| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 93.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1479 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1479 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "glint" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "glinting" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 185 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 185 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 189 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.67% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 35 | | markdownWords | 96 | | totalWords | 1462 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "bad" | | 1 | "Too late now." | | 2 | "odd" | | 3 | "use" | | 4 | "had" | | 5 | "folded" | | 6 | "quite" | | 7 | "this" | | 8 | "solid" | | 9 | "past" | | 10 | "breathed" | | 11 | "feeling" | | 12 | "You shouldn’t be here." | | 13 | "Portals are doors. Doors open both ways." | | 14 | "knew" | | 15 | "nothing" | | 16 | "voice" | | 17 | "Hel is not for mortals, little thief. Not even ones who steal from the dead." | | 18 | "Steal from the dead?" | | 19 | "given" | | 20 | "For when you’re ready to fight back." | | 21 | "Liar, liar, heart on fire." | | 22 | "burned" | | 23 | "laughed" | | 24 | "Give it back," | | 25 | "Give it back, and we’ll let you leave." | | 26 | "You’ll never get away from me." | | 27 | "These things are hard to prove, love." | | 28 | "mine" | | 29 | "ran" | | 30 | "pulling" | | 31 | "No escape, little thief." | | 32 | "rage" | | 33 | "screamed" | | 34 | "feel" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1445 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 24 | | Park | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | Eva | 3 | | Hel | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Evan | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.67 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if waking to her presence" |
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| 63.20% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.368 | | wordCount | 1462 | | matches | | 0 | "Not *bad*, exactly—just thick, like the scent of damp earth after rain, but too sweet, cloying" | | 1 | "Not much, but better than nothing" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 189 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 28.67 | | std | 23.56 | | cv | 0.822 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 89 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 63 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 59 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 37 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 71 | | 39 | 61 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 54 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 43 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 52 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 99.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "been *given" | | 1 | "were gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 267 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 189 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "Not *bad*, exactly—just thick, like the scent of damp earth after rain, but too sweet, cloying." | | 1 | "Only the wildflowers glowed—pale blue and silver, their petals unfurling as she passed, as if waking to her presence." | | 2 | "That was all this was—the artifact reacting to the Hel portal Isolde had told her about." | | 3 | "A flicker—taller than her, slender, its edges blurring into the dark." | | 4 | "It had the outline of one—a woman, maybe—but its limbs were too long, its movements too fluid, like ink spilled into water." | | 5 | "Rory caught the glint of eyes—too many, clustered like stars in its elongated face." | | 6 | "The pain lanced up her neck, down her arm, settling in the old scar on her wrist—the one Evan had given her when she’d tried to leave the first time." | | 7 | "She could smell it—ozone and rotting honey." | | 8 | "Its form had changed—taller, its limbs elongating, its face stretching into a grin that split its skull." | | 9 | "The grove *screamed*—a sound like tearing fabric, like a thousand voices wailing at once." | | 10 | "But the portal—she could *feel* it now." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1462 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.028727770177838577 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005471956224350205 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 189 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 189 | | mean | 7.74 | | std | 5.76 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 34.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 30 | | diversityRatio | 0.25925925925925924 | | totalSentences | 189 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "*Too late now.* She exhaled," | | 1 | "Only the wildflowers glowed—pale blue" | | 2 | "Just the flowers, swaying gently," | | 3 | "Of course not." | | 4 | "Then the flowers bent." | | 5 | "Too many teeth, needle-thin and" | | 6 | "Then she walked forward, into" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "Its usual faint warmth had" | | 2 | "She should’ve brought a torch." | | 3 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 5 | "It bounced off the trees" | | 6 | "She was being jumpy." | | 7 | "They’d laughed at how the" | | 8 | "She was close." | | 9 | "She was alone." | | 10 | "She *had* to be alone." | | 11 | "They *folded*, petals curling inward" | | 12 | "She reached into her bag," | | 13 | "She didn’t blink." | | 14 | "It had the outline of" | | 15 | "She’d seen fae before, in" | | 16 | "It raised one spindly arm," | | 17 | "Her body had locked, muscles" | | 18 | "*You shouldn’t be here.*" | | 19 | "She was out of her" |
| | ratio | 0.265 | |
| 65.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 131 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "The kind of smell that" | | 2 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 3 | "Its usual faint warmth had" | | 4 | "Richmond Park was miles behind" | | 5 | "The trees loomed, their gnarled" | | 6 | "Rory’s boots sank into the" | | 7 | "She should’ve brought a torch." | | 8 | "A twig snapped." | | 9 | "The sound had come from" | | 10 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 11 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 12 | "It bounced off the trees" | | 13 | "She was being jumpy." | | 14 | "The grove had always been…" | | 15 | "Eva had brought her here" | | 16 | "They’d laughed at how the" | | 17 | "A fae trick, Eva had" | | 18 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 19 | "The pendant’s pulse quickened." |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 60.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "To find it." | | 1 | "To *use* it." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 88.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The kind of smell that clung to the back of her throat." | | 1 | "Only the wildflowers glowed—pale blue and silver, their petals unfurling as she passed, as if waking to her presence." | | 2 | "The memory flashed behind her eyes: his fingers tightening around her arm, the knife slipping, the way he’d *laughed* as she bled." | | 3 | "The thing recoiled, hissing as the crimson gem flared, its light cutting through the dark like a blade." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |