Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPHZ942YHGE8XTKM6B6G9S

Run Details

Duration:
10.9s
Cost:
$0.000466
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed softly against the Soho night, casting an eerie glow on the rain-slicked pavement. Aurora Carter, her black hair damp from the evening drizzle, pushed open the heavy wooden door and stepped inside, the scent of aged whiskey and polished leather wrapping around her like an old familiar coat. She scanned the dimly lit room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the low light as she sought out Silas Blackwood, the man who had become her reluctant guardian since her arrival in London. Silas stood behind the bar, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners as he laughed at something one of his patrons said. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed back, and his matching beard was trimmed to perfection. He wore a dark green button-down shirt that brought out the color of his eyes, the sleeves rolled up to reveal forearms roped with muscle and a silver signet ring on his right hand. A slight limp was evident as he moved, a remnant of the life he had left behind. Aurora made her way to the bar, her boots clicking softly on the worn wooden floor. She slid onto a stool, her eyes never leaving Silas. He looked up, his laughter fading as recognition dawned. "Well, well," he said, his voice a low rumble. "If it isn't Rory Carter. I was wondering when you'd grace us with your presence." Aurora smirked, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "You know me, Silas. Always late to the party." Silas chuckled, shaking his head as he grabbed a glass and poured her usual—whiskey, neat. He slid it across the bar to her, his eyes never leaving her face. "You've changed," he said softly. Aurora took a sip of her whiskey, the burn familiar and comforting. "We all change, Silas." He leaned against the bar, his gaze intense. "Not like this. You're different. Harder, maybe. But there's something else, too. Something I can't quite put my finger on." Aurora looked down at her drink, her fingers tightening around the glass. "It's been a long few years, Silas. I've seen things, done things... I'm not the same girl who showed up on your doorstep all those years ago." Silas nodded, his expression serious. "I know. I've seen the reports. I've watched you from afar, Rory. I've tried to give you space, let you find your own way. But I'm here now, if you need me." Aurora looked up at him, her eyes searching his face. "Why, Silas? Why do you care so much? You barely knew me before I showed up here." Silas sighed, running a hand through his hair. "Because I see myself in you, Rory. I see the same fire, the same determination. The same stubbornness that refuses to let go, even when it should. I see the same pain, the same scars. And I see the same potential, the same chance at redemption." Aurora looked down at her drink, her fingers tracing the rim of the glass. "I'm not sure I deserve redemption, Silas." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "That's not for you to decide, Rory. That's for you to earn. And I believe in you. I believe in your strength, in your intelligence, in your heart. I believe in the girl I met all those years ago, and I believe in the woman you've become." Aurora looked up at him, her eyes shining with unshed tears. "I've missed you, Silas. I've missed your wisdom, your guidance. I've missed your friendship." Silas smiled, his hand squeezing hers. "I've missed you too, Rory. And I'm here now. I'm not going anywhere." Aurora took a deep breath, her fingers tightening around Silas's. "I need your help, Silas. I need your guidance. I need your friendship. I need... I need you to help me find my way back." Silas nodded, his expression serious. "I'll help you, Rory. I'll be by your side every step of the way. But you have to promise me something." Aurora looked up at him, her eyes searching his face. "What?" "Promise me you'll be honest with me. Promise me you'll trust me. Promise me you'll let me in, let me help you. Promise me you'll fight, Rory. Promise me you'll fight for your redemption, for your happiness, for your future." Aurora looked down at their joined hands, her fingers tracing the silver signet ring on Silas's right hand. "I promise, Silas. I promise I'll be honest with you. I promise I'll trust you. I promise I'll let you in, let you help me. I promise I'll fight, Silas. I promise I'll fight for my redemption, for my happiness, for my future." Silas smiled, his hand squeezing hers. "Then we'll face whatever comes our way together, Rory. You and me, side by side. Just like old times." Aurora looked up at him, her eyes shining with determination. "Just like old times, Silas. Together." As they sat there, their hands joined, their eyes locked, the weight of their shared past and the promise of their shared future hung heavy in the air. The Raven's Nest, with its dimly lit room and worn wooden floor, its old maps and black-and-white photographs, its scent of aged whiskey and polished leather, became a sanctuary, a place of refuge, a place of hope. And in that moment, as the neon sign buzzed softly outside and the rain pattered gently against the windows, Aurora Carter and Silas Blackwood found solace in each other's company, found strength in each other's presence, found hope in each other's promise. And they knew, in that moment, that they would face whatever came their way together, side by side, just like old times.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:16:44.078Z" 2/20/2026, 2:16:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.095
74.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count4
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count3
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"potential"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"solace"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanned"
2"tracing"
3"comforting"
4"potential"
5"weight"
6"sanctuary"
7"solace"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences35
matches
0"g with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences35
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords958
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount548
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.37
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Carter2
Silas13
Blackwood2
London1
Aurora13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.314
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount958
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean41.65
std28.24
cv0.678
sampleLengths
092
189
259
321
434
516
628
739
837
927
1054
1121
1254
1325
1419
1535
1626
1711
1840
1961
2025
2116
22129
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences35
matches
0"was trimmed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs84
matches(empty)
89.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences54
ratio0.019
matches
0"Silas chuckled, shaking his head as he grabbed a glass and poured her usual—whiskey, neat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount555
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02702702702702703
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.014414414414414415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean17.74
std11.9
cv0.671
sampleLengths
023
135
234
322
416
534
617
716
810
99
109
1115
1212
139
1415
1514
165
1712
184
198
2020
2112
2227
235
2432
2510
2617
278
2846
2914
307
317
3247
3311
3414
356
3613
3710
3825
395
4021
4110
421
4340
4418
4543
466
4719
4810
496
69.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42592592592592593
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences35
matches
0"She scanned the dimly lit"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
2"He wore a dark green"
3"She slid onto a stool,"
4"He looked up, his laughter"
5"he said, his voice a"
6"He slid it across the"
7"he said softly"
8"He leaned against the bar,"
ratio0.257
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences35
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Aurora Carter, her black hair"
2"She scanned the dimly lit"
3"Silas stood behind the bar,"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
5"He wore a dark green"
6"A slight limp was evident"
7"Aurora made her way to"
8"She slid onto a stool,"
9"He looked up, his laughter"
10"he said, his voice a"
11"Aurora smirked, her fingers tracing"
12"Silas chuckled, shaking his head"
13"He slid it across the"
14"he said softly"
15"Aurora took a sip of"
16"He leaned against the bar,"
17"Aurora looked down at her"
18"Silas nodded, his expression serious."
19"Aurora looked up at him,"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She scanned the dimly lit room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the low light as she sought out Silas Blackwood, the man who had become her reluctant guardian…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.1426%