Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPPG69X82D875RH6BTZ21C

Run Details

Duration:
24.8s
Cost:
$0.000802
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast a soft glow on the rain-slicked pavement as Aurora Carter, her black hair damp from the evening drizzle, pushed open the heavy wooden door. The bar was dimly lit, the air thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low hum of conversation. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes taking in the familiar yet foreign atmosphere. It had been years since she'd set foot in this place, years since she'd seen him. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his hazel eyes focused on the glass he was polishing. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, matching the trim of his beard. He looked up as the door closed behind her, his gaze meeting hers. For a moment, time seemed to stand still. Then, a slow smile spread across his face, crinkling the corners of his eyes. "Well, well," Silas said, his voice a deep rumble. "If it isn't little Rory Carter. I was beginning to think you'd forgotten about me." Aurora walked up to the bar, her boots clicking against the worn wooden floor. She slid onto a stool, her eyes never leaving his. "Silas Blackwood," she said, her voice steady despite the flutter in her chest. "You're looking... older." Silas chuckled, setting the glass down and leaning against the bar. "And you're looking... exactly the same," he said, his eyes flicking to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Still getting into trouble, I see." Aurora looked down at her wrist, tracing the scar with her finger. "This? It's nothing," she said, her voice light. "Just a reminder of my childhood clumsiness." Silas raised an eyebrow. "Is that what you're calling it these days?" he asked, his tone teasing. "Clumsiness?" Aurora laughed, the sound echoing through the bar. "Alright, alright," she said, holding up her hands in mock surrender. "I was a bit of a hellraiser. But that's all in the past now." Silas studied her for a moment, his eyes searching her face. "You've changed," he said finally, his voice soft. "You're different." Aurora's smile faded, her eyes darkening. "We all change, Silas," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Time has a way of doing that to people." Silas nodded, his gaze dropping to the bar. "I suppose it does," he said, his voice heavy with unspoken words. He straightened up, his eyes meeting hers again. "What can I get you? On the house, of course." Aurora hesitated, her eyes flicking to the shelves of bottles behind him. "Whiskey," she said finally. "Neat." Silas raised an eyebrow but didn't comment. He turned and grabbed a bottle of whiskey, pouring a generous amount into a glass. He slid it across the bar to her, his eyes never leaving her face. Aurora picked up the glass, her fingers brushing against his. She took a sip, the liquid burning her throat. She set the glass down, her eyes meeting his. "So," she said, her voice steady. "Tell me about yourself. What have you been up to all these years?" Silas leaned against the bar, his eyes distant. "Not much," he said, his voice quiet. "I retired from the service after a botched operation in Prague. Left me with a bit of a limp." He gestured to his left leg, his voice light. "But I can't complain. I opened this place a few years back. It's kept me busy." Aurora nodded, her eyes flicking to his leg. "I'm sorry to hear that," she said, her voice sincere. "But I'm glad you're doing well." Silas smiled, his eyes meeting hers. "And what about you?" he asked. "What have you been up to?" Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, her eyes darkening. "I left Cardiff after... everything," she said, her voice quiet. "I've been living in London for a few years now. Working part-time at a restaurant, trying to make ends meet." Silas nodded, his eyes searching her face. "And Evan?" he asked, his voice careful. "What about him?" Aurora's eyes flashed, her grip tightening on her glass. "He's in the past," she said, her voice cold. "Where he belongs." Silas held up his hands, his eyes wide. "Alright, alright," he said, his voice soothing. "I didn't mean to pry." Aurora took a deep breath, her eyes softening. "I'm sorry," she said, her voice quiet. "It's just... it's been a long time since I've talked about him." Silas nodded, his eyes understanding. "I get it," he said, his voice gentle. "You don't have to talk about it if you don't want to." Aurora smiled, her eyes meeting his. "Thank you," she said, her voice sincere. "For understanding." Silas smiled back, his eyes warm. "Anytime, Rory," he said, his voice soft. "Anytime." They sat in comfortable silence, the low hum of conversation filling the air. Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, her eyes flicking to the old maps and black-and-white photographs on the walls. "You've done well for yourself, Silas," she said, her voice quiet. "This place... it's impressive." Silas looked around, his eyes taking in the bar. "It's not much," he said, his voice modest. "But it's mine. And it's kept me busy." Aurora nodded, her eyes meeting his. "It's more than that, Silas," she said, her voice sincere. "It's a testament to your strength, your resilience. You've come a long way from the man I knew all those years ago." Silas smiled, his eyes warm. "And you've come a long way from the girl I knew all those years ago," he said, his voice soft. "You're stronger now, Rory. Braver. And I'm proud of you." Aurora's eyes welled up, her voice catching in her throat. "Thank you, Silas," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "That means a lot to me." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "Anytime, Rory," he said, his voice gentle. "Anytime." They sat in silence, their hands still touching, the weight of their shared past and unspoken regrets hanging heavy in the air. But for the first time in a long time, Aurora felt a sense of peace, of understanding. And she knew that no matter what happened, she would always have Silas. Her friend. Her mentor. Her family. As the night wore on, the bar filled up with patrons, the low hum of conversation growing louder. But Aurora and Silas remained in their own world, their eyes locked, their hands still touching. And in that moment, they were no longer the boy and girl they once were. They were something more. Something stronger. Something unbreakable. Eventually, the bar began to empty, the patrons drifting out into the night. Silas looked around, his eyes taking in the empty glasses and chairs. "I should probably get back to work," he said, his voice reluctant. "But I'm glad you stopped by, Rory. It's been too long." Aurora smiled, her eyes meeting his. "It has," she said, her voice soft. "But I promise, it won't be so long next time." Silas smiled back, his eyes warm. "I'll hold you to that," he said, his voice gentle. "Now, let me walk you out. It's late, and the streets aren't safe for a young woman like you." Aurora laughed, the sound echoing through the empty bar. "I can take care of myself, Silas," she said, her voice teasing. "But I won't say no to the company." Silas chuckled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "That's my girl," he said, his voice proud. He stood up, his left leg stiff from standing for so long. He reached out, his hand steadying himself on the bar. Aurora stood up as well, her eyes flicking to his leg. "You sure you're okay?" she asked, her voice concerned. Silas nodded, his eyes meeting hers. "I'm fine, Rory," he said, his voice steady. "Just a bit stiff. It'll pass." Aurora nodded, her eyes still worried. "Alright," she said, her voice soft. "But if you need help, you'll tell me, right?" Silas smiled, his eyes warm. "Of course, Rory," he said, his voice gentle. "Of course." They walked out of the bar together, the green neon sign casting a soft glow on their faces. The streets were quiet, the rain having stopped hours ago. Aurora looked up at the night sky, her eyes taking in the stars. "It's beautiful," she said, her voice quiet. Silas looked up as well, his eyes following hers. "It is," he said, his voice soft. "But not as beautiful as you, Rory. Not as beautiful as you." Aurora's eyes welled up, her voice catching in her throat. "Thank you, Silas," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "That means a lot to me." Silas reached out, his hand covering hers. "Anytime, Rory," he said, his voice gentle. "Anytime." They stood there, their hands still touching, their eyes locked on the night sky. And in that moment, they were no longer the boy and girl they once were. They were something more. Something stronger. Something unbreakable. Eventually, Aurora pulled away, her eyes meeting his. "I should go," she said, her voice soft. "It's late, and I have work in the morning." Silas nodded, his eyes understanding. "Of course," he said, his voice gentle. "But promise me you'll come back, Rory. Promise me you won't disappear again." Aurora smiled, her eyes meeting his. "I promise, Silas," she said, her voice sincere. "I promise." Silas smiled back, his eyes warm. "Good," he said, his voice soft. "Now, let me walk you to your car. It's not safe for a young woman like you to be out alone at night." Aurora laughed, the sound echoing through the quiet streets. "I can take care of myself, Silas," she said, her voice teasing. "But I won't say no to the company." Silas chuckled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "That's my girl," he said, his voice proud. He reached out, his hand steadying her as they walked. And as they disappeared into the night, the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest casting a soft glow on their faces, they were no longer the boy and girl they once were. They were something more. Something stronger. Something unbreakable.
created_at"2026-02-20T14:19:12.468Z" 2/20/2026, 2:19:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags48
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences91
tagDensity0.527
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
91.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1704
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1704
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count2
5
word"echoing"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count3
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"comfortable"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"testament"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"tracing"
3"reminder"
4"eyebrow"
5"echoing"
6"whisper"
7"unspoken"
8"comfortable"
9"silence"
10"testament"
11"weight"
12"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences138
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences181
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1698
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions56
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1157
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora26
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas28
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.29
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1698
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
94.54% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean32.65
std15.7
cv0.481
sampleLengths
085
164
224
340
437
527
618
733
821
927
1038
1117
1236
1347
1459
1524
1618
1740
1817
1921
2020
2127
2225
2315
2414
2548
2625
2738
2835
2927
3015
3158
3257
3348
3423
3535
3629
3758
3820
3921
4015
4148
4228
4327
4415
4537
4625
4725
4816
4935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was polishing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences181
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1162
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03442340791738382
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008605851979345954
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences181
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences181
mean9.38
std5.46
cv0.582
sampleLengths
034
120
215
316
416
513
613
78
814
99
1015
1114
1210
1313
143
1511
1620
176
1812
198
207
214
2213
231
248
2511
2614
2711
288
292
306
3112
329
338
3412
358
3610
3712
384
391
407
4115
4214
4310
449
459
466
4713
488
497
40.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2265193370165746
totalSentences181
uniqueOpeners41
78.13% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences128
matches
0"Then, a slow smile spread"
1"Eventually, the bar began to"
2"Eventually, Aurora pulled away, her"
ratio0.023
13.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences128
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"It had been years since"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"He looked up as the"
4"She slid onto a stool,"
5"she said, her voice steady"
6"he said, his eyes flicking"
7"she said, her voice light"
8"he asked, his tone teasing"
9"she said, holding up her"
10"he said finally, his voice"
11"she said, her voice barely"
12"he said, his voice heavy"
13"He straightened up, his eyes"
14"she said finally"
15"He turned and grabbed a"
16"He slid it across the"
17"She took a sip, the"
18"She set the glass down,"
19"she said, her voice steady"
ratio0.516
2.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences128
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"The bar was dimly lit,"
2"She scanned the room, her"
3"It had been years since"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6"He looked up as the"
7"Silas said, his voice a"
8"Aurora walked up to the"
9"She slid onto a stool,"
10"she said, her voice steady"
11"Silas chuckled, setting the glass"
12"he said, his eyes flicking"
13"Aurora looked down at her"
14"she said, her voice light"
15"Silas raised an eyebrow."
16"he asked, his tone teasing"
17"Aurora laughed, the sound echoing"
18"she said, holding up her"
19"Silas studied her for a"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags48
uselessAdditionCount39
matches
0"Silas said, his voice a deep rumble"
1"she said, her voice steady despite the flutter in her chest"
2"he said finally, his voice soft"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"he said, his voice heavy with unspoken words"
5"she said, her voice steady"
6"he said, his voice quiet"
7"she said, her voice sincere"
8"she said, her voice quiet"
9"he asked, his voice careful"
10"she said, her voice cold"
11"he said, his voice soothing"
12"she said, her voice quiet"
13"he said, his voice gentle"
14"she said, her voice sincere"
15"he said, his voice soft"
16"she said, her voice quiet"
17"he said, his voice modest"
18"she said, her voice sincere"
19"he said, his voice soft"
20"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
21"he said, his voice gentle"
22"he said, his voice reluctant"
23"she said, her voice soft"
24"he said, his voice gentle"
25"he said, his voice proud"
26"she asked, her voice concerned"
27"he said, his voice steady"
28"she said, her voice soft"
29"he said, his voice gentle"
30"she said, her voice quiet"
31"he said, his voice soft"
32"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
33"he said, his voice gentle"
34"she said, her voice soft"
35"he said, his voice gentle"
36"she said, her voice sincere"
37"he said, his voice soft"
38"he said, his voice proud"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags47
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences91
tagDensity0.516
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.5166%