Run: 2026-02-20-01KHXPSA7P6BHEDVJGQQHDYRFN

Run Details

Duration:
27.0s
Cost:
$0.000543
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast a soft glow on the rain-slicked pavement as Aurora Carter, her black hair damp from the evening drizzle, pushed open the heavy wooden door. The bar was dimly lit, the air thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low hum of conversation. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes taking in the familiar yet foreign atmosphere. It had been years since she'd set foot in this place, years since she'd seen him. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his hazel eyes scanning the room with quiet authority. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, matching the neatly trimmed beard that framed his face. He wore a simple black shirt, the sleeves rolled up to his elbows, revealing forearms corded with strength and age. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he polished a glass, his movements practiced and precise. He looked up as the door swung shut, his gaze meeting hers. For a moment, time seemed to stand still. Then, a slow smile spread across his face, transforming his stern features into something almost boyish. "Well, well," he said, his voice a deep rumble that carried easily across the room. "If it isn't little Rory Carter." Aurora felt a flush creep up her cheeks, a mixture of embarrassment and something else, something she couldn't quite name. She walked towards the bar, her boots clicking against the worn wooden floor. "Hi, Silas," she said, her voice steady despite the butterflies in her stomach. "It's been a while." Silas nodded, setting the glass down on the bar. "Too long," he said. "What brings you to my neck of the woods?" Aurora shrugged, sliding onto a barstool. "Just passing through," she said. "Thought I'd stop in, see if the old place was still standing." Silas chuckled, a warm sound that seemed to fill the room. "Still standing," he said. "Though I can't say the same for some of our old friends." He leaned against the bar, his gaze searching her face. "You've changed, Rory." Aurora looked down at her hands, the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light. "We all change, Silas," she said softly. Silas studied her for a moment longer, then straightened up. "What can I get you?" he asked, his voice back to its usual gruffness. "Whiskey," Aurora said. "Neat." Silas raised an eyebrow but didn't comment. He turned to the shelves behind him, reaching for a bottle of amber liquid. As he poured, Aurora looked around the bar. The walls were covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs, some of them familiar, most of them not. It was as if the bar had become a museum of a life she'd left behind. Silas set the glass in front of her, the liquid catching the light. Aurora picked it up, taking a sip. The whiskey burned her throat, but she welcomed the sensation, the way it grounded her in the present. "So," Silas said, leaning against the bar again. "What have you been up to all these years?" Aurora took another sip of her whiskey before answering. "This and that," she said vaguely. "I moved to London a few years back. Work part-time at a restaurant, deliver food mostly." Silas nodded, his gaze never leaving her face. "And the rest of the time?" Aurora shrugged. "I read, I write, I try to stay out of trouble." Silas chuckled. "That's my girl," he said. "Always the dreamer." Aurora smiled, but there was a sadness to it that hadn't been there before. "Not as much as I used to be," she said softly. Silas studied her for a moment longer, then pushed off from the bar. "I'll be right back," he said. "Don't go anywhere." Aurora watched as he disappeared through a door behind the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. She took another sip of her whiskey, the liquid warming her from the inside out. She could feel the weight of the years between them, the unspoken regrets and missed opportunities. Silas returned a few moments later, carrying a tray with two glasses and a bottle of whiskey. He set them down on the bar, pouring them each a drink. "To old friends," he said, raising his glass. Aurora raised her own glass, clinking it against his. "To old friends," she echoed. They drank in silence for a while, the weight of the years between them hanging heavy in the air. Then, Silas set down his glass and looked at her. "You know," he said, "I always thought you'd end up doing something big. Something important." Aurora looked down at her hands, the scar on her wrist catching the light. "I did," she said softly. "For a while, at least." Silas nodded, understanding in his eyes. "And now?" Aurora took a deep breath, letting it out slowly. "Now," she said, "I'm just trying to figure out what comes next." Silas studied her for a moment longer, then reached out, his hand covering hers. His touch was warm, comforting. "Well," he said, "you're always welcome here, Rory. You know that, right?" Aurora looked up at him, her bright blue eyes meeting his hazel ones. "Thank you, Silas," she said softly. "That means a lot." They drank in silence for a while longer, the weight of the years between them easing slightly. Then, Silas pushed off from the bar. "I'll be right back," he said. "Don't go anywhere." Aurora watched as he disappeared through the door behind the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass. She took another sip of her whiskey, the liquid warming her from the inside out. She could feel the weight of the years between them, the unspoken regrets and missed opportunities. But for the first time in a long time, she felt a sense of peace. She was home, in a way she hadn't been in years. And maybe, just maybe, that was enough. Silas returned a few moments later, carrying a tray with two more glasses and another bottle of whiskey. He set them down on the bar, pouring them each a drink. "To second chances," he said, raising his glass. Aurora raised her own glass, clinking it against his. "To second chances," she echoed. They drank in silence, the weight of the years between them easing slightly with each sip. And as the night wore on, Aurora felt a sense of hope, a sense of possibility. Maybe, just maybe, she thought, as she looked at the man sitting beside her, maybe it wasn't too late to start over. Maybe it wasn't too late to find her way back to the person she'd once been, the person she'd left behind all those years ago. And as the whiskey flowed and the night wore on, she felt a sense of peace, a sense of belonging. She was home, in a way she hadn't been in years. And maybe, just maybe, that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"she said vaguely [vaguely]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.208
effectiveRatio0.208
70.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count4
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count2
6
word"could feel"
count2
7
word"weight"
count5
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count5
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"scanning"
3"stomach"
4"eyebrow"
5"tracing"
6"could feel"
7"weight"
8"unspoken"
9"echoed"
10"silence"
11"comforting"
12"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
96.59% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences88
matches
0"felt a flush"
1"a sense of hope"
2"a sense of belonging"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1169
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount966
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora18
Carter1
Blackwood1
Silas16
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.568
windowScore0.5
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite name"
1"sound that seemed to fill the room"
2"It was as if the bar had become a museum of a life she'd left behind"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1169
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean33.4
std20.02
cv0.599
sampleLengths
085
182
245
350
422
523
640
724
824
94
1063
1138
1217
1331
1414
1513
1610
1725
1822
1950
2037
2114
2244
2324
248
2521
2631
2723
2833
2950
3033
3138
3214
3379
3438
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences104
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.15% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount971
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04325437693099897
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012358393408856848
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.24
std5.96
cv0.53
sampleLengths
034
120
215
316
415
516
620
719
812
98
1016
1115
126
1320
1413
1513
164
179
184
199
206
215
2212
2311
244
2522
263
2717
287
2910
3014
313
321
337
3414
358
3618
3716
3813
397
4018
418
429
439
446
4516
468
476
482
4911
57.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36538461538461536
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then, a slow smile spread"
1"Then, Silas set down his"
2"Then, Silas pushed off from"
3"Maybe, just maybe, she thought,"
4"Maybe it wasn't too late"
ratio0.068
52.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences74
matches
0"She scanned the room, her"
1"It had been years since"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"He wore a simple black"
4"He looked up as the"
5"he said, his voice a"
6"She walked towards the bar,"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"He leaned against the bar,"
9"she said softly"
10"he asked, his voice back"
11"He turned to the shelves"
12"It was as if the"
13"she said vaguely"
14"she said softly"
15"She took another sip of"
16"She could feel the weight"
17"He set them down on"
18"he said, raising his glass"
19"They drank in silence for"
ratio0.419
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"The bar was dimly lit,"
2"She scanned the room, her"
3"It had been years since"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
6"He wore a simple black"
7"A silver signet ring glinted"
8"He looked up as the"
9"he said, his voice a"
10"Aurora felt a flush creep"
11"She walked towards the bar,"
12"she said, her voice steady"
13"Silas nodded, setting the glass"
14"Aurora shrugged, sliding onto a"
15"Silas chuckled, a warm sound"
16"He leaned against the bar,"
17"Aurora looked down at her"
18"she said softly"
19"Silas studied her for a"
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly combed, matching the neatly trimmed beard that framed his face."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the butterflies in her stomach"
1"He leaned, his gaze searching her face"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.525
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.2739%