grip, the old ache of the scar. She wasn’t that girl anymore. But the past had a way of catching up, no matter how fast you ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He knocked back [back]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.464
leniency0.929
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.071
91.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1147
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count3
8
word"flicked"
count2
9
word"sentinel"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"chill"
2"silk"
3"familiar"
4"stomach"
5"intensity"
6"pulse"
7"could feel"
8"flicked"
9"sentinel"
10"glinting"
11"weight"
12"reminder"
13"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords14
totalWords1137
ratio0.012
matches
0"Call me if you ever need out."
1"She doesn’t want to see you, son."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount901
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest4
Golden2
Empress2
London2
Rory13
Evan11
Silas8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore0.779
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1137
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean39.21
std25.43
cv0.649
sampleLengths
0130
157
213
324
465
537
665
77
836
969
1022
1131
1244
1315
1442
1549
1654
175
1835
1911
2061
2150
2211
2351
2434
2534
2614
2751
2820
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
29.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was wiping"
1"wasn’t taking"
2"was looking"
3"was, listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences97
ratio0.062
matches
0"But the Nest had a way of holding onto people, like a spider’s silk—soft at first, then impossible to break."
1"Then the scent hit her—cedar and bergamot, something familiar beneath the cologne."
2"Not since—"
3"But his eyes were the same—pale, almost colorless, like winter ice."
4"The older man’s hazel eyes flicked between them, assessing, before he nodded once and turned to pour Evan’s usual—whiskey, neat."
5"For a second, something flickered in his eyes—doubt, maybe, or anger."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount694
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03314121037463977
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001440922190201729
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean11.72
std9.34
cv0.797
sampleLengths
028
122
225
37
428
520
618
74
820
912
103
118
125
134
1410
158
162
1710
1831
1911
2013
2112
2217
238
2424
254
262
2733
282
295
302
3116
3220
3316
345
3541
367
3715
387
3911
4016
414
426
437
4431
4512
463
4718
4812
495
49.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.31958762886597936
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"Just a quick drink after"
1"Then the scent hit her—cedar"
2"Then he laughed, loud and"
ratio0.041
57.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences74
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to stay"
1"She was too busy watching"
2"Her stomach tightened."
3"His hair was shorter now,"
4"They locked onto hers with"
5"she said, and her voice"
6"She set her glass down,"
7"He slid onto the stool"
8"She didn’t move away."
9"His gaze flicked over her,"
10"He flagged down Silas, who"
11"She wondered if Evan noticed."
12"He signaled for another drink"
13"He didn’t say anything, but"
14"She wasn’t that girl anymore."
15"His voice dropped, low and"
16"She remembered the texts, the"
17"*She doesn’t want to see"
18"He wasn’t taking it now."
19"His hand shot out, gripping"
ratio0.405
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Rory leaned against the bar,"
3"She hadn’t meant to stay"
4"The door swung open, letting"
5"Rory didn’t look up."
6"She was too busy watching"
7"Her stomach tightened."
8"a voice said, rough as"
9"Rory’s head snapped up."
10"The nickname sent a jolt"
11"Evan stood there, grinning like"
12"His hair was shorter now,"
13"They locked onto hers with"
14"she said, and her voice"
15"She set her glass down,"
16"He slid onto the stool"
17"She didn’t move away."
18"His gaze flicked over her,"
19"Rory exhaled through her nose."
ratio0.838
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"If he remembered the way"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses, the kind of sound that settled into the bones like a second heartbeat."
1"His hair was shorter now, cropped close to his skull, and there was a new hardness to his jaw, a shadow of stubble that made him look older than she remembered."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1390%