| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 884 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 884 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "glistening" | | 11 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 879 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "wrongness" | | 1 | "human" | | 2 | "everywhere" | | 3 | "scream" |
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| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The thorns parted just enough to let her pass, but the moment she moved through, they snapped shut behind her, sealing h…" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 847 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed almost deliberate as if carved by hands that had long since turned to dust" | | 1 | "as if listening to something she couldn’t hear" | | 2 | "not quite" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 879 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 26.64 | | std | 23.77 | | cv | 0.892 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t coming" | | 1 | "was facing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—not because she wanted to, but because the pendant had led her here, its crimson glow flickering like a dying ember in the dark." | | 1 | "She had expected something—*wrongness*, maybe—but not this." | | 2 | "A sound cut through the silence—a whisper, so faint she almost missed it." | | 3 | "Another sound—this time, a footstep." | | 4 | "It wasn’t coming from any one direction—it was *everywhere*, wrapping around her like a shroud." |
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| 88.95% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 852 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavier, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.045774647887323945 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008215962441314555 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 9.88 | | std | 6.73 | | cv | 0.681 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 40.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.33707865168539325 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees, the flowers," | | 1 | "Only the rustle of leaves," | | 2 | "Definitely a footstep." | | 3 | "Then, from the corner of" | | 4 | "Too smooth, too pale, its" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 84.94% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "She hesitated, her breath fogging" | | 2 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 3 | "She had expected something—*wrongness*, maybe—but" | | 4 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "She pulled it out, holding" | | 6 | "she muttered to herself" | | 7 | "She swallowed hard." | | 8 | "She should have brought a" | | 9 | "She should have waited until" | | 10 | "She spun around, her pulse" | | 11 | "She took a step back," | | 12 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 13 | "It wasn’t coming from any" | | 14 | "She turned to leave, but" | | 15 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 16 | "She turned back the way" | | 17 | "She ripped it off, holding" | | 18 | "She took a step forward," | | 19 | "It was facing away from" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 37.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "The boundary of the grove" | | 5 | "She hesitated, her breath fogging" | | 6 | "The last time she’d been" | | 7 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 9 | "The air turned heavier, pressing" | | 10 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 11 | "Rory exhaled, her breath unsteady." | | 12 | "She had expected something—*wrongness*, maybe—but" | | 13 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 14 | "The pendant’s warmth had intensified," | | 15 | "She pulled it out, holding" | | 16 | "The crimson stone pulsed in" | | 17 | "she muttered to herself" | | 18 | "A sound cut through the" | | 19 | "Rory froze, her fingers tightening" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 11.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick with the scent of damp earth and wildflowers, the kind that bloomed only in places where the veil between worlds grew thin." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate, as if carved by hands that had long since turned to dust…" | | 2 | "The crimson stone pulsed in time with her heartbeat, as if it were alive." | | 3 | "Tall, too tall, its limbs elongated in a way that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "It was facing away from her, its head tilted as if listening to something she couldn’t hear." | | 5 | "Too smooth, too pale, its features stretched into something that was almost human but not quite." | | 6 | "The thorns pressed in around her, their barbs brushing against her arms, drawing thin lines of blood." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.545 | |