"Not *bad*, exactly—just thick, like the breath of something old and patient, exhaling through the leaves."
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"It had been warm when she left Silas’s flat—unnaturally so, as if it knew where she was headed."
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"But the note had been slipped under Rory’s door with no signature, no postmark, just three words in ink that smelled faintly of crushed violets: *They’re watching you.* Below it, a sketch of the pendant—her pendant—dripping something dark and viscous."
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"She tapped it twice—batteries were fresh, damn it—and the beam steadied, carving a pale path through the undergrowth."
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"Her fingers found damp earth, crushed petals, something smooth and cold—*bone?*—before closing around the torch."
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"The darkness wasn’t absolute; moonlight still bled through the trees, but it was thin, watery, as if something were drinking it."
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"Then—the snap of a branch."
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"The moonlight caught the glint of eyes—too many eyes—and a smile that stretched too wide."
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"It had no face, not really—just a smooth expanse of pale skin, and that *smile*, a gash of black where a mouth should be."
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"But the pendant—*someone* had known she had it."
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"The Grove had always been small—a pocket, Isolde had called it—but now the trees stretched endlessly, the standing stones nowhere in sight."
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"A sound cut through the silence—a sob, high and broken."
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"Her dark hair was matted with leaves, her dress—no, her *robe*—torn at the hem."
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"Her mouth stretched open, and a sound crawled out—a keening, wordless scream that clawed up Rory’s spine and locked her muscles in place."
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"And then—"
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"She screamed, scrambling back, but it was just a tree—a normal, *human* tree, its leaves rustling in the breeze."
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"But the note had been slipped under Rory’s door with no signature, no postmark, just three words in ink that smelled faintly of crushed violets: *They’re watchi…"
1
"The darkness wasn’t absolute; moonlight still bled through the trees, but it was thin, watery, as if something were drinking it."
2
"The moonlight caught the glint of eyes—too many eyes—and a smile that stretched too wide."
3
"Branches whipped at her arms, her face, tearing at her clothes like grasping hands."
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"The thing hissed, recoiling, its limbs twisting as if burned."
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"The trees blurred past her, their branches snapping back as if in pain."
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"She screamed, scrambling back, but it was just a tree—a normal, *human* tree, its leaves rustling in the breeze."