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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPPG69X82D875RH6BTZ21C
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Model:
Mistral Small 3.2 24B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
24.8s
Cost:
$0.000802
Provider:
Mistral
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
91.20%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
41.31%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
29.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
94.54%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
40.61%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
78.13%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
13.75%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
2.97%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
79.5166%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The distinctive green neon sign
of The Raven's Nest cast a soft glow on the rain-slicked pavement as Aurora Carter, her black hair damp from the evening drizzle, pushed open the heavy wooden door. The bar was dimly lit, the air thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low hum of conversation.
She scanned the room, her
bright blue eyes taking in the
familiar
yet foreign atmosphere.
It had been years since
she'd set foot in this place, years since she'd seen him.
Silas Blackwood stood behind the
bar, his hazel eyes focused on the glass he
was polishing
.
His grey-streaked auburn hair was
neatly combed, matching the trim of his beard.
He looked up as the
door closed behind her, his gaze meeting hers. For a moment, time
seemed to
stand still.
Then, a slow smile spread
across his face, crinkling the corners of his eyes. "Well, well,"
Silas said, his voice a
deep rumble. "If it isn't little Rory Carter. I was beginning to think you'd forgotten about me."
Aurora walked up to the
bar, her boots clicking against the worn wooden floor. She slid onto a stool, her eyes never leaving his. "Silas Blackwood,"
she said, her voice steady
despite the flutter in her chest. "You're looking... older."
Silas chuckled, setting the glass
down and leaning against the bar. "And you're looking... exactly the same,"
he said, his eyes flicking
to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Still getting into trouble, I see."
Aurora looked down at her
wrist,
tracing
the scar with her finger. "This? It's nothing,"
she said, her voice light
. "Just a
reminder
of my childhood clumsiness." Silas raised an
eyebrow
. "Is that what you're calling it these days?"
he asked, his tone teasing
. "Clumsiness?"
Aurora laughed, the sound echoing
through the bar. "Alright, alright,"
she said, holding up her
hands in mock surrender. "I was a bit of a hellraiser. But that's all in the past now."
Silas studied her for a
moment, his eyes searching her face. "You've changed,"
he said finally, his voice
soft. "You're different." Aurora's smile faded, her eyes darkening. "We all change, Silas,"
she said, her voice barely
above a
whisper
. "Time has a way of doing that to people." Silas nodded, his gaze dropping to the bar. "I suppose it does,"
he said, his voice heavy
with
unspoken
words.
He straightened up, his eyes
meeting hers again. "What can I get you? On the house, of course." Aurora hesitated, her eyes flicking to the shelves of bottles behind him. "Whiskey,"
she said finally
. "Neat." Silas raised an
eyebrow
but didn't comment.
He turned and grabbed a
bottle of whiskey, pouring a generous amount into a glass.
He slid it across the
bar to her, his eyes never leaving her face. Aurora picked up the glass, her fingers brushing against his.
She took a sip, the
liquid burning her throat. She set the glass down, her eyes meeting his. "So,"
she said, her voice steady
. "Tell me about yourself. What have you been up to all these years?" Silas leaned against the bar, his eyes distant. "Not much,"
he said, his voice quiet
. "I retired from the service after a botched operation in Prague. Left me with a bit of a limp." He gestured to his left leg, his voice light. "But I can't complain. I opened this place a few years back. It's kept me busy." Aurora nodded, her eyes flicking to his leg. "I'm sorry to hear that,"
she said, her voice sincere
. "But I'm glad you're doing well." Silas smiled, his eyes meeting hers. "And what about you?" he asked. "What have you been up to?" Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, her eyes darkening. "I left Cardiff after... everything,"
she said, her voice quiet
. "I've been living in London for a few years now. Working part-time at a restaurant, trying to make ends meet." Silas nodded, his eyes searching her face. "And Evan?"
he asked, his voice careful
. "What about him?" Aurora's eyes flashed, her grip tightening on her glass. "He's in the past,"
she said, her voice cold
. "Where he belongs." Silas held up his hands, his eyes wide. "Alright, alright,"
he said, his voice soothing
. "I didn't mean to pry." Aurora took a deep breath, her eyes softening. "I'm sorry,"
she said, her voice quiet
. "It's just... it's been a long time since I've talked about him." Silas nodded, his eyes understanding. "I get it,"
he said, his voice gentle
. "You don't have to talk about it if you don't want to." Aurora smiled, her eyes meeting his. "Thank you,"
she said, her voice sincere
. "For understanding." Silas smiled back, his eyes warm. "Anytime, Rory,"
he said, his voice soft
. "Anytime." They sat in
comfortable
silence
, the low hum of conversation filling the air. Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, her eyes flicking to the old maps and black-and-white photographs on the walls. "You've done well for yourself, Silas,"
she said, her voice quiet
. "This place... it's impressive." Silas looked around, his eyes taking in the bar. "It's not much,"
he said, his voice modest
. "But it's mine. And it's kept me busy." Aurora nodded, her eyes meeting his. "It's more than that, Silas,"
she said, her voice sincere
. "It's a
testament
to your strength, your resilience. You've come a long way from the man I knew all those years ago." Silas smiled, his eyes warm. "And you've come a long way from the girl I knew all those years ago,"
he said, his voice soft
. "You're stronger now, Rory. Braver. And I'm proud of you." Aurora's eyes welled up, her voice catching in her throat. "Thank you, Silas,"
she said, her voice barely
above a
whisper
. "That means a lot to me." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "Anytime, Rory,"
he said, his voice gentle
. "Anytime." They sat in
silence
, their hands still touching, the
weight
of their shared past and
unspoken
regrets hanging heavy in the air. But for the first time in a long time, Aurora felt a
sense of
peace, of understanding. And she knew that no matter what happened, she would always have Silas. Her friend. Her mentor. Her family. As the night wore on, the bar filled up with patrons, the low hum of conversation growing louder. But Aurora and Silas remained in their own world, their eyes locked, their hands still touching. And in that moment, they were no longer the boy and girl they once were. They were something more. Something stronger. Something unbreakable.
Eventually, the bar began to
empty, the patrons drifting out into the night. Silas looked around, his eyes taking in the empty glasses and chairs. "I should probably get back to work,"
he said, his voice reluctant
. "But I'm glad you stopped by, Rory. It's been too long." Aurora smiled, her eyes meeting his. "It has,"
she said, her voice soft
. "But I promise, it won't be so long next time." Silas smiled back, his eyes warm. "I'll hold you to that,"
he said, his voice gentle
. "Now, let me walk you out. It's late, and the streets aren't safe for a young woman like you."
Aurora laughed, the sound echoing
through the empty bar. "I can take care of myself, Silas," she said, her voice teasing. "But I won't say no to the company." Silas chuckled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "That's my girl,"
he said, his voice proud
. He stood up, his left leg stiff from standing for so long. He reached out, his hand steadying himself on the bar. Aurora stood up as well, her eyes flicking to his leg. "You sure you're okay?"
she asked, her voice concerned
. Silas nodded, his eyes meeting hers. "I'm fine, Rory,"
he said, his voice steady
. "Just a bit stiff. It'll pass." Aurora nodded, her eyes still worried. "Alright,"
she said, her voice soft
. "But if you need help, you'll tell me, right?" Silas smiled, his eyes warm. "Of course, Rory,"
he said, his voice gentle
. "Of course." They walked out of the bar together, the green neon sign casting a soft glow on their faces. The streets were quiet, the rain having stopped hours ago. Aurora looked up at the night sky, her eyes taking in the stars. "It's beautiful,"
she said, her voice quiet
. Silas looked up as well, his eyes following hers. "It is,"
he said, his voice soft
. "But not as beautiful as you, Rory. Not as beautiful as you." Aurora's eyes welled up, her voice catching in her throat. "Thank you, Silas,"
she said, her voice barely
above a
whisper
. "That means a lot to me." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "Anytime, Rory,"
he said, his voice gentle
. "Anytime." They stood there, their hands still touching, their eyes locked on the night sky. And in that moment, they were no longer the boy and girl they once were. They were something more. Something stronger. Something unbreakable.
Eventually, Aurora pulled away, her
eyes meeting his. "I should go,"
she said, her voice soft
. "It's late, and I have work in the morning." Silas nodded, his eyes understanding. "Of course,"
he said, his voice gentle
. "But promise me you'll come back, Rory. Promise me you won't disappear again." Aurora smiled, her eyes meeting his. "I promise, Silas,"
she said, her voice sincere
. "I promise." Silas smiled back, his eyes warm. "Good,"
he said, his voice soft
. "Now, let me walk you to your car. It's not safe for a young woman like you to be out alone at night."
Aurora laughed, the sound echoing
through the quiet streets. "I can take care of myself, Silas," she said, her voice teasing. "But I won't say no to the company." Silas chuckled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "That's my girl,"
he said, his voice proud
. He reached out, his hand steadying her as they walked. And as they disappeared into the night, the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest casting a soft glow on their faces, they were no longer the boy and girl they once were. They were something more. Something stronger. Something unbreakable.
created_at
"2026-02-20T14:19:12.468Z"
2/20/2026, 2:19:12 PM
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generation_time
24656
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867
tokens_completion
2499
native_tokens_prompt
826
native_tokens_completion
2397
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0
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
48
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"he said finally [finally]"
1
"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences
91
tagDensity
0.527
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.042
effectiveRatio
0.042
91.20%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1704
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
3
highlights
0
"barely above a whisper"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
41.31%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1704
totalAiIsms
20
found
0
word
"scanned"
count
1
1
word
"familiar"
count
1
2
word
"tracing"
count
1
3
word
"reminder"
count
1
4
word
"eyebrow"
count
2
5
word
"echoing"
count
3
6
word
"whisper"
count
3
7
word
"unspoken"
count
2
8
word
"comfortable"
count
1
9
word
"silence"
count
2
10
word
"testament"
count
1
11
word
"weight"
count
1
12
word
"sense of"
count
1
highlights
0
"scanned"
1
"familiar"
2
"tracing"
3
"reminder"
4
"eyebrow"
5
"echoing"
6
"whisper"
7
"unspoken"
8
"comfortable"
9
"silence"
10
"testament"
11
"weight"
12
"sense of"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
138
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
138
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
181
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
35
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1698
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
56
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
29.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
60
wordCount
1157
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
2.42
worstName
"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity
4
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven
2
Nest
2
Aurora
26
Carter
1
Blackwood
1
Silas
28
persons
0
"Raven"
1
"Nest"
2
"Aurora"
3
"Carter"
4
"Blackwood"
5
"Silas"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.29
windowScore
0.333
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
83
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1698
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
181
matches
(empty)
94.54%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
52
mean
32.65
std
15.7
cv
0.481
sampleLengths
0
85
1
64
2
24
3
40
4
37
5
27
6
18
7
33
8
21
9
27
10
38
11
17
12
36
13
47
14
59
15
24
16
18
17
40
18
17
19
21
20
20
21
27
22
25
23
15
24
14
25
48
26
25
27
38
28
35
29
27
30
15
31
58
32
57
33
48
34
23
35
35
36
29
37
58
38
20
39
21
40
15
41
48
42
28
43
27
44
15
45
37
46
25
47
25
48
16
49
35
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
138
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
211
matches
0
"was polishing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
181
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1162
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
40
adverbRatio
0.03442340791738382
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.008605851979345954
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
181
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
181
mean
9.38
std
5.46
cv
0.582
sampleLengths
0
34
1
20
2
15
3
16
4
16
5
13
6
13
7
8
8
14
9
9
10
15
11
14
12
10
13
13
14
3
15
11
16
20
17
6
18
12
19
8
20
7
21
4
22
13
23
1
24
8
25
11
26
14
27
11
28
8
29
2
30
6
31
12
32
9
33
8
34
12
35
8
36
10
37
12
38
4
39
1
40
7
41
15
42
14
43
10
44
9
45
9
46
6
47
13
48
8
49
7
40.61%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
17
diversityRatio
0.2265193370165746
totalSentences
181
uniqueOpeners
41
78.13%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"Then, a slow smile spread"
1
"Eventually, the bar began to"
2
"Eventually, Aurora pulled away, her"
ratio
0.023
13.75%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
66
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"She scanned the room, her"
1
"It had been years since"
2
"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3
"He looked up as the"
4
"She slid onto a stool,"
5
"she said, her voice steady"
6
"he said, his eyes flicking"
7
"she said, her voice light"
8
"he asked, his tone teasing"
9
"she said, holding up her"
10
"he said finally, his voice"
11
"she said, her voice barely"
12
"he said, his voice heavy"
13
"He straightened up, his eyes"
14
"she said finally"
15
"He turned and grabbed a"
16
"He slid it across the"
17
"She took a sip, the"
18
"She set the glass down,"
19
"she said, her voice steady"
ratio
0.516
2.97%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
117
totalSentences
128
matches
0
"The distinctive green neon sign"
1
"The bar was dimly lit,"
2
"She scanned the room, her"
3
"It had been years since"
4
"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5
"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6
"He looked up as the"
7
"Silas said, his voice a"
8
"Aurora walked up to the"
9
"She slid onto a stool,"
10
"she said, her voice steady"
11
"Silas chuckled, setting the glass"
12
"he said, his eyes flicking"
13
"Aurora looked down at her"
14
"she said, her voice light"
15
"Silas raised an eyebrow."
16
"he asked, his tone teasing"
17
"Aurora laughed, the sound echoing"
18
"she said, holding up her"
19
"Silas studied her for a"
ratio
0.914
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
128
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
40
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
48
uselessAdditionCount
39
matches
0
"Silas said, his voice a deep rumble"
1
"she said, her voice steady despite the flutter in her chest"
2
"he said finally, his voice soft"
3
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4
"he said, his voice heavy with unspoken words"
5
"she said, her voice steady"
6
"he said, his voice quiet"
7
"she said, her voice sincere"
8
"she said, her voice quiet"
9
"he asked, his voice careful"
10
"she said, her voice cold"
11
"he said, his voice soothing"
12
"she said, her voice quiet"
13
"he said, his voice gentle"
14
"she said, her voice sincere"
15
"he said, his voice soft"
16
"she said, her voice quiet"
17
"he said, his voice modest"
18
"she said, her voice sincere"
19
"he said, his voice soft"
20
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
21
"he said, his voice gentle"
22
"he said, his voice reluctant"
23
"she said, her voice soft"
24
"he said, his voice gentle"
25
"he said, his voice proud"
26
"she asked, her voice concerned"
27
"he said, his voice steady"
28
"she said, her voice soft"
29
"he said, his voice gentle"
30
"she said, her voice quiet"
31
"he said, his voice soft"
32
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
33
"he said, his voice gentle"
34
"she said, her voice soft"
35
"he said, his voice gentle"
36
"she said, her voice sincere"
37
"he said, his voice soft"
38
"he said, his voice proud"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
47
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
91
tagDensity
0.516
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
79.5166%