Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPJ55BV721AH8D7D3R9W4D

Run Details

Duration:
25.7s
Cost:
$0.002438
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses, the kind of noise that settled into the bones like a second heartbeat. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, painting the patrons in shades of jade and shadow. Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty gin and tonic, the ice long melted. She hadn’t meant to stay this long. Just a quick drink after her shift at the Golden Empress, a moment to breathe before heading upstairs to her flat. But the Nest had a way of holding onto people, like a spider’s silk—soft, almost unnoticeable, until you tried to pull away. The door swung open, letting in a gust of damp London air and a man she hadn’t seen in years. Evan. Her breath hitched. He looked different. The boyish charm was gone, replaced by something harder, leaner. His dark hair was cropped short, his jaw shadowed with stubble, and his eyes—once warm, now cold—scanned the room with the precision of a man who expected trouble. He wore a leather jacket, worn at the elbows, and beneath it, the outline of a shoulder holster was just visible. Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. She should have left. She should have slipped out the back, up the stairs, anywhere but here. But she didn’t move. Some part of her, the part that still remembered the way he used to laugh, the way his hands had once been gentle, wanted to see what he’d say. Evan’s gaze landed on her. For a second, his expression flickered—surprise, maybe even something like regret—but it was gone before she could be sure. He crossed the room in long strides, his boots thudding against the worn floorboards. “Rory,” he said, his voice rougher than she remembered. “Didn’t expect to see you here.” She forced a smile, though it felt brittle. “London’s a big city, but not that big, I guess.” He slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that she could smell the rain on his jacket, the faint metallic tang of whatever he’d been doing before he walked in. “You look good,” he said, and there was something in his tone, something that made her skin prickle. “You don’t,” she said before she could stop herself. Evan laughed, but it was a sharp, humorless sound. “Yeah, well. Life’s a bitch.” Silas appeared behind the bar, his hazel eyes flicking between them with the quiet assessment of a man who’d spent a lifetime reading people. He set a glass in front of Evan without a word, poured two fingers of whiskey, neat. “You want another?” he asked Rory, his voice low. She shook her head. “I’m good.” Silas lingered for a moment, his signet ring glinting in the dim light, before he moved down the bar to polish glasses that didn’t need polishing. Rory knew he was listening. Silas always listened. Evan took a sip of his whiskey, his throat working. “Haven’t seen you around,” he said. “Thought you’d have left the city by now.” “I did,” she said. “For a while. Came back.” “Why?” She shrugged. “Needed to.” He studied her, his gaze lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, the one he’d given her. She saw the moment he recognized it, the way his jaw tightened. “I heard about what happened,” he said quietly. “With your ex.” Rory’s fingers twitched. “Which one?” Evan’s mouth twisted. “The one who put you in the hospital.” She exhaled through her nose. “That was a long time ago.” “Not long enough.” The air between them was thick with things unsaid, with the weight of the past pressing down like a physical force. Rory wanted to ask him what he’d been doing, where he’d gone, why he looked like a man who’d seen too much and come back wrong. But she didn’t. Some questions were better left unanswered. “You still delivering takeout?” Evan asked, changing the subject. “Part-time,” she said. “It pays the bills.” “And the rest of the time?” She hesitated. “I’m working on something.” “Legal?” She met his gaze. “Mostly.” Evan smirked, but there was no humor in it. “That’s new.” Rory didn’t rise to the bait. She knew what he was doing—poking, prodding, looking for a reaction. She wouldn’t give him one. “What about you?” she asked instead. “Still playing at being a tough guy?” His expression darkened. “I don’t play at anything anymore.” “No,” she said softly. “I can see that.” A beat of silence stretched between them, heavy and suffocating. Evan finished his whiskey in one swallow, set the glass down with a sharp *clink*. “I should go.” Rory nodded. “Yeah. You should.” He stood, hesitated. “It was good seeing you, Rory.” She didn’t answer. She didn’t trust herself to speak. Evan turned and walked away, his limp barely noticeable, the door swinging shut behind him with a finality that echoed in her chest. Rory stared at the spot where he’d been, her heart pounding. Silas reappeared, his presence solid and reassuring. “You alright?” he asked, his voice low. She picked up her glass, drained the last of her drink. “I will be.” He studied her for a long moment, then nodded. “You know where to find me if you need to talk.” Rory managed a small smile. “I know.” Silas moved away, leaving her alone with the hum of the bar and the ghost of Evan’s presence. She traced the scar on her wrist, the one that had faded but never quite disappeared. Some wounds didn’t heal. Some people didn’t either. She stood, her stool scraping against the floor, and made her way toward the back of the bar, toward the hidden door behind the bookshelf. She needed to think. She needed to breathe. And for the first time in a long time, she needed to remember who she was before the world had tried to break her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"she asked instead [instead]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.15
95.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1005
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1005
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"silk"
2"charm"
3"scanned"
4"flickered"
5"glinting"
6"weight"
7"silence"
8"echoed"
9"pounding"
10"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords996
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount841
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Evan11
Rory10
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore0.846
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like regret—but it was gone before"
1"appeared behind the bar, his hazel eyes flicking between them with the quiet assessment of a man who’d spent a lifetime reading people"
2"looked like a man who’d seen too much and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount996
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean21.65
std22.28
cv1.029
sampleLengths
0120
120
21
365
456
538
615
718
849
99
1014
1150
126
1334
1424
159
161
174
1841
195
2011
2111
223
2356
249
257
266
276
281
295
3011
3135
329
338
3428
355
369
379
3834
3914
4014
4120
427
4342
4433
4524
92.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"was gone"
1"was cropped"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was listening"
1"was doing"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences108
ratio0.037
matches
0"But the Nest had a way of holding onto people, like a spider’s silk—soft, almost unnoticeable, until you tried to pull away."
1"His dark hair was cropped short, his jaw shadowed with stubble, and his eyes—once warm, now cold—scanned the room with the precision of a man who expected trouble."
2"For a second, his expression flickered—surprise, maybe even something like regret—but it was gone before she could be sure."
3"She knew what he was doing—poking, prodding, looking for a reaction."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount850
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.023529411764705882
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004705882352941176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean9.22
std7.7
cv0.835
sampleLengths
028
122
220
37
421
522
620
71
83
93
1010
1128
1221
136
144
1513
164
1729
185
1919
2014
219
226
238
2410
2531
2618
279
289
295
3024
3117
329
334
342
3526
365
373
3810
396
408
414
425
431
442
452
4618
4712
488
493
45.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3148148148148148
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners34
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Just a quick drink after"
ratio0.014
22.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences73
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to stay"
1"Her breath hitched."
2"He looked different."
3"His dark hair was cropped"
4"He wore a leather jacket,"
5"She should have left."
6"She should have slipped out"
7"He crossed the room in"
8"he said, his voice rougher"
9"She forced a smile, though"
10"He slid onto the stool"
11"he said, and there was"
12"she said before she could"
13"He set a glass in"
14"he asked Rory, his voice"
15"She shook her head."
16"He studied her, his gaze"
17"She saw the moment he"
18"he said quietly"
19"She exhaled through her nose."
ratio0.493
1.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences73
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Rory leaned against the bar,"
3"She hadn’t meant to stay"
4"The door swung open, letting"
5"Her breath hitched."
6"He looked different."
7"The boyish charm was gone,"
8"His dark hair was cropped"
9"He wore a leather jacket,"
10"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
11"She should have left."
12"She should have slipped out"
13"Some part of her, the"
14"Evan’s gaze landed on her."
15"He crossed the room in"
16"he said, his voice rougher"
17"She forced a smile, though"
18"He slid onto the stool"
19"he said, and there was"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses, the kind of noise that settled into the bones like a second heartbeat."
1"Silas appeared behind the bar, his hazel eyes flicking between them with the quiet assessment of a man who’d spent a lifetime reading people."
2"Silas lingered for a moment, his signet ring glinting in the dim light, before he moved down the bar to polish glasses that didn’t need polishing."
3"Evan turned and walked away, his limp barely noticeable, the door swinging shut behind him with a finality that echoed in her chest."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, his voice rougher than she remembered"
1"he asked, his voice low"
2"he asked, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.3635%